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 Hitori Riezin

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Hitori Riezin
Hitori Riezin
Posts : 150
Ryo : 12350

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PostSubject: Hitori Riezin   Hitori Riezin EmptyTue May 31, 2011 10:43 pm


Hitori Riezin 4389253maninbandageonth

Mirage
Tell me something about yourself.
Ninja Application

Personal

First Name: Hitori
Last Name: Riezin
Alias: N/A
Gender: Male
Age: Unknown... Assumed to be 18
Birthday: Unknown... Dubbed to be June 7th
Sexuality: Straight
Relationships: N/A
Affiliation: Hyougakura
Rank: Chunnin
Element: Fire, Lightning, Earth
Specialization: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Genjutsu


Personal v2

Personality: Hitori is a hateful, spiteful person with sensitivity about his body. He despises almost everyone. He also hates it when people take pity n him because of his blindness. He is extremely violent and does not hesitate to kill. He also lacks social skills, after being alone for long. He long ago forgot compassion, but he does has some form of humanity left, able to feel sympathy towards people in situations like he has. There are some people who have opened up Hitori, who he can tolerate to spend time with. Overall he also enjoys fighting, and surprisingly he feels no love towards teh man who raised him, his step-father.

He has an extreme hate for Boufuugakura. His life goal is to eventually destroy the village elders and kage. He bears no initial ill will against the civilians so only they shall be spared by the onslaught, for the most part. He also has a special hate in his heart for his current village, who hated him and shunned him at every chance they could. He also has a liking of animals, and dislikes the use of swords and various other weapons, considering them to be un-honorable. With what little honor, he himself has.

Likes: Fire, Burning things, Killing, Training, Animals

Dislikes: Everything Else, especially people

Motivation: Hate

Fears: Dying before he can take his revenge on the village tht did nothing to protect his now deceased clan.


Clan Information

Clan name

Bloodline Name:

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Location:

Clan History:



History

History: Hitori was born eighteen years just outside of Boufuugakura. That was the home village of his clan, which was fruitful and powerful underneath the rule of that village. Although the clan was powerful, known especially for there extreme strength, they were a peaceful clan. So they never saw the attack coming. When it hit, it hit hard and before they could get up, the entire clan was razed to the ground.

The village had ordered an attack on the clan, fearing their power, that they would attempt a Coup. This was not true, but teh kage and elders were paranoid and ordered the attack without proof. It was done in one night. The entire clan was burned to the ground, two months after Hitori was burned to the ground. The only survivor was Hitori himself, but he did not get out scot free.

Was was kept alive by his mothers burning dead body, keeping most of the powerful flames from harming him. He was still nearly burned alive though, his entire body burned beyond recognition, his eye's melted in their sockets. He spent a unknown amount of time, alone, crying in pain in the ashes of his deceased clan. Until he was found by a man who lived at Hyougakura, then man taking pity and bringing the boy home with him to raise him as his own.

Hitori spent his first eight years home schooled and nursed. He never went outside, because the children always made fun of him and called him a monster, or ran away from him in fear. His hate grew, as did his special ability, to see with chakra instead of his eye's. Allowing him to see in a 360 degree view using his chakra. As this grew more powerful so did his hate of Boufuu and everyone else.

Then he joined the ninja academy, he was a intellect, and his taijutsu skills were amazing. He made no friends in the academy and was even avoided by the teachers.

When he was a younger child, he only wore the bandages. Though when he went to the academy he changed it up to wearing a hoodie that always covered his face and various pants. Then after a while, soon before his graduation he ditched those and started wearing long hooded cloaks. Eventually, after graduation, he always wore a blood red hooded cloak with extra long sleeves.

Still, he passed within two years at the age of ten. Then he spent the next eight years acting alone, not in a ninja squad. They tried to put him in a squad, but they were to afraid to stay with him. Plus, he worked better alone. For a while he never attempted the Chunnin Exams, but after a few years he did try for it, but was disqualified because he actually killed his opponent. Though he was taken pity on after it turned out the man was trying to assassinate the head of the village.

Next year he passed though. Only nearly killing his opponents this time, he made sure to stay back. His first fight was just him showing off his strength, taking out his opponent in a single punch. The second fight he used strategy and held back, to show that he did have the skills to be chunnin, and not just a lucky punch. It was difficult for the proctors to accept him though, as they could not see his face and needed to keep and eye on him. So he removed some of the bandages and showed the entire arena his face, most threw up, children cried. They politely asked him to cover it up.

Hitori was a good ninja, with a very high success rate of his missions. He seemed to be loyal to his village and it's cause. These were not his plans, his true plans are unknown, as he plans to destroy the most hated village and leave his own. Then... wander, he has no thoughts of what happens afterwards. His mind is only on that one goal. Destroy Boufuugakura.

RP Sample:
Spoiler:
Source: Haku recently gave me the link, but I have been here since the beggining...



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Akatsuka Kenshi
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PostSubject: Re: Hitori Riezin   Hitori Riezin EmptyWed Jun 01, 2011 2:15 am

I'm afraid this application isn't good enough to receive Chuunin, but your roleplay sample is extraordinarily well written. If you could increase your personality and history by a couple of paragraphs, I will approve you at Chuunin.
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Hakumei Shinkirou
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PostSubject: Re: Hitori Riezin   Hitori Riezin EmptyWed Jun 01, 2011 10:47 am

Akatsuka Kenshi wrote:
I'm afraid this application isn't good enough to receive Chuunin, but your roleplay sample is extraordinarily well written. If you could increase your personality and history by a couple of paragraphs, I will approve you at Chuunin.

You better not. https://nrpgm.rpg-board.net/t1835-ranks
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Hitori Riezin
Hitori Riezin
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Ryo : 12350

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PostSubject: Re: Hitori Riezin   Hitori Riezin EmptyWed Jun 01, 2011 12:35 pm

I increased my personality and History-... So wait... do I not get chunnin n matter what?
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PostSubject: Re: Hitori Riezin   Hitori Riezin EmptyWed Jun 01, 2011 5:54 pm

Forgive me, it seems I misunderstood Tenzou when he said "same goes for the other villages," as I thought he was speaking of the exemption to the new rule.

If you wanted to become a Chuunin right off of registration, you would have to join Hyougagakure. I don't see how it would interfere with your character's personality or history, though, you just have to alter the man that took pity on Riezin's location from Arechi to Hyouga.

Let me know, though, if you want to remain in Arechi as a genin.
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Hitori Riezin
Hitori Riezin
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Ryo : 12350

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PostSubject: Re: Hitori Riezin   Hitori Riezin EmptyWed Jun 01, 2011 6:22 pm

I am fine with moving, I was just trying to avoid the ice place since I am fire based XD Still, edited.
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Akatsuka Kenshi
Akatsuka Kenshi
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Ryo : 200

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PostSubject: Re: Hitori Riezin   Hitori Riezin EmptyWed Jun 01, 2011 6:23 pm

Well, on the bright side, you could be the most skilled person in Hyouga in terms of Katon jutsu.

Approved as a Chuunin. Welcome to Hyouga.
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