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 Strife Cloud (Jutsu Registration)

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PostSubject: Strife Cloud (Jutsu Registration)   Strife Cloud (Jutsu Registration) EmptyFri Apr 13, 2012 5:24 pm

E-RANK JUTSU
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PostSubject: Re: Strife Cloud (Jutsu Registration)   Strife Cloud (Jutsu Registration) EmptyMon May 14, 2012 2:52 am

all right it's been a month

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PostSubject: Re: Strife Cloud (Jutsu Registration)   Strife Cloud (Jutsu Registration) EmptyWed May 16, 2012 11:42 pm

You don't need to post the Academy Jutsu into the jutsu registration. They are already approved, so just add them to your jutsu list. Same with the clan jutsu.

Name: Ice Crystal Regeneration
I'd think the element would be Ice. This can be used vaguely. When you say 'per use' what is the max extent of its regeneration? You could have a lot of your ice melted all at once and using the wording of this jutsu you could regenerate all of it at once as "one use." Be more specific.

Name: Frost Bite
Currently we do not have rules on passive abilities, but in this case it is similar to Dry Ice. Unlike Dry Ice you say that it is active all the time. In that case I say that you need to increase the rank of it to either B or A. It's either that or you make it last a certain amount of time like Dry Ice.

Name: Ice Crystal Wing Shield:
"This shield is able to withstand up all jutsu ranks. No chakra needed to block D-B Rank jutsu require no chakra to block, but once combined with dry ice it can block D-A rank jutsu without an chakra. A rank requires 5 chakra points and S requires 10 chakra points." No. It's C rank. It will stop C rank and lower.

Name: Frost Wind
Increase the cooldown.

Name: Crescent Ice Wave
That'll have to be A rank if it will completely immobilize them. You'll also need to say how long it will immobilize them for. Also keep in mind the raw power of some people, say how it might be possible for a person to be released from it.

Name: Ice Dragon Jutsu
How long does the dragon last for? Even though you mention that it depends on the user for the amount of ice used, you'll still need to say just how large it can get for each rank of the user, unless you're going to somehow rate the skill of a person some other way.

Name: Sub-Zero Whiteout
" If anyone except the user is not constantly moving the first stage of frost bite will start to set in." You should not be exempt from the frost bite. The ice and snow is still cold, and nowhere in your clan does it say you are immune to cold temperatures.

Name: ice crystal release: Hyōrinmaru
Same as above. Though you do manipulate ice, it does not explicitly say that you are immune from it, so placing ice all over your body should cause frostbite. Unless you can prove me wrong with a statement from your clan that says clearly you are immune to its effects, don't argue. Also, 'crystal' is too generic. That is, it only describes the alignment of the atoms making up the crystal, it is not an accurate way to tell how hard something is. So "strong as crystal" does not work. "Common crystals include snowflakes, diamonds, and table salt." I also think that you would need a charge up time of some sort to get all that ice on you, it shouldn't just instantly appear out of thin air.
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PostSubject: Re: Strife Cloud (Jutsu Registration)   Strife Cloud (Jutsu Registration) EmptyThu Jun 14, 2012 6:46 pm

Name: Ice Crystal Wing Shield
What I meant to say is that say one of the wings is broken from the jutsu. This this jutsu can regenerate that one wing. This jutsu can only repair section of the jutsu one at a time.

Name: Frost Wind
what if I increase the cool down to two posts

Name: Frost Bite

if I increase it to a A rank jutsu will that be fine. Also once dry ice kicks in this effect becomes negated due to the fact the dry ice is the parent jutsu for this jutsu.

Name: Crescent Ice Wave
Any Taijutsu higher than a C rank will obviously be able to push back the ice, and the it'll immobalize them for 2 posts. If the person is caught by this jutsu they mush have chunnin level chakra control and they'll be able to break free.

Name: Ice Dragon Jutsu
well a D-rank dragon will last one post and a C-rank two post and a B rank-three.

Name: Sub-Zero Whiteout
So if I just remove the the part about Toshiro not being affected by it will it be fine?

Name: ice crystal release: Hyōrinmaru
what if i create an item or jutsu that allows Toshiro to be immune to ice effects.
Instead of having a charge up time I'm going to have it at the end that will leave Toshiro vulnerable for a one post.
what I meant by as strong as crystal is that it's able to take as much physical punishment as crystal. From taijutsu and other weapons. so should I re-word that?
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PostSubject: Re: Strife Cloud (Jutsu Registration)   Strife Cloud (Jutsu Registration) EmptyFri Jul 13, 2012 3:28 am

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