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 Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration

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Special Jounin

Rain*
Rain*
Male Posts : 27
Ryo : 4000

Character sheet
Chakra:
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PostSubject: Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration   Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration EmptyWed Mar 19, 2014 11:01 pm

E Rank:

D Rank:

C Rank:

B Rank:

A Rank:


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Vex
Vex
Male Posts : 1428
Ryo : 396513

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration   Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Mar 20, 2014 12:44 am


  • Please label your thread "Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration"



  • Please reconsider your E Rank jutsu, these are Academy Jutsu and you get them for free, except Ikimuno Benkuo. These two E Rank jutsu are for your own personal use. E Rank jutsu have no direct battle purpose, they are mostly supplementary jutsu revolving around your specified element.



  • I count 5 C Rank Jutsu- for starting, you are allowed Special Jounin: 2 E-ranks, 3 D-ranks, 3 C-ranks, 2 B-ranks
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Rain*
Rain*
Male Posts : 27
Ryo : 4000

Character sheet
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Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration Empty
PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration   Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Mar 20, 2014 1:45 am

Name: True Wind Affinity
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Type: Defensive
Element: Wind
Range: Self
Specialty: Nin
Duration: 5 posts before need to recast.
Cooldown: 0
Description:
A current of air surrounds Rain's body to offer protection from harm. At it's current level it can only ward off light amounts of damage before collapsing. To put it in layman's terms it currently ensures that Rain doesn't have to worry about rain or the random sand particle getting stuck in his eye.


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Vex
Male Posts : 1428
Ryo : 396513

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Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration Empty
PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration   Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Mar 20, 2014 1:57 am

Rain! wrote:
Name: True Wind Affinity
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Type: Defensive
Element: Wind
Range: Self
Specialty: Nin
Duration: 5 posts before need to recast.
Cooldown: 0
Description:
A current of air surrounds Rain's body to offer protection from harm. At it's current level it can only ward off light amounts of damage before collapsing.

Jutsu like this are severely limited and nerferd, considering it is an E Rank jutsu. E Rank jutsu are considered Academy level jutsu where shinobi begin to dabble with their chakra. A jutsu like this should specify what and how much of a kind of damage it would protect from.

At E Rank, this jutsu would do little more than provide a small buffer layer for your character that could deflect rain drops and sand particles away from your body.
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Rain*
Rain*
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration   Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Mar 20, 2014 3:42 am

Edited as requested by you.
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Vex
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration   Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Mar 20, 2014 3:47 am

This is your jutsu registration, you are only creating you 10 free starting jutsu. Please remove the Academy Jutsu from this list.
Also- you have a lot of jutsu here, especially higher ones. As a Special Jounin, for starting- you are only allowed to have 2 E-ranks, 3 D-ranks, 3 C-ranks, 2 B-ranks

Any other jutsu obtained after these first 10 jutsu, must be bought with ryo and trained given the proper word requirements.
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration   Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Mar 20, 2014 4:02 am

Edited as you asked Semasu
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration   Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Mar 20, 2014 4:12 am

Honestly I don't know what's going on here. Are you unaware that that you extra jutsu in spoilers under your other jutsu, placed as coding? Specifically- Genjutsu Release (幻術解, Genjutsu Kai) in a spoiler beneath True Wind Affinity.

Please tidy this registration up a bit. Some of your jutsu are in spoilers while the others are in coding and spoilers inside spoilers.
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Rain*
Rain*
Male Posts : 27
Ryo : 4000

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration   Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration EmptyThu Mar 20, 2014 4:20 am

I fixed it up and tided it up
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Hisame
Hisame
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Ryo : 598400

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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration   Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration EmptySat Mar 22, 2014 3:08 am

True Wind Affinity - This needs a cooldown. No buts. Make it one, two, doesn't matter, but it needs one. I would recommend 1 with the cooldown starting after the duration is over. So that there is one post between usage. This is just to prevent it from always being on at all times when using it.

Fire Release: Crumbling Palm - This is fine, however, please state that it can't be used to burn someone on contact, as a precaution. Internal heat is fine, but there is only so much it can do. Also, there has to be a limit of what amount of heat you can withstand. This is required because there is only so much heat the body can withstand, before damage is done, both internal and external. There will end u being things too hot for even heat to mask, and also, by holding a hot object, your body conducts and withdraws that heat, increasing your own. That's why our bodies can over heat or even boil from the inside out, or die from fever, ect. Keep in mind, it is an E-rank technique, so don't go overboard with it.

Also, there are extra spoiler boxes. If they are not being used, please remove them. Just be careful as to not delete and jutsu information, otherwise you'll have to fix whatever ends up missing.

Post a bump when things are fixed, and please fix them within the original post of the technique.

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Rain*
Rain*
Male Posts : 27
Ryo : 4000

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Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration Left_bar_bleue200/200Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration Empty_bar_bleue  (200/200)

Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration Empty
PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration   Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration EmptySat Mar 22, 2014 7:43 pm

Bump Bump Bump Bump Bumpeth
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Hisame
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PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration   Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration EmptySun Mar 23, 2014 4:02 am

Looks good.

Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration Approved_zps6da77187

Add them to your Jutsu List.
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Rain*
Rain*
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Ryo : 4000

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Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration Left_bar_bleue200/200Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration Empty_bar_bleue  (200/200)

Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration Empty
PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration   Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration EmptyFri May 30, 2014 3:56 am

Training thread in need of grading. . .
http://www.narutolegacy.com/t8054-time-to-make-some-noise#53609
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Vex
Vex
Male Posts : 1428
Ryo : 396513

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Chakra:
Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration Left_bar_bleue190/190Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration Empty_bar_bleue  (190/190)

Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration Empty
PostSubject: Re: Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration   Uchiha Rain's Jutsu Registration EmptySat May 31, 2014 1:02 pm

Rain! wrote:
Training thread in need of grading. . .
http://www.narutolegacy.com/t8054-time-to-make-some-noise#53609

Rain, we do not "grade" your training. I already explained to you that we use an EXP system and an upgrade shop for threads. Word count is how you most commonly get casual EXP, but missions provide EXP as well. Your training thread for END only amounts to 200EXP when you need 1,250EXP to rank it up from C-B Rank. I posted in your upgrades the other day, explained a bit of this and gave you the template used for casual threads, missions & training threads. Please use it. Click here
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