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 Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)

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Sakurakage

Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue360/360Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

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PostSubject: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptySun Feb 20, 2011 9:46 pm

Name:Anxiety
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank:B
Element:N/a
Type:Fuuinjutsu/Enhancement(?)
Range:Self
Description:This ability requires no handseals, and only requires a small amount of chakra. During situations that require greater reflexes and such, the user's heart speeds up to 400Bs(Beats/Second) which will pump an abundant amount of addrenaline through their system. This allows for their mind to see everything slowing down around them(Note: It does not actually slow down outside of the user's mind)and react quicker to things such as attacks. This ability can be activated three times in a topic, only lasts one post, and must have a break of five posts between each use. If the user uses this more than twice in a post, their heart's pumping of blood is changed and they begin to feel light headed, before passing out. (Use Once/No effect Twice/dizzyness Thrice/Pass out Fourth/Death)[Can Be Taught]


Last edited by Altair on Wed Mar 02, 2011 11:16 pm; edited 4 times in total
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Kamui
Kamui
Male Posts : 889
Ryo : 39300

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue300/300Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (300/300)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyMon Feb 21, 2011 2:38 pm

So lets see here? You have a technique from the movie "Wanted". This in terms of application is indeed very, very op for an E-rank though. That's my opinion at least. I'll see what Kash says.
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Kashaku Kagone
Kashaku Kagone
Male Posts : 674
Ryo : -500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue260/260Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (260/260)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyMon Feb 21, 2011 3:25 pm

There is already a clan that pretty much has this ability. You'll have to ask the maker of that clan if this jutsu is too close to their clan, or if it's fine.
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Sakurakage

Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue360/360Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyTue Mar 01, 2011 8:16 pm

Motha fucka! I MADE this jutsu based off of wanted. Who'd steal it? >.<
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Kashaku Kagone
Kashaku Kagone
Male Posts : 674
Ryo : -500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue260/260Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (260/260)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 4:10 pm

https://nrpgm.rpg-board.net/t537-akumeita-clan

Posted up: January 27th, 2011
Not yet approved, but still 24 days ahead of you.
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Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue360/360Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 7:39 pm

Okay well first off, the user doesn't increase their own speed with my jutsu, merely their brain sees things slower than usual.
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Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue360/360Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 8:23 pm

Name:Sleeping Dance of The Sakurakage
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank:B
Element:N/A
Type:Genjutsu
Range:Mid-Long
Description:After making handseals, the respective user lashes out with their chakra. This chakra enfolds around their opponent to catch them in a genjutsu which shows them out in the middle of a jungle, without weapons or any sense of direction. They wander aimlessly while sakura petals drift down around them. Eventually they will begin to hear sounds from the forestry around them, showing that they are not alone. Bushes will rustle, and birds will take flight. When they begin to get paranoid of what is to come, there will be three figures that look exactly like them that come out from the woodwork, baring katanas. These figures will then attack the foe, over and over, cutting;slicing;chopping them repeatedly. And when they eventually die off from it: they awake to the same situation over and over again for five turns. The chakra used to lash around the foe and to enfold on them can be easily dodged as it moves at the rate of a common garden-variety snail. Which is why this is best for close range. The wave of chakra is only twice as big and as wide as the user's shadow. The genjutsu is able to be broken by using Kai, but not through the way of contacting pain upon oneself. This jutsu restricts other body movements, so while the opponent is trapped in it, the only moving they do is in their head. Only one opponent may be caught in this at a time.{Can Be Taught}

Name: Earthen Pillars
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank: A
Element: Earth
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:Short-Midrange
Description:The user does not need to make handseals, instead they merely need to concentrate their chakra into their palms, and touch them to a surface.(This makes the ability passive until all three pillars are used) After which and large pillar of earth(Five feet aroundxTwelve feet tall) will immediately sprout from any surface they choose (While in range, excluding mid-air) at a rate of 70 mph. This pillar ends in a round-shaped point and will not impale or stab the enemy, but merely slam into them, and most likely break bones. Only one pillar can be used at a time but they can be used three turns in a row until a cooldown of seven turns is needed. The amount of chakra used for this ability is spread out(Meaning each time, the amount of chakra needed for an A-Rank is used each turn this is used)[Weaknesses:Lightning Jutsu. Five turns to destroy. Or C-Rank Jutsu]{Can Be Taught}



Last edited by Altair on Sat Mar 05, 2011 3:50 pm; edited 4 times in total
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Kashaku Kagone
Kashaku Kagone
Male Posts : 674
Ryo : -500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue260/260Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (260/260)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 8:30 pm

How large is the chakra wave? Can someone escape the genjutsu using conventional methods (Kai/pain)? Can the user or the opponent move about freely while the genjutsu is in effect, or is the attack sequence all in their mind, and their body is forced to stay still? Can this trap multiple opponents, or just one?

There is already a wood release clan being made. Unless you're part of that clan or that clan is archived/deleted, the second jutsu is denied.
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Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue360/360Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 9:19 pm

Fixed
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Kashaku Kagone
Kashaku Kagone
Male Posts : 674
Ryo : -500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue260/260Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (260/260)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 9:21 pm

I'll deny them both because I'm apparently a jerk. Your move.
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Sakurakage

Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue360/360Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 9:23 pm

[22:16:13] Kashaku Kagone : My job is personal when it comes to you now.

The tech mod is supposed to be an un-biased person not allowing the trifles outside of their 'office' to get to them. You obviously can not seem to comprehend that.
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Hakumei Shinkirou
Hakumei Shinkirou
Male Posts : 799
Ryo : 2371000

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue290/290Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (290/290)

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PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 9:36 pm

Now get back to the Subjectivism


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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 9:49 pm

Ok, so this is turning out to be quite a spamming section. So here I go, Kash you will no longer be moderating Altairs jutsu, I will. Haku, get rid of the video. Altair, unscratch your anxiety jutsu, because the akumeita clan kid gave up bc he hated how I nerfed the clan. Do that and we will begin...
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Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue360/360Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 10:15 pm

done
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 10:38 pm

Anxiety - this is much more than an e rank jutsu. I see it around the level of B, for I had already broken down this in the akumeita clan topic once before. Now, when you use it, what will be some of the drawbacks of its use? Also, the cooldown will need to be larger as well..
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 10:49 pm

Ok, seeing as how you edited, Ill use the same type of system as before. Use it once, no effect. Upon second use, I see you having trouble breathing and dizziness occurs for the next two posts after its use. Then if use use it that third time, your going to Damn near pass out due to heart condition as before mentioned. This is the best way to gauge it to make it fair. Now, having said that, you fuck up and accidentally use it a fourth time, your dead on the spot...sound fair to you? Continue to bump this as u fix, even if u reply in cb..
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Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue360/360Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 11:05 pm

SOunds fair. Price it
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 11:10 pm

After you edit the system I made, this jutsu will cost 7000 ryo
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Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue360/360Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyWed Mar 02, 2011 11:16 pm

fix bump
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyThu Mar 03, 2011 1:31 am

Sleeping Dance of the Sakurakage - You still need to answer whether you can trap only one or multiple opponents in this...
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Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue360/360Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyThu Mar 03, 2011 2:27 am

fix
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyFri Mar 04, 2011 1:30 am

Sleeping Dance of the Sakurakage - 7000 ryo
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Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue360/360Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyFri Mar 04, 2011 2:30 am

Check earthen pillars
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue330/330Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptyFri Mar 04, 2011 4:25 am

Earth Pillars - when you concentrate the chakra, does that still require the one post charge or make it passive? Bro your concept of mph is horrible lol. At 20 mph, you may as well say it tickled them upon contact, especially if this is an a rank jutsu. Lastly, give the max volume of a pillar you can create...Length x Width x Height.
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Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

Character sheet
Chakra:
Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Left_bar_bleue360/360Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu)   Altair (Canon / Custom Jutsu) EmptySat Mar 05, 2011 3:35 pm

Lol I know I know XD Fixed anyway.
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