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 Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)

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Zetzray Edrick
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Chakra:
Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) Left_bar_bleue220/220Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) Empty_bar_bleue  (220/220)

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Animal Type:Boar
Number of "Family" Members:5

Name:Personal Boar
Height:3 ft
Weight:38 lbs.
Rank:D
Element:coincides with either the first, second or third element of the user
Personality:The personality of each personal boar is the exact opposite of the user. The Boars can talk and they speak their opinions freely. The boar's element can be one of the three elements of the user.
Each new member of the scroll must register their personal boar
Appearance:Each personal boars color is in relation to their element.
Fire Water Earth Lightning Wind

Abilities:
Hyper-sensitive nose. Great for tracking (much like a boar that can hunt truffles)

Name:Elemental Bullet
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank:D
Element: Depends on its element
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:0-15 meters
Description: The Boar emits a bullet that coincides with their element from their mouth. The bullet is haf the size of the boar, and is about 6 inches in diameter. The bullet can cause: 1st degree burns, 1 inch deep slashes, knocking the wind out of the opponent. (Corresponds to certain element)

Name: Elemental Take Down
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank: D
Element: Element coincides with the user.
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:0-5 meters
Description:The Boar begins to surround its body in chakra and after a post the chakra transforms into that Boar's element, the Boar will then rush at the target

Elemental Examples:
Fire-The summoning becomes surrounded by fire and crashes into the target causing 2nd degree burns,upon impact opponent is knocked back 5 feet.
Wind-The summoning becomes surrounded in a swirling wind, this increases its speed by 2.5 making the impact greater, upon impact opponent is knocked back 7 and a half feet.
Lightning-The summoning becomes engulfed in a lightning sphere, if this makes contact with the enemy it shocks them, and if it touches metal it will conduct and hit anyone who is touching it,upon impact opponent is knocked back 5 feet.
Earth-The Pig becomes surrounded by a rock hard earth shell, since it wont be able to get off the ground the user must use a handsign to propel the pig, this pig has the most damage upon impact, it is enough to shatter brick, upon impact opponent is knocked back 10 feet.
Water-The pig becomes surrounded by a sphere of water that swirls, this pig is able to alter its direction, however everytime it alters its direction the damage that it can cause is lowered by 1/4 the original, upon impact opponent is knocked back 8 feet, minus 2 per change in direction .

Name:Chakra Compression Bullet
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank:C
Element: Coincides with the user
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:0-25 meters
Description:The summoning begins to charge chakra into its belly and the summoner puts their hand on the back of the pig, then after a post charge the pig launches a bigger more powerful elemental bullet, double the size of the pig, and about a foot in diameter. In all this technique takes 2 posts, one for the pig and one for the user. All of the bullets have the same type of affect, the bullet comes in contact with the target and explodes on contact. The force being enough to send a person flying back 25 feet.
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Name:Pignite
Height:5"8
Weight:350 lbs.
Rank:C
Element:Fire
Personality:Pignite is very brash, he is obnoxious and a drunk. He is hot headed and never thinks things through. However he is obedient. And at any Given moment he will look for an excuse to drink, even if he is in an intense battle. He is a very "Happy" drunk. He is very boastful and when he gets mad he drinks even more. The more he drinks the more intensely he fights.
Appearance:
Spoiler:

Abilities:
Katon Master and Secondary Taijutsu User

Name: Flame Fist
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank: C
Element:Fire
Type:Ninjutsu/Taijutsu
Range:close, 0-5 meters
Description:Pignite puts his fists to his flame beard for a post that and his fists catch on fire for 3 posts, his fists are able to dent and crush steel and anything that is highly flammable(such as trees, clothes, ect.) light on fire upon contact , upon impact the fist light a foot of the flammable surface on fire and after this the fire spread by 4 feet every post, this affect only works on non-libing objects that also hold a flammable quality.The fist is 8 inches in diameter upon contact. The fists can cause third degree burns to enemies upon contact.5 post cool down.

Name: Flame Stream
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank: C
Element: Fire
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:Long, 0-15 meters
Description:Pignite drinks a half of a bottle of alcohol and then soon after expels a stream of fire from his mouth, a jet of fire that causes 3rd degree burns, and if an opponent stays in the fire for a post, the burns can spread across the body. If an opponent stays in the stream for 2 posts, their skin will almost bubble and cause extreme pain.The flames start at about 4 inch in diameter, and every foot increases by 4 inches in diameter. The widest it gets is 5 feet in diameter. 7 post cool down.

Name: Combustion Shot
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank: B
Element: Fire
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:25 meters
DescriptionPignite concentrates and forms a 3 feet in diameter sphere. He then launches it at a target causing an explosion 30 feet in diameter, the explosion causes third degree burns and instantly ignites flammable objects if it makes direct contact or are 5 feet away. At 15 feet away from of the center explosion, a person is sent flying back 15 feet with second degree burns on their arms legs and forehead.If 30 feet away from the center of the explosion a person gets 1st degree burns on their limbs and forehead and are knocked back 5 feet. 8 post cool down.

Equipment:
Spoiler:
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Name:Bain
Height:6"9
Weight:121 lbs.
Rank:B
Element:Wind
Personality:Bain is very calm and collected, he fights to his best ability when ever he sees fit but tries to avoid fights(even though it is his specialty). He is so relaxed that even when found in a tight situation(life or death) he can keep a cool head. Though he never gets himself into situations that he doesnt think he can get out of. Bain takes pride in one thing about himself, and that is the fact that he is without a doubt the fastest Boar in all of the family. Even though he has strength he finds much truth behind the saying "speed is power". Bain enjoys meditating a great deal along with training, in fact sometimes if a battle isnt moving anywhere he will meditate on an effective way to end it.
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Abilities:
Taijutsu and Fuuton Master

Name: Gattling Gale
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank: B
Element:Wind
Type:Taijutsu/Ninjutsu
Range:close 0-5 meters
Description:Bain sends a flurry of punches into a designated target, he is able 3 punches a post (equivalent to a second) and can use this for up to 4 posts and on the last three punches emit a blast of wind that is capable of sending an opponent 30 feet. Each punch has enough force to shatter brick, and the final blast can wind an opponent (no pun intended). bain must charge for a post before unleashing this technique. 8 post cooldown.

Name: Gale Force Palm
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank: B
Element:Wind
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:0-35 meters
Description:Requires Handseals. Bain gathers wind chakra into the palm of his hand and he fires it at a target creating an intimadting tornado that is 20 feet tall, and 6 feet wide at the top. tornado is released vertically. The tornado lasts for 2 posts with a cooldown of 6 posts. The direction of it can be changed handseals would have to continue being done. It moves at 35 mph and rotates at 100mph. Cuts 2 inches deep. In order to stay on the ground the enemy has to negate the jutsu by usng a C rank Fire, B rank wind or B rank earth. Or they have to sacrifice 40 chakra into their feet.
Name: Tornado Fist
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank: A
Element: Wind
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:close, 0-7 meters
Description:Bain gathers wind chakra into his fist(which takes one post)until a sphere of spiralling wind coveres his fist, he will then dash at his opponent and upper cut them, spining a bit as he hits them. If contact is made that is when the tornado is formed, they are stuck in this cylinder of spiralling wind for 3 posts. In this tornado Bain has the advantage to attack the enemy . The force from the punch can break bones and crack the chest cavity. Once per topic. If a ninja has B Rank fire technique, a wind jutsu capable of either freeing the enemy/ knocking them out of the wind(recoil) or an A rank earth technique that could block the flow of the wind.
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Name:Raixen
Height:9 feet
Weight:500 lbs
Rank:A
Element: N/A
Personality:Very rude and blood thirsty, he is always looking for another enemy to cut down. Raixen considers killing his "hobby" and often refers to it as so, upon summoning he will sometimes come into battle with the skulls of past eneimes belted around his waist. He doesnt believe in the concept of mercy, and when Bain chooses to walk away from a fight that has already been won, Raixen calls him a coward. Raixen seems like he only cares about killing but he cares a great deal about the other boars and his summoners, he is ready 100% of the time to fight for his summoner but getting him to stop is the hard part. If you are a new user to this summon, you must first prove yourself to him (Raleth and Zetzray already have), but once you do he will fight with you without question.
Appearance:
Spoiler:
Abilities:
Kenjutsu (Weapon) Master

Equipment:

Weapon Name: Raiken(His A Rank)

Weapon Type: Scythe

Quantity: 1

Description: The Scythe is 7 feet in length and its blade is 3 and half feet, it has a chain that leads from the bottom and wraps around the bottom half of the side and around Raixen's forearm (30 feet long). It is made of Refined steel.

Abilities: After charging for post, Raixen's scythe gains the lightning affinity and allows Raixen to be able to cut through triple reinforced steel in a single swoop. His lightning affinity lasts for 7 posts. After 7 posts the lightning disappears and takes a 10 post recharge to get lightning running again.

History:This was Raixen's first weapon, one he made himself. This was also the first weapon Raixen killed with. He has cut through many opponents with it, only washing the blood off once every year. In fact, during his summons he may have the weapon already dripping in blood. Though he rarely cleans it, the scythe will never dull, and never fail Raixen and his twisted missions.


Appearance:
Spoiler:

Weapon Name: Quaking Hammer (His A Rank)

Weapon Type: Hammer

Quantity: 1

Description: The hammer in all is 6 feet in length, the block at the top of the hammer weighs about 300 pounds

Abilities:Once Raixen slams down his mighty hammer, spike raise up from the ground a foot in front of his hammer, these spikes can then be hit and directed towards an opponent.4 post cool down. this can be done for 2-3 consecutive posts. Spikes rise at 10 feet a second and is able to pierce 2 and a half inches into steel. Impact from spike lifts person off the ground and sends them back 30 yards while piercing two inches into the body. B rank lightning can shatter the earth jutsu.

Douton Manipulation-This maniupulation allows the hammer to be slammed on the ground causing a 15 ft in diameter rock weighing in at 400 lbs giant rock to rise up, the hammer then slams into the rock and sends it flying at the opponent. Rock travels at 25 ft per second. It can be used up to 3 posts consecutively iof the hammer is continuousy charged. With a two time per topic usage. 8 post cooldown between usages.


History: A hammer said to have been given to the mighty Boar, who raised the first mountains of the world and shaped the wart as we know it, Raixen found it while "exploring" a cave. His preference is blades only, but after seeing it he grew attached to it, especially when he used it in the Great War to bash the enemies leader with a huge boulder. There is always some fragment of bones found lodged in the hammer, and Raixen chooses to keep them there as happy "mommentos"


Appearance:
Spoiler:

Weapon Name: Demonic Pin Wheel (His S Rank)

Weapon Type: Shuriken

Quantity: 2

Description: It is a 15 foot shuriken made of refined steel with a titanium alloy, it is summoned out of a scroll.

Abilities: This is his most powerful weapon,he summons it using the scroll on his back, it carries the Wind affinity, he puts his arm through it and the shuriken begins to spin at 1000 rpm (this takes a post), the shuriken can only travel for 100 yards before dissapears. It can cut three inches into titanium, and shred through anything weaker. The shuriken have chakra wires connected tthem that extend for 101 yards, and if Raixen pulls on the ninja wire he can change the direction and keep it in the 100 yards diameter. The shuriken can be out for a maximum of five posts. Only one shuriken can be used at once and there is a 5 post cooldown on using the second Shuriken. However if the first shuriken disappears after one post then the second one can be summoned without waiting for the cooldown.


History: This weapon was stolen from one of Raixen's old weapon master after he tried and betray him. This weapon was always coveted by Raixen, since it was so masterfully made. He constantly cleans it and sharpens it, and rarely uses it. He hates to use it, since he still feels lower to the master that betrayed him, and though he "stole" it, he'd rather have it then make it rot and stay in a destroyed building

Appearance:
Spoiler:
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Name:Barbados
Height:50 1/2 feet
Weight:3 tons
Rank:S
Element:Earth
Personality:He is the leader of the pigs, he is who they look to for guidance, he often scolds all 3 of the main pigs for their flaws, he finds Bain to relaxed and un-motivated, he calls Raixen heartless and constantly scolds him about his uncontrollable blood thirst and he is always yelling at Pignite for his recklessness. Eventhough he scolds them all, he also commends them on their power and often says he couldnt have asked for a better group of Ninja Boars. He knows the secret to mastering the art of the Boar. Barbados has many scars all around his body from the countless battles that he has taken part in, he only likes to be summoned when the summoner is in great danger and cannot win by them selves. If the summoner chooses to summon him for any other reason, he will poof away without another word.
Appearance:
Spoiler:

Abilities:
Doton Master

Name: Boar Oil
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank: S
Element:Earth
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:0-50 meters
Description:Barbados constanly has a supply of oil in his stomach and it takes a post charge for him to concentrate it up and out of his mouth. If the oil is expelled in bullet form the jet cannot be used. The Jet can only be used once per topic. Bullets can only be used twice per topic with a 10 post cooldown in between.
Bullets- 20 feet in diameter in size , 35 feet per second, Oil lays on the ground 6 inches thick and covers an area of 45 feet in diameter.
Stream-The stream comes out at 10 feet per second, the stream once completely expelled convers an area of 150 feet in diameter, oil lays on the ground 6 inches thick. The jet starts out from Barbados’ mouth at 8 feet in diameter and the widest it gets is 30 feet in diameter. The jet can travel 50 feet from the base of Barbados’ mouth.


Name: Un-Yeilding Boarier
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank: S
Element:Earth
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:Close, 5 meters (defense)
Description:Barbados does a one post charge of chakra to his head, then head butts the ground causing a wall of earth to rise. The wall is 50 feet tall and 50 feet wide, it is also 15 feet thick. For lightning an S rank jutsu pushes right through it. N A rank can break off parts of the wall hit, 2 B ranks have the same affect of 1 A, 3 C have the same affect as 2 B and 4 D have the same affect as 3 C. the wall is equivalent in sturdiness to temperate steel. Once per topic.

Name: Mud Lake
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank: A
Element:Earth
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:everything within 50 yards
Description: Barbados charges chakra through out his legs, which takes a post. Barbados will will then stomp on the ground, destroying and trampling the ground and transferring his earth chakra into the ground will cause the earth to turn to mush and a foot layer thick of mud will form in a 50 yard radius.Lasts for 5 posts. If opponent does not constantly state that they are constantly focusing chakra into their feet then there is a 20 % decrease in their speed and there is an overall 20 % increase in earth ninjutsu.Once per topic usage.


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Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) Left_bar_bleue220/220Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) Empty_bar_bleue  (220/220)

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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptySun May 29, 2011 6:35 pm

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Zetzray Edrick
Zetzray Edrick
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Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) Left_bar_bleue220/220Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) Empty_bar_bleue  (220/220)

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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyMon May 30, 2011 1:18 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptySun Jun 05, 2011 3:27 pm

Ok, let's start off with your personal boar.

Elemental bullet - During to it being in relation to every element, you'll need to describe the damage done by each particular element, just like you did with the elemental take down. How fast and how far does it travel?

Elemental Takedown - You need to give the speed in mph on the boar, then be able to go into each element, and give descriptive damage done to a shinobi, and any enhancements the element gives the boar in relation to its speed.

Giant Elemental Bullet - once again, give every element, then give me how fast the bullet travels, and how far it can travel..
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Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) Left_bar_bleue360/360Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptySun Jun 05, 2011 3:40 pm

-Create bigger personalities.
-Resize the huge picture.
-Personal boar isn't a name.
-Use spaces. Not Element:Fire but Element: Fire
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptySun Jun 05, 2011 4:17 pm

Well the personal boar is, well, personal to evey user. When someone signs the scroll they register their personal boar with a name, element, heigt and weight, and personality. It is called a personal boar because no two will be alike.
The rest we will do

Elemental Bullet
Fire: Moves at 50 mph (We want it to he slower then a real bullet) causes 1st to second degree burns where it hits.
Wind: Moves at 65 mph, causes small one inch deep cuts wherever it hits
Water: Shoots a water jet out of its mouth that is the same size of the bullet moves at 50 mph and can wind and opponent and push them back 8 feet
Lightning: Moves at 50 mph, causes electrical burns and numbs the area it hits in a six-inch diameter
Earth: Moves at 35 mph, causes small fractures and bruising where ever it hits

Elemental Take Down
The damage is in each post(2nd degree burns, enough to shatter brick etc)

Fire: Moves at 20 mph
Wind: Moves at 40 mph
Lighting: Moves at 20 mph
Water: Moves at 25 mph, can wind and bruise the opponent
Earth: moves at 15 mph

Elemental Giant Bullet
Fire: causes 2nd degree burns, can burn off fabric, on contact explodes in a bright light, moves at 80mph
Wind: Causes three-inch deep slashes, moves at 100 mph
Lightning: Moves at 80 mph Causes electrical burns, stuns an opponent for one post, numbs the limb it hits
Water: Moves at 80 mph fires a jet of water, same size as the other bullets, can cause bruising and fractures and can knock an opponent back 18 feet
Earth: Moves at 65mph, can break bones

If these are two powerful, or weak, please tell me what they can be



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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyMon Jun 06, 2011 11:23 pm

On the elemental takedown, you can add 10 mph to each speed. For now, thats all I see, and with the elemental takedown, regardless of whatever element, it still does the same damage??
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Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) Left_bar_bleue220/220Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) Empty_bar_bleue  (220/220)

Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyMon Jun 06, 2011 11:31 pm

Name: Elemental Take Down
Canon/Custom:Custom
Rank: D
Element: Element coincides with the user.
Type:Ninjutsu
Range:0-5 meters
Description:The Boar begins to surround its body in chakra and after a post the chakra transforms into that Boar's element, the Boar will then rush at the target

Elemental Examples:
Fire- Moves at 30 mph. The summoning becomes surrounded by fire and crashes into the target causing 2nd degree burns.
Wind- Moves at 50 mph. The summoning becomes surrounded in a swirling wind, this increases its speed by 2.5 making the impact greater. This can wind and bruise an opponent.
Lightning- Moves at 30 mph. The summoning becomes engulfed in a lightning sphere, if this makes contact with the enemy it shocks them, and if it touches metal it will conduct and hit anyone who is touching it. This causes electrical burns and numbs the entire area that is hit for 1 post.
Earth- Moves at 25. The Pig becomes surrounded by a rock hard earth shell, since it wont be able to get off the ground the user must use a handsign to propel the pig, this pig has the most damage upon impact, it is enough to break bones.
Water- Moves at 35. The pig becomes surrounded by a sphere of water that swirls and if it hits the opponent it can cause huge fractures. This pig is able to alter its direction, however everytime it alters its direction the damage that it can cause is lowered by 1/4 the original.

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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyThu Jun 09, 2011 1:56 pm

Elemental Takedown - Give me a max of how far back it could knock someone, if they were to be hit directly by each one.
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptySat Jun 11, 2011 4:23 pm

Fire: 5 ft
Wind: 7.5 ft
Earth: 10 ft
Lightning: 5 ft
Water: 8 ft, minus 2 per change in direction.
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptySat Jun 11, 2011 5:42 pm

Edit that in, and we will continue on.
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyMon Feb 06, 2012 12:25 am

Completion bump.
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Dominic
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyMon Feb 06, 2012 3:51 am

Ok, the Elemental Giant Bullet. To prevent it from having to have an every element breakdown, simply call it something different in order to keep the effects the way they are now. Maybe Giant Chakra Bullet or something along those lines, and simply say the chakra is compressed enough to feel like an elemental type.
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Zetzray Edrick
Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyMon Feb 06, 2012 4:01 am

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Dominic
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyMon Feb 06, 2012 4:10 am

Chakra compression Bullet - you still need to remove the parts that talk of corresponding to the users element. Its simply a chakra blast now.

Flame Fist - Is it a passive ignition of the fists, or does he have to hold it on his beard for one post? What degree of burns does it cause to the enemy? How much area does it catch on fire upon contact to inanimate objects or is it just the immediate area of his punch?
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Zetzray Edrick
Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyMon Feb 06, 2012 4:23 am

Bump
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Dominic
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyMon Feb 06, 2012 6:54 pm

Flame Fist - Does this foot of instant flammability also affect the enemy? If so, that would be too strong. Or does the area punched only recieve the burn? If so, how big is the fist upon contact?

Flame Stream - If your wanting to increase the power, it will make it a multi rank jutsu, which will make it unapprovable for the rank of this boar. So therefore, there needs to be a set amount he drinks and a set amount of damage. The only way to make this a multi rank jutsu is to get rid of one of the techniques he has in this list already to free up space to expand this one.
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Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyMon Feb 06, 2012 8:21 pm

Edited flame fist. The spreading of fire only works on nonliving flammable objects and the flame stream no longer has the bottle affect. It has a set damage. If hit direclty 3rd degree burns are cause, and the longer the person stays in the flames the more deadly the flames become, so flame stream has also been edited.
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Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyTue Feb 07, 2012 2:37 am

All the edits that were discussed in our conversation have been made and we are ready for final approval.
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Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyTue Feb 07, 2012 3:09 am

Completion Bump on everything discusses on the phone.
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Dominic
Dominic
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyTue Feb 07, 2012 3:36 am

Alright, at long last, these summons look legitimate enough to make official. You have made all of the edits I have asked for over the phone and everything seems to fit within the price range for each.

Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) Dom_ap12

25,000 Ryo
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Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyTue Feb 07, 2012 3:40 am

Purchasing and registering personal boar.

Name: Isamu
Height: 2'5
Weight: 55 lbs
Rank: D
Element: Lightning
Personality: Isamu has an extremely reckless nature and doesnt take time to scope out situations unless Zetzray scolds him to. Isamu and Zetzray get into arguments most if not all the time during battle because Isamu feels that Zetzray is not straight forward enough and doesn't put himself out there in battle. Isamu isn't one for waiting for an opponent to come to him, he will strike at his opponent even if he is in a bad spot to unless told not to by Zetzray, this can be a bit of a roblem when the two of them are battling against someone. Isamu is also very obnoxious and enjoys to put on a "show" as he calls it for others around him. Zetzray believes that this is because he wants everyones attention but Isamu truly just wants Zetzray to have a good time and laugh along with him.
Appearance: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) Contestzantheboarbyrasu

Abilities:
(Personal Boar Abilities)

equipment: None


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Raleth
Raleth
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyTue Feb 07, 2012 3:53 am

Purchasing and registering my personal boar

Name: Deku
Height: 2' 6"
Weight: 50 lbs
Rank: D
Element: Earth
Personality: Deku, often refered to by Raleth as "Bacon" is more of an intellectual than a warrior. He loves to read, and often scolds Raleth for his idiotic behavior. More of a prohibitionis, Deku hates alcohol, for the taste and effect, and wonders why he of all people had to be paired with the drunk Raleth. However he does love Raleth, and is always ready to fight by his side when there is no other choice, but will often solve disputes with his eloquent language and masterful rehtoric, or as he describes to Raleth "masterful word taijutsu"!
Appearance:.

Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) Celtic_gold_20boar
Abilities:
(Personal Boar Abilities)
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Equipment: None


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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyTue Feb 07, 2012 9:53 am

Your personal boar will have to wait until there is a location made for your summons. Then you must do a personal mission to achieve him. Until then, leave this here and we will come back to it when it is time.

Zetzray & Raleth - Ryo Deducted
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PostSubject: Re: Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval)   Boar Summonings(Ready for Approval) EmptyMon Feb 20, 2012 2:47 am

I withdraw myself from the Boar scroll
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