No it doesn't.

Now since this is Raiton can it cause any electrical damage?

Yes it can shock people through metallic objects to the point of that body part becoming numb for 2 post.

7000 Ryo

5k for the power to cut through metal (up to titanium even) *this is with the time-to-do-so discount*

2k for the power to numb for 2 posts.

Higher admins may adjust this price if they disagree with it.

Too powerful to be a mere C-rank. Bump it up to an A-rank.

The price will be 12,500 ryo due to the extreme cutting ability, the ability to numb, and the long duration of the technique.

Kazuo already priced it and it was approved already Kenshi. I had this exact same jutsu on saga and no one, not even Kash said it was too powerful. This is not A-rank material in my opinion.

Hello? I accept the price of 7000 can someone deduct my ryo?

Syn, we need to address the difference in opinions on this particular jutsu. Although it was on Saga, this is a new crew that sees more power within it. So, would you like to accept the price and A rank, or would you like me to help you find a better range for what your looking for?

Well I agree that it should cost more than 7000, but 12,500 is a bit much for this jutsu. This costs more than my Mugetsu Techs and they do much more than this tech does.

Name: Eight Inner Gates
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: A
Element: n/a
Type: Taijutsu
Range: self
Description:
The Eight Gates are eight specific points on a person's Chakra Pathway
System. They limit the overall flow of chakra within a person's body.
The basis for the idea of the chakra gates comes from the body's limits
on the functions within it. This makes the body much weaker, but it
keeps the body from expiring too soon. By opening these gates, the user
can surpass their own physical limits at the cost of extreme damage to
their own bodies.The state of having all Eight Gates open is known as
Eight Gates Released Formation (八門遁甲の陣, Hachimon Tonkō no Jin; English
TV "Eight Inner Gates Formation"). Any shinobi who activates this state
will temporarily gain powers greater than a Kage, but they will die
because of the damage done to their body. While the gates are active the
use of taijutsu moves does not deplete the users chakra pool but they
are limited to the use of up to two B rank or lower taijutsu per round
or one A rank or above.


The Gate of Opening (開門, Kaimon),
located in the brain. This gate removes the restraints of the brain on
the muscles allowing twice the normal strength of the body of the user.
Unlocking this gate allows the user to use the Front Lotus.

The
Gate of Healing (休門, Kyūmon; English TV "The Gate of Rest"), located in
the brain. Forcibly increases one's physical strength and temporarily
re-energizes the body. Opening this gate allows the user to restore half
of the overall chakra pool after it has been open for a round.

12,500 in all.

12500 Ryo deducted.

Nevermind Dom the price of 12,500 is good I suppose.

Name: Thought Projection
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Element: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 50 feet
Description: This jutsu allows Syn to project his thoughts out to others, whether they be just words or images. Passive no handseals.

Approved, 100 ryo

I want to buy this.

100 ryo deducted.

Name: Doton: Retsudo Tenshō (Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm)
Rank: C
Element: Earth
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 10 feet
Description: This technique needs handseals. This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave

4000 ryo

4000 Ryo deducted.

Name: Mugetsu: Chimera
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S
Element: Katon
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 100 yards
Description: Charge no handseals. While Syn is charging up his jutsu his body would begin to be covered in flames that would produce 1st degree burns upon contact. For reference look at my signature. Once finished charging his jutsu Syn can expel the flames from his body, going out in a 100 yard range in all directions, charring everything in the path of the flames to ash upon contact with the flames.

When charging, the user's skin will start to deteriorate due to the high temperature of the flames peeling off two complete layers of skin every post that the flames cover their body. The user will have suffered 3rd degree burns along their whole upper half of their body and depending on how many posts the user charged the jutsu 2 layers of skin would have deteriorated. It would cause immense amounts of pain to be touched by anyone or anything. If the user were wearing fireproof clothing he could potentially unphased by the flames. The flames expand at 50 mph. The jutsu works in accordance to the following system:

1 Post Charge = 30 Yards Range | 2 layers of skin deteriorated. 3rd layer-3rd Degree Burns | 6 Post Cooldown | Can be used 3 times per topic.

2 Post Charge = 60 Yards Range | 4 layers of skin deteriorated. 5th layer-3rd Degree Burns | 12 Post Cooldown | Can be used twice per topic.

3 Post Charge = 100 Yards Range |6 layers of skin deteriorated. 7th layer-3rd Degree Burns | Can only be used once per topic.

The victim would have 4 posts to put it out seeing as it would affect them the same as it does me deteriorating my skin it would do the same to them. So they would have 4 posts to put it out before all layers of skin have deteriorated and they would be burned to ashes. B Rank water is acceptable i guess. After all Water is super effective against fire.

Name: Earth Fortress
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Element: Doton
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Directly in front of themselves.
Description: Upon completion of handseals Syn would plant his hands firmly on the ground and cause a 50 yard tall and wide wall that's 10 feet thick to rise out of the ground. In front of him. This wall is chakra altered, therefore making the chakra-altered earth as hard as double reinforced Steel. B-Rank Raiton Jutsu can rip through this.

Name: Earth Prison
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Element: Doton
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Eyesight
Description: Upon completion of handseals from the ground itself a cage would spring up to snare its victim as if set off like a booby trap. The cage would be built like a prison cell, with bars in front and the rest is all solidified. The cage is chakra reinforced making it just as durable as double reinforced steel. When the handseals are completed and the user activates the jutsu the cage would spring up like a bear trap, it would snap up almost immediately. C-Rank Raiton jutsu can rip through this.

Name: Kage Bunshin
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Description: The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin.

Name: Omote Renge [Front Lotus]
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Type: Taijutsu
Range: ???
Description: Omote Renge is a Taijutsu technique which was forbidden due to the strain it puts on a ninja's body. By opening the first of the Celestial Gates, the Initial Gate, the ninja is able to release the restraints in the brain and push the body farther. In Lee's
case, he was able to increase his speed and power. To utilize the Omote Renge, Lee first loosens the bandages around his arm. With a quick dash he is suddenly below his target and a quick upward kick sends his opponent skyward. Lee then jumps into the air to place his chest to the back of his opponent. He then wraps his arms and the bandages around his opponent to prevent escape. As the pair begin their fall back to earth, Lee begins to spin downwards at a high rate of speed, driving his
opponent head first into the ground. At the last moment Lee himself releases the bandages and jumps to the clear. Though the technique injures his opponent, it also takes its toll on Lee's body as well.

Chimera - Ok, obviously at S rank, this is plausible, howeve, just like in the Farcleno Clan, there are massvie reprocussions to the hands for full use of their S Rank jutsu. I imagine this would be the same, so I would add similar effects to your body, however, it cant exactly resemble that clan's, it has to have original effects. Do your best to edit and also add the speed in which the flames expand. Read the Farcleno Clan S Rank to make sure you dont copy.

Earth Wall - I believe this jutsu has an approved version already, either that, or people have several different variations with the same name. The dimensions are more along the lines of S, as afar as height and width, however, the thickness is ok. MAybe Edit the name, then adjust the size.

Earth Prison - What is the rate of in which the prison is unleashed from the ground, and what are some of the jutsu that can tear through it?(Use this in Earth wall as well)

Shadow Clone Jutsu - Reference Raleth's Jutsu list, the approved version is there. 6000 ryo I believe is the price.

This taijutsu I will deal with a bit later.

1. When charging, the user's skin will start to deteriorate due to the high temperature of the flames. The user will have suffered 3rd degree burns along their whole upper half of their body. It would cause immense amounts of pain to be touched by anyone or anything. If the user were wearing fireproof clothing, the affects of the jutsu would be nullified and they'd remain unscathed. The flames expand at 50 mph.

2. Edited name to Earth Fortress. Changed Height and Width to 50 yards to fit the A-rank category. B-Rank Raiton Jutsu can rip through the wall.

3. I don't the exact speed, but I'd say like a bear trap, it would snap up almost immediately. C-Rank Raiton jutsu can rip through this.

4. 6000 is good.

Chimera - Use the word, potentially unphased. The armors you reigster will vary, and in a sense, these results will as well. Let's talk about the description of putting everything to ash. Obviously, that would put this into an advanced element category. The human body would effects would need to be precise, as long as how fast things would reduce to ash.

Make the edits to the others. Along with fixing your paragraphs. They aren't stretching the whole page, and itooks kinda sloppy.

Lastly, make sure the Kage Bunshin matches the already approved version.

1. It would reduce the surrounding areas to ash upon contact with the flames and I updated the damage to Syn in order to make it fairer. 2 Layers of skin would deteriorate for each post Syn charges the jutsu.

2. Edited everything in and Kage Bunshin has been fit to the approved version.

Synyster Kenshou wrote:

Name: Omote Renge [Front Lotus]
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Type: Taijutsu
Range: ???
Description: Omote Renge is a Taijutsu technique which was forbidden due to the strain it puts on a ninja's body. By opening the first of the Celestial Gates, the Initial Gate, the ninja is able to release the restraints in the brain and push the body farther. In Lee's
case, he was able to increase his speed and power. To utilize the Omote Renge, Lee first loosens the bandages around his arm. With a quick dash he is suddenly below his target and a quick upward kick sends his opponent skyward. Lee then jumps into the air to place his chest to the back of his opponent. He then wraps his arms and the bandages around his opponent to prevent escape. As the pair begin their fall back to earth, Lee begins to spin downwards at a high rate of speed, driving his
opponent head first into the ground. At the last moment Lee himself releases the bandages and jumps to the clear. Though the technique injures his opponent, it also takes its toll on Lee's body as well.

There is already a version of this technique officially approved by both myself and Kashaku Kagone, all the remains is a price.

Name: Front Lotus
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Element: n/a
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close-Medium
Description: Front Lotus requires the opening of the first of the Eight Chakra Gates, giving the user two times their normal strength. The user launches the opponent into the air and then uses Shadow of the Dancing Leaf. Once behind the opponent, the user restrains them and piledrives them into the ground headfirst while rotating at a ferocious speed. Because it uses one of the chakra gates, the user is left extremely fatigued, making this jutsu a "double-edged sword." The use of this technique more than once in a topic will cause a 2 post fatigue and can only be used three times max per fight.

I'd like to buy Front Lotus.