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Genin
Hikaru Shidou
| Subject: EscudoHon Thu Nov 03, 2011 6:06 pm | |
| Equipment Template Name:Escudohon Type: Its an armor made from the rare material Escudo that grows along with it's shinobi. In this case it is selectively made from Hikaru's Chakra. The armor itself has three forms although they are only accessible based on how powerful she is. The first and always seen one is a basic clothes and doesn't truly resemble any armor. Quantity:1 Description: The armor changes based on the power and it's need for use. The armor goes from basic clothes to a full suit of armor. In it's lowest form it is merely cotton like all other clothes. In its Chuunin and Jounin form it is a steel alloy. For Chuunin form the alloy only covers small parts on the body in final form it is a full suit covering a large amount of the body. Abilities:At Genin level the armor is more of a uniform and has no armor like qualities. The armor is as hard as Steel. The armor reduces the damage taken from Jutsu It can take two direct hits from D rank Jutsu and then the third direct hit will shatter it. Any C rank Jutsu or above that makes a direct hit will shatter the armor. History: Upon birth in the Shidon Clan the babies are em-brazened with a seal just under their neck on their backsides. The seal once made excretes a small amount of their chakra which is placed inside the Escudo ore. The ore then is molded to an armor and weapon that is suiting for the ninja. It grows with the subject as they grow all throughout their life. The only piece that does not change is a glove on her left hand. It always appears the same in every situation. Appearance: Normal and Genin: - Spoiler:
Chuunin: - Spoiler:
Once in Chuunin form that form replaces Genin form permanently. Jounin and higher (only upon being summoned into this appearance. - Spoiler:
Last edited by Hikaru Shidou on Mon Nov 14, 2011 1:15 am; edited 7 times in total |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:14 am | |
| Ok, remember this rule. You cannot add to your chakra pool at all. So take that out first and foremost, and bump, then I will continue |
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Genin
Hikaru Shidou
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Fri Nov 04, 2011 2:52 am | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Fri Nov 04, 2011 7:58 pm | |
| Once again the 20,000 ryo fee applies to the ability. Just do durability, for it doesnt cost a fee since armor is supposed to protect... |
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Genin
Hikaru Shidou
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Fri Nov 04, 2011 8:30 pm | |
| Okay but the changing form isn't considered an ability is it? |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Sat Nov 05, 2011 12:22 am | |
| As long as it doesnt change in ability, no. |
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Genin
Hikaru Shidou
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Sat Nov 05, 2011 6:01 pm | |
| No it doesn't do anything like that. Just changes and kind of grows with her is all. |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Sat Nov 05, 2011 6:56 pm | |
| Ok, and you need to elaborate on what damages its resistant to. Look into the Shinobi Vest Topic in the Weapon/Armor Database for an example of how to gauge damage control.
Once you do that, elaborate and bump |
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Genin
Hikaru Shidou
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Mon Nov 07, 2011 6:13 am | |
| Okay I hope that works but is its considered like an ability that's gonna cost me a whole lot let me know.. Cause I can't affor too big @_@.. |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Mon Nov 07, 2011 2:06 pm | |
| Can take up to 2 D rank jutsu without breaking. On the third, it shatters. That is a decent start. C Rank or higher can shatter the armor.
Just use that as your starting point, for its not too hard on the wallet |
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Genin
Hikaru Shidou
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Mon Nov 07, 2011 5:38 pm | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Mon Nov 07, 2011 6:51 pm | |
| Once again though, please remove how it is resistant to fire within the description and just speak aobut what materials the armor is made of. Once you do that, bump and I will price |
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Genin
Hikaru Shidou
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Mon Nov 07, 2011 11:21 pm | |
| kk done sorry bout that ^^! |
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Genin
Hikaru Shidou
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Sun Nov 13, 2011 5:52 pm | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Sun Nov 13, 2011 9:28 pm | |
| Resistant to damages at all levels above Ganin.
This also needs to be taken out. You have the rest right but this makes the armor immortal so to speak. Rid yourself of this sentence. |
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Genin
Hikaru Shidou
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Sun Nov 13, 2011 11:52 pm | |
| that's saying that it isnt an armor at genin level. In otherwards at genin level it does nothing. |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Mon Nov 14, 2011 12:06 am | |
| Than you say it ISN'T resistant to any damages any damages above Genin, which as I said it isn't needed due to the text that you have the durability factor set in stone just a few sentences later. So just remove it. |
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Genin
Hikaru Shidou
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Mon Nov 14, 2011 1:16 am | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Mon Nov 14, 2011 1:22 am | |
| Before I price this, I will let you know my standards for armor. In RPG games, armor that is just as powerful as a sword at that same point in the game, are always more expensive than the weapon. So naturally on here, the armor is treated the same way. Therefore, I will price the standard armor at 8500 ryo. |
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Genin
Hikaru Shidou
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Mon Nov 14, 2011 1:30 am | |
| That's okay I has money now ^^ |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Mon Nov 14, 2011 1:52 am | |
| Do you wish to purchase it? |
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Genin
Hikaru Shidou
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Mon Nov 14, 2011 5:37 pm | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Mon Nov 14, 2011 5:41 pm | |
| Ryo Deducted! Add Armor to your Inventory please. |
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Genin
Hikaru Shidou
| Subject: Re: EscudoHon Mon Nov 14, 2011 6:02 pm | |
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