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 Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)

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Lili Valentine
Lili Valentine
Female Posts : 101
Ryo : 1000

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PostSubject: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyFri Mar 04, 2011 4:46 pm

Name: Kattachiri (Dust Cutter)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Element: Wind
Type: Taijutsu/Kenjutsu
Range: Close
Description: Requires 2 posts of charging. Lili will gather wind chakra to her hands or blade(s) spiraling around like a thin veil. This wind alone can cut and puncture (or cut) up to a cubic inch of steel in density. This, however, is not where it ends. This wind acts like a vacuum, and will actually cause a cloud of dust to join the veil of cutting wind. This will cause extra cutting to whoever, as well as possibly cause infections later if not immediately treated. This ability lasts 4 posts and can only be used once per battle.

Name: Hein (Flying Swallow)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Element: Wind
Type: Kenjutsu/Ninjutsu
Range: Short Range
Description: Requires a bladed weapon and no handseals. The user will focus chakra into their blade, and cause the density and length of the sword, so it can cut up to 2 feet out of the natural range of the blade. This is done, with the creation of an invisible extension of chakra, shaped into an edge and works like a blade, only visible to chakra-sensing and certain doujutsu that see chakra. Using this can trick the enemy into not dodging the blade enough, and being cut by the invisible portion. This blade can cut as much as the blade itself. It is very dangerous for the enemy. Has a 2 post duration and a 3 post cooldown.

Name: Mountain Cutter
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D-S
Element: N/A
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Up to 30 meters (dependent on rank)
Description: First, Lili thrusts the tip of her sword blade into the ground and channels her chakra into it for a rank-dependent number of posts (D-rank at Genin, one post). After that post of charge-up time, she swings her sword forward and up in a slashing motion, making the chakra cut through the ground in the direction the blade was slashed only a moment before the chakra itself erupts upward out of the ground with incredible cutting power at higher ranks. Though the jutsu has incredible range, it can only slice as wide as the sword itself.

D-rank: Five meters, one foot above ground, can cut skin enough to cause bleeding. 1 post cooldown.
C-rank: ten meters, two feet above ground, can cut through skin and into muscle. 2 posts cooldown.
B-rank: fifteen meters, three feet above ground, can cut through skin and muscle and into bone (though it won't cut all the way through) 3 posts cooldown.
A-rank: twenty meters, four feet above ground, cuts through an entire limb. 4 posts cooldown.
S-rank: thirty meters, six feet above ground, can slice through feet of steel. 5 posts cooldown.


Last edited by Lili Valentine on Wed Mar 09, 2011 10:05 pm; edited 2 times in total
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Lili Valentine
Lili Valentine
Female Posts : 101
Ryo : 1000

Character sheet
Chakra:
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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptySat Mar 05, 2011 2:04 pm

Name: Boukenjutsu (One Sword Technique)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Type: Kenjutsu (Passive)
Range: Close
Description: Based loosely on the Kaguyas' Dance of the Camellia. Using one blade, Lili will use quick motions to break into the opponents personal area where defense is made difficult and strike with quick, fluid, precise slashes and stabbing attacks. Through much training with her sensei Lili has attained boosts. When fighting using a single sword or bladed weapon, her speed (for short distances) and flexibility will increase by another half her current abilities. This is always active and only active when wielding a single sword. Costs no chakra, but has a slight toll on stamina.

Name: Nikenjutsu (Two Sword Technique)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Type: Kenjutsu (Passive)
Range: Short
Description: Quite similar to Boukenjutsu. Now armed with two swords, Lili, being ambidextrous, will pair one sword style's fluid precise attacks with an extra defense breaching weapon. This as well as access to more fluid attacks. Lili gains the same bonuses as she would in Boukenjutsu; a boost of another half of her current speed and flexibility. Always active as long as two swords are wielded simultaneously. Costs no chakra, but has a slight toll on stamina.

Name: Mikenjutsu (Three Sword Technique)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Type: Kenjutsu (Passive)
Range: Short
Description: Now she wields three blades. One in each hand, and on clenched in her teeth. She is granted a wider range of attacks now. She now gains a half her current boost to strength and a doubling of her flexibility and speed capabilities. Always active so long as Lili wields 3 swords simultaneously. Costs no chakra, but takes a minor toll on stamina. (more than its D-Rank Predecessors)

Name: Gokenjutsu (Five Sword Technique)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Type: Kenjutsu (Passive)
Range: Short
Description: Lili based this much around the defensive tactics of her sensei when she used the Dance of the Larch. She wields five swords. One in each hand, one in her mouth, and now... one in each elbow. This gives her a wider range of attacks, and less openings are presented. She begins switching the blades to different locations and starts to hold them awkwardly. She gains boosts of double her strength and 2.5 x her speed and flexibility, and a half of her current stats' dexterity. Always active as long as she wields 5 swords simultaneously. Costs no chakra, but has a significant toll on stamina.

Name: Shichikenjutsu (Seven Sword Technique)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Type: Kenjutsu (Passive)
Range: Short
Description: This is the prime of Lili's swordsmanship capabilities. Though already wielding seven swords when she was a genin, she was never quite as good as she could have been at the time. However, with large amounts of training with her original Seven Swords Dance... she has turned it into a technique all its own. Wielding the swords in her joints, not her hands, she uses motions fluid and precise, much like an exotic dance, and spins herself like a buzz-saw and uses many rolling attacks. She masterfully leaves no opening and shifts the blades mid attack. Through training with her sensei, she has gained great bonuses on her combat abilities. Her speed and flexibility triple, her strength becomes 2.5x its current amount. This standing, her dexterity doubles, and she gains a 50% boost to her current accuracy. Always active as long as Lili wields 7 swords simultaneously. Costs no chakra, but takes a massive toll on her stamina over time (much like opening a celestial gate)
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyWed Mar 09, 2011 2:13 am

You wanted me to start at Hein - Even though chakra is supposed to be invisible, you must atleast state how the enemy can know its active. Either through acute hearing, or certain doujutsu. Even though its canon, reduce the extension from 4 ft. to 2 ft.
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Lili Valentine
Lili Valentine
Female Posts : 101
Ryo : 1000

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyWed Mar 09, 2011 2:31 am

Fixed
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyWed Mar 09, 2011 5:46 pm

Mountain Cutter - please give the charge time at every level, and a cooldown
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Lili Valentine
Lili Valentine
Female Posts : 101
Ryo : 1000

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyWed Mar 09, 2011 10:06 pm

Charge time is rank dependent. A-Rank at Genin is 3 posts. Whereas A-Rank at Special Jounin is 2 posts.

Cooldowns added.
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyWed Mar 09, 2011 10:21 pm

Hein - 7000 ryo

Mountain Cutter - Can the chakra arch while moving or is it a straight path only?? Last thing, is the height in the description describing the chakra as it travels above the surface, or how high it can go in the air after it releases at the last moment?
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Lili Valentine
Lili Valentine
Female Posts : 101
Ryo : 1000

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Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) Left_bar_bleue220/220Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) Empty_bar_bleue  (220/220)

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyThu Mar 10, 2011 1:37 am

It cannot arch, and the rank descriptions already have a maximum height above ground. (Doesn't rise off ground any higher than what is said.
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

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Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) Left_bar_bleue330/330Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyThu Mar 10, 2011 2:09 am

Mountain Cutter - because of D - S rank, its total price is 18,000 ryo
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Lili Valentine
Lili Valentine
Female Posts : 101
Ryo : 1000

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptySat Apr 09, 2011 2:21 am

Name: Cell Destruction Taijutsu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S
Element: N/A
Type: Taijutsu/Medical Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Description: Lili will surround herself with a very destructive coat of chakra, so dense that it will color itself black. When this hits an enemy(or living object), it will cause rapid deterioration of the cell walls (and membranes) of their cells, and pretty much turn any flesh or skin it comes in contact with to juice. This is used with very forceful taijutsu strikes, to make cause a simple punch to tear deadly gashes into the enemy. When Lili uses this, it costs B-rank chakra each post to maintain. It also takes a great deal of stamina from her, as well as dexterity, disallowing her to use her swords for the duration. After its use, Lili will suffer from exhaustion, no matter how long or not long she used it for, and even during use she will begin to weaken and slow down after 2 posts. This can only be used twice per topic, and has a 20 post cooldown regardless of duration.

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Name: Lariat
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Melee (1-2 Meters)
Description: Lili charges at the enemy almost too fast to detect, and slams her outstretched arm into the collar-bone area of the enemy. This could cause a good deal of trauma to the opponent's bones as it is capable of smashing them. The downfall is that she can only attack in a straight line.


Name: Elbow
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Melee (1-2 Meters)
Description: Moving faster than can be reacted to by anyone's standards Lili thrusts her elbow at the opponent with immense force, this being capable of sending an enemy crashing through multiple walls and disabling just about anyone who doesn't have god-like vitality, possibly even killing weak enemies. Very powerful and can easily shatter the enemy's bones. The downfall is the incredibly short range, as only half her arm is used and she doesn't attack with anything more.


Name: Guillotine Drop
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Melee (1-2 Meters)
Description: From above, Lili will drop at a rapid speed, and delivers a full-force dropping kick down onto her enemy, smashing them forcefully into the ground. This can easily shatter the enemy's bones, but has a nasty recoil to her leg muscles if she misses not exactly debilitating but it hurts like a b*tch.


Name: Liger Bomb
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Melee (1-2 Meters)
Description: Lili will grapple the enemy and force them up with her strength. Following this, she will smash them headfirst into the ground cause great damage to their skull and neck and destroying the ground around a 5 meter radius of the impact. This can easily shatter enemy bones with the weakness of needing a good hold on the opponent before use.


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Lili Valentine
Lili Valentine
Female Posts : 101
Ryo : 1000

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Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) Left_bar_bleue220/220Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) Empty_bar_bleue  (220/220)

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyTue Apr 12, 2011 12:10 am

Bump
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Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

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Chakra:
Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) Left_bar_bleue360/360Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyTue Apr 12, 2011 12:57 am

Okay, Cell Destruction: How exactly would her chakra do this? Is there some sort of scientific term to it, or is it like the chakra disection blades? Also, with how much it costs in stamina and all that, wouldn't it slow her down with excessive use? (IE: Two or three posts) as chakra does count towards energy in some taijutsu cases.

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Lili Valentine
Lili Valentine
Female Posts : 101
Ryo : 1000

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyTue Apr 12, 2011 1:08 am

Well the chakra would coat each individual cell and break down the cell walls and cell membrane of each cell to a base component (water) and pretty much liquefies all the cells the chakra can permeate to. And yes, it will slow her down over time, as her chakra will degrade, meaning less chakra to her muscles to keep her going, hence the exhaustion.
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Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

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Chakra:
Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) Left_bar_bleue360/360Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyTue Apr 12, 2011 1:15 am

Add in that she exhausts during the jutsu as well, as I don't think it would be just hunkey dorey to have you go super mode with that stuff. And with the scientific base and how it cuts down on cells, I could get a good enough price I guess. Bare in mind though, that one of my A-Ranks that did less than that costs 9k
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Lili Valentine
Lili Valentine
Female Posts : 101
Ryo : 1000

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyTue Apr 12, 2011 1:17 am

I understand this, and I edited.
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Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyTue Apr 12, 2011 1:22 am

Approved

Price:

11,000 ryo
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Altair
Altair
Male Posts : 297
Ryo : 7500

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PostSubject: Re: Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques)   Lili Valentine (Custom/Canon Techniques) EmptyTue Apr 12, 2011 1:26 am

Taijutsu Pack would definitely cost:

9,000 Ryo For The Lot

Under close observation of course.
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