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 Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration

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PostSubject: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyWed Feb 12, 2014 12:09 am

~D Ranks~
D-Rank Jutsu:


~C-Rank Jutsu
C-Rank Jutsu:

~ B ranks~
B-Rank Jutsu:


~A-Rank Jutsu~
A-Rank Jutsu:


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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Feb 13, 2014 11:36 pm

  • Your 10 free jutsu I presume? and all from the jutsu database, correct? (Just to be sure)
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyFri Feb 14, 2014 1:12 am

If you want, I can give you all the links I had. It is saved in my cpu. Add them to the database.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyFri Feb 14, 2014 1:42 pm

If they aren't in the database then we will work them out here and add them when they are approved.

D Ranks

Multiple Phantom Shuriken:

  • So there is no real difference between this and the shruriken shadow clone technique? Why not just use the SSCT?
  • Duration is how long it lasts.
  • How far can these shuriken clones travel?


Suiton: Kokuu no Jutsu:

  • So there is oil inside the black mist?
  • Needs a definite range, how far out can the mist go from its original creation point?
  • Can the mist be set on fire before it reaches the target?


Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson:

  • How severe?
  • Duration, How long does it last until the fires burn out?
  • Range, How far can these flame shuriken travel?
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyFri Feb 14, 2014 4:27 pm

Fixed and the reason why I don't use the Shadow Clone Shuriken is because it uses the Shadow Clone Technique that is rather straining.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptySat Feb 15, 2014 4:34 am

MPS:

  • How many created in total?

    S:KnJ:
  • Approved

    PSFNC:
  • Drop to 1st degree burns and singes.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptySat Feb 15, 2014 4:50 am

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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptySat Feb 15, 2014 2:01 pm

D:Rank
PSFNC:

  • Can be countered by D rank Suiton jutsu.

    C:Ranks
    Suiton: Gunshot:
  • Make sure you have the updated version from the database.

    Katon: Ryūka no Jutsu
  • Damage?
  • Do the line of enemies need to be touching each other?
  • Decrease the range a bit.
  • Can the jutsu be countered by suiton? If so what rank?

    Suiton: Mizuame Nabara
  • Add a diameter to it.
  • By how much is ones activity inhibited?
  • Once in it is there a way to get out?

    B:Ranks
    Suiton: Bakusui Shōha
  • Maximum amount of water that can be created?
  • How long does it take to create the full wave?
  • This will be a once per topic jutsu
  • How much damage can be caused to an opponent if caught in said wave?
  • How fast is the wave?


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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptySat Feb 15, 2014 6:17 pm

Wait why B rank? Because some of the old data is conflicting with some of the stuff. Gunshot is D rank in the data and MIzuame Nabara is the Syrup Starch Feild. In the data it is C ranked. So... I am sorta confused.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptySat Feb 15, 2014 7:15 pm

The rank things were me spearating the jutsu, my apologies if you were confused by this.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Feb 17, 2014 6:31 am

Ah ok. I was indeed confused. But anyways, is this list accepted?
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Feb 17, 2014 6:45 am

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Name: Hadoken
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 10 meters
Specialty: NIN
Duration: Well fade out of existance after 10 meters has been reached.
Cooldown: 6 posts.
Description: The Hadoken is an old technique that uses a style of projectile chakra that is about as strong as a A-ranked punch. The Hadoken however, leaves internal impact damage and nerve damage due to the sensory aura it leaves.

Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration Ken-Shoryuken-Frikarte

Name: Shoryuken
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 2 Meters
Specialty: TAI
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The Shoryuken, or Dragon Punch, is just as old as the Hadoken. The Shoryuken has a hard hitting curved uppercut when it happens. It can be used as to make combos with repetitive use.

Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration Ryu-hurricane

Name: Tatsumaki Senpuyaku
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 1 meter
Specialty: TAI
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: A fast set of spin kicks. They come in a set of 7 spin kicks. The kicks keep the user in the air untill they are finished. When performed near foe and hit with the first strike the foe will get pulled into a combo of spins ending with a hard rightward angled kick.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Feb 17, 2014 7:35 am

Haha we're almost there Ryu, almost. I've checked the database though and any jutsu I find similar to the ones here you will have to replace, sorry if If I've wasted your time.
http://www.narutolegacy.com/t4447-water-jutsu


    Katon: Ryūka no Jutsu:
  • Damage?

    Suiton: Mizuame Nabara:
  • Database

    Suiton: Bakusui Shōha
  • Seeing how this is just a B-Rank the possibility of making a dry waste land into a small ocean, which means I'm going to need you to find another maximum equivalent for this jutsu.

    Water Dragon Bullet:
  • Database

    Fire Dragon Bullet:
  • Speed
  • Turning the opponent into ash is a no go. Find another damage output.
  • It says having the dragon obey the user is difficult, does this mean the dragon can turn on the user?

    Suiton: Daibakufu no Jutsu:
  • Damage against an opponent?
  • Speed of the cascade?
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Feb 17, 2014 8:16 am

Suiton: Bakusui Shōha
Seeing how this is just a B-Rank the possibility of making a dry waste land into a small ocean, which means I'm going to need you to find another maximum equivalent for this jutsu.

I don't understand that and also, if they are in the Data, do I just change the names?
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Feb 17, 2014 8:28 am

I mean I need you to pick the maximum size of the jutsu, that's not the size of a "small ocean". Understand?

The jutsu from the database, copy and paste everything from there to here, description, duration, all that.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Feb 17, 2014 8:34 am

Alright. I fixed most of the stuff I could find.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Feb 17, 2014 8:39 am

Water Dragon Bullet seems to be similar(If not)the water dragon jutsu, is that the case? If so grab the data from water dragon jutsu in the database.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Feb 17, 2014 9:01 am

alright bumpsies.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Feb 17, 2014 11:27 pm

Suiton: Bakusui Shōha
  • I'll give you the size of a regular lake but that's it.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Feb 17, 2014 11:44 pm

Sir you now have 10 free jutsu. Approved
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Feb 17, 2014 11:47 pm

Thank you.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyWed Feb 19, 2014 11:39 pm

Spoiler:

Name: Hadoken
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 10 meters
Specialty: NIN
Duration: Well fade out of existance after 10 meters has been reached.
Cooldown: 6 posts.
Description: The Hadoken is an old technique that uses a style of projectile chakra that is about as strong as a A-ranked punch. The Hadoken however, leaves internal impact damage and nerve damage due to the sensory aura it leaves. The damage to the nerves depends on the distance. Distance weakens this strait shot blast. The at most weakest is at 10 meters.  Travels at about 50 mph.

Point Blank- Slight internal bleeding and near total numbness. Will cause a 10 foot knock back on BOTH the user and the Opponent. Nerves will heal after the battle is over. Damage at full power.

5 Meters away- Slight internal bleeding and Minimal Numbing feeling on the foe. Will cause a 10 foot knock back on user and 5 foot knock back on the foe. B-rank damage.


10 Meters Away- Minimal internal bleeding and slight to no Numbing. Will cause a 10 foot knock back on user and a 3 foot knock back on the foe. Leaving damage at about a c-rank punch.


Spoiler:
Name: Shoryuken
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 2 Meters
Specialty: TAI
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The Shoryuken, or Dragon Punch, is just as old as the Hadoken. The Shoryuken has a hard hitting curved uppercut when it happens.  The uppercut is pushed by the crouching stance. The jump is a diagonal one. Gaining horizontal reach of 2 meters and a vertical reach of 3 feet plus the length of the person's arm. This uppercut moves at 50 mph with the amount of raw power in the crouch jump. If the foe gets hit on a perfect upswing, aka the beginning of the rise, they will get B-rank damage.

Spoiler:
Name: Tatsumaki Senpuyaku
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 1 meter Horizontal
Specialty: TAI
Duration: Instant
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: A fast set of spin kicks. They come in a set of 4 spin kicks. The kicks keep the user in the air until they are finished. When performed near foe and hit with the first strike the foe will get pulled into a combo of spins ending with a hard rightward angled kick.  Moves at 30 mph on the horizontal plane. Each kick gains power from this scale-


1st kick- D-ranked power. It is the starting trip up kick. The trip will flip anything twice the user's weight. Trips the foe up only 3 feet. The trip is fast. Incredibly hard to figure and telegraph.

2nd Kick- C-ranked power. The Impact will hit the trip up as soon as the foe is 3 feet up. The kick will cause a  bit of sharp pain in the area it hits. Causes bruises.

3rd Kick- C-Ranked power. The Impact is the exact same as the first except it just hits afterward.

4th Kick- C-ranked power. The hit is a hard axe kick towards the foe. This can cause slight internal bleeding, large bruises, possible bone fracture, and a possible concussion. The kick hits the foe into the ground. Causing possible damage upon ground skids.


Drawbacks- After the move is done the user must take a small amount of time to get on balance.  Can be possibly countered at this point. Can also cause slight disorientation depending on the person.


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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyWed Feb 19, 2014 11:58 pm

Hadoken: Define how fast the projectile travels. Also have it do a reduction of damage the more it fades. If the majority of it fades by 9 meters, but that is when the target is hit, it is obviously not going to be as damaging.

Shoryuken: Remove the, "It can be used as to make combos with repetitive use." It has a cooldown of 4, so obviously you can't spam it for combos.

Tatsumaki Senpuyaku: This is a B-rank Taijutsu move. You only have a C level stat for Taijutsu, so you can't make a B-rank jutsu for it. With how it is already, it is worth a B-rank ranking, so either remove it or weaken it.

Post when edits are made.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Feb 20, 2014 12:03 am

Alright. Edits made.
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PostSubject: Re: Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration   Ryujin Takashi's Jutsu Registration EmptySun Feb 23, 2014 6:22 pm

Hadoken:

  • Your Range/duration and your description are flawed.
    Ryujin wrote:
    "The at most weakest is at 30 meters"
    You have this, however your range and duration state that it only goes for 10 meters.
  • How fast does it travel?
  • Impact & Nerve Damage. Specify how much damage is done in these areas.

    Shoryuken
  • Would the range not be the length of the person's arm?
  • How much damage can it dish out?
  • How fast can you throw out this uppercut?

    Tatsumaki Senpuyaku
  • Would the range not be the length of the person's leg?
  • How fast are the multiple kicks?
  • Can the user get dizzy afterwards?
  • Is the user vulnerable while preforming this technique?
  • How strong are these kicks?
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