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Genin
Hitori Riezin
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Fri Jun 03, 2011 11:44 pm | |
| Could I get 360 at D, if not then I will take 320 at E, that move's with his head. |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Fri Jun 03, 2011 11:52 pm | |
| The problem is this. Though it is simply eye sight, it is doujutsu. Doujutsu is strictly clan, or atleast that I have see in the anime(If Im wrong, someone point it out, Im going by my own knowledge). So if youve developed some kind of vision, youll have had to created it, meaning using a lot of chakra. to get a full 360 degrees, your looking at atleast a B rank. If you stretch the range, your even looking at A... |
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Genin
Hitori Riezin
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Fri Jun 03, 2011 11:54 pm | |
| In my history I mentioned it was a natural Gift Hitori was born with, but he does not know it it was clan or genetics.
Then I take 320 at E |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Fri Jun 03, 2011 11:57 pm | |
| Please make the edits of 320 degrees, 1.5 miles and leave the rank at E. |
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Genin
Hitori Riezin
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Sat Jun 04, 2011 12:01 am | |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Sat Jun 04, 2011 12:06 am | |
| Now, onto the last and final question. Though it is passive, does it require 5 chakra per post, and just how long does it last altogether?? |
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Genin
Hitori Riezin
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Sat Jun 04, 2011 12:07 am | |
| It costs Five chakra at the beggining of every topic, and lasts indeffinately. |
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Sat Jun 04, 2011 12:11 am | |
| Ok, 3000 ryo then. A small price to pay for the indefinite use. |
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Genin
Hitori Riezin
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Sat Jun 04, 2011 12:12 am | |
| I have no choice but to accept Do I?
Purchased.
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Genin
Dominic
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Sat Jun 04, 2011 12:26 am | |
| Ryo Deducted for Eye Sight. Add it to your tech list. - Zetzray Edrick wrote:
- Generated by Hate and Hells's power: all jutsu must have a charge time of at least 1 post and seeing as you are a Chuunin and it is a B rank it would require a 2 post charge.
- Hitori Riezin wrote:
- I know of quite a few people with automatic no handseal-no charge time jutsu. But, I changed it.
Please continue Zetzray from where you guys left off here.. |
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Genin
Zetzray Edrick
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Sat Jun 04, 2011 4:33 pm | |
| The jutsu you are talking about are passive skills these do not require charges, No normal technique skills D-S can go without charge time.
Generated by hate: You said that this technique increases all of your stats by multiplying them by 2.5, for a C rank i feel thats a bit much, you should move it up to B or lower its increases.
Hell's Power: this increases all stats by multiplying them by 3, meaning you would be three times stronger, meaning at whatever rank you are it will triple your power overall, i dont see this as a B rank. Probably an S and at the lowest an A. Ill need another jutsu Mods input on this jutsu.
Now about the tiger claws, how sharp are they? How long are they?(width and length) Are you able to use other jutsu while you have these on?
Last edited by Zetzray Edrick on Sat Jun 04, 2011 5:16 pm; edited 2 times in total |
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Genin
Hitori Riezin
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Sat Jun 04, 2011 5:07 pm | |
| Start with the last, they are claws, they stop no jutsu making. They are claws, you know exactly like tiger claws, can do nothing more than tiger claws can. They are the size of tiger claws, so barely 100mm long.
Overall, ditch the Jutsu...
I just wanted to make sure you know what claws are... |
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Genin
Zetzray Edrick
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Sat Jun 04, 2011 5:09 pm | |
| Alright, and let me just add that yes i do know what tiger claws are. But if it is a B rank jutsu i need to know just how long and sharp they are because if you use those in a fight and someone dies by them because they are as sharp as titanium steel of something they're gonna have a problem and so are you because you'll feel as if you earned that win. You need to post specifically how sharp things like claws, blades ect. are so that EVERYONE knows what they are dealing with and so you can be priced correctly. |
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Genin
Hitori Riezin
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Wed Sep 21, 2011 8:26 pm | |
| Name: Landscape Destruction Technique Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Element: N/A Type: Taijutsu Range: Long Description: Charge time of only one post. The user focuses a amount of chakra into their fist and then with a punch expels the chakra outward to create a destructive ripple or pulse. This ripple or pulse will flow for a distance depending on the amount of chakra in the fist at the point of expelling. The destruction caused is depicted to be very similar in the picture shown. It causes shown damage in a pulse outwards, travelling at 12 meters a second. If the attack hits a human being or an animal, then the chakra simply propels them forward. The distance would be half that of the pulse, and sends them flying at only 2 meters a second. The chakra propelling them the said distance. The chakra also causes small bleeding out the eyes, ears, mouth and nose to make it look like more damage has been caused then there really was. The chakra has not violent force behind it when hitting a person, causing them no harm. 30 chakra: 50 meters 40 chakra: 100 meters 50 chakra: 200 meters 60 chakra: 400 meters 70 chakra: 600 meters 80 chakra: 800 meters 90 chakra: 1 km 100 chakra: 1.2 km 110 chakra: 1.6 km 120 chakra: 1.8 km 130 chakra: 2 km 140 chakra: 2.4 km 150 chakra: 2.6 km 160 chakra: 2.8 km 170 chakra: 3km + .2 km for every more 10 chakra - Spoiler:
Last edited by Hitori Riezin on Wed Sep 21, 2011 10:57 pm; edited 2 times in total |
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Wed Sep 21, 2011 8:31 pm | |
| Quick thing first, could you fix this to follow the template. |
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Genin
Hitori Riezin
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Wed Sep 21, 2011 10:57 pm | |
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Genin
Hitori Riezin
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Wed Sep 28, 2011 9:05 pm | |
| Name: Ultimate Punch Techinque Custom/Canon Custom Rank S Element N/A Type: Taijutsu Range Long Description Requies Handseals, Or Charge time. Hitori pours chakra into an arm, this arm now is leaking a blue-ish mist. The chakra enhances the muscles in his arm to monstrous proportions, 4x its original size. Now Hitori is set for a massively destructive attack. He punches. The force emmitted causes a shockwave of pure destruction out from the fist at a 60 degree angle that travels for a kilometer. This shockwave will destroy all it comes in contact with, but it will tear up the muscles in the arm directly after use. These will heal at the end of the next topic. the Shockwave travels at 50 meters a second. During the period, the arm has no strength behind it, but can still be moved and used for chakra, to preform handseals and such. Causing extreme pain to do so.
Nothing but techniques able to block anything, a single S rank technique, or specifically made to block shockwaves, can block this technique.
This is my free S rank
Another on your plate Andy
Last edited by Hitori Riezin on Wed Sep 28, 2011 10:09 pm; edited 5 times in total |
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Wed Sep 28, 2011 9:43 pm | |
| First off fix the template, putt in proper spacing.
How fast does the shockwave travel? Can anything block/stop it? what exactly happens to a person if it connects?
Oh and LDT: approved 9k ryo. |
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Genin
Hitori Riezin
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Wed Sep 28, 2011 9:49 pm | |
| I would like to purchase LDT
And It travels at 50 meters a second, taking 20 seconds to reach its full range. No, unless stated the block can take one S rank hit, or specifically built to take shockwaves. They Die. |
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Genin
Takeshi
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Wed Sep 28, 2011 9:50 pm | |
| S rank jutsu are never allowed to be passive regardless of their type |
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Genin
Hitori Riezin
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Wed Sep 28, 2011 9:52 pm | |
| It is Not passive. He can just use it without wait. |
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Wed Sep 28, 2011 9:53 pm | |
| No instant activate S rank jutu, requires handseals or charge time. Take your pick. |
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Genin
Hitori Riezin
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Wed Sep 28, 2011 9:55 pm | |
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Seinin
Andeddo
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Wed Sep 28, 2011 9:59 pm | |
| Just edit in anything that could possibly block it, and it's speed, and I think that it's all good. |
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Genin
Hitori Riezin
| Subject: Re: Hitori Riezin (Technique Registration) Wed Sep 28, 2011 10:04 pm | |
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