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Lan Hayabusa
Lan Hayabusa
Posts : 72
Ryo : 2330

Character sheet
Chakra:
Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue140/140Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (140/140)

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PostSubject: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySat Mar 12, 2011 5:08 am

D Rank

Name: Wind Warp
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D-Rank
Element: Wind
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 0-6 Meters to the front or back
Description: A simple flash movement, by molding chakra into his feet and with his wind element he can take a single step away, its barely used to attack considering it consumes alot of chakra. Its mostly used for the means of travel or escape.


Name: Kage Shuriken no Jutsu (Shadow Shuriken Technique )
Canon/Custom: Cannon
Rank: D
Element: None
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 0-7 Meters
Description: It's an extremely simple technique where two shuriken, like the Fūma Shuriken, are piled one onto another and thrown simultaneously. However, depending on the way it's used, it can prove its absolute efficiency. The trick is to somehow draw the enemy's attention towards the upper shuriken. Then, to deal with the path of the lower shuriken. If the enemy notices both shuriken, the technique ends up losing all of its efficiency


Name: Sōshuriken no Jutsu (Manipulated Shuriken Technique)
Canon/Custom: Cannon
Rank: D
Element: None
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 25 feet with the wire
Description: With this technique a translucent string, both elastic and highly durable, is attached to a shuriken, making it possible to alter its path after having thrown it. An expert will have the ability to freely glide the shuriken in any direction with just a single movement of their fingertip. The first attack, challenging the enemy, is avoided and after a timelag of several seconds, it will come from behind. Depending on the performance, the possible tactics can be infinite

C Rank

Name:Suiton: Mizurappa (Water Release: Violent Water Wave)
Canon/Custom: Cannon
Rank: C
Element: Water
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 15 Yard
Description: Water gushes out from the mouth like a waterfall and washes away the enemy. One can freely control the power of this technique with the amount chakra one releases. Having many variations, this is a basic Water Release technique. The speed it travels is 30 mph and force is similar to large bus.



Name: Fūton: Daitoppa (Wind Release: Great Breakthrough )
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Element: Wind
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 15 Yards
Description: This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind which gets ignited with flame. When it hits a oppnent it sends them flying back, anything they hit along the way causes bruises to body.


Name: Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique (Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu )
Canon/Custom: Cannon
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 0-5 Meters
Description: This technique creates a volley of small fireballs, which are spat out of the user's mouth, flying wildly in every direction and assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can be hidden within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction. The technique is the regular in size 12 in diameter of each 4 flaming spheres from the user's mouth, it burns anything it touches, setting clothes, bodies or anything flammable on fire, with added chakra the user shoot 2x the fire amout of fire sphere, but shot twice as fast, same effects.


B Rank

Name: Hein (Flying Swallow)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Element: Wind
Type: Kenjutsu/Ninjutsu
Range: Short Range
Description:
Requires a bladed weapon and no handseals. The user will focus chakra into their blade, and cause the density and length of the sword, so it can cut up to 2 feet out of the natural range of the blade. This is done, with the creation of an invisible extension of chakra, shaped into an edge and works like a blade, only visible to chakra-sensing and certain doujutsu that see chakra. Using this can trick the enemy into not dodging the blade enough, and being cut by the invisible portion. This blade can cut as much as the blade itself. It is very dangerous for the enemy. Has a 2 post duration and a 3 post cooldown.




Name: Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique )
Canon/Custom: Cannon
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 0-8 Meters
Description: The user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body and changes it into a dragon-shaped fireball. The user then skillfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. Even outside of the attack range, its power and reliability are stressed. The flames have a high temperature, as they can create an upward movement of air currents which in turn can give rise to thunder clouds. A master of this technique can fire off several flames in succession and anyone caught in the technique could potentially be reduced to ashes or dead

A Rank

Name: Ken Rendan (Sword Barrage)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Element: None
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Close Range
Description: With technique, the user makes a sequence of slashes with their sword and finishes with a powerful final slash doing liberal damage to the enemy. Highly powerful and quickly if combine with Flying swallow, but alone its a minimum sword technique. The damge of the slashes are powerfull enough to cut the skin and to create minor lacerations to the body, the slashes are basically random if the technique was precise to a specific objective like injuring a limb till it had no strength left in the body to move. A total of 10 slashes with the minor results, but combine Flying swallow technique a hit can cause excessive bleeding to the body.

S-Rank

Name: ()
Canon/Custom:
Rank:
Element:
Type:
Range:
Description:


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Dominic
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Ryo : 12100

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Chakra:
Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 1:52 am

The hidden mist jutsu is a Shippuugakure specific tech, just like it was a Kiri. Was this char originally from Shippuugakure?

Shadow Shuriken Tech - 1500 ryo (For future reference, yours is free)

Manipulated Shuriken Tech - You realize that you must buy and account for the wire right? You can't use this tech if you don't have enough wire to go with it..(technical purposes)

Answer this, and we will move on...


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Lan Hayabusa
Lan Hayabusa
Posts : 72
Ryo : 2330

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Chakra:
Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue140/140Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (140/140)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 2:06 am

in order:

Oh I didnt know, I'll change it

I thought it was free

yeah I know I'll purchase it when I get the chance

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Dominic
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Ryo : 12100

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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 2:19 am

Shadow Shuriken - approved

Manipulated Shuriken - Approved

Violent Water Wave - the range is a bit confusing. A yard is only three ft. If it comes out at only a yard that means it has no force. How strong does flow out of your mouth?

Great Breakthrough - How fast is the wind in mph and force? If it were to hit the opponent, would it deliver damage or just knock them back so many feet? If so, how far and how much damage?
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Lan Hayabusa
Lan Hayabusa
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Ryo : 2330

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Chakra:
Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue140/140Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (140/140)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 2:45 am

ok

ok

well it like a raging water current so to speak, so what range shall I pick since it wouldnt have enough force then

well it travels in 70 mph and enough force to sprain a limb, to blow back: 25 yards and the damage well since it blows a oppenent away I say, slam into the ground or a wall or something just something to injure the body in a minor state
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Dominic
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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 2:57 am

Water Wave - If it can wash away the opponent, it has to make it out towards their general direction. I'd say, 10 yards and the water flows out with the force of bus at 30 mph. Sound good to you?

Breakthrough - the wind speed is ok. The spraining of limbs is ok as well. Just edit that if enemy slams into something with the force of this jutsu, they receive deep bruising. 15 yards is more plausible with distance..
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Lan Hayabusa
Lan Hayabusa
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Ryo : 2330

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Chakra:
Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue140/140Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (140/140)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 3:11 am

Water Wave: Good god man a bus, I'll take it 30 mph got it

Breakthrough: Deep brusing and 15 yards got it
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Dominic
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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 11:47 am

Phoenix Fire Sage - Isn't this the same tech as the one in your Kazu profile? If so, was it approved altogether on that profile as well?
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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue335/335Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (335/335)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 3:40 pm

yes you can check if you like
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Dominic
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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 6:16 pm

Then it is approved on here if the description matches the approved one.

Flying Swallow - it seems this jutsu has also been approved on another app. Did you take it from that app as well? It is fine if you did, but I want to make sure the description is consistent between profiles.
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Lan Hayabusa
Lan Hayabusa
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Ryo : 2330

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Chakra:
Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue140/140Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (140/140)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 6:22 pm

cool

nope I didnt get it from the app, I got it from the power of narupedia
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Dominic
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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 7:08 pm

Flying Swallow - I believe its been approved already though, I must go check. We will move on

Great Dragon Fire Technique - It needs to have a speed in which it travels and at B rank, to burn to ash is a bit strong for a site, so give it the highest damage dealt and the force it connects with. Lastly, how many in succession can one fire off total? That number can only be attained by an S Rank, please add all of that in
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Ryo : 2330

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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue140/140Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (140/140)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 7:16 pm

ok

since its B rank, can it be about 50 mph sounds good?, can it severely burn a oppenent skin and scorch eveything that it touches, and lastly about 1 or 2 flames
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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 7:37 pm

Great Dragon Fire - Ill give you two flames since in succession means more than one have to be fired..lastly, what force does it hit with??

Edit that in and we will move on..
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Lan Hayabusa
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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue140/140Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (140/140)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 9:31 pm

2 flames and the force is a like a truck
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Dominic
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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 10:15 pm

Ken Rendan - kind of need how powerful, precise and damaging the barrage of slashes are. Also need a total number of slashes and whether it is an organized set, or random...
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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue140/140Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (140/140)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Mar 13, 2011 11:53 pm

Highly powerful and quickly if combine with Flying swallow, but alone its a minimum sword technique. The damge of the slashes are powerfull enough to cut the skin and to create minor lacerations to the body, the slashes are basically random if the technique was precise to a specific objective like injuring a limb till it had no strength left in the body to move.
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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptyMon Mar 14, 2011 12:10 am

How many can be perfromed total when you slash?? Also, please include that when used with Flying Swallow, it is as you stated.
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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue140/140Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (140/140)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptyMon Mar 14, 2011 1:08 am

A total of 10 slashes with the minor results, but combine Flying swallow technique a hit can cause excessive bleeding to the body.
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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptyMon Mar 14, 2011 1:59 pm

Please make those edits and we will move on.
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptyMon Mar 14, 2011 10:49 pm

done
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptyTue Mar 15, 2011 1:19 am

Where is your S Rank????
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Lan Hayabusa
Lan Hayabusa
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Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue140/140Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (140/140)

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptyTue Mar 15, 2011 2:53 am

I cant think of one, all the S-rank of my elements suck...but I did change the 1st D rank check it out if ya want
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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptyTue Mar 15, 2011 7:25 pm

Wind Warp - Ok, so this is an escape or travel onnly jutsu? Not a battle jutsu? If it is used in battle, you need to tell me how fast and how far you can travel. Does it last multiple posts or just a single flash movement?? Cooldown?

Flying Swallow - How muc h longer is the invisible blade?? I remember telling another member, that their chakra blade could only be 2 feet further than the sword. How dense is the chakra??

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PostSubject: Re: Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu)   Hayabusa, Lan (Canon/Custom Jutsu) EmptyTue Mar 15, 2011 7:29 pm

sorry for the double post so fast, but I found the already edited version from another profile. Please use this one and its approved from Lili's jutsu topic

Name: Hein (Flying Swallow)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Element: Wind
Type: Kenjutsu/Ninjutsu
Range: Short Range
Description: Requires a bladed weapon and no handseals. The user will focus chakra into their blade, and cause the density and length of the sword, so it can cut up to 2 feet out of the natural range of the blade. This is done, with the creation of an invisible extension of chakra, shaped into an edge and works like a blade, only visible to chakra-sensing and certain doujutsu that see chakra. Using this can trick the enemy into not dodging the blade enough, and being cut by the invisible portion. This blade can cut as much as the blade itself. It is very dangerous for the enemy. Has a 2 post duration and a 3 post cooldown.

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