The islands in Ocean Country have been celebrating the arrival of the next Umikage, Saizo. The long bridge leading to SHIPPUUGAKURE NO SATO has been closed for outsiders because they wish to celebrate this moment with Ocean Country natives only.
As usual, the Storm Country has been hosting the Asgard Games to welcome their Kanetsukage, Cornelia. It's a double special occasion because Cornelia is also the first female Kanetsukage. She has been picked for her courage, loyalty and outstanding power by the BOUFUUGAKURE NO SATO elders.
Not only that, but the Cherry Blossom Country has become relieved as well. It seems that everyone is slowly picking up after the war now. KUSAMURAGAKURE NO SATO proudly presented their new Sakurakage, Altair.
TSUKIGAKURE NO SATO is still thriving on the merchants coming in and out. They have not experienced anything special lately. Their wealth has remained the same as they were not forced to invest into shinobi unlike the others.
On the cold isles of the Blizzard Country, HYOUGAGAKURE NO SATO has still refused to create a free traveling policy. Some habits never change. To protect their traditions, they have even warned outsiders to not interfere with their matters.
Now that everyone is picking up again, who will come out on top?
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Subject: Mombokhan Tenashi Fri Feb 14, 2014 4:36 am
First Name: Mombokhan Last Name: Tenashi Alias: Mombo, Two Tails, Khan
Gender: Male Age: 16 Height: 5'7 Weight: 130lbs Birthday: Jan 19 Sexuality: Heterosexxxy aka Heterosmexual aka Heterosexual aka likes girls. Relationships: Non currently.
Affiliation: Hidden Hurricane Village aka Shippgakure No Sato Rank: Chuunin Element(s): Suiton, Futon, Raiton Specialization(s): Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Bukijutsu
Personality: Mombo is more layed back quite and reserved he would rather escape a fight or subdue his enemy leaving them alive. He is not a lover nor a fighter more of a protector a guy who is willing to do whatever is necessary. But when he uses the powers of his bijuu or rather ask for it to help him in bad situation his personality can twist into the malevolent being. Who's whole purpose is to destroy, if tempered.
Likes: Mombokhan likes living, he cherishes life and will often be seen silently basking in its glow. Despite his serious nature he is reserved he tends to keep to himself and shut others out. he often will be seen attempting to hide and run.
Dislikes: He hates being the center of attention or large festive parties. He dislikes being showed a lot of gratitude infront of a lot of people. he finds it embarrassing to be put in situations where he has to be around others for a long period of time.
Motivation: His motivations for life and being a shinobi is simple to get stronger and protect life. Although he is reserved and calm at times he will not hesitate to strike down a villain, or some one who has stray from the path of being morally good.
Fears: His biggest fear of all is dieing a meaningless death, or dieing for and unjust cause. This signifies his need for his life to men something to others for him to mean something int he world. He feels dieing a meaningless death is the worst fate anyone can have.
Nibi No Kani
Bloodline Name: Advanced Water Control
Bloodline Ability:
Nibi No Kani's Abilities:
Can create a foam (lots and lots of tiny, sticky bubbles) to hide itself and can use several jutsu using the properties of foam. Has a hard shell that protects against most taijutsu or weapon-style jutsu, is immune to Katon jutsu (though very weak against earth ninjutsu), and can breathe underwater. It can survive in depths of 200 meters deep, and even molt pieces of it's shell that may become damaged, revealing a new, slightly weaker shell underneath. (Shell will harden and be as strong as before after the topic's conclusion.) It can also use its long claws to reach long distances and either cut or grab with the pincers.
The host can also create foam from their mouth or any water sources and use jutsu utilizing the foam. At the first tail form, they gain a smaller version of the same shell on their back, which can block most standard taijutsu techniques below B-Rank, though their speed will be decreased (by half a rank of their current speed stat), along with the light blue chakra cloak that allows them to create foam anywhere the blue chakra is touching. At the second tail form, they become the Nibi no Kani and can use all of its abilities.
Location: Shippgakure No Sato aka Hidden Hurricane
Clan History: The Nibi No Kani stems from the tale of the legendary tailed beast, beast who were the epitome of power something every shinobi wanted.
History:
Birth & Parents!!:
Mombokhan was born on January 19, 1996 nothing but a child a sweet babe born to two farmers on the outskirts of the hidden hurricane village. His mother and father were splendid farmers, often taking in other workers to help them with their works. They had a rather large farm spawning over more than a few acres, having so many crops to sell to the neighboring Hidden Hurricane village. Making a nice profit with each sell, of course the Hidden Hurricane were not their only customer often selling it to small rarely known or unknown towns or villages. Mombokhan's parents were good wholesome people taking in the needs of other rather then themselves. Usually taking in other into their farm only having them work for their place in their home. Overall they were nice people morally righteous in their own way believing the needs of the many out weigh the needs of the few. They often look at the future with great promise a residual profit.
Mombokhan's parents were caught in a hard storm traveling to the Hidden Hurricane to sell their sown goods. When they were stopped by a menacing gang wanting their crops. Mombo's father seeing his pregnant wife in this storm and the prolonged danger of the gang and the storm to his unborn child and wife. Handed over the goods as the gang took them one of their members go a bit to excited from their current hull and stabbed the stomach of the women. She fell over in a heap blood gushing from her stomach as the father and husband screamed in agony. Picking his dieing wife up he carried her all the way to the hidden hurricane, they perform emergency servery on the wife and unborn child. Safely removing the child from her Mombokhan was born heavily premature but born non the less. Put on emergency life support being force feed small amounts of chakra to sustain him. The mother & wife died almost immediately after the removal of her child it seemed she only head on long enough for her son to be born into the world. The father in a crazed heap of sadness fueled by anger named his child Mombokhan a crazy Future shit rambling of letters. So the child Mombokhan was born into the world a premature babe his story beginning with tragedy but hopefully not ending with such.
Early Years & Academy Life!!:
Mombokhan's father took Mombo home soon packing up all of their things and moving to the Hidden Hurricane village. He raised his child hard often beating him for small tedious things and at young ages having him do task not normal for a child his age. Like clean the whole house from top to bottom, walking behind him and yelling at him or hitting him for leaving one spec of dirt on something. He was not allowed to go outside until every single last chore was done and checked over twice, and at the age of six he was given a work out regiment. Often having to run around the village with his father at early mornings. Along with doing the basics like sit ups and push up to and extensive amount like 5 sets of 100 which would take him hours, and when he was done he would be to tired to go out and play still having chores amongst other things to do. His father enrolled him in the academy at age seven, he let it be known to him that nothing less than being a top student would be acceptable.
So Mombo being the child he was wanting to please his father did his best to stay serious and come in the top straining to make the top three. But to his father graduating third of his class was not good enough only the best would be suitable, he was beat extensively for this coming in third of his class. He would strive and strive harder his mentality to please his father turning him into nothing more than a cold warped human being dedicated to the art of being a shinobi. Soon he was no longer doing it for his father but just because it was all he knew. He excelled from then on soon making it to the top as hi father praised him at the graduation of the academy which he ignored heavily becoming a genin was all he cared about.
Genin Days!!:
Becoming a genin and graduating at the top of his class all while having no clan and coming from a single parent with no previous ninja training was a great feat in the eyes of Mombo. He excelled at all of his genin studies out of sheer habit for doing such. Becoming apart of a team was not something Mombokhan was use to he often trekked off on his own during missions or refused to work with the others out of his selfish attitude thinking he would be more efficient on his own. He liked to think he was better than them and even a rival for his jounin sensei. He keep striving and working often surpassing all the others by a margin out of a sole necessity to keep doing as his ad instructed on a subconscious level. He hardly had taken the time to talk to his teammates shunning them from himself as they slowly but surely did the same to him.
One fate fill day the Hurricane Village was running short on shinobi due to an outside incident which heavily needed its attention. Another harrowing mission needed their help. A B Rank mission the details in told a small gang thugs set up in a small cave just outside the hidden hurricane territory, terrorizing people and other small village. They had gotten a message asking for their intrusion on the matter. The three genin including Mombo were sent out as a last resort with another three genin from another four men team, both without their prospective Jounin sensei.
Heading out full geared up each genin was excited, finally heading to the base of their operations the small cave the gang came out to meet them. They soon clash the gang taking out the genin with ease subduing them and tying each of them to trees across from each other. Except one Mombo watched as one of the men's eyes glowed brightly looking deep into his fellow teammates as his arms feel and his head hunched over. He then resumed to move slow approaching the end of the tied up genin. Pulling out a Kunai he drove it into the stomach of his teammate and fellow villager as the poor victim screamed loudly. Mombo yelled in horror as he watch his teammate kill another one of them in a zombie like haze, repeatedly driving the knife into the yelling genin until the child slumped over. Mombo broke down in tears as he saw this, the zombified genin ran down the line doing it over again as all the victims would scream before and during their turn.
It got down to Mombo the last of the group he was just in tears a bruised sack of sadness the tears falling down his face like a waterfall of sorrow. His teammate got to him as hes whole demeanor reverted to normal he fell exhausted huffing and puffing as he looked around. Seeing his teammates dead the horror hit him as the boy looked at his wet hands and the bloody Kunai. "No no no" he repeated. One of the members told him to kill the last one or die, the last one being Mombo. His eye read and puffy from crying, he looked at his teammate as he sniffed heavily taking in all the snot dripping from his nose. "Do it then run."Mombo said as he teammate leaped up lifting the knife swiftly as Mombo closed his eyes shut tight.
He found himself falling falling hard as he hit the ground. Opening his eyes he saw he was free of his rope. He looked at his fellow teammate who was still crying shooing him away as he turned the kunai on himself and fell over. Mombo ran he ran as hard and as fast as he could straight into the wood. Disappearing from the gangs site. "Get em!" they said. But he had lost them overhearing their conversation about packing up and leaving the bodies. He waited for hours waiting for them to leave sitting in the forest alone traumatized finally thinking them packed up he went back to the site. Why would he? He had obviously gone crazy or had he? Seeing the dead bodies of his teammate and the empty cave. He would began to pile the bodies a top each other wrapping his arm around 3 of them then tying the rest together and drawing them by the back of the ropes. He trudged for what seemed like days as he finally made I back to the Hidden Hurricane. Walking into the village being eyed horrible loud gasp whispers and cries would ring out as he fell down in a tired emotional heap, dropping the bodies and passing out.
Learning of the past!!:
Mombo walked in to his home tired, sad, traumatized and bandages up. He saw his dad in the kitchen attempting to cook as he look at his son and smiled. He asked how his day went telling him he looked a bit banged up saying it all with a smile as his son fell into his arms weeping lowly. Embracing the boy Mombokhan's father asked him what was bringing him sadness. So Mombo told him, he told him everything he told him of the mission and how everything went albeit while crying. His dad listen in a silent horror as the boy finished his long tragic story. His father looking at him with a long stretch out face of pure sorrow. "You can't be a shinobi any more." Mombo heard these words from his father as his heart sank down. "Bu..but I can't quit..I have to be strong" His father stood enraged as he clinched his fist "Being a shinobi is the wrong way I forbid you, I can't have you end up like your mother!!" He screamed out his chest puffing up and down in anger. Mombo stood slowly "Mom? What happen to her?" He asked slowly the boy had never heard of his mom never even knew he had one. His father began to walk away only to grab a seat looking at the boy his anger mixed with a deep dread in his face. He knew this time would come when the boy would want to know of his mother, and he could not help but think of it as his fault.
Mombo's father began to speak low. "Your mother...she was a great women. We own a small farm outside the hidden hurricane, we sold good our farmed good to many small and large towns and villages including the hidden hurricane. One day while traveling to the hidden hurricane. These bandits stop us wanting our food after we gave it to them they stabbed your mother in the stomach. At this time she was pregnant with you I thought I had lost both of you. Your mother died shortly after you were born, you..you were premature. A miracle child they called you." His father finished as he looked up at his slowly approaching son who put a hand on his cheek and gave a weak smile the best one he could. "I have to be strong I have to prosper for thats my nindō." He said with a strong voice one fueled with pride, his father began to weep as he brung him in. "I just don't want to lose you too." His dad held him tight as he would continue crying holding him tighter and tighter, Mombo smiled as he hugged back. "I think the food is burn to shit." His dad chuckled loudly still holding on the smoke from the pot wafting up filling the small shack like home with smoke as Mombo coughed a bit. "The smoke dat we are going to choke to death." They both laughed again rolling their sleeves up as they walked to the pot.
Accepting the Bijuu!!:
Most of the jounin were getting back to the Hidden Hurricane, of course the lot of them dead or missing. Their families forever dented with out their presence replaced by sadness. The majority of the non wounded ones were carrying a large scroll inhumanly large scroll. It easily spanned over the size of a small building as the numerous amount of ninja helped it into the center of the villagers. The ninja resumed to placing it down then urging the villagers to get back quickly making a short barrier around the large scroll. The many ninja surrounded the thing as a bright light blue mist would emit from it. "The seal is breaking." One ninja said as a bright light lurched up into the sky. Almost every ninja in the village were order to do certain things, lower level nin were to keep the villagers back and watch the borders higher level nin were order to the center to contain the scroll. Many of the higher nin tried but the light darkening the sky and the mist spreading through the village would not stop. They needed a living host for inside the scroll contained the four tails. They had underestimated the strength of the scroll, they did not plan on doing it like this seems nothing was going as they wished on this day. "We need a volunteer any one someone please" This was the risky unplanned plead of one of the jounin nearby, they began to all bicker about what was the right thing to do as Mombo walked up. "I'll do it!!" All the genin hushed and looked at Mombo as one began to speak Abbot why he was up here instead of at his post, soon to be interrupted by several high level nin specializing in sealing. They asked him if he was sure if he, telling him he could die a painfully slow death. Mombo with a unfazed look trying to stay calm in this current situation, rose tall in his pride and reassured him that whatever it was they could intrust it to him.
The sealing took hours as he layed on the unroll scroll they had of course moved it, the sky still darkened as if it was night. This was probably the most high risk sealing the hidden hurricane village had ever done. But once it was done the boy was already out cold his body flushed red as the bijuu was successfully sealed within him. They carried the boy back to an official sealing location retouching and doing many touch ups on the seal to strengthen it. The boy was in major pain his whole body flushed in red signaling his torturous pain. They wrapped him up tight in wraps as he refused with small grunts of pain. Leaving him alone to settle with his new choice. The boy opened his eyes as he felt himself floating slowly, his surrounding were mixed with light blue and a grayish white. Looking up he was a large cage inhumanly large as he began to step closer a demonic voice rang out. "Foolish child!!" Mombo gasped and stepped back falling as his eyes widen when the creature presented its large face. "They dare not speak of my name for I am the two tails" The large creature boasted as Mombo gave a chuckle as the two tails lurched back. Mombo stood up still laughing as he spoke back. "You don't seem like much behind that fuckin cage." The enraged two tails roared out slamming its claw up against the cage "Children should watch their mouths!!" The light blue water hit Mombo flinging him back as he awoke with a loud gasp. He looked around at the shook guard he was left with as he felt the wraps on his skin, then his actually skin as the mild pain would ring out through his body. He would slowly get up as the male came over to help. Mombo looked at him asking him what day it was, the man replied only saying it was Chunnin Exams day Mombo urged him to take him there despite all the protest they went.
The Chunnin Exams!!:
The Chunnin exams were a hard grueling process, the genin going through the long process. The test were different each year this year they decided to start it off by having the genin take a written test. But not just any written test they had to go find in the nearby jumbling of trees in which they called a forest. They had purposely made a shortage the ones who did not get a paper were out and could not become genin. They were instructed to answer the question before they exited the forest. So they were off charging into the forest to find these papers. Mombo could already hear the clashing of blades genin trying to fight off each other for found papers. He quickly separated going slow and pacing himself before long he found a white sheet of paper clipped to a tree. He grabbed the paper as he heard a small whiz go past his ear as a thud followed a kunai was thrown at him. he turned to see a fellow classmate all ready to go as he stepped back. "I don't want to fight you" Mombo said as he drew a kunai of his own. As the genin would run full speed ready to strike, something in Mombo awoke still wrapped in the white body wraps as he held out his hand handing over the paper stopping the opposing boy in his tracks. As he reached out to grab the paper Mombo spun stabbing the boy in the shoulder with the kunai. He jumped up again release a hard kick as the boy flew into a nearby tree, walking away with a strong sense of pride. The paper had a single question "The meaning of life is?" This made Mombo stop in his tracks as as he tapped his head, why would they ask a genin this question? He racked his brain as a light bulb went off he quickly wrote down his answer and hurried out of the forest.
The second part of the test consisted of them trekking the harsh lands of the hidden hurricane to reach a specific spot. Mombo handled that pretty well despite the harsh cold weather it seemingly didn't faze him unlike the other genin. They weren't awarded a great deal of food for the long walk. He watch many of the genin fight over their rations or fall because of the harsh weather, everyone that came across him seemed amazed at his attitude towards the strong winds. The countless genin who proved themselves worthy finally reached a large lavish looking palace type building. Walking inside they were awarded food and were told to prepare themselves for the last part of the test.
The last part of the test was an old fashion fight, most of the villagers where their including the kage. The rules were simple defeat your opponent all your actions would be token in to consideration, for the acknowledgement of being promoted to chunnin. Mombo stood huffing and puffing alike his opponent as they continuously clashed kunai. He was tired and so was his opponent he was not sure how much more he had in him. A strong voice would bellow deep from within him trying to reach him. "Hey kid" It spoke out its maleficent chakra noticeable. "You don't want to lose infront of everyone, let me help you out a bit." The voice was uneasy to Mombo, but he did not want to lose not infront of the village especially the Kage. He let it take control, after all how much harm could it be? Soon a small amount of light blue mist would emit from him as he found new energy. He overwhelmed his opponent easily as he felt unable to continue. The inner beast demanded him to finish the kid off as Mombo refused to do so attempting to relinquish the beast power from his own. But it proved to much as Mombo passed out. He soon awoke in a secluded room. He was informed that he had won the match and had been promoted to the rank of Chunnin for his bravery to take the beast and his acts of valor during the exams. He was also told he would have to stay in this room for them to observe him until the deemed him fit to go outside he nodded and layed back.
Total History Word Count:3,473
RP Sample:
An exert from an RP I did a while ago.:
± What Have I Done ± //As Mombo pulled the trigger and the bullets hit Det he quivered stopping in his tracks as he watched his brother fall over. His older brother one of betrayal had just left the world leaving him without guidance and more fear and responsibility he could ever imagine. The tears halted drying up on his face as he hunched over dropping his guns shakkingly he scurried over to Detain slowly, hovering over him he his hands shook as he licked his lips and looked over his body for any signs of life. "Detain.....Det.....Detain...bro...b..bro stop playing get up. I.. I am sorry I..I forgive you I was just playing.. I" He dropped to his knees as tears streamed down his face. He softly whimpering and taking in huge amounts of air making his cries skip like he was a small child. T'u never cried over nothing or no one, but Detain was special he was different he knew his brother had problems and over the petty shit he just shot him down in cold blood. His own brother and for what reasons why why did he do this, he was young and dumb thats why and now he would feel the wrath of pure anger and death as it had lead him to these action. This was pure not thinking before you did something, his hands reached up to Detain as he pulled his body closer his lips shook wildly as his tears ran down his face hitting his brothers.
"Im sorry.. Im sorry im sorry im sorry im sorry." He keep repeating this as his cries got deeper . "D..D..D....Detain, Im sorry man. I didn't mean to hurt you. I thought you would do something. I thought you would catch the bullets or they would bounce off or you would move. I thought you would be find I.. I just wanted to hurt you a little bit, I wanted you to hurt like I.. like I am. I didn't mean to k..k...kill you!!!' His face turned up in pure anguish as he cried out laying his head in his brothers blood soaked chest the tears soaking the dead mans clothes as his muffled weeps would bounce off the walls. T'u would stay this way weeping over the man over Detain as he was gone forever and he would never get his brother back. He was left now all alone and finally understanding his brothers words, now he would hurt for a long time coming without fulfilling his brothers wishes having the biggest regret of all and another kill to his name, which would haunt him forever. ±Hours Later± //T'u sat there with the remainder of his brother on his lap as he looked at him with wide eyes some would say theses were eyes of pure sadness, mixed with a broken heart. Other would say this was the signs of a broken mind, the start of a cold hearted person who did not care for anything or anyone. Detains body was almost absorbed the only thing left was the neck and head the rest of it a transparent blue glowing brightly. T'u looked around the room slowly then down are his brother as his head would be being turned to the bright blue color his eyes would close as he kissed his forehead his whole body lighting up as detain broke down into sparkles, It would hastily enter T'u as he was knocked back flying across the room his eyes lit up brightly. As he sorta levitated as he absorbed his brother all his memories knowledge and wisdom would enter T'u as he exited consciousness falling to the ground with a thud as he passed out.\\ ± The End ±
Source: Ryu and Moku showed me this place.
Face Claim: Fan made from deviantart name of the guy presumably Ranmaru.
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Last edited by MomboKhan on Mon Feb 17, 2014 9:26 pm; edited 2 times in total
Subject: Re: Mombokhan Tenashi Mon Feb 17, 2014 9:06 pm
Alright, Mombo, I'm gonna be grading your app today, so let's get right down to business:
Your Personality, Fears, Likes, Dislikes, and Motivation all need to be in paragraph form/complete sentences, so if you could fix that now, that'd be super.
Since you're a Clanless, where you have your clan information, you put in the information of the desired Bijuu you have. For example, under your Clan Ability, copy/paste the Yonbis Abilities there, and for Location, but in the Yonbis location, etc, etc, etc.
Technically speaking There is no year 1996 in your history, since this is the Narutoverse, but it's not anything worth editing if you don't want to.
Alright, that seems to be it! Reply here once you're done so we can get you out and about!