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 Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP)

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PostSubject: Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP)   Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP) EmptySun Jun 15, 2014 7:41 am

E-Rank:

D-Rank:

C Rank:


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Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP) Left_bar_bleue190/190Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP) Empty_bar_bleue  (190/190)

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PostSubject: Re: Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP)   Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP) EmptyMon Jun 16, 2014 8:48 pm

Leaf Whirlwind, Shadow Of The Dancing Leaf- I will have to get back to you on these two jutsu. Also, even though Thousand Years of Death is E Rank- I don't suggest using it as an E Rank. E Ranks are intended for non-direct combat purposes.
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PostSubject: Re: Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP)   Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP) EmptyMon Jun 16, 2014 8:53 pm

Aww... Even though it doesn't even really do any damage? Well, it's definitely not worth being a D rank, so I guess I'll just scrap it. Other than those three, the rest are okay though?
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Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP) Left_bar_bleue190/190Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP) Empty_bar_bleue  (190/190)

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PostSubject: Re: Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP)   Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP) EmptyMon Jun 16, 2014 8:54 pm

If you've followed the list of jutsu requirements, then yes their fine.
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PostSubject: Re: Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP)   Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP) EmptyMon Jun 16, 2014 9:04 pm

Bump bump!~ I changed one thousand years of death to something else. Everything else is the same at the moment though.
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PostSubject: Re: Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP)   Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP) EmptyFri Jun 20, 2014 2:32 am

Leaf Whirlwind is acceptable, but Shadow Of The Dancing Leaf is derived from the Gates system- being that the user requires 5 times their strength to kick their opponent high into the air.
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PostSubject: Re: Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP)   Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP) EmptyFri Jun 20, 2014 2:34 am

I understand that, but I actually altered the jutsu slightly so that it wasn't all about kicking the opponent into the air. In fact, it's really only following closely in the opponent's shadow, to remain unseen. Sorry if that wasn't clear enough... Maybe I should change the name, as well?
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PostSubject: Re: Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP)   Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP) EmptyFri Jun 20, 2014 2:36 am

Well, the way the jutsu is worded is incomplete then, because part of the jutsu is kicking the foe into the air- so please make it custom with another name and specify your jutsu only works on targets who are airborne.
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PostSubject: Re: Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP)   Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP) EmptyFri Jun 20, 2014 5:31 am

Fixed some problems that were going on. Now I'm bumping :D
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PostSubject: Re: Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP)   Yoshi Hizumo's Jutsu Registration (WIP) EmptyFri Jun 20, 2014 6:11 am

Approved
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