The islands in Ocean Country have been celebrating the arrival of the next Umikage, Saizo. The long bridge leading to SHIPPUUGAKURE NO SATO has been closed for outsiders because they wish to celebrate this moment with Ocean Country natives only.
As usual, the Storm Country has been hosting the Asgard Games to welcome their Kanetsukage, Cornelia. It's a double special occasion because Cornelia is also the first female Kanetsukage. She has been picked for her courage, loyalty and outstanding power by the BOUFUUGAKURE NO SATO elders.
Not only that, but the Cherry Blossom Country has become relieved as well. It seems that everyone is slowly picking up after the war now. KUSAMURAGAKURE NO SATO proudly presented their new Sakurakage, Altair.
TSUKIGAKURE NO SATO is still thriving on the merchants coming in and out. They have not experienced anything special lately. Their wealth has remained the same as they were not forced to invest into shinobi unlike the others.
On the cold isles of the Blizzard Country, HYOUGAGAKURE NO SATO has still refused to create a free traveling policy. Some habits never change. To protect their traditions, they have even warned outsiders to not interfere with their matters.
Now that everyone is picking up again, who will come out on top?
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Subject: Shy (Technique Registration) Fri Mar 11, 2011 4:17 pm
No pricing. All credits go to Kienshin for creating the medical ninjutsu.
E (3/~)
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Name: Chakra Scrub [Chakra no Sukurabu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: E Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: This jutsu uses chakra to clean off bacteria and other foreign elements from an object, causing it to become sterile enough to use for medical purposes.
Name: Life Preservation Technique [Ichimei Hoyou no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: E Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: This jutsu is causes a small amount of chakra to cycle through the patient. The chakra spreads to all the bodily systems and smoothes everything out. Bodily temperature is regulated, blood flows better and the patient can breath better. This is only a temporary cure, however, as after the jutsu ends the patient will quickly relapse.
Name: Quarantine Technique [Shadan no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: E Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Short-range (0-15m) Description: Requires handseals. This jutsu utilized a large circular seal. The seal prevents things like diseases, bacteria, and other form of sicknesses from entering or exiting the quarantined area. This jutsu does not prevent things like people or animals from entering or leaving the area, however, and it is not 100% foolproof.
D (6/14)
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Name: Chakra Scalpel [Chakra no Mesu] Rank: D Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Short-range (0m - 2m) Description: This medical technique forms one's chakra into a small, sharp blade. This can then be used for highly accurate incisions necessary for surgeries and anatomical dissections. Unlike regular scalpels, the chakra scalpel can actually make cuts inside the body without actually creating an open wound, limiting the risks of an infection. The chakra scalpel can also be used offensively, although it requires great precision to be effective. Because of this requirement, using the Chakra Scalpel offensively is highly unusual. It can effectively cut muscle tissues and tendons, rendering the target immobile.
Name: Circle of Healing [Chiyu no En] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: The user lays out a large mat with various seals inscribed on it. An outline of a human body with two large circles at the head and a map of the anatomy are the most predominant features. The medic places his hands in the circles and has the victim lie down. Once chakra is forced through the seal, it configures the chakra to act in a similar fashion to the healing hand technique.
Name: Fleshbinding Technique [Ikimi Baindingu no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: This jutsu causes the skin of the victim to stretch, grow, and fuse together over cuts and bruises. The chakra is also very hot, and is commonly used to cauterize a wound as well. Unfortunately, this jutsu is, at best, a temporary fix and is only suitable to take care of bruises or cuts. Large gashes are outside of this jutsu's ability, and the use of this jutsu doesn't mean you shouldn't go to the hospital
Name: Fleshrending Technique [Ikimi Tekiyaku no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: A medical ninja's number one priority is the safety of his or her team. While this is normally accomplished through healing, some ninja learn that the best way to make sure that his or her allies aren't harmed is to take out the opponents. Those ninja learn how to reverse jutsu such as the Fleshbinding Technique to cause harm. This jutsu in particular sends out a wave of chakra over the opponent's skin with a touch, causing minor cuts and bruises in a large area. The learning of such techniques is forbidden in most professional academies and frowned upon by most medical nin. The damage is 2x the size of a hand, the cuts are 2 inch deep on various locations of within the "twice the hand size palm" radius. Furthermore, it creates bruises within that radius too.
Name: Numbing Technique [Jinto no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: As its name suggests, this jutsu acts as a local anesthetic, numbing the nerves around an area and dulling one's sense of pain. This jutsu is generally proffered to narcotics on the battlefield since it doesn't hinder the mind. This can be used by the user on himself without putting his hand on the certain position. If used on someone else then it must be used as the healing palm.
Name: Poison Isolation Technique [Gekiyaku Kakuzetsu no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: This jutsu temporarily prevents the effects of poison by controlling and filtering blood as it moves through the patient's body. After the technique ends, then the poison affects the patient normally.
C (4/13)
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Name: Circle of Restoration [Bankai no En] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: The user lays out a large tarp that contains two small ornamental circles in which the user lays his hands, which are connected to a large circle in which the patient lays down. The user focuses chakra into the seals and into the patient. The chakra seeks out the major bodily functions and gradually performs minor surgical feats. In the same time, the chakra also promotes natural healing. 1st post repairs the muscle tissue returning 25%, 2nd post strengthens the muscle back to 75%, and third post closes the skin back over the muscle and repairs it at 100%. Open wounds up to the muscle without the muscle getting damaged get repaired nicely and only requires one post.
Name: Muscle Seeker [Zuiikin Shiikaa no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: Upon physical contact the user can send chakra to the surrounding muscles, causing them to spasm and cramp. This makes moving that muscle difficult and painful, but causes no lasting damage. Hinders opponent 35%, lasts four posts and has a four post cooldown.
Name: Physical Stimulant Technique [Zuiikin Yobimizu no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: The user touches the patient and sends a small amount of chakra into the brain. The chakra causes the release of endorphins and adrenalin, inducing a fight or flight response. This gives the patient a small power boost. The power boost will increase the reflexes, strength and speed to a 150% of the patient's own capabilities. Lasts four posts and has a four post cooldown.
Name: Anatomic Analysis Skill [Kaibougaku Aneraiza no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: Requires one post charge. After making physical contact, the user sends weak chakra pulses throughout the body. The chakra has no direction but instead follows along the patient's body normally. The pulses can then be read, giving a detailed analysis of the patient's body. Although performing the actual technique is very easy, reading the feedback is feat only trained professionals can accomplish. Three times per topic use and 4 post cooldown in between.
B (6/11)
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Name: Circle of Regeneration [Taisha no En] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: The user places the patient within a large circle and places his hands in two smaller circles located close by. A biological medium (such as hair) is taken from the user and strung from the user to the patient. Chakra is moved through the seal and medium to the wounds of the victim, restoring them with great efficiency, even to the point of reattaching limbs. More elaborate versions of this jutsu utilizing multiple medical ninja at once have been known to exist. 1st post 50% major healing, 2nd post 80% major healing and 3rd post would be 100% major healing. Everything can be healed except for the heart. Six post cooldown.
Name: Healing Wave Technique [Chiyu Shuuha no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Mid to Long-range Description: One post charge. While the healing hand technique is the choice of most medical ninja, sometimes the patient simply can't be gotten to in time to be healed. In those instances, this technique is used to heal them from afar. This jutsu focuses chakra into the hands of the user and then projects it towards the patient. While this jutsu is just as efficient at healing as the healing hands technique, this jutsu does cost considerably more chakra. 1st post stops bleeding (closes damages capillaries/veins/arteries 2nd post starts healing muscle tissue 3rd post completes muscle healing and beings surrounding tissue healing 4th post competes tissue healing 5th post strengthens tissue, muscle, and overall injury healing 6th post completes healing completely. This technique can only be used within 35 yards, if the target is even a single inch outside that range, this jutsu dies out. The user has to press both his index fingers together and thumbs together with his palms open. Five post cooldown.
Name: Harvest of Life [Karitoru Itonami no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: Considered an abomination of a technique by most in the medical profession, this jutsu uses touch to transmit some of the user's chakra into the victim, after which the chakra seeks out and sucks the energy out of the victim's cells. That energy is transmitted back into the user, were it is used to regenerate his own body. It takes out 20% of the opponent's body and gives it to the user. The opponent would get 20% slower, weaker etc while the user would rejuvenate and heal wounds up to large cuts, open gashes, ripped muscles and gain back some stamina. Five post cooldown.
Name: Physical Transformation Technique [Kenkoubi Henjiru no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: This jutsu utilizes an altered form of the Healing Hands Technique to change the patient's appearance. In effect, the user rewrites how the patient is healed, so that he or she is regenerated in a new fashion as to change their physical appearance. Size, skin and hair tone can all be changed, although nothing as drastic such as the addition of limbs can be added, but height and weight can be altered. The changes made by this jutsu are completely real, not illusionary or fake in any way.
Name: Purification technique [Kakusei no jutsu] [Kakusei no jutsu Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: An advanced medical technique, this jutsu uses the chakra to delve into the patient's body where it freely seeks out, isolates, and removes toxins and other alien forces from the body. The jutsu removes poison and the effect of it.
Name: Tranquilization Technique [Annonbuji no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: This jutsu uses chakra to break down the chakra and nervous system temporarily. The breakdown renders the muscles around the area touched unable to move for a short amount of time. To be more precise this actually disables the limb that has been touched.
A (4/7)
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Name: Cellular Degeneration [Akka no Saibou] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: A Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: Through physical contact, the user sends a wave of chakra through the victim's body. The wave of chakra breaks down cells into simple chemicals, literally rotting the part of the body touched and a large area around it. Both incredibly painful and devastating, this jutsu is considered forbidden do to the inhumane way in which it destroys its victims. One post charge up. Two times per topic. 10 post cooldown. First post, infects halfway through the muscle and immobility is at 55%. On the second post, the full effect has, bone is visible.
Name: Chakra Poisoning Technique [Chakra Gekiyaku no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: A Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: By using a touch as medium, an experienced medical-nin can place some of his or her chakra into the victim. The chakra flows through the victim's inner coil system naturally until he attempts to use his chakra to perform a jutsu. When that happens the user's chakra reacts violently with the victim's, causing a major disruption within the person's body that not only cancels the intended jutsu, but also causes an extreme amount of stress on the victim's body. the effect wears off after ten posts. Lasts six posts and can be used once per topic.
Name: Emergency Provisions Technique [Fuji Junbi no Jusu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: A Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: Passive. Many times a medical ninja isn't given enough time to properly heal someone. It's in those cases that this jutsu is used. By forming an extra amount of chakra, the user is able to perform two additional medical jutsu simultaneously. The user can even perform the same medical jutsu twice. Two times per topic use and ten post cooldown.
Name: Strength of my Enemy [Ada Dairiki no Jutsu] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: A Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Description: The use of this jutsu is considered taboo to most medical nins. Through physical contact, the user places a small amount of chakra into the victim's body. The chakra seeks out the muscles and takes their energy before returning to the user and using that energy to strengthen his own muscles. In effect, this jutsu saps the strength and physical abilities of the victim and implants it upon the user. The added strength dissipates from the user after a while, but the damage to the victim lasts until he or she rests to regain strength or is healed. Takes away 2/3 of the opponent's strength and gives that to the user.
S (1/5)
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Name: Cellular Regeneration [Saisei no Saibou] Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: S Element: None Type: Medical Ninjutsu Range: Close-range Cooldown expiration: 2 weeks Description: A ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses all of their chakra into one part of their body to completely negate every damage ever done. The chakra activates the natural regeneration of the body's cellular makeup, repairing the damage. One is even able to make a lost limb appear instantly. What makes this technique special is the rate it heals is out of the ordinary, it instantly heals. (Yeah, like Piccolo.)
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Circle of Life Preservation: How much chakra does it actually use?
This tech sucks, I deleted it.
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Fleshbending Technique: How large/deep does a cut have to be before this technique is not useful?
It doesn't matter how deep since the fleshbinding will just bind the flesh where it has been struck, not the insides. I'd say it can bind till the point the wound is 6 inch.
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Fleshrending Technique: I need to know how large the area is and how large/deep the cuts can be.
2x the size of a hand, the cuts are 2 inch deep on various locations of within the "twice the hand size palm" radius. Furthermore, it creates bruises within that radius too.
Circle of Restoration - what are some of the surgical procedures that can be performed? At C rank, I would say muscle repair isn't out of the question. It all depends on what your looking for. However at C rank, I don't see it going past muscle repair. What is the duration and how much can be done during each post as the surgery is performed?
Muscle Seeker - How much of the body does it cover when sending the body into muscular cramping? Give a percentage on how much the enemy is hindered. At c rank, I say around 20%. Charge time and cooldown.
Muscle Stimulant - needs a charge time, duration and cooldown. 150% is equivalent to 2.5x increase. Maybe at that in so that people who aren't mathmatically gifted have something to go by.
Circle of Restoration - what are some of the surgical procedures that can be performed? At C rank, I would say muscle repair isn't out of the question. It all depends on what your looking for. However at C rank, I don't see it going past muscle repair. What is the duration and how much can be done during each post as the surgery is performed?
Well muscles getting repaired, open wounds getting closed nicely.
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Muscle Seeker - How much of the body does it cover when sending the body into muscular cramping? Give a percentage on how much the enemy is hindered. At c rank, I say around 20%. Charge time and cooldown.
Well it makes moving it difficult and painful so I'd say 50%, C-rank charge up time and has a cooldown of four posts.
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Muscle Stimulant - needs a charge time, duration and cooldown. 150% is equivalent to 2.5x increase. Maybe at that in so that people who aren't mathmatically gifted have something to go by.
You mean 1.5x right? If so then yeah I'll add that in.
Circle of Restoration - Yup, as long as you are ok with it, muscle repair is as far as it goes, but requires three posts to fully repair. 1st post repairs the muscle tissue returning 25%, 2nd post strengthens the muscle back to 75%, and third post closes the skin back over the muscle and repairs it at 100%. Open wounds up to the muscle without the muscle getting damaged as you say, get repaired nicely and only requires one post. The percentages ensure that if you are attacked in mid healing the patient understands their limit with their wounds.
Muscle Seeker - At 50% it would be more B Rank in my opinion. So let's meet halfway and say 35% which is still signifigant at C rank. I take it that the entire body begins to cramp so that means there is no certain area you have to touch. The last thing I would need is how long it lasted. If your cooldown is four, it can last up to four posts as well.
Physical Stimulant - Yea 1.5x, sorry for the type error on my phone. Still need to know how long it lasts, charge time, and cooldown.
Anatomic Analysis - When sending this into your opponent, I understand the concept, but what would it actually accomplish? Is this a sort of jutsu that helps you 'read' into how your opponent is holding things/ running/ jumping/ landing in terms of with tension and weight on the joints, tendons, ligaments etc.?
Circle of Restoration - Yup, as long as you are ok with it, muscle repair is as far as it goes, but requires three posts to fully repair. 1st post repairs the muscle tissue returning 25%, 2nd post strengthens the muscle back to 75%, and third post closes the skin back over the muscle and repairs it at 100%. Open wounds up to the muscle without the muscle getting damaged as you say, get repaired nicely and only requires one post. The percentages ensure that if you are attacked in mid healing the patient understands their limit with their wounds.
Looks good, I'll add that in, though I'll add in everything once we're completely done.
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Muscle Seeker - At 50% it would be more B Rank in my opinion. So let's meet halfway and say 35% which is still signifigant at C rank. I take it that the entire body begins to cramp so that means there is no certain area you have to touch. The last thing I would need is how long it lasted. If your cooldown is four, it can last up to four posts as well.
Four posts aye.
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Physical Stimulant - Yea 1.5x, sorry for the type error on my phone. Still need to know how long it lasts, charge time, and cooldown.
C-rank charge up? Four posts activated, four posts cool down?
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Anatomic Analysis - When sending this into your opponent, I understand the concept, but what would it actually accomplish? Is this a sort of jutsu that helps you 'read' into how your opponent is holding things/ running/ jumping/ landing in terms of with tension and weight on the joints, tendons, ligaments etc.?
No, it tells me everything about their conditions. So lets say he got infected by something in his leg and he doesn't know what's going on, I could use this jutsu to determine the what's going on and where. It allows me to read everything in his body for medical purposes.
All three jutsu above Anatomic Analysis are approved.
Anatomic Analysis - Ok, now that I have this correct in what it does, I would say that requires a one post charge to activate, and that is all. Should there be a limit to how many problems you can locate? I say no, due to the limited chakra pool, but bringing it up for technical purposes. Three times per topic use and 5 post cooldown inbetween.
After this is concluded, we will dive into the b rank.
Anatomic Analysis - Ok, now that I have this correct in what it does, I would say that requires a one post charge to activate, and that is all. Should there be a limit to how many problems you can locate? I say no, due to the limited chakra pool, but bringing it up for technical purposes. Three times per topic use and 5 post cooldown inbetween.
No limit, if somebody has a broken leg, torn muscles in his neck and an infection somewhere, I can trace it all. Three times per topic sure. What about a four post cooldown?
To keep it consistent with the other C ranks, 4 is fine.
Onto B Rank.
Circle of Regeneration - So this is a more advanced version of the Circle of Restoration I assume. The same rule still applies, and the hair acts as a DNA medium for the jutsu. Since it is higher rank, the same steps apply as previous, only with more proficiency. Reconnects the lost tendons, cartilage, ligaments, and veins that connect the arm VIA joints etc. This step the limb or area has 50% usage due to the DNA medium from the user. Second post, restores muscle tissue at a rapid pace, thus restoring 80% usage and the area. Third post, area is completely healed including internal organs except for the heart. The internal organs other than the heart or lungs can have a stab all the way through from a sword and be repaired but a ruptured organ is still too complex for this stage I would assume.
Healing Wave - charge time. Duration and cooldown? An exact range would probably be necessary for this, and does the person healing have to be standing still to heal? Not only that, up to what proficiency can it heal? I feel as though with your focus from afar it will be exactly the same as the jutsu it models, and the only reason you need the wxtra chakra is for the considerable range.
Subject: Re: Shy (Technique Registration) Wed Aug 10, 2011 1:05 am
Harvest of Life - Somehow, you'll have to be able to restructure this technique and make it say that it doesn't add to the chakra pool. This would most likely be a Four post process as well. Also, what would be the maximum healing power?
First Post - You send the the chakra and it begins to work. During this time, you only have a short time to defend yourself.
Second post - A retouch is allowed as Chakra finishes, then you begin sucking back into your own body.
(If anytime between the second and third post, your disconnected by an attack, the jutsu forfeits. Only if the enemy is good enough to make it impossible to dodge an attack.)
Third post - You recieve it fully and your individual healing process begins.
Fourth post - Your fully healed.
Physical Transformation Technique - Only if the user is willing on this one. To have control over someone's appearance is almost as bad as being able to auto hit, or mind alter. It would overly piss off a member and potentially leading to them quitting...
Circle of Regeneration - So this is a more advanced version of the Circle of Restoration I assume. The same rule still applies, and the hair acts as a DNA medium for the jutsu. Since it is higher rank, the same steps apply as previous, only with more proficiency. Reconnects the lost tendons, cartilage, ligaments, and veins that connect the arm VIA joints etc. This step the limb or area has 50% usage due to the DNA medium from the user. Second post, restores muscle tissue at a rapid pace, thus restoring 80% usage and the area. Third post, area is completely healed including internal organs except for the heart. The internal organs other than the heart or lungs can have a stab all the way through from a sword and be repaired but a ruptured organ is still too complex for this stage I would assume.
1st post 50% major healing like you just said, 2nd post 80% major healing and 3rd post would be 100% major healing. Everything except for the heart aye?
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Healing Wave - charge time. Duration and cooldown? An exact range would probably be necessary for this, and does the person healing have to be standing still to heal? Not only that, up to what proficiency can it heal? I feel as though with your focus from afar it will be exactly the same as the jutsu it models, and the only reason you need the wxtra chakra is for the considerable range.
I'd say one post charge. Furthermore it's exactly like the healing hand technique which I'm not sure if we already have registered on the forum but I'd like to use the approved version of that technique if we have it, if not I'll come up with a a healing rate, duration and cooldown. Could you give a good range?
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Harvest of Life - Somehow, you'll have to be able to restructure this technique and make it say that it doesn't add to the chakra pool. This would most likely be a Four post process as well. Also, what would be the maximum healing power?
First Post - You send the the chakra and it begins to work. During this time, you only have a short time to defend yourself.
Second post - A retouch is allowed as Chakra finishes, then you begin sucking back into your own body.
(If anytime between the second and third post, your disconnected by an attack, the jutsu forfeits. Only if the enemy is good enough to make it impossible to dodge an attack.)
Third post - You recieve it fully and your individual healing process begins.
Fourth post - Your fully healed.
It doesn't give me back any chakra ofc haha. Lets say it takes out 20% of my opponent's body and gives it to me. So he'd get 20% slower, weaker etc while I would rejuvenate and heal wounds up to large cuts, open gashes, ripped muscles and gain back some stamina. Harvest of Life, like the technique is called.
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Physical Transformation Technique - Only if the user is willing on this one. To have control over someone's appearance is almost as bad as being able to auto hit, or mind alter. It would overly piss off a member and potentially leading to them quitting...
I can't pat their head and change their appearance haha, I need to move my hands over them to change their appearance which means they're either co-operating or they're knocked out. I was planning on using this to change somebody's appearance to make things interesting, or as a punishment when somebody got defeated.
> An Akatsuki member approaches me and requests me to change his appearance for a nice sum, he can't enter Shippuu anymore after his last encounter. With his new appearance, that of a nine year old boy, he could enter Shippuu and RP with the Umikage and perhaps even gain his trust. When the time is right he could reveal his true identity.
> Somebody gets defeated by me, I feel like they should be punished somehow but I don't want to kill them. I could change their appearance to a younger version of themselves. Which would be quite funny if you think about it, he would get treated as a kid suddenly while he is still the same person. Yeah, like GT (I didn't even like GT).
Subject: Re: Shy (Technique Registration) Thu Aug 11, 2011 12:28 am
Circle of Regeneration - All it needs now is a cooldown.
Healing wave - ok, here is Natsuki's version that I approved
Dominic Edrick wrote:
Name: (Shousen No Jutsu) Mystical Palm Technique Canon/Custom: canon Rank: D Element: n/a Type: medical Range: short Description: A basic medical jutsu used to heal another shinobi or the medical-nin after being inflicted a basic outer or internal injury Heals both minor internal and external wounds Chakara usage of 15 points Ex: 1st post stops bleeding (closes damages capillaries/veins/arteries 2nd post starts healing muscle tissue 3rd post completes muscle healing and beings surrounding tissue healing 4th post competes tissue healing 5th post strengthens tissue, muscle, and overall injury healing 6th post completes healing completely (complete healing uses up to 100 points total)
For B Rank, I would say a 35 yards isn't out of the question. However, even a single inch outside that range, this jutsu dies out. In order to keep this justifiable in terms of usage, the user has to press both his index fingers together and thumbs together with his palms open. The 'Circle' area created from where the fingers touch, is where you have to place the one you intend to heal. If your confused, I'll go as far as putting a pic together for you as to what i mean. Lol.
Harvest of Life - Ok edit that in. Cooldown if not already stated.
Physical Transformation - Well then yeah, I guess so. If they lose to you then so be it, that I can live with. However, only you can beat them and do this. I don't want to push the boundaries too far and allow every victor to drag a body back to you. It'll be punishment by fighting u and losing. The rest is ok. (Yes, even I was pissed off a GT)
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Circle of Regeneration - All it needs now is a cooldown.
Six posts?
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For B Rank, I would say a 35 yards isn't out of the question. However, even a single inch outside that range, this jutsu dies out. In order to keep this justifiable in terms of usage, the user has to press both his index fingers together and thumbs together with his palms open. The 'Circle' area created from where the fingers touch, is where you have to place the one you intend to heal. If your confused, I'll go as far as putting a pic together for you as to what i mean. Lol.
I'll go with the healing hand tech + 35 yards + the hand motion.
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Harvest of Life - Ok edit that in. Cooldown if not already stated.
Five posts?
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Physical Transformation - Well then yeah, I guess so. If they lose to you then so be it, that I can live with. However, only you can beat them and do this. I don't want to push the boundaries too far and allow every victor to drag a body back to you. It'll be punishment by fighting u and losing. The rest is ok. (Yes, even I was pissed off a GT)
Subject: Re: Shy (Technique Registration) Thu Aug 11, 2011 2:05 am
Cellular Degeneration - At A rank, it will be able to cover a large portion of the body in which it touches. I'll go as high as saying a 9 inch x 9 inch areaaround your touch. I'll need to know how deep you intend to let the rotting go into the flesh. At A rank, most likely right to the bone, then I'll need just how bad it reduces the use of the area you infect. Two times per topic. 10 post cooldown. Charge time?
Chakra Poisoning Tech - Even at A rank, for this particular effect, 7 post duration is more suitable. Just like most other A rank jutsu, an S rank technique being used will negate this jutsu, and ONLY an S rank. No other. Twice per topic use, 10 post cooldown. Charge time of two posts for this one inparticular.
Emergency Provision Technique - Looking at this, it compares to using special items to up a jutsu's rank in power. I need some kind of my own clearance. Your saying that you can use a technique twice simultaneoulsy and even bypass cooldown times?
Strength of my enemy - Let's talk numbers. Up to how much using percentages can you remove from your enemy? At A rank, the number can be over 50%, but I need to see where you want it.
Reactive Regeneration - So this is pretty much putting chakra into them to act as a regeneration before hand. I'll need to know up to how severe of wounds it can heal, and if the healing process goes over the coarse of multiple posts. At A rank, damage to even the heart is possible, but not if the heart is completely penetrated. It needs a duration. Only once per topic. I feel also that this made need a multiple topic cooldown due to its power atm. Maybe clearing some things up may change that.
Subject: Re: Shy (Technique Registration) Thu Aug 11, 2011 2:41 am
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Cellular Degeneration - At A rank, it will be able to cover a large portion of the body in which it touches. I'll go as high as saying a 9 inch x 9 inch areaaround your touch. I'll need to know how deep you intend to let the rotting go into the flesh. At A rank, most likely right to the bone, then I'll need just how bad it reduces the use of the area you infect. Two times per topic. 10 post cooldown. Charge time?
One post charge up. Two times per topic. 10 post cooldown. To the bone. Well, I guess it would most likely disable it if it's to the bone xD
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Chakra Poisoning Tech - Even at A rank, for this particular effect, 7 post duration is more suitable. Just like most other A rank jutsu, an S rank technique being used will negate this jutsu, and ONLY an S rank. No other. Twice per topic use, 10 post cooldown. Charge time of two posts for this one inparticular.
7 Post duration. Two posts? o-o It's just an A-rank tech with an A-rank charge up, right? The Xanadu technique also seals away the primary element with a one post charge up. If it would be negated by a S-ranked the whole idea of the tech would be gone, anything we could do to make it work?
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Emergency Provision Technique - Looking at this, it compares to using special items to up a jutsu's rank in power. I need some kind of my own clearance. Your saying that you can use a technique twice simultaneoulsy and even bypass cooldown times?
It allows me to perform certain Medical Ninjutsu with one hand instead of two, allowed me to use Healing Palm x2, yes it would cost two times the chakra but also increase the healing speed two times. Makes sense for a S-rank master doctor to have something interesting like that.
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Strength of my enemy - Let's talk numbers. Up to how much using percentages can you remove from your enemy? At A rank, the number can be over 50%, but I need to see where you want it.
75%? Turning his strength into 25% and mine to 175%. Yeah, jokes on you for making fun of a doctor huh *punches a he-man opponent*
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Reactive Regeneration - So this is pretty much putting chakra into them to act as a regeneration before hand. I'll need to know up to how severe of wounds it can heal, and if the healing process goes over the coarse of multiple posts. At A rank, damage to even the heart is possible, but not if the heart is completely penetrated. It needs a duration. Only once per topic. I feel also that this made need a multiple topic cooldown due to its power atm. Maybe clearing some things up may change that.
Subject: Re: Shy (Technique Registration) Thu Aug 11, 2011 3:01 am
Cellular Degeneration - The reason for asking about how that would work, is bc now that I know the full effects, a two post process. First post, infects halfway through the muscle and immobility is at 55%. On the second post, the full effect has happened, and the body is screwed. Only an equal or higher Ijutsu can negate these effects.
Chakra Poisoning Tech - We can come back to this one, but I will work with you on it. I may have looked too deep into it.
Emergency Provision Technique - Ok, I understand now. I suppose activation with this can be passive, since it the cost is so much, but the cost of the jutsu your using doubles as well. 2 times per topic use, 10 post cooldown.
Strength of my enemy - Hmm, a fine line at 66.7% would suffice for me. Did I just see you take down He-Man?! O.o
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Cellular Degeneration - The reason for asking about how that would work, is bc now that I know the full effects, a two post process. First post, infects halfway through the muscle and immobility is at 55%. On the second post, the full effect has happened, and the body is screwed. Only an equal or higher Ijutsu can negate these effects.
Two post process is cool.
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Emergency Provision Technique - Ok, I understand now. I suppose activation with this can be passive, since it the cost is so much, but the cost of the jutsu your using doubles as well. 2 times per topic use, 10 post cooldown.
Alright man.
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Strength of my enemy - Hmm, a fine line at 66.7% would suffice for me. Did I just see you take down He-Man?! O.o
Opponent suddenly has 1/3 strength and I get 2/3 of his strength for a while. Yeah, just an example, the stronger my enemy is the cooler this technique is for me.
Subject: Re: Shy (Technique Registration) Thu Aug 11, 2011 9:15 am
Ok, back to this chakrs poison technique - I suppose the cancelling of jutsu upon its activation isn't bad, but what worries me is the lasting for ten posts part. Will the user be so disrupted that he or she cannot use jutsu at all for those ten posts? I'm ok with that if that's what your wanting, however, it is by far an incredible S Rank tech, not an A. At A rank, I still see the user surging an S Rank jutsu through to eliminate the effects. This is your call. Perfection will require it to be S Rank.
Ok, back to this chakrs poison technique - I suppose the cancelling of jutsu upon its activation isn't bad, but what worries me is the lasting for ten posts part. Will the user be so disrupted that he or she cannot use jutsu at all for those ten posts? I'm ok with that if that's what your wanting, however, it is by far an incredible S Rank tech, not an A. At A rank, I still see the user surging an S Rank jutsu through to eliminate the effects. This is your call. Perfection will require it to be S Rank.
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