Name: Exoskeleton of the Scorpion King
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Element: n/a
Type: ???
Range: Self
Description: A passive ability of the host of the Sanbi is stronger skin that is like a shell. The shell weakens taijutsu techniques enough that D-rank taijutsu simply glances off the skin. This armor is able to be turned on and off at will in an instant and costs the host a total of five chakra for every round it is active. This ability has a cool down of two posts between activations after it has been deactivated.

Name: Sanbi no Sasori: Awakening of the First Tail
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Element: n/a
Type: ???
Range: Self
Description: At the first tail, Youdu gains a semi-transparent purple chakra cloak that allows her to poison an opponent, if they stay within two feet of her for two posts, with a toxin that after the infection will attack the victim's nervous system and suppress their sensory receptors so much they will have no sense of touch or feel. This means their footing may be offsince they can't feel their feet, may drop a weapon since they can't feel the grip in their hand(s) as well as not even being able to know when they are attacked since they won't be able to feel pain from the wound. In addition the skin becomes harder, allowing B-rank taijutsu to glance off. From the base of the host's spine emerges a gigantic tail like that of a scorpion, the tail is normally fifteen feet long but once per round it can be extended to double that length (one round charge and a four round cool down). The tail can be used to attack at speeds topping 50 mph. The tip of the tail is sharp enough to puncture steel as well as being able to completely shred through other materials. In this form the hosts awareness of what is going on around them as well as their basic power level increases to 2x what it had been before. The host does not need to perform hand seals to be able to enter this first tail-beast cloak however they can't just simply choose to go into this form. At first the host can only enter this form if triggered by rage or another extremely strong emotion, however doing this means that they have no control over themselves in this form and will attack everyone around them friend and foe alike. If the host wants to be able to control their demon in cloak form they must train solo or with a single partner for 1500 words, after that they are free to not only control themselves but to use this tailed form at will. The host is able to remain in this cloaked-form for a maximum of six rounds before training to control it and they come out completely exhausted for three turns, after training they are able to stay in it for twelve rounds and come out only exhausted for a turn.

First Tail form - The only thing I see is where you say, once per round the tail can be extended. Change it to, with a one post charge of the tail, and it has a 4 post cooldown.

Exoskeleton - Passive is fine, but to cost no chakra with the chakra cost only being 5, I am denying. 5 chakra per post bc this leaves your body vulnerable if you decide no to use the chakra for that post. Eventually you will have to worry about chakra in total, so this only makes it fair and shows that you as a jinchuuriki can be vulnerable

First Tail form - Done

Exoskeleton - I figured this would take no chakra as it is not a technique at all but rather just a way of letting people know something is different about the host's body. To quote the bijuu description;

"A passive ability of the host of the Sanbi is stronger skin that is like a shell."

So its not something that would need turning on and off, just saying that this person's skin is alot thicker than most people similar to members of the Kinzoku clan and their steel skin ability.

Exoskeleton - That may be true, but the bijuu's chakra is what is doing that. So it would require chakra from the bijuu in order to maintain. Since your chakra is higher in number bc of the bijuu, that is basically the chakra of the beast. So to have to give up 5 points to maintain it seems fair. Bc once you don't rely on the bijuu, your still human and your body needs to be vulnerable at some point. Ex: Naruto getting almost killed with serious wounds but the nine tails chakra always makes him heal faster.

Fair enough, edited

Exo skeleton - Looking at it, I still believe it needs to have a cooldown after you drop it. Even at E Rank.

Now, as far as the first tail, exhaustion would last a little longer than a post, I say about three or four.

The E rank has been corrected

The exhaustion of only one round is only valid AFTER it has been trained. Before that happens the host is exhausted for three rounds

Exo Skeleton - 1500 ryo

1st tail - 6500 ryo

Tail Beast Jutsu are all going to be expensive, so be aware of that.

I'll purchase exoskeleton now and take first tail cloak as one of my free 10.

Ah ok. I forgot about your 10 free jutsu...

Be sure to deduct the 1500 for the E rank

Ryo Deducted

Name: Water Clone Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Element: Water
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Description: The Water Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of water. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body. Additionally, water clones only have one-tenth of the original person's power. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water. The maximum amount of clones is 6. This clone is destroyed in a single blow, and has a 3 post cooldown.

Taking this as my second free C rank

Is that the one from the database? If so, Approved.

Name: Sanbi no Sasori: Wasteland Cloak
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Element: n/a
Type: Bijuu Chakra
Range: Self
Description: This cloaked form is something produced by the Sanbi no Sasori's chakra stored within the host's body which emerges in fits of rage (eventually at will through training) but is not strong enough to actually for any of the Sanbi's tails. The cloak is a layer of purple chakra that covers the host's body and is a few inches thick, while in this form the user is granted the benefits of Exoskeleton of the Scorpion King (deflection of D rank taijutsu) as a passive natural ability in addition to several other enhancements. In this form the hosts awareness of what is going on around them as well as their basic power level increases to 1.5x what it had been before. The host does not need to perform hand seals to be able to enter this cloaked form, however, they can't just simply choose to go into this form. At first the host can only enter this form if triggered by rage or another extremely strong emotion, however doing this means that they have no control over themselves in this form and will attack everyone around them friend and foe alike. If the host wants to be able to control their demon in cloak form they must train solo or with a single partner for 750 words, after that they are free to not only control themselves but to use this cloaked form at will. The host is able to remain in this cloaked-form for a maximum of six rounds before training to control it and they come out completely exhausted for three turns, after training they are able to stay in it for twelve rounds and come out only exhausted for a turn.

For type, just call it Bijuu Chakra. That will atleast classify it. Label all things dealing with bijuu cloaks, Bijuu Chakra. The only thing, is, dont call it a first tail beast cloak, since this indeed is not a tailed cloak. Once you remove that, its ready. Bump and I will approve.

bump

Wasteland Cloak - Approved

Name: Sanbi no Sasori: The Second Tail Emerges
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Element: n/a
Type: Bijuu Chakra
Range: Self
Description: When the two-tailed cloak is activated a wave of fierce burning purple chakra encases Youdu's body which hides the fact that she is even human at this point, her eyes are glowing white circles with a mouth that has pincers which can shred a human if a part of them is caught within them. The range of these insect jowls is only a few inches though so the range makes them more of a decorative design than a weapon. Like with the first tailed-form the chakra cloak allows Youdu to poison people that get to close to her but now that range has been extended to ten feet. After two rounds of being within the range of the poison aspect of the cloak the host is able to select one poison to infect their victim(s) with, the poison selected will affect everyone that was within the range friend and foe alike. Similar to the first tail cloak there is of course a tail in this form, however, upon entering this form a second twin tail grows out of chakra and rests beside the original, this tail offers another poison in addition to the original. The tails are like that of a scorpion, the tail is normally fifteen feet long but once per round it can be extended to double that length (one round charge and a four round cool down). The tail can be used to attack at speeds topping 50 mph. The tip of the tail is sharp enough to puncture completely shred through all materials weaker than titanium. In addition the skin becomes harder, allowing A-rank taijutsu to glance off.

For technical purposes the first tailed forms poison (since it is also present in this form) is as follows; a toxin that after the infection will attack the victim's nervous system and suppress their sensory receptors so much they will have no sense of touch or feel. This means their footing may be off since they can't feel their feet, may drop a weapon since they can't feel the grip in their hand(s) as well as not even being able to know when they are attacked since they won't be able to feel pain from the wound.

The second tail has it's own poison however, an anti-coagulant which thins out the victim's blood and makes it easier for them to bleed out. If a person has been affected by this poison then their blood is thinned to the point that a moderate sized wound will be unable to close at all and would actually get worse as time progresses. Someone affect by it with a wound of moderate size will completely bleed out within 10 rounds if not healed by Ijutsu or some other method that will close off the wound. One last effect of the anti-coagulant is what happens when the thinned blood passes through the brain, the thinness makes it so the victim becomes woozy and off balance, in fact if a person is affect by both this poison and the toxin of the first tail they will be completely unable to hold their body up at all and will fall down.

In addition to just tails growing this form offers the host a pair of powerful scorpion pincers formed from chakra which are nearly three times the size of her head. While the claws are almost weightless (same as the normal weight of her hands) if they are placed on someone else they feel roughly around 150 pounds, this weight makes it especially dangerous to be struck by them. The crushing/cutting power of these pincers when something is caught inside them is enough to cleanly snap steel and lower grade materials. The claws, like the tails, can be extended up to a maximum of ten feet away for mid range assaults (one round charge and a four round cool down).

In this form the hosts awareness of what is going on around them as well as their basic power level increases to 2.5x what it had been before. The host does not need to perform hand seals to be able to enter this second tail-beast cloak however they can't just simply choose to go into this form. At first the host can only enter this form if triggered by rage or another extremely strong emotion, however doing this means that they have no control over themselves in this form and will attack everyone around them friend and foe alike. If the host wants to be able to control their demon in cloak form they must train solo or with a single partner for 2500 words, after that they are free to not only control themselves but to use this tailed form at will. The host is able to remain in this cloaked-form for a maximum of four rounds before training to control it and they come out completely exhausted for six turns, after training they are able to stay in it for eight rounds and come out only exhausted for three turns. This form costs chakra to keep in place per post, while this is untrained it costs 20 chakra per round, however when trained it only costs ten.

Ok, here is the big difference in this form. Yush it is powerful, but at B Rank, pushing Titanium to its breaking point and to pierce it is too much, even for this. Also, in this form, bc of the powerful and immense chakra, it will require a new system. Lasting six post to twelve here is not likely now. So these numbers will need to be reduced to 4, and 8 respectively. Exhaustion is on a higher level through this as well. 6 turns/ 3 turns respectively.

This form is pushing A Rank. So make the adjustments to keep it B, and make sure that you add the new system of chakra loss per post.

done

Ok, now that the this one is finished, here is the deal. THIS particular cloak is VERY strong to be giving away for free, so therefore it is your only free B Rank. This would cost double a normal B Rank jutsu. If you agree, say so now, and I will approve it.

thats fine

Ok, 2 b rank slots for this jutsu, APPROVED

Name: Chakra Scalpel: Wasteland Toxin
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Element: Bijuu
Type: Ijutsu
Range: Six Inches from finger tips
Description: Charge time equal to hand seals; the user forms a green and purple colored version of the normal chakra scalpel, this change in color is due to the addition of the toxic chakra from Sanbi no Sasori. The attack strength of this blade is like the normal chakra scalpel, meaning it cuts beneath the skin without breaking through it and is unable to be accurately used in the striking of vital spots that could instantly kill. If the user cuts someone with this technique in addition to the normal damage of slicing beneath the skin a toxin is released into their chakra system that begins to corrupt the affected person's chakra making it unable to be used. For comprehension in RP terms this would remove 10 chakra from the affected person's chakra pool a round for three rounds after the last time they were cut. If C rank Ijutsu is used on the cut, it acts as a counter toxin and stops the corruption effects immediately. This jutsu takes 10 chakra to maintain per round and can be maintained for a maximum of five rounds. 6 round cool down.