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PostSubject: Yuu (Finally Done)   Yuu (Finally Done) EmptyWed Aug 08, 2012 11:47 pm

(Thinking to himself) "Hatred and despair... are the shinobi's true strength in combat."


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First Name: Yuu (優, Yuu)
Last Name:
Alias: Silver-Haired Devil (黒髪の悪魔, Črna las Devil)

Gender: Male
Age: Twenty-Three
Height: 5'9
Weight: 68 KG
Birthday: Sep. 19th
Sexuality: Heterosexual
Relationships: -

Affiliation: Born Tsukigakure
Rank: Jonin
Element: Katon, Raiton, Fuuton
Specialization: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, and Chakra Flow

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Personality:

Beyond knowing the truth behind the death of his family, Yuu wandered Tsukigakure as an outcast and was struck as being a very mysterious and aloof person, not taking an interest to many things and many people in the world as of right now. He has been known to be a very cold, callous, dispassionate figure, and is rather brooding, and indifferent, willing to harm both his enemies, and even his comrades if should they ever get in his way. He refers to anyone that he does not find interesting or boring, "trash" and treats them as expandable; meaning, "You are nothing more then trash and therefore will be taken out permanently..." Despite his devil-like personality, he is not particularly violent and will only fight when provoked or ordered to by the _kage.

As a child growing up, Yuu was respectable and therefore a loving child. He did what he was supposed to do and followed every direction. He was very helpful and cheerful toward other individuals and a lot of people respected him because of his personality and the way he was very helpful toward his parents. He was very proud for being the son of well-respected parents and siblings of that manner. But when the Great Ninja War took away his hopes, dreams, friends and family, everything changed. His personality and ideological thinking process switched to those of the emotion of evil, his heart blacker then the midnight sky. Now, he cares for no one but of himself, and disrespects anyone that comes in his way.

His cold demeanor and aloof personality allows him to stay completely calm and in control in most situations, and he is not easily surprised and off-guard. However, he does not seem to compensate and comprehend the Human trait of fighting against all odds or the very concept of the so-called Human heart; during his battle with an enemy in his chunnin years, he completely overwhelms the shinobi after he releases his Kekkai Genkai, yet the shinobi continues to fight on regardless of that manner. Because of this, he sighs to himself, looks at his opponents and immediately tells him that "to continue this constant fighting is utterly disappointing."

Yuu is also highly perceptive, cunning, and analytical. During his first visit to Tsukigakure as a jounin, he makes several surprisingly accurate remarks on the ninja that confronts him, but keeps it to himself. During battles with his opponents, he uses the concept of manipulation to throw his enemies off-guard and toy with them, putting vigorous and revolting insults in their head in order for them to attack first so he can analyze their movements and make strategies to have a flawless victory or a victory with a few marks on his body. Nonetheless, he analyzes his surroundings to get a better feel of the environment and "make himself feel at home."

Likes:

Since there are not many things he likes right now then he did when he was a kid, Yuu's likes are based down around two topics: Keen Intellect, and Manipulation.

"Keen Intellect, is what you should harvest in battle..." Yuu likes to study his opponents while in the process of battle. Along with the studying process, he likes to think a lot about situations and keep majority of them at hand. His intellectual is such that even most high-rank ninja above him in experience and in age, harbors respect for, as sometimes the Oujokage sends him out on A-rank missions alone, to recover information and investigate certain ninja of high-rank (A-S rank). His calm and collected nature allows him to easily deduce the basic idea of his opponent's skill in battle to figure out their strength and weaknesses, something that Yuu likes the most about himself.

"If the mind plays tricks, become the mastermind..." Another trait that Yuu likes about his persona is the ability and the power of manipulation. He has shown himself to be a crafty and cunning man. The most noticeable trait that he gets from his mother is his ability to deceive and manipulate others around them in multiple manners. He has a great talent for analyzing and observing everything in his presence, allowing him to quickly understand a person's pattern of thinking and better manipulate them. Thinking of the right words to say to get into someone's head and have them thinking otherwise is the one thing that Yuu liked about him and his mother during her kunoichi days.

Dislikes:

(Thinking to Himself) I hate everything, and everyone... The one thing that Yuu dislikes in the entire world is the sudden fact of people reminding him of his past. Ever since the death of his mother and father, Yuu gave up everything and secluded himself into the lifestyle of darkness. He visits Tsukigakure often, but even looking at the village reminds him of his gruesome past of when he was a kid and that he was so helpful and etc. That was before his parents died from the ambush, from the ninja that took their lives and nothing will ever change his mindset, not even the people who adored him when he was younger. His past was the sole reason why he went down the road of hatred, why he lost his family and that he could not do anything to bring them back now.

Motivation:

"This hatred, it motivates me to become stronger... it motivates me to kill whoever is in my way..." Hatred. The one thing that fuels the evil in himself to burn, to become stronger, to become powerful. His motivation is the beginning of a new life, a life where his past can never haunt him. Motivation takes the emotion of hatred and the aura of darkness around him and uses it in his will; burning to grow stronger. Hatred is the reason why he still lives and the reason why he still fights. His hatred. For not bringing his parents back into his life.

"I have to train... I have to become stronger then what I am now..." His second motivation is training. Blood. Sweat. He dedicated his life into training, his hated life into training. Training keeps him sane and from going crazy, studying his own movements so that he can become much faster and stronger than what he is now. Pain motivates himself to do more and train harder; feeling the physical pain that strives to do better than what he is doing now to reach his maximum limit or, by far, go past it.

Fears:

"..." Although Yuu does not speak on what he fears in his life, there are a lot of things that he fears recently. Being the most important is death. Living in Tsukigakure and under the Oujoukage's shadow, death was a means of giving it your all until you cannot breathe no more. He is afraid that his body might give out on him, indicating the tough training that he always puts himself through. People calling him an animal because of his clan and their animal-like ways is another thing that frightens Yuu. That is why because of his current personality and his clan together, he is and always will be, an animal.


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Hachūrui

Bloodline Name: Naga

Bloodline Ability: The clan has an apparent affinity with snakes that, in addition to impacting the appearance and composition of their true form, has caused them to learn a number of snake-related abilities. One such ability is being able to summon giant snakes to fight alongside them in battle, made possible by the summoning contract tattooed on their arms.

Location: Tsukigakure

Clan History: Not much is known about the history of Hachūrui due to them being a highly secretive clan, their need to keep secrets is the main reason that they moved the entire clan into Tsuki where very few know of it's existence much less how to enter and discover those within.


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History:

Prolouge

A descendant of the Fallen... is what they called Hachurui, Yuu.


Yuu. A shinobi born of the Hachurui clan from Tsukigakure, the land if Death. At age 2, he left Boufuugakure with his mother and moved to Tsukigakure because of family relations; his grandmother wanted his mother to move away but still keep traveling distance. A loving, graceful child, he was seen by others as the golden child of happiness. Always having a smile on his face near the people that adored him and his family, something bothered his parents about him in a strange way. They could not figure out what the situation was, so they left it at bay. Only one thing was for sure: people took their son's kindness as his weakness, and things started to change. There was a tragedy on sight. A hit set out. Someone wanted Yuu dead as a young boy, judging from his actions right now. People were insulting him, doing everything they can to break him down. They wanted to see him in pain. The best way to do that, eliminating his parents. That night, when Yuu was carefully tucked in, his parents went out on a nighttime stroll. Being confronted by these hostile ninja, they put up a good fight. But the good fight would have to end sadly. The next day, in the afternoon, Yuu had received word that his parents died in an ambush. What made the tragedy more worst was the scene of the dead bodies in front of him a few minutes after the announcement to him.

This is where the life of the soulless shinobi began to tell the tale.

Chapter One: The Academic Years; Darkness clouds him.


The Academy. Yuu Hachurui's first road to becoming a ninja. It was a tough for him, really. 2 years have passed since the death of his parents and already he had no one to care for him. He still lived in the household where he was born. The darkness shrouded itself around him, constantly thinking of that dreadful day, seeing his parent's dead bodies next to each other, holding hands, eyes closed peacefully. Walking into the academy building, the teacher announced the new student, no hello, no hi, no greetings. Everyone looked at him, and laughed. But what they didn't know, was the pain he was feeling. They all had parents whom they can love and respect, he didn't. Sitting at the right corner seat near the doorway, he paid attention to his teacher, ignoring the harsh remarks made from the other students. Calling him different names: "weird", "loser", "orphan", "freak." Some even called him an animal because of his clan and the markings on his face. Nonetheless, the words did not sink in. During breaks they would do the same thing, recess and lunch. Only the ninja from his own clan would stand by his side, but he didn't care not one bit, giving everyone the cold shoulder.

Because of that, he trained by himself. The other Hachurui shinobi offered to train in assistance, but Yuu did not listen or take into consideration. He wanted to be alone, and many knew that. So, they gave him what he wanted. Privacy time. Time to himself. To be alone. If not training, he would sit in his room all day, or take short walks to the field and punch the tree numerous times and kick the tree as well. Multiple wounds appeared on his hands: knuckles, palms, fingers, elbows; even his legs: shin, kneecaps, thighs. The more pain, the more satisfaction. The weather stayed the same in Tsukigakure, so staying outside was common for Yuu. A child born with happiness everywhere he went, now filled with hate and despair with every step he took. He didn't care how he would end up, he just wanted to be alone from everyone. He worked on his prowess, his strengths and weaknesses. With those in training and complete, he graduated the Academy at the top of his class at age 11. His enemies were behind him, and soon, they would be erased by him.

Chapter Two: The Beast within; Hissing with dispassion.


Genin. D-rank ninja. Finally a ninja. The feeling was good, but not as satisfying the taste of hatred inside him. Already on the path of darkness and the path of a shinobi. Life never felt sweeter. Assigned to his squad, he cared nothing more then to just do the missions and do them right, or die trying. Ready to take step into the real world of a ninja, his acknowledgement would soon be known. But for what purpose? Already giving up on everything around him because of his parent's death, there was nothing else for him to fight for, other than his life. Just like Genjutsu, everything and everyone around him was a mere illusion that he would rather break instead of keep looking. He isolated himself from his teammates, seeing as they were weak in physical strength and not compared to his prowess. But he tended to take time with his sensei for private training, since his sensei was part of the Inuzuka clan himself. Only three people respected him and he "somewhat" gave them respect, mutual feelings to say the least. He could not wait but to leave this village, for the death of his parents kept on interfering with his life right now.

Missions were easier the more they got them. The Oujoukage got word quickly, started piling the team's missions with more difficulty. Did not phase Yuu; all he needed was him and his hatred to fight til the end. Most missions included traveling to different villages along with hostile ninja along the way with the passion of killing any shinobi that comes in their way. While doing these missions, their sensei had warned them of another possible threat coming to this Shinobi World, a remnant flashback of the last Great War. Was Yuu ready? Possibly, no. But he did not care nonetheless and let the thought and feeling slip his mind as his concentration was to defeat these hostile ninjas during missions. Most of these missions were fun to Yuu because they involved hostile ninjas who were a good challenge, so killing them would satisfy him a bit until everything was settled with his passion of hatred.

Hearing of hidden secrets that were stashed from every person in every village, unknown to anyone in the world, untold from no one in the universe, Yuu thought this "secret" would be hidden power; something that he did not lust, but wanted to figure out. The concept of bringing his parents back were out of the question, but who cared? He didn't. Every step they took, every corner they saw, every turn they turned, there would be something mysterious watching them from afar, or someone ambushing them. Yuu opened his ears, and heard rustling noises coming from certain bushes. There, Yuu took out senbon and picked up different smells from certain directions. Throwing a senbon at the upper right direction in a tree, two senbon in the left direction in the bushes, 1 senbon at the right direction in the bushes, while his team did the same through the orders of their sensei. The senbon that Yuu threw came in contact with the ambushed ninja's forehead, indicating he hit a direct shot and they were dead. The other ninja in hiding; injuries to their shoulder. The other ninja hiding ambushed the team as soon as they found out they were caught.

A fight between the squad and the ambushers. Yuu hissed with the taste of hatred in his system and that he hated these ninja for attacking his team. The leader of the ninja recognized Yuu's facial scar. He was part of the Hacurui clan no doubt; from the same village because of the Tsukigakure headband. Apparently, this one was the same, seeing as all Hachurui members resided in Tsukigakure. Yuu did not care of what they were either thinking or whispering. His animal instincts kicked into high gear, and he was out for blood. The leader stepped in the middle of the group and halted his men. He looked at the sensei. They were even in height; judging from both chakra, even in skill. "What gave you the right to trespass, Tsuki ninja?" The leader spoke in a boosting, big tone type of voice. Yuu's sensei answered peacefully, not peaceful enough to sign a truce, "We came to find what we all heard of was a mystery. The mystery you bastards have kept for too long!" With that being said, the leader through his left elbow at the sensei. The sensei did not move, only swayed his head backward. Doing so, he dug his animal-like claws deep in the leader's abdomen, picked him up and slammed him to the ground. The other ninja retaliated, attacking the squad. The leader, somehow, got up from the impact and shifted his right knee forcefully into their sensei's chin. An act of violence, this leader must be killed.

The fight went on for a couple of minutes. Yuu charged third after his first teammate. His rampage would be short as his fight with the older ninja left him useless on the ground. The ninja scoffed at him, saying, "Where is your protection now, little snake?" Laughed at, scoffed at, Yuu cried tears of pain. The hatred sunk in deeper, and deeper. Upon laughing, the ninja was fiercely attacked by Yuu's squad. Yuu, getting hit with a right hook to the left jaw, laid on the ground, slow to get up on his feet. The ninja toyed with him, giving him insults after insults. What triggered the beast was when the ninja said this: "After the Great War, I bet your parents died in filth. I'll bet they never loved you!" Eyes flashed open. Slowly, Canine teeth began to form. Motioning himself with his kunai, he shifted his gaze to the ninja who talked ill of him. The ninja, now frightened, stood his ground.

Minutely Time Skip


The battle was over. The enemies were defeated. Hatred swelled up inside him as he finally let it all out. Motioning his kunai back in his pouch., he continued toward their destination. His team following. His sensei knew the feeling, but did not warn his other two students as they saw it themselves. The making of a beast was their teammate. Continuing doing several high-rank missions, they continued their road to become the best of the best. And there came, the Chuunin Exams.

Chapter Three: Beast or not; hatred motivated his training


Chuunin. Age 13. Another step toward greatness. Was not much really. Discovered his abilities, his prowess, his specialties. Choosing Taijutsu because of his clan and of his abilities. He began learning the secrets of Dim Mak. And the secret to combining Dim Mak and and his Kunai-related abilities together. A bone-shattering and finger-tapping art, Yuu had much to almost 95% trouble learning the technique behind the fighting style Dim Mak. Muay Thai is a speed form, and as such, Yuu made sure that he paid close and careful attention to ever flowing graceful and aerial movement he took in his strikes, wanting to improve on both strength, velocity and combo-tactics. For some strange reason, it was never a problem for him to swiftly shift his style from Dim Mak to his Kunai-related tactics while in combat, giving him the upper advantage in both offense and defense. While others struggled to reach a fast enough punch speed and elbow precision to injure an opponent, Yuu, non-surprisingly, never had this problem, significantly quickening his training.

While learning Dim Mak, Yuu also improved himself on his clan jutsu and mentally, even at the same time. Having Keen Intellect of certain villages he traveled, even staying in Tsukigakure, he was able to make punching, kicking, and the elbow of his body to defend or strike a simple reflex he could use in any occasion. With his training he was taught simplicity in attacks, velocity, quickness, and determination. His clan jutsu were easy to apprehend, having his sensei teaching him the basics of the Hachurui jutsu and the clan's abilities altogether. It was an average day, the atmosphere was hot, making the air humid and the sun out during the day. Snake fangs stayed as his teeth, only extending when he is in Four Legs technique. He also continued to practice his Dim Mak as well, issuing different styles while doing so. Feeling the hatred of everything that happened, he pushed himself to go faster and faster until he met his limit.

His efforts were to be thankful for, even his sensei. He was now ready to live this place, to tear the remains of his memories. It was time for him to leave, to never come back. Those memories of his past will haunt him if he returns. Anyone in his path will be obliterated, and he means anyone. Comrade, or enemy.

Chapter Four: Hatred finally left something.


Tsuki. Village located in the Death Country. Home of the Oujoukage and many samurai along with it. Some ninja reside there, others moved to different villages. Little to no birds in the sky flew, only clouds of emptiness took control of the sky and the breeze of chill ran down everyone's spine, signaling it was chilly. Cold weather. Samurai were working hard, under the order of the Oujoukage. Civilans were granted with smiles of safety and happiness. Welcoming any newcomers. But only one ninja was not happy, his hatred still resigned in his body. Time to make his move. He was at age 17. Abilities far rival of a Jounin rank.

Chapter Five: Leave; never come back.


Yuu, age 19, arrived at Tsukigakure, flourished by the renown hatred that swelled inside his body since the day his parents died. Wrecking havoc onto the village made him appeared to fake his death. A funeral being held in his loss, only with three people who attended, his squad from years back. Hatred began to swell even more inside of him. Tsukigakure was nothing to him anymore. He had cut all ties with Tsukigakure, and now, he will settle the score when he is ready to. Living in the abandoned house that still stood, all lights were off. He waited. Until the perfect day for Iwagakure to lay waste eternally. He snarled at this God-forsaken village, only he would wait.

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A devil. A monster. That was what they called him. Did he care? Not one bit. He wanted to lay waste to everyone around him. He didn't care who. Men, woman. Not the children, "anything but the children." They didn't care for him when he was a child, but the children should have a future. He had his future; a future of hate. An Hachuriu with a passion for despair, blood, hate. His eyes glowed with the color of light blue, light green from afar distance. The Hachurui clan had one tainted member, who lived in Tsukigakure, who killed, who sold his soul to his hatred, let every good go by and only brought bad. A demon. A monster. Who's only purpose was to destroy.

It didn't take long forYuu to settle on his rooftop to Tsukigakure from his abode. No one would ever see him up there anyway. Hachurui members roamed around in the same village, living their normal lives. The Hachurui clan will eventually face Yuu, but only that time will come soon. Until then, his hatred overshadowed his very appearance, his demon-like instinct got the better of him. He did not care for it, like he did not care for other things in the world. All he could do is wait, and wait until that rightful time to strike back hard and cause major damage. This village and all other villages will bleed from the wrath of Yuu Hachurui. He could see it now.

"..." Visualizing it all crumble. His hatred making him complete, making him stronger. Nothing and no one could stop him. "..." Yuu Hachurui will leave every village tainted with Hachurui mark all over, even Tsukigakure, even in different villages where everyone else resided. "This world..." Yuu looked at Tsukigakure and closed his eyes. He saw it all now: his birth, his parent's death, when he was an academy student, being picked on. When he was a genin, finally releasing his hatred. When he was a chuunin, the hatred motivating him. And now, a Jounin; faking his death. No one but three people came to his funeral, all three fell sorrow and two cried. The Sensei bowed his head in sorrow as all three departed. "All..." Opening his eyes, the hatred welcomed him, "...will fear the wrath of Yuu Hachurui."


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PostSubject: Re: Yuu (Finally Done)   Yuu (Finally Done) EmptySat Sep 08, 2012 2:41 am

Archived Unfinished Application
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PostSubject: Re: Yuu (Finally Done)   Yuu (Finally Done) EmptyWed Nov 14, 2012 6:22 am

Bump.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuu (Finally Done)   Yuu (Finally Done) EmptyThu Nov 15, 2012 3:14 am

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"...He visits Iwagakure often, but even looking at the village reminds him of..."

When did we get a Iwagakure on Mirage?

Everything else is fine.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuu (Finally Done)   Yuu (Finally Done) EmptyThu Nov 15, 2012 3:17 am

I did not get info on the kages that are currently here. So I used the original Kages until someone told me two kages that are NPC: Oujoukage and Kanetsukage. I can change that to Oujoukage.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuu (Finally Done)   Yuu (Finally Done) EmptyFri Nov 16, 2012 2:43 am

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"...He has shown himself to be a crafty and cunning man since his betrayal of Tsukigakure..."

You haven't defected yet. Remove all mentions of defection from history as well.

Also, have you applied for a rank yet?
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PostSubject: Re: Yuu (Finally Done)   Yuu (Finally Done) EmptyFri Nov 16, 2012 2:50 am

Edited. No signs of defection in history. Just hatred while still being in Tsukigakure. And Jonin rank is the rank I am applying.
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PostSubject: Re: Yuu (Finally Done)   Yuu (Finally Done) EmptyTue Nov 20, 2012 4:18 am

Go to the Opening Starter Ranks topic and apply there. Then I'll approve you.
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