| Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) | |
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Genin
Takeshi
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Thu Jan 05, 2012 12:43 am | |
| Ah, Im just blind then lol
Blood Wings; 6,500 ryo |
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Seinin
Haru
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Thu Jan 05, 2012 12:47 am | |
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Genin
Takeshi
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Thu Jan 05, 2012 12:49 am | |
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Seinin
Haru
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Sat Jan 07, 2012 7:14 am | |
| Name: Secret Art of the Atsusakage: Devastating Dive Bomb Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Element: N/A Type: Taijutsu Range: Close Description: Passive. To use this technique, Haru must be using the Bloodwings skill. He flys 100 feet into the air, then turns around and begins accelerating at a rapid pace toward the ground. Like the peregrine falcon, he accelerates to the ground at speeds upward of 120 MPH, breaking bones, bruising muscle, and bruising organs. When impacted the ground explodes into a 6 foot crater. 6 post cool down. |
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Seinin
Haru
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Mon Jan 09, 2012 10:13 pm | |
| Bump on Dive Bomb Requesting to take the 8 inner gates spot of Synyster Kenshou because of his lack of activity - Spoiler:
Name: Eight Inner Gates Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: A Element: n/a Type: Taijutsu Range: self Description: The Eight Gates are eight specific points on a person's Chakra Pathway System. They limit the overall flow of chakra within a person's body. The basis for the idea of the chakra gates comes from the body's limits on the functions within it. This makes the body much weaker, but it keeps the body from expiring too soon. By opening these gates, the user can surpass their own physical limits at the cost of extreme damage to their own bodies.The state of having all Eight Gates open is known as Eight Gates Released Formation (八門遁甲の陣, Hachimon Tonkō no Jin; English TV "Eight Inner Gates Formation"). Any shinobi who activates this state will temporarily gain powers greater than a Kage, but they will die because of the damage done to their body. While the gates are active the use of taijutsu moves does not deplete the users chakra pool but they are limited to the use of up to two B rank or lower taijutsu per round or one A rank or above.
The Gate of Opening (開門, Kaimon), located in the brain. This gate removes the restraints of the brain on the muscles allowing twice the normal strength of the body of the user. Unlocking this gate allows the user to use the Front Lotus.
The Gate of Healing (休門, Kyūmon; English TV "The Gate of Rest"), located in the brain. Forcibly increases one's physical strength and temporarily re-energizes the body. Opening this gate allows the user to restore half of the overall chakra pool after it has been open for a round.
The Gate of Life (生門, Seimon), located on the spinal cord. Allows the user to use the Reverse Lotus. The increased blood flow turns the skin red. It allows the user to perform the Leaf Hot Wind.
The Gate of Pain (傷門, Shōmon), located on the spinal cord. Increases the user's speed and power. May cause muscle tissue to tear on use.
The Gate of Limit (杜門, Tomon; English TV "The Gate of Closing"), per above. Located in the abdomen.
The Gate of View (景門, Keimon; English TV "The Gate of Joy"), per above. Located in the stomach. Allows the user to perform the Morning Peacock. Opening of this gate releases such large amounts of chakra that it can cause nearby water bodies to form a vortex around the user.
The Gate of Wonder (驚門, Kyōmon; English TV "The Gate of Shock"), per above. Located below the stomach. Allows the user to perform the Daytime Tiger. Those who open this gate pour glowing green sweat from every inch of their body, which immediately evaporates from their own heat energy, creating an aura which people would mistake as a green chakra coating. In the video games, allows the user to perform the Eternal Chaotic Dance. The aftereffects of opening the gate are that the users muscle fibers are ripped to shreds, causing intense pain if anything or anyone touches him.
The Gate of Death (死門, Shimon), located at the heart. Releasing this gate uses up all of the body's energy. It makes the heart pump at maximum power and exceeds the power of every other gate. Opening this gate assures the user's death shortly after. (Must be S rank to open)
As each gate opens in addition to opening the use of each technique the user's power and speed are increased at a drastic rate, the actual rate is as follows:
Gate #1. +100% Gate #2. +150% Gate #3. +200% Gate #4. +250% Gate #5. +300% Gate #6. +350% Gate #7. +400% Gate #8. +500%
In order to activate this jutsu it costs the normal amount for an A rank jutsu (40cp), to keep the gate you are using open you must pay 10cp per round however if you wish to open the next gate in line it will cost an additional 10cp (so on rounds where new gate is opened overall cost is 20cp). If the user falls to the point where they have no chakra left when the gates are disabled then they are subject to having their body seriously injured, how badly follows as such:
If the chakra pool ran out and you went up to the...
First Gate: No noticeable damage other than muscle soreness
Second Gate: Intense Fatigue, moves at half speed for three posts
Third Gate: Intense Fatigue, moves at half speed for five posts
Fourth Gate: Muscle Tearing, Muscles are torn and the user cannot freely move until a healing topic has taken place (Healing topic: 500 words minimum)
Fifth Gate: Muscle Tearing, Muscles are torn and the user cannot freely move until a healing topic has taken place (Healing topic: 1000 words minimum)
Sixth Gate: Muscle Tearing, Muscles are torn and the user cannot freely move until a healing topic has taken place (Healing topic: 1500 words minimum)
Seventh Gate: Muscle Tearing, Muscles are torn and the user cannot freely move until a healing topic has taken place (Healing topic: 2000 words minimum)
Eighth Gate: Death, using the final gate will kill the user but they are free to use it until their chakra runs out.
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Genin
Takeshi
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:08 am | |
| Impact; your description is a tad vague. Are you breaking your own body in the dive or is that the damage to those hit?
And approved, Synyster is refunded and Haru is granted gates, how many will you be purchasing to start? |
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Seinin
Haru
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:12 am | |
| First Gate for 5000
Impact is to the target, not my own body, I am unscathed when I use this. |
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Genin
Takeshi
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:15 am | |
| Ryo deducted
Hmm, I would think that you slamming into something at 120 mph would cause some form of damage to your body |
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Seinin
Haru
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:19 am | |
| The wings take the brunt of the force. It would be more like a big ass headache for me, but nothing more than 3 posts of alot of dizziness |
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Genin
Takeshi
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Tue Jan 10, 2012 3:22 am | |
| ah alright, Tappaja has techs with a daze effect so we can use that to make it easy. While in the dazed state you have 75% of your awareness (meaning a 25% drop). And if the wings take the force do they disappear after this is used? |
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Seinin
Haru
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Tue Jan 10, 2012 9:25 pm | |
| I wouldn't say they are forced to go away, but it halves the time the can be used. |
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Seinin
Haru
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Sat Jan 14, 2012 8:54 pm | |
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Genin
Takeshi
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Sat Jan 14, 2012 10:23 pm | |
| so if you had spent half of your usage already they would go away right? |
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Seinin
Haru
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Sun Jan 15, 2012 5:58 pm | |
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Genin
Takeshi
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Sun Jan 15, 2012 7:56 pm | |
| alright then, how high is the fatality rate of this jutsu? Meaning when you hit someone what are the odds of surviving. |
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Seinin
Haru
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Sun Jan 15, 2012 11:34 pm | |
| I'd say it would have a medium rate of death. Breaks bones, rupture organs etc |
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Genin
Takeshi
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Mon Jan 16, 2012 12:15 am | |
| Hmm, B ranks normally dont kill unless you add certain conditions like slamming into them then them into something else like spikes. If the sheer power of the slam can kill then it may need a rank up |
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Seinin
Haru
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Sat Jan 21, 2012 10:51 pm | |
| Scrubbing the technique, does almost the same things as the Frontal Lotus, so I can just get that instead |
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Genin
Takeshi
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Sun Jan 22, 2012 7:06 am | |
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Seinin
Haru
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Sun Feb 12, 2012 4:07 am | |
| Name: Shikage Art: Bloodmist Sensory Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C Element: N/A Type: Ninjutsu Range: 0-75 meters Description: Passive. Haru bites his tongue and expels a fine, transparent mist of blood that expands to 75 meters in diameter. This mist takes one post to completely expand. Once this mist has expanded, the chakra flowing through the mist, allows Haru to sense breaks in the mist. During use visibilty is reduced to 75%. The blood does no harm to opponent. The blood from this jutsu cannot be used for other blood jutsu until it ends. This jutsu lasts for 20 posts and has a 10 post cool down. The mist can be evaporated my any katon jutsu.
Last edited by Haru Satsujin on Sun Feb 12, 2012 4:33 am; edited 1 time in total |
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Genin
Raleth
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Sun Feb 12, 2012 4:10 am | |
| Bloodlust Sensory - Now does it cover the area right away? Is it thick mist like a fog? Is any visibilty reduced? |
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Seinin
Haru
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Sun Feb 12, 2012 4:17 am | |
| -visibility reduced to 75% of normal -takes one post for the area to be completely covered(Activate one post, fully expanded the next) -Its like a mist, very transparent, not dense |
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Genin
Raleth
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Sun Feb 12, 2012 4:20 am | |
| Alright as mist condense into liquid as it touches a surface, can this mist condense into pools of blood and be used for your attacks? And will breathing in the mist have any harmful effects to the opponent? |
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Seinin
Haru
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Sun Feb 12, 2012 4:22 am | |
| No harmful attacks can be done, once the jutsu ends the mist can be used for jutsu, but not until then |
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Genin
Raleth
| Subject: Re: Haru Satsujin(Custom/Canon Jutsu) Sun Feb 12, 2012 4:27 am | |
| Edit that in. Upon thought this seems a bit too powerful for a D rank. All edits in and effects can be kept if you are willing to change it to C rank. Are you okay with this? |
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