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PostSubject: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptySun Apr 28, 2013 4:41 pm

Free and Approved:


Approved and Priced:


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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptyTue Apr 30, 2013 10:36 pm

Bump, added 2 more jutsu to the thingy.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptyTue Apr 30, 2013 11:22 pm

Which two jutsu did you add to the thingy? :P
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptyTue Apr 30, 2013 11:24 pm

I just added the E and D to be graded here. They will be apart of my free set in accordiance to what Jounin can start with freely. The other three, the two A ranks and the S, are just other customs waiting to be graded and then priced.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptyWed May 01, 2013 12:50 am

The E and D-ranks are...

APPROVED!
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptySun May 05, 2013 10:00 am

Name: Shikotsumyaku Bunshin [Clone of the Dead Bone Pulse]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Any
Specialty: Clan Ninjutsu
Handseals: Fifteen
Duration: 7 posts or until destroyed
Cooldown: 6
Description: The Shikotsumyaku Bunshin technique is a Kaguya equivalent to the Kage Bunshin technique. Requiring one to utilize the format of the willow and and stab it into the earth one will leave behind a clone and up to however many their level of knowledge can utilize, up to 6. Each clone is a C rank version of their master and yet only cost ten percent of the user's current amount of chakra to perform adequately. As each clone is only C rank they can only have a base amount of 125 chakra associated to each clone, however they do know everything that the user themselves know only the power distributed to each technique is lowered to their level, which means if one clone used an S/A rank technique it would cost the S/A amount of chakra while only retaining a B level amount of strength, B rank techniques still cost and are used effectively as B ranks. Given how this is a Kaguya version of the Kage Bunshin, this technique allows the clones to pass on all their attained knowledge back to the individual who created them.


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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptyTue May 14, 2013 7:10 pm

Name: Shikotsumyaku Buckler [Shield of the Dead Bone Pulse]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Element: N/A
Range: Close
Specialty: Clan Ninjutsu
Handseals: n/a
Duration: 7 posts or until destroyed/deactivation
Cooldown: 6
Description: By coming behind someone the user can wrap themselves around the target and shield an individual in their bones. Creating a small armor around the target the user can walk away from it or stay affixed to the shield protecting both of the participents. The user extends their bones to project out of their bodies and envolope the target to concave around and transfix them into a hardened bone shield that is as hard as a Kaguya's bone at the time being that of their natural strength. The shield may block anything that kaguya steel may block of items while jutsu, anything C rank or lower can not penetrate or harm the shell, B ranks require 4 strikes to break, A requires 2, and S ranks require just 1.



[OOC NOTE: Please also grade my other four that are above. These five are all customs of my own creation.]
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptyMon Jun 10, 2013 4:26 am

Shikotsumyaku Bunshin [Clone of the Dead Bone Pulse] - Can only have up to 6 clones max at a time, as do all bunshin/kage bunshin-type clones.

"if one clone used an S rank technique it would cost the S amount of chakra while only retaining a B level amount of strength" In this portion, you state that the clones are of C-rank in terms of power. Then you say that the jutsu used by said clones would be brought to their level. If this is the case, The S-rank example for a jutsu would have to be brought down to C-rink in power. If this is not the case, please state that the C-rank clones would be able to perform at 1-2 ranks lower than the jutsu's real power.

Bodily Manipulation - How long is the user able to keep this change until they have to revert back? There needs to be a limit, as the original structure of the body at some point will resist such a change. This also requires an 8 post cooldown between uses which would begin after the jutsu is reversed. Also, keep in mind the fact that it is considered a duration jutsu, so it would cost extra chakra in order to keep it activated.

Kaguya Rage - Please give at least one more drawback for this jutsu. Extreme exhaustion seems a bit too easy-going for a jutsu that increases your speed by three times.

This also needs a cooldown of 8 posts, as it is A-rank.

Kaguya Mastery - If medical attention is needed, how many words in a topic would it require? Describe this in terms of the potential damage you may take depending upon your opponent.

Shikotsumyaku Buckler [Shield of the Dead Bone Pulse] - Approved at 40,000 ryo + 1,500 word training topic.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptyThu Jun 13, 2013 1:47 pm

Shikotsumyaku Bunshin [Clone of the Dead Bone Pulse] - The strength differential was already in there. S rank jutsu strength is lowered to B, and so I also added in for simplification A is also B rank level and B rank jutsu retain the same strength. 


Bodily Manipulation - Duration 5, the change is mainly for espionage to where one changes into one form and then I added the reversion is also considered a change meaning this technique can only be used in terms of "once per IC day or once per thread". Due to this jutsu being of the Kaguya traits to manipulate bone structure and cellular design there is no need for a duration chakra drain.



Kaguya Rage - No need for a cooldown as it can only be used once per topic which negates any means for a cool down due to it not being applicable for use for more than once in a topic. I added in that for five posts after the change she can not perform any techniques and her speed is cut in half. Hope that suffices.



Kaguya Mastery - No matter what wound, big or small, will require the same medical attention being 1000 words from someone other than myself. Such medical attention is necessary from a medical ninja. Since a small wound after this jutsu is perform is bunched together with the large wounds they all require the same length and as such the same serious severity required.







Edits made, please continue grading.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptyThu Jun 13, 2013 8:45 pm

Okay.

Shikotsumyaku Bunshin - "A ninja can make any amount of clones depending on their rank as they all are ten percent of the current chakra amount" You can take this out, as there is the limit of 6 at a time.

Bodily Manipulation - 90,000 ryo + 2,000 word training topic

Kaguya Rage - 90,000 ryo + 2,000 word training topic

Kaguya Mastery - 200,000 ryo + 2,500 word training topic
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptyTue Jul 09, 2013 10:21 pm

Shikotsumyaku Bunshin [Clone of the Dead Bone Pulse] -- Edits made

Name: Shikotsumyaku Kinzoku Kyōdo [Metallic Strength of the Dead Bone Pulse]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Specialty: Clan Specific
Handseals: N/A
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: N/A
Description: Once learned this jutsu is capable of growing with the user. Each capable bone of a Kaguya is normally the density of steel (7850 kg/m3). However with this hidden jutsu, members of the head clan family of the Kaguya may learn this jutsu and utilize the benefits of stronger bones meant to be ultimately stronger than the lesser family. The user once learning this technique never has to activate this because once trained it is always active, granted upon learning teh user loses thirty chakra points as penalty. The user grows with this technique and as such upon first achieving this technique their bones reach a density of Molybdenum (10188 kg/m3), upon receiving their next rank up or learned at Sp. Jounin their bones reach a density of Hafnium (13310 kg/m3), upon receiving their next rank up or learned at Jounin their bones reach a density of Uranium (18900 kg/m3), and upon receiving their next rank up or learned at S-Rank the practitioner's bones reach a density of Iridium (22650 kg/m3). Now the bones are not indestructible by any means, just merely changed to a new density.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptyWed Jul 10, 2013 7:01 am

Is there nothing but the increased density this supplementary jutsu does? If so, I can approve it. Otherwise, state what else it may do, or rather what effect the increased density has on the user or opponents in terms of battle.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptyWed Jul 10, 2013 11:51 am

If there was anything else but the additive to the supplementary aspects of the jutsu I would have to increase the rank and thus also increase the drawback. The only thing that it does is increase the density of the bones which in turn also increases the effectiveness and lethal capabilities of the kaguya dances themselves with the higher density of bones.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptyWed Jul 10, 2013 2:23 pm

Alright. Approved in my book.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptyWed Jul 10, 2013 3:42 pm

Name: Shikotsumyaku Erementaru Yūgō [Elemental Fusion of the Dead Bone Pulse]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: All
Range: Self
Specialty: Clan Ninjutsu
Handseals: N/A
Duration: N/A
Cooldown: N/A
Description: To infuse one's bone's with ninjutsu elements costs a clansman 10 chakra from their base pool while the activation of the technique starts once one wills it with the expelling of 20 chakra. The technique will remain until one no longer wants it to, and as the technique is forever fused with them, once they use the technique once, they can use it again and again without giving up more chakra due to the sacrifice of some of their eternal chakra pool. Below are the effects of different elements but be warned you can only have one active at a time and only that one element may be re-used unless you expel another 20 for another element.

Raiton: Becomes a conductor of electricity, the bones themselves channeling it as if it were a lightning rod. Electrical burns can occur to which refer to the burn data on the Katon segment.
Doton: While this is made active, from their bones they can sense anything on the ground in a twenty meter radius.
Suiton: Becomes fluid, as if it were a liquid, to where the bones do internal damage rather than exterior.
Futon: High speed agility with wind, the bones vibrate rapidly enhancing the cutting power of bone techniques to make cuts as if cutting butter.
Katon: Makes the bones exponentially hot, a heat that can burn the skin to a degree depending on the bone used. For A and S rank bone jutsu they are 3rd degree, for B they are second degree and for C and lower they are first degree.

Jojo Kaguya wrote:
Name: Shikotsumyaku Bunshin [Clone of the Dead Bone Pulse]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Any
Specialty: Clan Ninjutsu
Handseals: Fifteen
Duration: 7 posts or until destroyed
Cooldown: 6
Description: The Shikotsumyaku Bunshin technique is a Kaguya equivalent to the Kage Bunshin technique. Requiring one to utilize the format of the willow and and stab it into the earth one will leave behind a clone and up to however many their level of knowledge can utilize, up to 6. Each clone is a C rank version of their master and yet only cost ten percent of the user's current amount of chakra to perform adequately. As each clone is only C rank they can only have a base amount of 125 chakra associated to each clone, however they do know everything that the user themselves know only the power distributed to each technique is lowered to their level, which means if one clone used an S/A rank technique it would cost the S/A amount of chakra while only retaining a B level amount of strength, B rank techniques still cost and are used effectively as B ranks. Given how this is a Kaguya version of the Kage Bunshin, this technique allows the clones to pass on all their attained knowledge back to the individual who created them.

I made the edits you requested a while back in this jutsu, can you please approve and price for me this jutsu and then also price the bone density one.
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptySat Jul 13, 2013 1:05 am

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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptySat Jul 13, 2013 10:13 am

Shikotsumyaku Bunshin - Approved at 40,000 ryo + 1,500 word training topic

Bone Mass Thingy - Approved at 75,000 ryo + 1,500 word training topic
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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptySat Jul 13, 2013 5:32 pm

Name: Teshi Sendan [Ten-Finger Drilling Bullets]
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 30 meters
Specialty: Clan Taijutsu
Handseals: N/A
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 7
Description: Hardened bones from the fingertips are shot at the enemy, with a spinning motion added to the skeletal bullets. A direct hit will excavate skin, flesh, and bone. Since the bones of the user can be regenerated, the rate of fire from the user's arsenal is one per finger. The rotation of this jutsu allows it to pierce through defenses like they are butter while every density higher than the original will allow the penetrating force to be a rank higher, however the original penetrating force of this is lowered to that of C rank, however with densities of its own making the bullets can pierce through like butter. In example, original Kaguya bones are as dense as steel allowing them to pierce through non-tampered steels like butter. The speed of these are that of a bullets speed, hence the name Drilling Bullets.


Name: Shikotsumyaku Erementaru Yūgō [Elemental Fusion of the Dead Bone Pulse]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Element: All
Range: Self
Specialty: Clan Ninjutsu
Handseals: N/A
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: 5 posts before one can activate a second capability element
Description: Only the element in the user's primary or secondary slot may be used in conjunction with this technique. If the secondary is used for this technique, the effects of said element will be knocked down one rank, since it is not as powerful as the primary-slotted element. With that being said, the user must have the elemental affinities to utilize them.

To infuse one's bone's with ninjutsu elements costs a clansman 10 chakra from their base pool while the activation of the technique starts once one wills it with the expelling of 15 chakra. The technique will remain until one no longer wants it to (or the duration time is up), and as the technique is forever fused with them, once they use the technique once, they can use it again and again without giving up more chakra, however following the cooldown, due to the sacrifice of some of their eternal chakra pool. Below are the effects of different elements but be warned you can only have one active at a time and only that one element may be re-used unless you expel another 15 for another element.

  • Raiton: Becomes a conductor of electricity, the bones themselves channeling it as if it were a lightning rod. Electrical burns can occur to which refer to the burn data on the Katon segment.
  • Doton: While this is made active, from their bones they can sense anything on the ground in a twenty meter radius.
  • Suiton: Becomes fluid, as if it were a liquid, to where the bones do internal damage rather than exterior.
  • Futon: High speed agility with wind, the bones vibrate rapidly enhancing the cutting power of bone techniques to make cuts as if cutting butter.
  • Katon: Makes the bones exponentially hot, a heat that can burn the skin to a degree depending on the bone used. For A and S rank bone jutsu they are 3rd degree, for B they are second degree and for C and lower they are first degree.


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PostSubject: Re: Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration)   Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) EmptyTue Jul 16, 2013 1:37 am

Teshi Sendan [Ten-Finger Drilling Bullets] - If they shoot a maximum of 10 at any given time before cooldown takes place, the supply of them cannot be limitless, so you can take out any reference to that.

Also, state the exact durabilities of the sand defense and samurai armor, as the description given is too broad.

When you state "must give more chakra to supply another ten," do you mean that the cooldown does not take place after the first 10? If so, you need to say that only a maximum of two sets of ten can be fired before the cooldown starts and the cooldown must be raised to 7 posts instead of 6 because of this. If not, just take that little piece out.

Shikotsumyaku Erementaru Yūgō [Elemental Fusion of the Dead Bone Pulse] - Okay, still a bit to fix here.

You need to state this in the description: "Only the element in the user's primary or secondary slot may be used in conjunction with this technique. If the secondary is used for this technique, the effects of said element will be knocked down one rank, since it is not as powerful as the primary-slotted element." <------- Please copy/paste this as a separate paragraph in the description.

You also need to add a few words stating a user may not utilize an element they do not have for their character. If you'd like to add it into the above paragraph I wrote, I am fine with that.

Also, considering its power for a C-rank, please change the cooldown to 5 posts.

Please post a bump when these things have been added/fixed. Thank you, lovey. ^_^

NOTE: Keep in mind the rules for duration jutsu and know that no jutsu can be active infinitely. But I know you already know that. Just a kind note. <3
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Teshi Sendan [Ten-Finger Drilling Bullets] - Changes have been made

Shikotsumyaku Erementaru Yūgō [Elemental Fusion of the Dead Bone Pulse] - Did all edits you had suggested.
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Okay, lovey.

Tenshi Sendan - Approved at 48,000 ryo + 1,500 word training topic

Shikotsumyaku Erementaru Yugo - Approved at 32,000 ryo + 1,000 word training topic

Kaguya, Jojo (Jutsu Registration) Bravo
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