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 Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu)

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Genin

Sairento Bakuhatsu
Sairento Bakuhatsu
Male Posts : 65
Ryo : 5800

Character sheet
Chakra:
Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue180/180Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (180/180)

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PostSubject: Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyThu Apr 07, 2011 9:51 pm

Name:Mouth of the Tundra
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank: B
Element: Hyouton
Type: Genjutsu/Ninjutsu
Range:Any
Description: Handseals/Charging For one turn required. After making handseals, sairento takes in the cold molecules of his icy blood, breathing outward. This lets out a soft fog, following the oxygen trails around the area. The fog is invisible unless looking closely and moves at the speed of 35mph. Once the fog reaches the target, who will be inhaling and exhaling, the fog trails the oxygen waves into the alveoli(tiny air sacs in the lungs), releasing into the bloodstream of said target. Two things happen at this point. The target begins to become colder, as if their body was freezing from the inside out. And they get sucked into a genjutsu which puts them in the icy tundra of Hyougagakure. They wander aimlessly, trying to find a way out, and they get to a cave.(even if they don't move, they will appear in the cave) After a moment, the cave lets out frozen stalagmites and stalacites at the "mouth" of it, which begin to close in on each other. Within seconds, the cave is closed and the temperature drops inside the pitch-black room. Outside of the genjutsu, the target becomes colder, their body temperature dropping rapidly. Within three posts, the target becomes much more succeptible to ice jutsu(Doubles the damage). The genjutsu can be broken by kai or pain. Duration: Three posts Cooldown: Nine Two uses a topic.



Last edited by Sairento Bakuhatsu on Fri Apr 08, 2011 1:27 am; edited 3 times in total
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyFri Apr 08, 2011 12:21 am

In this case, I would say take the mass effects of the ninjutsu out, for this to maintain B Rank. An auto death within three posts is overkill as well.
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Genin

Sairento Bakuhatsu
Sairento Bakuhatsu
Male Posts : 65
Ryo : 5800

Character sheet
Chakra:
Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue180/180Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (180/180)

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PostSubject: Re: Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyFri Apr 08, 2011 1:00 am

Fixed.
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyFri Apr 08, 2011 1:16 am

Is pain a way out of the jutsu as well?
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Genin

Sairento Bakuhatsu
Sairento Bakuhatsu
Male Posts : 65
Ryo : 5800

Character sheet
Chakra:
Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue180/180Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (180/180)

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PostSubject: Re: Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyFri Apr 08, 2011 1:19 am

Fixed.
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyFri Apr 08, 2011 1:24 am

This is more leaning towards A Rank. Two uses per topic. Those will be the last edit before pricing.
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Sairento Bakuhatsu
Sairento Bakuhatsu
Male Posts : 65
Ryo : 5800

Character sheet
Chakra:
Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue180/180Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (180/180)

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PostSubject: Re: Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyFri Apr 08, 2011 1:28 am

Edited, and added another limit to the front.

Reminder: this is my timeskip jutsu.
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Bakuhatsu, Sairento (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptySat Apr 09, 2011 8:34 pm

Approved
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