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 Chloe Norimune's Jutsu Registration!

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PostSubject: Chloe Norimune's Jutsu Registration!   Chloe Norimune's Jutsu Registration! EmptySun May 25, 2014 9:45 pm

E-Rank Techniques:

D-Rank Techniques:

C-Rank Techniques:


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PostSubject: Re: Chloe Norimune's Jutsu Registration!   Chloe Norimune's Jutsu Registration! EmptyMon May 26, 2014 2:23 am

I know Semasu was going to look these over, but I have taken over the job of doing so, as I will be the staff member in charge of this clan's "accessories".

Norimune Art - Unlocking: Jutsu is fine, however, remember that it has to be a metal lock for this to be applied. Some doors might be made of wood, and for whatever reason, have wooden locking mechanisms as well. Specify metal. Also range should be filled with the stated fact that you must be touching the lock yourself, just for reference purposes.

Norimune Art - Seion Sight: This is worded a little poorly. Instead of saying you can look through it, state that the creation being used acts as an extension of your vision, allowing you to see through it as if it was your own eye. That way it won't sound like the Byakugan in the sense of seeing through solid objects. Otherwise it seems fine.

Norimune Art - Quick Creation Block: Keep in mind that you won't be able to completely block various attacks. Strength stats and such should be applied, as well as that of the strength/durability of the created weapon. Depending on the varying stats, obviously you won't be able to block everything.

Sweeping Circle: This seems more like taijutsu with how you have worded it. It is also really difficult to actual envision. Where does the staff come in? Is it a leg sweep or a kick? Word it better, because right now it is very all over the place. lol

Make the changes requested above, then bump and I'll look over them again.
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PostSubject: Re: Chloe Norimune's Jutsu Registration!   Chloe Norimune's Jutsu Registration! EmptyMon May 26, 2014 2:35 am

Bumpity bumpity bump bump bump :3
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PostSubject: Re: Chloe Norimune's Jutsu Registration!   Chloe Norimune's Jutsu Registration! EmptyMon May 26, 2014 3:20 am

Looks good. Approved. You may add them to your jutsu list.
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