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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Sat Apr 16, 2011 3:48 pm | |
| Weapon Template Weapon Name: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Weapon Type: A Katana Quantity: 1. Description: Triple reinforced steel blade, steel tsuba, and steel grip. The only thing not made of steel in the leather wrapped around the sword's grip. The steel has been chakra enhanced during forging, so that it will never dull. Abilities: Upon the command “Disappear with the thunderclap” The blade seems to be struck by lightning, and breaks into eight sections, each side of each section being as sharp as the bladed edge of the blade before it broke, connected by a bolt of lightning. The sword when broken moves with the fluidity of a serpent, and has C-rank electrical power, able to numb an area of seven inches by seven inches on contact. This lasts for four posts, before returning to it's previous whole state, and has a cooldown of five posts. It can easily cut through skin, muscle tissue, and bone, and can chip regular steel. Only any steel blade, enhanced by chakra can chip and break this sword. To activate ability costs twenty chakra. History: Andeddo received this weapon from his uncle, who had had it custom made, when he graduated from the academy, and was made head of the Clan. He has brought it with him on every mission since that day. Appearance: A basic Katana, that has a bolt of light blue lightning forking down both sides of the blade. The blade is about three feet in length. The tsuba is decorated with a wolf wrapping around it, howling at the moon. Upon the command “Disappear with the thunderclap” The blade seems to be struck by lightning, and breaks into eight sections, each side of each section being as sharp as the bladed edge of the blade before it broke, connected by a bolt of lightning. The sword now moves with the fluidity of a serpent, and has enough electrical power to numb any area on contact.
Last edited by Andeddo Tokko on Mon Apr 18, 2011 8:38 pm; edited 10 times in total |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Sun Apr 17, 2011 4:22 pm | |
| Finish the Template please |
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 12:45 am | |
| Finished it, sorry, missed a art while copying it ^^; |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 1:02 am | |
| Take some of the description in the appearance, and add it into the ability section, for it details your ability of your weapon better than the description you have there now. |
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 1:09 am | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 1:28 am | |
| Please call the blade triple reinforced, since it has so much steel involved in its forging.
How long does the lightning charge last, then give it a cooldown. |
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 1:31 am | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 1:50 am | |
| If you changed the lasting effect to four, and the cooldown to five, it'll change the price drastically. What is the cutting power? |
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 1:54 am | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:07 am | |
| How much area can it numb and is the lightning natural lightning or lightning from chakra? |
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:11 am | |
| An area the size of an average males forearm, and its chakra lightning. |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:13 am | |
| Ok, then here's the deal. What is the rank of lightning? This will determine what area you will able to numb, and how much chakra you must use in order to use it, so choose wisely. |
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:14 am | |
| Only D-C rank, as it isn't meant to be too powerful. |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:17 am | |
| Choose between D Rank, 10 chakra, 5 inch by 5 inch numbing area.... or.... C rank, 20 chakra, 7 inch by 7 inch area... |
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:19 am | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:21 am | |
| Then edit it into the abilities and I will price accordingly. |
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:23 am | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 2:33 am | |
| Shit, one last thing, what kind of power can break the sword if one intended to break it? |
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 12:01 pm | |
| Enough force to break through chakra enhanced steel. |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 1:01 pm | |
| Ok, put that Chakra enhanced steel can break this blade, that truly is the final edit. |
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 8:12 pm | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 18, 2011 8:18 pm | |
| Due to the cutting power, the lightning enhanced power to numb, and the durability, the price comes out to be 19,000 ryo. Due to it being your first blade, 16,500.
(Please add that it takes 20 chakra from your pool to activate the power of the sword)
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 25, 2011 9:21 pm | |
| I shall now buy this. (and not a moment too soon >.<) |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Kaminari No Ha O Saken Mon Apr 25, 2011 10:28 pm | |
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