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 Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]

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Genin

Jinta Yadomi
Jinta Yadomi
Male Posts : 37
Ryo : 1950

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PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptyFri Dec 30, 2011 11:03 pm

Neji Hitogumo wrote:
Awesome, so what's the next one that needs to be done?
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Neji Hitogumo
Neji Hitogumo
Female Posts : 637
Ryo : 800

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PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptyFri Dec 30, 2011 11:15 pm

Quote :
Name: Hien
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Element: Any
Type: Taijutsu, Chakra Flow
Range: Short
Description: An addition-line ninjutsu that augments the killing power of a blade — like a kunai or sword — by flowing chakra into it. The materialised chakra is shaped like a blade, cutting up everything it touches. It is also possible to alter the attack range of the weapon by adjusting the amount of chakra put into the blade. Seeing through the movements is said to be a Herculean task.

The density of the chakra is so high it becomes visible. It not only raises the power of the weapon, but simultaneously turns oneself into a blade as well. The chakra-enhanced blades are strong and sharp enough to strike through solid rock or cut through iron. This technique works best with elemental chakra, especially with wind chakra for offensive cutting power. Passive. Unless if weapon is thrown by the user, if this is the case then the weapon loses its chakra after it hits its target and the user must not only find a new weapon but wait for the cooldown of 1 turn.

This would be more Kenjutsu than Taijutsu. Also the amount that it could cut through is needed and a specific amount of damage. Cool down needs to be ALOT longer than 1 post
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Jinta Yadomi
Jinta Yadomi
Male Posts : 37
Ryo : 1950

Character sheet
Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue100/100Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)

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PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptyFri Dec 30, 2011 11:22 pm

Neji Hitogumo wrote:
Done. I think.
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Neji Hitogumo
Neji Hitogumo
Female Posts : 637
Ryo : 800

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Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue260/260Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (260/260)

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PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptyFri Dec 30, 2011 11:28 pm

Ok, Again I approve unless Dom wants to bump in and say anything
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Jinta Yadomi
Jinta Yadomi
Male Posts : 37
Ryo : 1950

Character sheet
Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue100/100Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)

Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptyFri Dec 30, 2011 11:32 pm

Neji Hitogumo wrote:
Sweet, next one and last one I think is, Suiton: Suijinheki. What do you think about it? It's meant to be a deffense jutsu. Maybe the fact that the water can be suplied from the air is to op.
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

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Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue330/330Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptyFri Dec 30, 2011 11:36 pm

Hien - Take out all the references to the wind nature chakra. There's no sense in having it there, for that has to be registered as a separate tech due to the element involvement. Once you do that, it'll be approved fully.
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Jinta Yadomi
Jinta Yadomi
Male Posts : 37
Ryo : 1950

Character sheet
Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue100/100Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)

Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptyFri Dec 30, 2011 11:39 pm

Dominic Edrick wrote:
Done!
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
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PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptyFri Dec 30, 2011 11:53 pm

This technique works best with elemental chakra, especially with wind chakra for offensive cutting power. Passive. - This sentence is still in the description. Also remove passive and make it a one post charge, and can only last 5 posts.
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Jinta Yadomi
Jinta Yadomi
Male Posts : 37
Ryo : 1950

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Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue100/100Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)

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PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySat Dec 31, 2011 2:08 am

Dominic Edrick wrote:

Done!
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

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Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue330/330Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySat Dec 31, 2011 4:56 am

Name: Water Release: Water Encampment Wall
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Element: Water
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short range defensive
Description: This defensive technique creates a wall of water around the user. Enemy attacks are completely intercepted by a fence of water blown out from the mouth, and is raised from below with might. The water is blown out in the form of a circle around the user, and it makes for a defence without openings. It is also possible for the user to control the amount of water and duration at will. The wall's strength and resistance change following the quantity of chakra poured down into the water, so a skilful shinobi will be able to build a sturdy one. Furthermore, because the field of vision is maintained even while defending one can easily go on to the next move, which is a great advantage. The wall can also be formed from a pre-existing water source. The water cylinder is 8 metres high and 2 metres thick, S rank fire jutsu can break this wall, A rank fire type jutsu are weakened by 25 percent, B rank fire justu's are weaken by 50 percent and C or lower type fire justu's are completely repeled. C Rank Earth Jutsu or higher can break through this wall unscaved. B or higher lightning justu are can also break the this justu completly. Weapons like swords and kunai are not very affected due to the volume of water that the user creates kunai and other throwing eapons would be completly stoped due to water density and swords that are reduced in swinging power by 40 percent due to thickness and density of the water.

Requires Hand Seals and last 3 Posts with a cool down of 4 posts.

This is an already approved version of your second B Rank jutsu, only the name hasn't been translated.
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Jinta Yadomi
Jinta Yadomi
Male Posts : 37
Ryo : 1950

Character sheet
Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue100/100Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)

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PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySat Dec 31, 2011 6:45 am

Dominic Edrick wrote:
Ah, awesome. I don't have to do the specifications on that one. Woot. Thank you. Changed.
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Jinta Yadomi
Jinta Yadomi
Male Posts : 37
Ryo : 1950

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Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue100/100Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)

Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySat Dec 31, 2011 9:59 am

Added S-rank jutsu.
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
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Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue330/330Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySat Dec 31, 2011 3:00 pm

Kirisame - So, by eating up chakra, are you saying it negates any attack after its thrown, is it limited to just elements, or is it also eating the chakra from the user if they are charging a jutsu? It will be once per topic use.
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Jinta Yadomi
Jinta Yadomi
Male Posts : 37
Ryo : 1950

Character sheet
Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue100/100Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)

Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySat Dec 31, 2011 8:21 pm

Dominic Edrick wrote:
Added the fact that it eats up chakra as they charge thier jutsu also, and added the Once per topic.
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
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Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue330/330Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySat Dec 31, 2011 8:49 pm

Ok, if it does that much, this S Rank will require more than the standard 50 chakra, it will require 80 chakra.
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Jinta Yadomi
Jinta Yadomi
Male Posts : 37
Ryo : 1950

Character sheet
Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue100/100Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)

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PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySat Dec 31, 2011 8:54 pm

Dominic Edrick wrote:
Wow, hmm... Oh, and it also stops the user's ally's chakra from being able to build up aswell. Did you get that sense when you read it or should I state it clearly?

I will agree to it being 80 chakra. How much chakra builds up over time by what rate? Also, how do I increase my chakra limit?
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Dominic
Dominic
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Ryo : 12100

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Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue330/330Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySat Dec 31, 2011 9:05 pm

State it clearly, that only you will be able to use your jutsu and even your allies are affected.

You can only increase your chakra limit if you rank up from genin. You aren't able to use S Rank jutsu at genin anyway. It won't be until chuunin or s. Jounin that you can have your first S Rank technique. However, once the rank is reached, this technique will be available.
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Jinta Yadomi
Jinta Yadomi
Male Posts : 37
Ryo : 1950

Character sheet
Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue100/100Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)

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PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySat Dec 31, 2011 9:10 pm

Dominic Edrick wrote:
So I'll be granted another S-rank jutsu to use ontop of this one?

Oh, and is that the last one to be confirmed?
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Dominic
Dominic
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Ryo : 12100

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Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySun Jan 01, 2012 3:25 pm

No, this is your only free S Rank. After these first 10 free jutsu, anymore that you register will need to be priced and purchased, and you muat wait until you have the jutsu slots available to create it. In the Rules, refer to the Rank Rules.
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Jinta Yadomi
Jinta Yadomi
Male Posts : 37
Ryo : 1950

Character sheet
Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue100/100Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)

Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySun Jan 01, 2012 8:35 pm

Dominic Edrick wrote:
Ok, I have edited that jutsu. Thanks for helping me with that.
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Dominic
Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

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Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySun Jan 01, 2012 9:29 pm

You still need to add that it requires 80 Chakra.
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Jinta Yadomi
Jinta Yadomi
Male Posts : 37
Ryo : 1950

Character sheet
Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue100/100Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)

Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySun Jan 01, 2012 9:40 pm

Dominic Edrick wrote:
Sorry about that. Done.
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Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

Character sheet
Chakra:
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Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySun Jan 01, 2012 9:57 pm

Approved. Now create your technique list and add all of these approved techniques in.
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Jinta Yadomi
Male Posts : 37
Ryo : 1950

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Chakra:
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Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySun Jan 01, 2012 10:17 pm

Dominic Edrick wrote:

Thank you.

Is there anything else that needs to be done after I have created my technique list?
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Dominic
Male Posts : 5756
Ryo : 12100

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Chakra:
Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Left_bar_bleue330/330Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 Empty
PostSubject: Re: Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration]   Jinta Yadomi [Jutsu Registration] - Page 2 EmptySun Jan 01, 2012 10:24 pm

No, you don't add to your technique list untik the techniques are approved, priced, then purchased within this topic.
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