The islands in Ocean Country have been celebrating the arrival of the next Umikage, Saizo. The long bridge leading to SHIPPUUGAKURE NO SATO has been closed for outsiders because they wish to celebrate this moment with Ocean Country natives only.
As usual, the Storm Country has been hosting the Asgard Games to welcome their Kanetsukage, Cornelia. It's a double special occasion because Cornelia is also the first female Kanetsukage. She has been picked for her courage, loyalty and outstanding power by the BOUFUUGAKURE NO SATO elders.
Not only that, but the Cherry Blossom Country has become relieved as well. It seems that everyone is slowly picking up after the war now. KUSAMURAGAKURE NO SATO proudly presented their new Sakurakage, Altair.
TSUKIGAKURE NO SATO is still thriving on the merchants coming in and out. They have not experienced anything special lately. Their wealth has remained the same as they were not forced to invest into shinobi unlike the others.
On the cold isles of the Blizzard Country, HYOUGAGAKURE NO SATO has still refused to create a free traveling policy. Some habits never change. To protect their traditions, they have even warned outsiders to not interfere with their matters.
Now that everyone is picking up again, who will come out on top?
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Name: Zen Height: 1ft tall 1'5" Long Weight: 20 Lbs Rank: D Element: Katon Personality: Zen is the most timid of the wolf family. He doesn't speak verbally, but can communicate with his owners through telepathy. He is afraid to fight, but loves to heal people who are injured. He likes to more of a companion than a battle partner. Appearance:
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Name: Howl of Cure Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D Element: N/A Type: Ijutsu Range: On the host Description: Zen charges chakra for one post. He then howls to release the chakra, coating his host in a thin layer. This chakra heals minor cuts and scrapes from the body. Two post cool down.
Name: Flaming Tongue Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D-C Element: Katon Type: Ijutsu Range: Contact Description: After a one post charge, Zens mouth becomes engulfed in katon chakra. This chakra is used to cauterize gashes that are up to six inches long and an inch deep. D Rank - Cauterizes gashes up to 3 inches and half an inch deep. C Rank - Cauterizes gashed up to 6 inches and an inch deep. After use Zen requires a four post cool down.
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Name: Hakurou Height: 3' tall 4'6' long Weight: 80lbs Rank: C Element: Katon Personality: Hakurou is the silent type. He does not say much, and prefers to speak through his actions. His main goal is to aid his master in whatever they are doing, whether it is good or bad. He is also willing to risk his own life so that his master will not be injured. Appearance: Abilities:
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Name: Wolf Style: Crush Claw Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C Element: N/A Type: Kenjutsu/Ninjutsu Range: 25 feet from user Description: Hakurou uses his claws for this technique. He charges toward the opponent and stands on his hind legs. He uses the claws to release two slashes of chakra arcs from the blades. These arcs stay with the angle the are fired at. If the arcs miss, then the technique is ended and the cooldown begins. If chakra is kept in the claws, he can pounce at the target and thrust crushing force at the opponent with the claws. Bones can be fractured by the force, and the arcs can only cut through skin, but not muscle. Charge equal to handseals, four post cooldown.
Name: Cloud-Style Flame Beheading Canon/Custom: Canon {Manga} Rank: B Element: Katon Type: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu Range: 25 ft from user Description: 3 post charge time, The user first imbues their blade with fire, before slashing in the direction of the desired enemy, resulting in the creation of large arcs of intense flame that follow the trajectory of the previous swing. The arcs can be up to six feet long and travel at 30mph. When they contact a target, the arcs bend to fit the shape of the impacted area, the other portions that don't contact the body continue on their path until the dissipate. {on contact 2nd degree burns and temporary numbness in that are for 2 posts. Numbness consists of the contacted area and the immediate area surrounding the wound}Fire stays and burns for one post until dissipating the following post or put out. 6 post cool down.
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Name: Wolf Shears
Type: Steel Claws
Quantity: 2
Description: Steel claws designed to act as weapons for Hakurou. The blades fit over top his paw and extend his claws another 2 inches(4 inch claws total). With these claws, he can easily rip through flesh, muscle and ligaments that are in the body. It can scratch bone, but not break it. Due to these blades having no special properties the can be broken by B+ rank weapons and jutsu.
Abilities: N/A
History: Hakurou was born to be a fighter and trained from a pup to fight in the wolf style of kenjutsu. He learned the techniques first, then was granted with a special weapon when he passed his training. The claws were crafted from the swords that his grand father had been killed with defending the host of the wolf family. From that point he vowed to protect his host no matter what the price.
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Name: Arca Height: 5' tall 6' long Weight: 150 lbs Rank: B Element: Fuuton Personality: Arca is a very protective wolf. She won't let anybody she doesn't trust near her host, but isn't as attached to protecting her host as Hakurou. She is also very aggressive to anybody who rubs her the wrong way. Her use of taijutsu is her biggest attack method and attacks at a moment notice. She is very loyal to her host. Appearance:
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Name: Wolf Style: Tailwind Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu(Supplementary) Range: Close Range Description: After charging equal to handseals, Arca roars to call on a wind storm. The storm comes from behind Arca and gusts up to 50mph to increase the speed of those running with the wind at their back. It increase speed by 50mph when running with the wind, but if running into the wind speed is halved. Lasts 5 posts, 6 post cooldown when activated.
Name: Wolf Style: Skull Bash Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Element: N/A Type: Taijutsu Range: Close Range Description: Arca sprints toward the target with with her head at full speed. When close enough, she lowers her head and slams into the target. If contact is made, the target can sustain broken bones and severe bruising. If Arca misses, she is subject to disorientation from slamming into something else. Disorientation lasts for 3-4 posts based on impact.
Name: Wolf Style: Tornadic Impact Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: A Element: Fuuton Type: Taijutsu/Ninjutsu Range: Close Range Description: After a charge equal to handseals, Arca focuses fuuton chakra through out her body. It increases her speed x2. She sprints at the opponent, and at close enough range she releases the tornado. The tornado that is about 100 in diameter and 100mph and it traps the opponent in the wind storm. While inside, Arca slams the opponent into the up drafts of the tornado. While the are suspended in air, Arca appears above them and slams them to the ground using her body weight. Causes broken bones, severe bruising, and the possibility to rupture organs. Once per topic, after use speed of Arca is halved for the remainder of the topic. 8 post cool down.
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Name: Hei Height: 8' tall 10' long Weight: 200 lbs Rank: A Element: Raiton Personality: Hei is brutal and has no regard for anybody but himself and his host, though he does not even like his host. He will use any command given as an opportunity to tear his opponents limb from limb. He is also ready to make a meal out of any unsuspecting person or animal alike. Appearance: Abilities:
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Name: Raiton Slam Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: A Element: Raiton Type: Nintaijutsu Range: Contact Description: Charge equal to handseals. After charge the user covers his body in raiton chakra. This raiton chakra can burn the impacted areas up to the third degree, causing melting of skin and blistering. Along with this, the user slams into the target with extreme force, about that of a deer being hit by a car at 100mph. This can cause severe bruising, disorientation, organ ruptures, and broken bones. Cool down 8 posts.
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Name: The Armor of Chains
Type: Plate Armor
Quantity: 1
Description: Armor that covers Hei's body perfectly. It has many spikes going up the back that are strong enough to cut through steel and the spikes themselves are 6' long. There are many chains that rap around the bottom of the armor to hold it onto Hei's body. They can also be used to wrap up the opponent with the chains attached to his legs.
Abilities: Requires charge equal to handseals. After charge the armor becomes coated in raiton chakra. If contact is made with the target, a blast of Raiton is released, causing a numbing effect that spreads six inches from impacted area and lasts for four posts. It can also cause 1st and second degree burns on the impacted area. Active for six posts cool down of eight posts. The armor can be broken by B+ jutsu and weapons, but can also be broken by C+ Doton jutsu.
History: This armor was built by the most professionally trained blacksmith in the world of Mirage. He crafted it from a special steel found only in the basin between Kazangakure and Boufuugakure. The armor was crafted on the back of Hei, putting him through extreme pain, but giving him the reward of power. After the armor was crafted, Hei became known as the Flash of Death from the bright flash of lightning before they were impaled on the horns of the armor.
Appearance: In Hei's appearance image.
Name: Fenris Height: 12' Tall Weight: 200lbs Rank: S Element: N/A Personality: Fenris is a relentless killer. He uses his knowledge of kenjutsu to reduce his opponents to scraps that he can enjoy for a snack. He shows constant, blatant disrespect for all except the host of the wolf family, no matter who the are or their position in life. Cross him and you are certain to be dead. Appearance:
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Name: Mikazuki no Mai (Dance of the Crescent Moon) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: A Element: n/a Type: Ninjutsu / Kenjutsu Range: Short to Medium Description: The user creates three clones similar to kage bunshin and each one of them assaults the enemy from a blind spot. The attack occurs on three fronts simultaneously, so it's almost impossible to catch them flat-footed. Furthermore, the mighty attacks are so severe that receiving a blow even from one among the three will inevitably result in a wound that will immobilize the target. In order to move again the enemy will need medical help since it slices through and shreds the muscles where it hits completely. In addition, because of the magnificence this ninjutsu projects as they jump at the opponent's upper body in an orbital pattern, the elegance of which is reminiscent of the shape of a crescent moon. 2 post charge regardless of rank (the exception being genin which takes three) and a 6 round cool down.
Name: Samurai Sabre Technique Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: A Element: n/a Type: Kenjutsu Range: Short to Medium Description: Through the use of chakra flow, the user channels their chakra through their swords, extending both the reach and cutting ability of the blade to twice their normal level, while allowing the user to fire crescents of chakra whenever the blade is swung. These released chakra crescents are five feet long and are capable of great destruction, as shown from how these projectiles completely penetrated a considerable stone pillar, before continuing to damage the immediate surroundings.
Users can also use the ability to use shape transformation during the implementation of this technique, sculpting their respective chakra blades into various rudimentary weapons that extend beyond the natural dimensions of their original swords; such as broadswords, spiked shafts and even axes. This capability allows them to rely on smaller swords while retaining greater reach, damage and the possibility of conducting surprise attacks as necessary.
This transformational quality also appears to extend to even the crescents of chakra launched from the blade, forming a diverse range of projectiles that includes giant buzzsaws and shafts of chakra, the shape of which are seemingly dependent on the structure of the previously formed weapon. The chakra coating lasts five rounds with a six round cool.
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Name: Heaven & Hell
Type: Twin Katanas
Quantity: 2 (1 pair)
Description: Twin blades crafted from the exact opposite materials. The blades are six feet long (seven feet with the hilt) and are made of heaven steel and nether rock. Both have the durability of normal steel, but are just used for looks. The handles are wrapped in gold-colored rope for grip.
Abilities: The twin blades, Heaven & Hell, have the ability to cut through titanium. They can cut 6" into titanium in a single slice. The blade can also stand an incredible amount of force, being able to be broken by 3B, 2A, or 1S Rank jutsu of any element.
History: Some say the materials of heaven steel and nether rock didn't exist. The only man in the world to find these materials crafted them into magnificent blades the never left his side. On a journey deep into the bowels of a cave he saw a large wolf sitting on its haunches eating. He drew his swords and attacked, only to be torn in half by Fenris. The wolf claimed the swords are his own and uses them at his will now.
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Name: Flaming Tongue Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D-C Element: Katon Type: Ijutsu Range: Contact Description: After a one post charge, Zens mouth becomes engulfed in katon chakra. This chakra is used to cauterize gashes that are up to six inches long and an inch deep. D Rank - Cauterizes gashes up to 3 inches and half an inch deep. C Rank - Cauterizes gashed up to 6 inches and an inch deep. After use Zen requires a four post cool down.
Hakurou - The first tech is also Ninjutsu/ Kenjutsu. The Cloud Style Beheading, I believe needed to be reapproved once more as well. That needs to be finished and bump for this wolf. The weapon is good. Do the crescents shift as they are fired and do they take angled pasths? Or is it a straight path and the crescent stay vertical?
Hakurou - The only issue I have is where in the Crush Claws you talk about as a last resort, the wolf pounces. That can only happen if you keep the chakra in the claws, not if you release it. So divide it up into two sections with the jutsu having two different uses. If chakra is fired, and if chakra is kept in the paws/claws. Make that edit and bump and we will continue.
As far as the flame beheading, we will go back to that.
Arca - Tailwind - at b rank, the winds can be 50 mph. However, take out the 1.5 times faster. You'll simply be going 50 mph faster. As far as reducing 50% on the enemy, that can stay.
Skull Bash - Arca sprints toward the target with _______ at full speed. Are you missing something here?
Tornadic Impact - its Ninjutsu/ Taijutsu. At A rank, the winds can be much faster and the tornado can be much larger. A Rank is about being able to pummel the shit out of someone, and potentially kill.
Hei - Even though you have an armor with an ability, there is still room for him to have one more ability in his arsenal. With the numbing effect of the armor, how much of the body does it numb?
On a side note. Your templates are inconsistent and aren't spaced properly. Fix that.