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 Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration

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Sheffield
Sheffield
Posts : 82
Ryo : 29508

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PostSubject: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptyWed Mar 19, 2014 6:27 pm

E Rank:

D Rank:

C Rank:

B Rank:

A Rank:


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Hisame
Hisame
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PostSubject: Re: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptySat Mar 22, 2014 1:25 am

I know you are still working on your E-ranks, but due to your request, I'm going to grade a bit.

First off, you can materialize and make genjutsu into reality, and being so you should specify the effects of making them into reality within the technique. This will set the exact effect of doing this, to prevent constant changing results. 

Kasumi Jusha no Jutsu [Mist Servant Technique] - This needs more limits to it, to fit its rank. With your abilities, it can create hundreds of real clones, which it a bit much. Set amounts on the clones. If you want to do so based on rank of shinobi, do so. 

Kage no shūgeki(Shadow Assault) - This needs more detail. What does it do, what type of injuries can it cause, ect. It's pretty easy to assume, but better safe then sorry.

Kage no kyōki(Madness of Shadows) - Same as Shadow Assault. This one is especially vague, so please detail it a bit.

Black-Pinned Coffin of Requiems - When this materializes, it CANNOT also trap others, if the victim is with other people in the post. This will cause an auto hit upon usage on multiple targets if so, which is not okay. For the genjutsu purpose, it's fine. Like all others, it needs a written materialized effect that is standard for every use. Also well as detailing, please.

Bijon o sōshin(Transmit Vision) - Just making sure it is staed. This can't have a materialized form. It can only remain a genjutsu, which can obviously be rationalized and worked through, since it only effects physical features and voice. Please state how many people it can effect within the same instance of usage.

I know this is a lot to work on, but being the function of your abilities, as well as the way genjutsu is in combat, it is needed. Post when changes are made.
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Sheffield
Sheffield
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Ryo : 29508

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PostSubject: Re: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptySun Apr 06, 2014 3:01 am

Le bump :)
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PostSubject: Re: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptySun May 11, 2014 5:58 am

Okay, these are approvable. You may add them to your list now.
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Sheffield
Sheffield
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Ryo : 29508

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PostSubject: Re: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon May 12, 2014 6:12 am

Name:Shōshagan no Jutsu (Vanishing Facial Copy)
Canon/Custom:Canon
Rank:B
Type:Supplementary
Element:N/A
Range:Short range(melee)
Specialty:Ninjutsu
Duration:Until removed or damaged
Cooldown:6 Posts
Description:The user applies their hands to the victim's face, literally stealing the physical features right off of the face of the victim. The disguise is flawless being that it alters the facial features and even voice: the victim's face is completely removed and makes the victim a faceless corpse. The face can be peeled off like an extra layer of skin and will wrinkle if physically hit hard enough.
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Eden
Eden
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PostSubject: Re: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptyTue May 13, 2014 6:17 am

Approved. This jutsu cost 98K Ryo and a 1,500 word training topic.
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Sheffield
Sheffield
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PostSubject: Re: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptyFri May 16, 2014 8:06 am

Eden Shinteki wrote:
Approved. This jutsu cost 98K Ryo and a 1,500 word training topic.

Conditions met for acquiring this jutsu, please deduct the ryo. Training link
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Hisame
Hisame
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PostSubject: Re: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptySun May 18, 2014 2:14 am

Your training topic checks out. Ryo deducted and you can add it to your jutsu list.
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Sheffield
Sheffield
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PostSubject: Re: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon May 19, 2014 4:02 am

Name:Shokushu no Monogatari(Tale of tentacles)
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank:D
Type:Offensive/Supplementary
Element:Inton
Range:medium range
Specialty:Genjutsu
Duration:1 post
Cooldown:2 Posts
Description: The user affects the opponent in any 1 or more of their five senses, such as eye contact, touch, taste or sound. The opponent find themselves suddenly entwined by a monster made of from a ball of pure tentacles; their mind is tricked into believing the tentacles have their body held fast and will move their body accordingly in reality to however the user wishes the tentacles to move inside the Genjutsu. The tentacles themselves are somewhat wet and sticky but also warm and soft-skinned; the tentacles can grow to what seems impossible lengths. The tentacles move to however Sheffield wishes but also seem to have a mind of their own, moving to the controlled person's feelings and desires.

  • Effect: All Genjutsu-based jutsu can either be pure genjutsu or genjutsu materialized. Materialized Genjutsus must have a 1 charge post. A Genjutsu that has already been cast can be materialized after 1 post of charge if the opponent does not dispel it. Genjutsus are cast on foes by a clap of the hands, snap of the fingers or eye contact.

Reality:


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PostSubject: Re: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon May 19, 2014 4:53 am

Looks good, however, to create them within reality, there has to be a limit to how long the testicles can be upon materialization. Limitless and such is fine as an illusion, but not within reality.
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Sheffield
Sheffield
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PostSubject: Re: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon May 19, 2014 7:01 am

Hisame wrote:
Looks good, however, to create them within reality, there has to be a limit to how long the testicles can be upon materialization. Limitless and such is fine as an illusion, but not within reality.

Reality limitation set to 10ft
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PostSubject: Re: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptySat Jun 28, 2014 11:30 pm

Name: Tenjin
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank:S
Type:Offensive
Element:Onmyoton
Range:Close Range
Specialty:Genjutsu
Duration:Until the story is completed.
Cooldown: 1 per month
Description: This jutsu is caused by any conventional ways in which to trap someone in a genjutsu: such as their 5 basic senses. The jutsu is utilized in both Genjutsu and the physical manifestation through the Onmyoton element. The user creates an intricate story that entraps the foe(s) in the epic dialogue and must complete the three chapters to escape the jutsu. In the genjutsu, the foe(s) must complete three chapters with a boss at each end of the chapter to escape the Genjutsu. Any NPC or pre-determined "dying" character(such as a member decides the character will die in the thread) will be subject to the hidden chapter, the Epilogue: this Epilogue is an instant death.
The creator of this jutsu narrates the story and cannot be seen or touched in either genjutsu or physical version of this jutsu. In reality, the creator accomplishes this story by separating the affected area of the story by a barrier erected at the start of the jutsu. This barrier is the same rank of the jutsu and can only be seen by someone with a chakra sensing doujutsu and can only be broken by someone with another S Rank jutsu. Breaking the barrier does not dispel the physical manifestation, but makes anyone who wanders into the affected area subject to the story.
Chapter 1:
Chapter 2:
Chapter 3:
Epilogue:

Reality:

Limitations:This jutsu can only be used once a month IRL & leaves Sheffield in a severe physical and mental state. She loses her memories for 4 days and cannot remember who she is, the jutsu causes a sickness akin to a serious concusion and leaves her unable to use jutsu or battle for the whole month while she is recovering. This jutsu costs 125 chakra to cast.
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Eden
Eden
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PostSubject: Re: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptyMon Jun 30, 2014 4:42 pm

This jutsu is approved. The cost for this jutsu is 425,000 ryo. The training topic must be a minimum of 3,000 words due to the jutsu itself.
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Sheffield
Sheffield
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Ryo : 29508

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Chakra:
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PostSubject: Re: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptySun Jul 06, 2014 6:04 pm

Requesting Tenjin.

Here is my training thread(3,582 words)
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Eden
Eden
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PostSubject: Re: Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration   Onmyoton Sheffield's Jutsu Registration EmptyTue Jul 15, 2014 5:28 am

Ryo deducted. Add it to your Jutsu List topic.
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