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Special Jounin
Kuroi
| Subject: Windmill Shuriken Wed Nov 16, 2011 1:11 am | |
| Equipment Template Name: Windmill Shuriken Type: Windmill Shuriken Quantity: 1 but can be purchased up to 3. Description: In its folded state, all four arms of the shuriken are folded together. When full unfolded the large shuriken can be thrown through the air causing great damage. The weapon is made up out the same material as a normal shuriken. This can be broken by a katana, and or D-Rank Justus. Abilities: Two times the cutting power of a small shuriken. It unfolds into its' windmill state.The cuts are about 6-7 inches long. Also the cuts are about 2-3 inches deep. It can cut off fingers if tried to be grabbed out of mid-air. It can be broken by D-Rank Jutus. History: This weapon has been around for centuries. It is used for long range and close range. But it is primarily used for long range fighting. It would be used be fighter who did not want to waste their small shuriken, so instead they created a much larger one. Finally after playing around with it, they found a way for it to work like a boomerang. Once being able to make the weapon work like a boomerang it became even more dangerous. Appearance: Only 3 can be bought per user total.
Last edited by Kuroi on Thu Nov 17, 2011 3:01 am; edited 5 times in total |
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Genin
Neji Hitogumo
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Wed Nov 16, 2011 1:33 am | |
| - Quote :
- In its folded state, all four arms of the shuriken are folded together. When full unfolded the large shuriken can be thrown through the air causing great damage.
What type of damage can this do? What can it cut through? What is it made of? |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Wed Nov 16, 2011 1:43 am | |
| Make sure the cutting power is added into the ability section. Its not a full ability, but nonetheless that is the ability of the weapon. Also add in that it unfolds in the ability section as well. |
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Special Jounin
Kuroi
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Wed Nov 16, 2011 1:50 am | |
| Edited. It has twice the cutting power of a normal shuriken. It can cause much more larger cuts on a human body, than a normal small shuriken. It is made of the metal as a normal shuriken. |
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Genin
Neji Hitogumo
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Wed Nov 16, 2011 1:51 am | |
| How large are the cuts and what else can it cut through. What is twice the damage of a normal shurikan? |
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Special Jounin
Kuroi
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Wed Nov 16, 2011 1:53 am | |
| The cuts are about 6-7 inches. It can cut off fingers if tried to be grabbed out of mid-air. Such as the impact of getting hit with one you will feel more than getting hit with a normal shuriken. |
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Genin
Neji Hitogumo
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Wed Nov 16, 2011 2:24 am | |
| How deep are the cuts, I understand 6-7 inches long.
Edit the other things in and we'll continue |
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Special Jounin
Kuroi
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Wed Nov 16, 2011 2:33 am | |
| Edited. The cuts are about 5-6 inches deep. |
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Genin
Neji Hitogumo
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Wed Nov 16, 2011 2:36 am | |
| Tone it down a little, the human arm isn't even six inches thick. Maybe about 3-4 inches.
Also, make sure to edit in the materials that can break the weapon in the description along with what the shurikan is made of. |
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Special Jounin
Kuroi
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Wed Nov 16, 2011 2:41 am | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Wed Nov 16, 2011 11:57 pm | |
| - Kuroi wrote:
- This can be broken by a katana, and or Earth or Fire justus.
This also needs to be in the abilities section. Change it to D rank jutsu can break it. Limiting such a basic weapon, only pointlessly adds to the price. |
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Special Jounin
Kuroi
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Thu Nov 17, 2011 12:47 am | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Thu Nov 17, 2011 12:49 am | |
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Special Jounin
Kuroi
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Thu Nov 17, 2011 2:00 am | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Thu Nov 17, 2011 2:58 am | |
| Actually, I have a better idea for this weapon. Since it is still very basic in power, donate it to the Sabakugakure Weapon Store. I will make 25 available to the store (You can only buy up to three total yourself as is the same for anyone else.) For your contribution, I will allow you this first one without having to RP to the weapon store.
Please add at the bottom, that only 3 can be bought per user total. Once you do that, I will add it into the Sabaku Weapon Store.
Ryo Deducted. |
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Special Jounin
Kuroi
| Subject: Re: Windmill Shuriken Thu Nov 17, 2011 3:01 am | |
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