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First Name: Echo
Last Name: Zohai
Alias: Silent Chainsaw

Gender: Male
Age: 17
Height: 5ft 10in
Weight: 147lbs
Birthday: September 15, 1994
Sexuality: Bisexual
Relationships: None

Affiliation: Leaf Village
Rank: Genin
Element: Earth, Fire
Specialization: Defensive Ninjutsu, Strategic Battle


Personality: Echo is a rather calm and collected person. He does not have many enemies. Since, in most cases, he only chooses to speak when spoken to; he does not have many friends. He prefers to observe his surroundings rather than to go about without warning. In most social situations, he would be considered the "neutral" friend. He would be the one that has something to say but always seems to steer clear of conflict. In one word, he could be described as indifferent.

Likes: Echo enjoys writing short stories and painting. It is said that he has a whole room in his house dedicated to just those two hobbies alone.
He also can't resist the taste of hot, fresh dumplings.

Dislikes: Being a big fan of art, he is extremely against criticism towards his work. If any negative feedback is given towards his art, he would immediately (but almost always silently) lose his temper.
Another thing he dislikes is a fighter who has "a bark bigger than his bite".

Motivation: His motivation is to one day earn the honor to be able to marry into the Nara Clan.

Fears: He has a fear of becoming too close to someone. He believes that if he attains a great bond with someone, they will be pulled away from him. He fears being hurt this way. This fear is an obstacle that interferes with his goals with the Nara Clan.



Bloodline Name: Kanasuga

Bloodline Ability: Kanasuga is a blood trait hardens the skin into a steel-like material. This abilty is used for mainly defense but, in some cases, is used for offense. The skin changes to a dark grey, "shadowy" color. Kanasuga prevents the Zohai Clan from the use of Genjutsu.

Location: Land of Fire, Leaf Village

Clan History: The Zohai Clan has served the Hidden Leaf Village since the First Great Ninja War. They have worked alongside the Nara clan since then as well. To this day, the Zohai clan has become smaller. They still remain well-known for their "Diamon Defense" and their trademark phrase, "Now we Stand. We shall never fall".


History: At birth, his family was normal. Both his parents were ninja. His father was active ninja while his mother retired to take care of him. At the age of 5 he witnessed his parents, along with an unknown ninja from the Nara clan, fight for their lives in his home. His parents were killed and so was the murderer. The ninja from the Nara clan was unable to save Echo's parents, but took the life of the one who killed them. Echo cried. Again and again he asked why his parents had to die and why did the womam from the Nara Clan help them. The lady ninja spoke words to him that he would carry to his grave. "The Nara clan protects all of their allies, no matter what". That woman. She is the reason he thinks so highly of the Nara clan. She is the reason he wishes to marry into the Nara clan today. She is the reason he never gives up.
Over the years he accpuired a rather large wrench as his weapon. He never uses it for fixing anything but for special techniques in battle.
Now Echo roams the village, attempting to become a strong ninja. He does as many missions as he can. The becoming stronger part is almost nothing to him. He was known for seeing everything through. The thing he had problems with was, people from the Nara clan. For some reason when face with someone from the Nara clan, he obtains a loss of words. He has never held a conversation with more than three sentences from someone in the Nara clan. Why was this? He didn't even know.

RP Sample: The blonde haired boy was lying on his back on a hilltop beneath a tree. The skys were cloudy and the wind blew gently. There was a small book the rested on his face. The wind made the paper cover of the book shiver a bit. Was the boy asleep? His hands were propped behind his head. He was, indeed, in a comfortable position. *sniffle* His nose wiggled beneath the small booklet. Before releasing a rather wide mouthed yawn, he took his right hand from its resting position and picked up the book from his face. His face was riddled with black markings. It was wet ink from the writing in the booklet. "Ugh...I guess i dozed off again",
he spoke with a bit of laziness in his voice, "Who couldn't fall asleep on a day like this?" Then, at that moment, a single rain drop fell to splash against his ink splatterd cheek. "Crap..."


Source: Top 10 Rp Sites

Face Claim: Graham Specter from the anime, Baccano.


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"I hope I did everything correctly..."

Hi, I'll be reviewing your applications. Hope we finish this up quickly so we can Role-Play;)

1. First of is your coding. The problem is the code, which is suppose to be "[center]" not "center]" . I think you accidently left that "[" out.

2. Next, we don't have "Leaf Village". We only have:
Kusamuragakure(Hidden Forest), Hyougagakure(Hidden Glacier), Boufuugakure(Hidden Storm), Shippuugakure(Hidden Hurricane),and Tsukigakure(Hidden Moon).

3. Third is your Alias. Alias are only for B rank shinobis only. Please leave it blank, or place "N/A" there.

4. You may put at least 3 elements, and 3 specialization. I don't mind if you leave only 2 elements, but it is recommended that you leave 3 specializations. It might benefit you in the future, so just randomly include something in it.

5.For personality section, please include 2 paragraphs. One paragraph is equivalent to 3 sentences.

6.Please expand your "Motivation" into at least 3 sentences.

7.Please form, or create you clan here with this template. After creating your clan, you have to wait for it to be approved before your character application is approved. If you don't wanna wait, you can join the existing clans. Here is the list of clans

8. You have only 280 words in your history. You are required to have at least 400 in your history. You are, therefore, lacking 120 words.

9. Your specializations must be only one of these : Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Genjutsu, Ijutsu, Fuuinjutsu, Kenjutsu, Kyujutsu. Strategic Battles and Defensive Ninjutsus are not considered Specializations.

Bump after all this are completed and I'll review it again;) Thanks.

@Yoshi

I didnt realize how much I actually messed up. Thanks, I will fix these problems as soon as possible! And I'm sorry....what do you mean by "bump"?

By bumping, I mean comment or post the word "Bump" , showing that you're done.