Bloodline Name: Iron Blood

Elements: N/A

Specialization: Taijutsu.

Physical Traits: Blonde to platnium blonde hair. Often silky smooth skin to the touch. most of the clan tend be sick often, they have very little immunity most of the time breathing problems is the biggest concern. Little do they know its the metals they come in contect with that make them ill.


Location: Cherry Blossom country on the coastal shores.

Clan History: The Kiyata are not native to the lands they now live in. over 200 years ago they were a prove clan of smiths known for the weapons they could make or the jewelry they put out. But the lands they came from where being rampaged by warriors not from these lands. The Kiyata tried to fight back but due to their lack of fighting skills they were easily picked off. The women of the clan where often captured and taken away to a far off land to be sold as slave labors they often died before having children.

One day a young man of the clan named merlin stood up to those taking his clan members away he fought with such skill no one could understand how he became so strong with the clans blood line. He was untouchable by the warriors his power from the clan’s blood seemed to be at a much higher level unlike the normal clan members he didn’t need to touch the metal he just willed the metal to slay the men. But he was soon worn down and captured and was shipped off with the next batch of slave labors.

During the voyage merlin escaped his bond and freed the members of his clan. The warriors from another land killed merlin in a brutal battle that actually destroyed the ship. Merlin’s clan members ended up washing up on a shore that’s waters where crystal clear. The men and women who did live though the wreckage swore they would never forget Merlin’s deeds. After setting up a small little village, the clan member’s decided to work on not only using their bloodline as a work tool but as a means of fighting.

Because of the new land the members found themselves becoming sick very easily. Their immunity’s slowly dropped thought out the generations. It’s common for members of the clan to be named after the only hero known to the clan. The clan encampment is often closed to outsiders.


Bloodline Ability Description: The Kiyata are a strange clan who’s ability to bend and mold metals that touch their bodies. Their chakra allows them to bend, agitate, and mold metal to their will as long as there body is within a few inches of the metal. They can control most transition metals and poor metals. The metals do not need to be refined. But the more pure the metal is the easier it is to control and form better.

Many have wondered how to tell the masters of this clan apart from the normal members. Mostly there is no way to tell. A true master has actually done the clan jutsu merlin’s prodigy jutsu. Also some maters have often been slightly demented in the head from being a cross dresser to talking to tree stumps. But also a real master is able to pull the metal atoms out of unrefined ore and use it in battle. Masters are known to also combined and pull apart metal minerals from each other. Most can also alloy some metals.

the clans ability are a metal Telekinesis, this is how the clan can change and alter the shape, or structure of metal to what ever they want. they do not require hand seals to do this.

Here is a list of the known metals that can be used and at what ranks.
Titanium, Iron, Cobalt, Tungsten, Silver, Gold, Mercury, Lead, Tin, Steel, Aluminum, Manganese.

Genin rank: Iron, Mercury, Gold, Silver

Chunin rank: Iron Cobalt Tin Steel, Aluminum, Mercury, Gold, Silver

Special Jonin: Titanium Iron Cobalt Tin Steel, Aluminum, Mercury, Gold, Silver

Jonin: Titanium, Iron, Cobalt, Tungsten, Silver, Gold, Mercury, Lead, Tin, Steel, Aluminum, Manganese, And any metal alloy with traces of these elements.


Drawbacks: Pron to be ill or easly poisoned. often needing medical atention.

Members: Merlynn Kiyata





Name: Kiyata Teachings
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D-S
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: 30 feet with moderately good chakra control at chunin rank and up/250 feet if metal is touching metal in the users hands.
Specialty: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, kenjutsu for swords. All depends on the practical use of the metal.
Duration: Genin rank: 4 posts morph the metal
Chuunin Rank: 3 posts to morph the metal
Special Jounin Rank:2 posts to morph the metal, exp mercury
Jounin Rank: 1 post to morph the metal
S-rank/kage: 1 post use at this rank twice per topic

Cooldown: Genin 8 posts Cooldown
Chuunin 6 post Cooldown
Special Jounin 4 post Cooldown
Jounin 2 post Cooldown
S-rank/kage 1 post Cooldown

Description: The clans chakra and mind are attuned to select metals in the earth. The clan’s chakra can change the solidified structure of the metal crystalline structure the metal solid is preset in. This changing happens fast at an atom level but to the human eye it seems to slowly morph and change(in a way they are playing mental Lego's with the metals atoms). The clan can use their chakra to change and morph metals in their hands, but they can use chakra strings to grab metal like a magnet that with in a 30 feet radius of them or repel metal items. They can morph the structure of metal weapons or items on an enemy ninja if they are with in touching distance this is very useful for causing discomfort for the enemy or making there armors or weapons become useless for them(basic weapons not enchanted weapons).

The watery metal Mercury in this clan is surprisingly not use like the other metals. It helps for heavy weight hitting and also quite useful in larger amount use as cheap blinding or splashing like attacks. It’s mostly used to attack eyes and orifices of the body for inside attacking or poisoning of the body slowly.

done with the clan and jutsu

Merlynn wrote:

Duration: Genin rank: 4 posts morph the metal , mercury is not bound by this duration.
Chuunin Rank: 3 posts to morph the metal, exp mercury
Special Jounin Rank:2 posts to morph the metal, exp mercury
Jounin Rank: 1 post to morph the metal
S-rank/kage: this ninjas do not have a post duration for morphing metal.

Cooldown: Genin 4 posts Cooldown
Chuunin 3 post Cooldown
Special Jounin 2 post Cooldown
Jounin 1 post Cooldown
S-rank/kage has no Cooldown.

Cool down needs to be at least twice the amount of time of the duration, and S-rank needs a cooldown/length. I'd say that at S-rank it has a once per topic use.

Mercury should be moved up to Special Jounin at least.
Explain Mercury's use better.

updated and making the s ranked level a one topic use would be a bit limiting to it would two times per topic at such a rank of chakra cost be allowed??

All jutsu take a one post hand seal or concentration post or more. So no forming the jutsu and attacking with it in the same post.

fixed it so the srank and kage for duration take as long as the cool down. also making those rank in chakra cost are a twice per-topic thing. it will be because of the massive chakra drain it takes to use that level of jutsu.

Right before I look at anything to do with jutsu your clan needs some more work your clan needs a village it is in.

Next your clan is able to bend too much and needs to be tonned down as for the mineral ore part remove that as it can rp just saying you found some rando titanium diposit near you and refine it etc which is not happening. Also your clan sound like magnetism like gold sand so stuff need explaining more, stuff need removeing and just general better explained how does having a metal touch you make you able to bend it do you have a physic powers etc need explaining in detail how and why.

Komakai Uchiha wrote:

Right before I look at anything to do with jutsu your clan needs some more work your clan needs a village it is in.

Next your clan is able to bend too much and needs to be tonned down as for the mineral ore part remove that as it can rp just saying you found some rando titanium diposit near you and refine it etc which is not happening. Also your clan sound like magnetism like gold sand so stuff need explaining more, stuff need removeing and just general better explained how does having a metal touch you make you able to bend it do you have a physic powers etc need explaining in detail how and why.

the reason they aren't in a a village is becuase mine dont live in a ninja village they live on the coast in the cherry blossom country by the sea of light. they live here because its out of the way of sicknesses from the village.


also the ability is yes a metal telekinesis. also the finding of random titanium would be like super random and really if you know where to look all these minerals are easy and common to find in the world in small trace amounts. but working so hard for such a little amount would be pointless. but i will put the blood line is a metal telekinesis.

No handsigns means need a charge up time. As for the village etc put the country then.

put the location and as for a charge time its the jutsus duration is on how long it takes to morph metal.

500 meters = 1500 feet.

Thats stretching it a bit isn't it? Most PvP battlegrounds are 500 feet in diameter. Reduce it.

i had it that because most attacks in naruto can be over 500 feet.

To keep this a more fair environment for others to RP in and also fight if be, we had to restrict some things. The length of attacks happen to be one of them. If you can just reduce it to a smaller length then we'll think it over. Sorry about that.

reduce what how far the range is??

I told another person that was apping a clan that 150-200ft was to large of a range for a D-S ranked jutsu. Physical attacks should be no greater than 110ft for a Fuuton jutsu of A ranked. 150-190ft at S-Rank MAYBE, but that's only because it is an attack that uses air and therefore the dissipation of the attack would be further.

well if you want to know the range inst throwing distance its how far it can reach while still attached to the owner. see if one had enough metal they could make the metal in to small metal threads and stretch them all out over making a well forested area a spiders web of razor wire. now let see considering you only saying 190 feet for a thrown object. this clan would try very hard not to throw metal around so stretching and string like wires is common thing for them to do. so thats why i said 500 becuase its more of anbush tactits.

if you want would you like me to demonstrate this justu a little in to a rp like fasion?

Ah Issue with that. Razor wire and normal wire are both weapons or items that must be paid for. Making a forest of it, no, not unless you have enough money to pay for that much wire from the shop. I understand that the clan can morph metal, but when:

Ex:
You have two kunai and three shuriken in your inventory. All five of those are metal, so any rank can bend and morph those objects into say a metal hammer, mace, bo staff or even a sword and use it in battle.

That's cheating the system even if you can't take those weapons out of topic.

thats the point they need a large amount of metal. and so what if they can do that they make just normal un powered weapons. all they make is metal weapons. they dont have nothing fancy unless they have the proper items. if one thinks about it ever one starts off with three kunai and one shuiken. a member of this clan could turn that all in to one larger kunai or create a small sword simaler to a dagger. make at least 10 feet odfwire. it depends on what they have and the amount.

Yah that's the issue, being able to create all of those weapons.

if you have a problem with that then why you running a naruto site. i know there is weapons and stuff you can buy but most if not alot of clans in naruto are able to create there own weapons. there is the kaguya, hakus ice clan theres even a crystal clan. in a way all clans make their own weapons. my clan just happends to make there weapons out of metal. just becuase my clan can make a weapon dosnt mean we wont have to buy some eventually. but also they dont just make weapons they make armor and shields but i even put a duration on how long it takes to make those weapons per rank and the cool downs double that. so if you count that 4 post for genin then a 8 post cooldown thats 12 post in order for them to create some thing new. thats alot of posts to make one small weapon out of three items. this clan is ment to be able to make the weapon to match their fight.

Haku's Ice technique did not create the senbon he was wielding, it only created the mirrors he used, the kaguya clan ripped their skeleton apart. The crystal release was OP and S-ranked. I am going to pass this clan along to the other staff and see what they think needs to be changed.

lower the range as instructed by staff this the last time you will be told or your clan will be denied due to the fact you are not following staff instruction in the Clan application process thank you good day.

Just wondering how exactly you intend to use this jutsu in a battle scenario? I understand morphing the metal and all but it would take time and concentration. It would leave you rather open for enemy attacks. That also being said you would need a lot of metal on you because stopping to draw metal from the ground would be pretty hard. Just saying the idea isn't impossible but you just have to consider the circumstances in which you would be able to use it.

Also I see where Mayumi is coming from. It is rather unfair for you to create let's say a katana mid fight, and your opponent had to work for the ryo to buy theirs. However if you were to already own a sword and wanted to remold it in a fight to say a claymore or something along those lines, that is more viable. But it would have to eventually return to normal form in the next battle.

Shiro wrote:

Just wondering how exactly you intend to use this jutsu in a battle scenario? I understand morphing the metal and all but it would take time and concentration. It would leave you rather open for enemy attacks. That also being said you would need a lot of metal on you because stopping to draw metal from the ground would be pretty hard. Just saying the idea isn't impossible but you just have to consider the circumstances in which you would be able to use it.

Also I see where Mayumi is coming from. It is rather unfair for you to create let's say a katana mid fight, and your opponent had to work for the ryo to buy theirs. However if you were to already own a sword and wanted to remold it in a fight to say a claymore or something along those lines, that is more viable. But it would have to eventually return to normal form in the next battle.

yes the jutsu would leave you open for an attack and also i cant use swords becuase i dont use kenjutsu, so what i am doing is in combat is i am take the thrown kunais and shuikens to gather enough metal for smaller simple weapons or armor. i am doing this untimely until i have enough ryo to buy some scrap metal. due to the fact i dont have ken jutsu i have to improvise and use metal whips when i gather enough metal i would say 10 pounds of steel and one set of 30 feet of wire. also i would agree with the items returning to normal because they can be used for other means as well.

there happy now fixed the range