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Special Jounin

Kuroi
Kuroi
Male Posts : 117
Ryo : 4800

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PostSubject: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptySat Apr 14, 2012 1:24 am


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First Name: Kuroi
Last Name: Yamasa
Alias: Roi

Gender: Male
Age: 26
Height: 6'2
Weight: 195lbs
Birthday: June 13th
Sexuality: Straight
Relationships: None

Affiliation: Kusamuragakure
Rank: Special Jounin
Element: Futon,Raiton,Suiton
Specialization: Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu

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Personality: Kuroi is loyal to his allies and the people of his village. He would go all out to protect them. He could also be considered funny. He has a tendency to crack jokes during a very tense situation. But most importantly he is respectful. He has the most up most respect for allies and foes. He never treats his foe like dirt even if they are treating him the same way.

Likes: He just like training but he loves it. The thrill of getting better is something he thrives on. He just loves getting out there firing massive kicks and punches to his target. But once he is done training he loves eating. Ramen is one of his favorite dishes he loves to eat before and after a good training session.

Dislikes: He dislikes seeing little kids get bullied. He despises people who prey on the weak in order to get strong. Another thing that gets under his skin, is when people underestimate him in a fight. He hates when opponents stick their noses down at him just because he is “weaker.”

Motivation: Becoming the best Taijutsu ninja in the world. He loves Taijutsu with all of his heart. Even though he knows Ninjutsu he mainly uses Tai. He is always thinking of new innovative way to use in a fight. Another thing that motivates him that he will never speak of is the death of his parents. It is always the hidden motivation underneath being the best taijutsu ninja.

Fears: His biggest fear, is failure. He strives to be the best in everything. But when he falls short he comes down on himself hard. He believes one mistake can make a difference. He learned this as a child when he failed to react in time. He could never forgive himself for that and is now something he tries to forget.


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Kageshikon (Shadow Fang)

Bloodline Name: Kuroi Kaminari (Black Lightning)

Bloodline Ability: Black lightning is what it says on the tin. It allows the user to use powerful attacks formed of black lightning. All members of the clan have lightning as either their primary or secondary chakra type and have ninjutsu and taijutsu as either primary and secondary specializations. All members of this clan have suiton as either their primary or secondary chakra type, depending on what type Raiton takes up.

Location: Hidden Storm

Clan History: Black lightning, a rare, but powerful ability. How it came about is an interesting tale. There was once a man named Azelf and he was truly the master of raiton. In his generation he was one of the most powerful shinobi to live. However, he found that his power was not passed on via his genes to his son Chitou. It was due to this that he summoned his faithful companion, a giant hawk named Takashou, and flew off into the mountains. He returned several years later and tattooed the kanji symbol for lightning on his son's arm imbuing it with chakra. This symbol enabled the child to use lightning chakra to much greater efficiency and to Azelf's surprise the child was able to use the legendary Black Lightning. This was an unpredicted side-effect that greatly pleased Azelf. When Azelf's son was born the tattoo naturally formed on him as a birth mark and was able to use the black lightning. Azelf refused to explain how he had achieved this feat until he was on his death bed.

He had gone into the mountains and made a pact with the Raijin, the gods of thunder, to imbue his family with power. Why they agreed to such a pact is unknown because they got little in return except worship from the clan. The clan became powerful and famous due to its kekkai genkai and their skill with lightning chakra in general.



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History: As a child he was never the same as the others. His parents believed in making him work for everything. When he wanted food he had to fight for it. When he wanted a new toy or something he had to fight for it. Eventually fighting was all as a child. Until one time that one time he failed. He could always remember that night as a child. He walked in one night to see a strange man confronting his parents. He tried to make out his mom words telling him to run. But he just would not listen. He charged at the stranger headfirst, only to be knocked back.

Due to his interference he had to watch his parents die. He laid against the wall trying to get his self together as his vision was quite blurry but all he could see was his parents’ neck be slashed. He reached out for them and cried in tears to no avail. Seven years later at the age of 17 he finally made enough ryo to get his own place. He wanted to make a change but did not know where to begin. He heard something about being a shinobi and thought it was cool.

From there his life was never the same again. As his days as an academy student he learned about Taijutsu and Ninjutsu. He always favored Taijutsu, so when as to perform a test in this category he was able to out shine others in his class. Knowing he needed something to make up for he decided to go for Ninjutsu. He was able to make decent grade in that category but didn’t necessarily favor it. After the academy day was over he would return to his home for the night and train in the dark. He would move silently perfecting every movement he made. From hard punches to deadly kicks, he trained it all.

The next morning he learned the academy was giving graduation exams. He began to get all excited but realized that was weird for a 17-year old. He stood up and followed the instructor to a jungle near the village. The goal was to stay here overnight alive. He thought that was kind of weird giving them such a hard task so early. They were put into groups of seven being the oldest he was selected the leader. He lead his squad near a tree for a night and sat-up camp there. He watched over his squad while they slept making sure no danger would come to them. He heard a cracking in the trees up ahead. He didn’t want to wake his squad up from their sleep and decided to go check it out himself. He found himself surrounded by two opposing ninjas. He stood there determining whether he should call for help or not. But this time he chose not to. This time his decision making did not fail him.

He takes the defensive stance as one of the opposing ninjas charged at him first. He ducked up the man’s punch firing a right leg sweep to the back of his knee shattering it. He heard he man scream out in pain but ignored it. He turned to face the other man as the man began clapping his hands. He watched as the man said the words that he graduated. He relaxed a bit as he joy began to overtake his body. He smiled leaving the Jungle as he was the first one to complete the unknown task. Four years later now 21 and a genin he has been mastering is Raiton. Which has led him to the clan Kageshikon, what he didn’t know was that his family was already a part of this clan. But it was time for him to take his place in it.

Five years later, Kuroi experienced some change around his former village. He found things going downhill as the Kage was not there much anymore and people started changing. Kuroi wanted to stick around but he could not bear the sight of his village of anymore. He gathered his things and moved to Kusamuragakure. Kuroi there began to slowly fit in with the other villagers trying to make new friends and forget his past life from his old village. As he lived in Kusamuragakure he started climbing the ranks, with in a year he from genin to chuunin. He did countless missions to prove his worth of rank of chunnin then sending him on his way to Special Jounin.

Meanwhile one day while he was off he was sent on a mission to recover something that was stolen from an old lady in the village. He thought that the mission would be easy but he was wrong. He was out-ganged and left badly beaten but still came back with the package that had to be recovered. He still suffers from some minor injuries so he takes it easy on his days off from not doing mission for the village.

RP Sample: It was a normal morning like any other. Village kids heading to the academy while parents went to handle their daily village rounds. He rolls onto the floor falling off his bed. He smiles as he feels the coldness of the wooden floor. He stands up doing his daily 100 push-ups. After finishing those he heads into the bathroom to take a nice hot shower. He walked back into the bedroom throwing on a clean pair of boxers and his Genin outfit. He grabs his ankle weights and heads out the door to the Academy. He waves at the Ramen shop owner that he passes by. He arrives to the academy and heads to his seat to begin his lesson for the day.


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Source: Referred by: Hikaru Shidou

Face Claim: Gokudera Hayato from Hitman Reborn

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Last edited by Kuroi on Wed Jun 13, 2012 1:48 am; edited 10 times in total
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Kuroi
Kuroi
Male Posts : 117
Ryo : 4800

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyTue Apr 17, 2012 9:45 pm

Bumping for Re-Approval
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Seinin

Virtue
Virtue
Male Posts : 450
Ryo : 68700

Character sheet
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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyTue Apr 17, 2012 10:56 pm

I apologize, but you can't use canon appearances. Please change your appearance and bump again after you have it fixed.
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Kuroi
Kuroi
Male Posts : 117
Ryo : 4800

Character sheet
Chakra:
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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyTue Apr 17, 2012 11:08 pm

Bumped
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Virtue
Virtue
Male Posts : 450
Ryo : 68700

Character sheet
Chakra:
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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyTue Apr 17, 2012 11:12 pm

You're not using the correct template. The font is different and the original template isn't centered.

Other than that, it seems that your character is not fully finished yet; considering you're creating a clan and that isn't finished yet, thus your character isn't finished yet.
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Kuroi
Kuroi
Male Posts : 117
Ryo : 4800

Character sheet
Chakra:
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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyTue Apr 17, 2012 11:21 pm

Bumped used the correct template...By my plan was to get some post in to show that I am active and not mention the clan until I finish it.
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Virtue
Virtue
Male Posts : 450
Ryo : 68700

Character sheet
Chakra:
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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyTue Apr 17, 2012 11:22 pm

Unfortunately, I was told that you first have to finish the clan. I'll ask the person again later tomorrow, since I can't really decide something like that on my own.
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Kuroi
Kuroi
Male Posts : 117
Ryo : 4800

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Chakra:
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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyTue Apr 17, 2012 11:23 pm

Nah I will have it finished
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Isildur
Isildur
Posts : 52
Ryo : 141500

Character sheet
Chakra:
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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyWed Apr 18, 2012 1:40 pm

Please put a space after the colon as it has none now except for your history.
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Kuroi
Kuroi
Male Posts : 117
Ryo : 4800

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyWed Apr 18, 2012 10:03 pm

Where at?
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Isildur
Isildur
Posts : 52
Ryo : 141500

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyWed Apr 18, 2012 10:06 pm

Everywhere.

Name:Kuroi (wrong),
Name: Kuroi (correct)

Etc.
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Kuroi
Kuroi
Male Posts : 117
Ryo : 4800

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Chakra:
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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyMon Apr 23, 2012 10:01 am

Bump..staying clanless
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Kuroi
Kuroi
Male Posts : 117
Ryo : 4800

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyWed May 02, 2012 2:32 am

Bump -_-
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Isildur
Isildur
Posts : 52
Ryo : 141500

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyWed May 02, 2012 2:31 pm

The elements in your profile are different compared to the elements in your application. Also it's jutsu and not justu. Fix it and it's ready for approval.
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Kuroi
Kuroi
Male Posts : 117
Ryo : 4800

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyFri May 04, 2012 2:34 am

Fixed and added the old clan I was in
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Yoshi2
Yoshi2
Male Posts : 223
Ryo : 22501

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyThu May 10, 2012 12:02 am

Your history requires 800. You have only 760. Please add more words. Other than that, it seems fine, except for the clan. I'll wait for some other staff to check it out.
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Kuroi
Kuroi
Male Posts : 117
Ryo : 4800

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyMon May 28, 2012 3:58 am

Sorry about the leave of absence but will work on this asap
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Yoshi2
Yoshi2
Male Posts : 223
Ryo : 22501

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyMon May 28, 2012 4:15 am

It seems that you were an old character. So, I guess you can "ressurect" your old character. But if you want a new character, I don't mind, but your old clan has been archived.
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Yoshi2
Yoshi2
Male Posts : 223
Ryo : 22501

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyWed May 30, 2012 8:01 am

Bump done
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Kuroi
Kuroi
Male Posts : 117
Ryo : 4800

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyWed Jun 13, 2012 1:43 am

Bump
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Kuroi
Kuroi
Male Posts : 117
Ryo : 4800

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyTue Jun 19, 2012 11:02 pm

Bump..
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Hakumei Shinkirou
Hakumei Shinkirou
Male Posts : 799
Ryo : 2371000

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyTue Jun 19, 2012 11:35 pm

I see that you have your old clan in there, but the problem is that I can't find that clan. Do you know who made it so I can find it easier?
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Kuroi
Kuroi
Male Posts : 117
Ryo : 4800

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptyThu Jun 21, 2012 1:19 am

I think his name was jdavies or something along the lines of that
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Shy
Shy
Male Posts : 847
Ryo : 142304

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PostSubject: Re: Kuroi Yamasa Revamped    Kuroi Yamasa Revamped  EmptySun Jul 01, 2012 8:17 pm

Hi, since we can't add your old clan we're requesting you to pick a new clan or go clanless. If you'll be so kind to accept this we'll try to compensate this sudden change with a gift of 400,000 ryo.


You have until July 7th to finish this app or else it will be archived.

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