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 Kyomu's Jutsu Registration

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PostSubject: Kyomu's Jutsu Registration   Kyomu's Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Jul 18, 2013 9:35 am

E Ranked Jutsu:

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PostSubject: Re: Kyomu's Jutsu Registration   Kyomu's Jutsu Registration EmptySun Jul 28, 2013 5:53 pm

NEEDS FIXING :
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PostSubject: Re: Kyomu's Jutsu Registration   Kyomu's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Jul 29, 2013 4:07 pm

"- For Submerge put the maximum time limit you can brewth underwater." That's what I thought the Duration was (2 posts)

"- The Duration can not be instant meaning it last forever basically, put a duration as to how long it last during posts most likely two." Duration is Instant because it all happens in one post, a gust of air pulls a weapon out your hand. The weapon is going to stay in the ground for as long as it takes for someone to pick it up. So I don't get what I'm putting as the Duration by your description
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PostSubject: Re: Kyomu's Jutsu Registration   Kyomu's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Jul 29, 2013 4:13 pm

By  Duration I ment how long the jutsu itself is active for. For submerge I was spimply asking to put a time limit as to how long you can hold your breath underwater, that is not duration. Duration could not be instant meaning it all happens in one post., duration is simply how long the jutsu is active for how many posts. You saying it last forever basically means that if you were rping with someone, this jutsu will be able to last forever during the whole rp.

Please make the changes and bump the topic, if your still not getting it pm me.
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PostSubject: Re: Kyomu's Jutsu Registration   Kyomu's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Jul 29, 2013 4:57 pm

Done I think, I still don't really see how I could use Disarm for more than one post, so I just changed it from Instant to one post
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PostSubject: Re: Kyomu's Jutsu Registration   Kyomu's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Jul 29, 2013 5:36 pm

Oy,  Ignite, the duration can not last forever or how long it will last please change that.

For Submerge put how many minutes you can hold your breath under water, 5-8 minutes or an hour. Put a specific time limit not for a few minutes or something like that. The same things goes for Flare and Jolt. How much minutes does it paralyze the enemy? How long is the enemy blind for? Specific.
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PostSubject: Re: Kyomu's Jutsu Registration   Kyomu's Jutsu Registration EmptyWed Aug 07, 2013 9:02 am

Do you mean how long she can hold her breath normally, or with the jutsu in use?

Done Ignite
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PostSubject: Re: Kyomu's Jutsu Registration   Kyomu's Jutsu Registration EmptyWed Aug 07, 2013 10:26 am

How long she could hold her breath with the jutsu activated, also in the description of flame and jolt put a specific time limit as well.
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PostSubject: Re: Kyomu's Jutsu Registration   Kyomu's Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Aug 08, 2013 8:36 am

I think I've finally done it, sorry about the length of time it's taken
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PostSubject: Re: Kyomu's Jutsu Registration   Kyomu's Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Aug 08, 2013 9:01 am

Its perfectly ok, and everything looks good to me.

All your jutsu are Approved.
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