First Name: Alyss
Last Name: Ysaru
Alias: (None)

Gender: Female
Age: 15
Height: 5'2
Weight: 100 pds
Birthday: 2/25/1997
Sexuality: Bisexual
Relationships: (Best Friend) Himitsu Chikara

Affiliation: Hyouga
Rank: Genin
Element: Chiton, Water
Specialization: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and Archery



Personality: Alyss is a rather introverted person, she is quiet, yet not shy, and admittedly egotistical. When it comes to a clan member, she would be willing to risk her life for them. Unfortunately, this girl is bi-polar, and can be very..impulsive when angered. She can also be very empathetic when needed.
In social situations, she tends to keep to herself because of her need for silence and space. A bad trait she holds is her selfish need to keep someone or something to herself. Truth is vital in a relationship with her.

Likes: Alyss loves Ramen, and cooking. English is important to her, as well as having happiness. Her 'sister' like figure is Himitsu Chikara, someone very special to her. Himitsu is a family friend, and part of the Uchiha clan. Singing is something she loves to do, like-wise with dancing.

Dislikes: The only thing she truly dislikes is sadness. The feeling yet lingers about her mind. Smaller dislikes would be dry or unsavory foods, feelings, and over-emotional people; despite being one herself.

Motivation: The curiosity and will to see how the future will turn out is her motivation. This, and the wish to stay with her beloved clan. She hopes for more members to enjoy the happiness of the Ysura clan.

Fears: Her fear is loneliness and emotional pain, not much else comes to mind except the natural fear of death when it is close enough. Otherwise, it is not as threatening. An irrational fear she has would be thunderstorms.



Bloodline Name: Chiton

Bloodline Ability: Heightened senses, regenerative properties, vitae manipulation. (Although, their bloodline makes them incapable of practicing Genjutsu.)

Location: Hyouga

Clan History: A clan almost as old as Hyougagakure itself, members of the clan have served the village faithfully for generations. Proving to be powerful and deadly warriors, almost all Ysaru clan members become shinobi as a rule, and have a strong tradition of swordplay. Often leading the Vanguard in times of war due to their resilience and raw power, Ysaru clan members garner much deserved respect from their allies, and fear from their enemies.
[All information on the Ysaru Clan comes from the Clan's forum, thank-you.]


History: Alyss started training at a young age, although by her title it seems otherwise. Her rank is a bit low for her age, because of her slow learning skills in anything except English. Around age 5, she met another young ninja; Himitsu. Himitsu has been a loyal and very trustworthy friend, although they clash sometimes because of their alike personality. Out of her two elements, Water was the easiest to obtain.
She, even though slow at learning, is a quick thinker. Once the information is in her head, it will remain so.
Alyss grew up near The Land of Blizzards, where the Ysaru Clan was born. At the mere age of 9, she started training in Ninjutsu and Taijutsu. As said, she is not a very quick learner. One thing she is good at though, is reading people. It was simply something she found interesting and continues to study over time. At this age, and from then on, she continues to find young Himitsu as her most trusted friend.
At 12, her mother was killed during a mission, and her father was left to raise her alone. The depression claimed her and still tries to once and a while. Her mother's death was by a rival clan. The ninja killed her by an unknown technique and was later found to be a serial killer for female shinobi.
Unfortunately, it was found about a year later that Alyss was schizophrenic due to her apparent claims of 'seeing' and 'hearing' her deceased mother; this, as well as an apathetic view towards everyday life. An exorcism and medicinal herbs were given in hopes of ridding the girl of 'evil.'
At 14, she continues to try her best at ignoring the sounds and sightings of her beloved mother. It seems to be that she grew a stronger bond of attachment to her only friend. At this, her father grew into an unhappy state when realizing that his only daughter would, most likely, forever have but one to trust.
Now, she hopes to make more friends and learn new things. As time crawls on, she trains herself to learn faster in is now up to par with most kids her age. In all of this, her favorite form of weapon is the bow and arrow, as archery has been her mother's talent.To this day, no one except her father and friend knows of her mental state; although they are dear friends, Himistu's past is a mystery to the Ysaru, and she tries her best not to pry. Now, the only thing left to wonder about is, how will things turn out for the young friends? Will the future be bright... or darken? What will become of everyone here and who will end up where?

RP Sample: The purple-haired teen turned to the other in anger, "Why? What have I done to you?" A snicker, and Alyss shivered at the cold hiss of a sound.
"Isn't it obvious, girl? You're unwanted here. There is simply no need for an idiotic brat such as yourself..." A harsh cry of pain escaped her throat in agony when her arm was sliced deeply by the shuriken. A sharp vermilion was staining her already dark outfit as she fell unceremoniously to her knees.
"Stop..!"



Source: Top Ten RP Sites

Face Claim: An Oc created by BloodStreakedMoon on Photobucket.

Hi! First and foremost, welcome to the site! I'm Kizuya. I'm not part of the staff; I'm just someone who wants more friends to rp with. So, here we go!

1. Please follow the wordcount, minimum paragraphs needed, etc from here : http://www.narutomirage.com/t4347-character-rules
It may seem long, but you're almost there! Note: 1 paragraph= 3 sentences. Just expand a bit, or explain more. For history, you may write about your childhood, academy life, or about other events.

2. Next is the coding. Please put it like this:

Code:

[b]First name:[/b] Alyss

And not this:

Code:

[b]First name: Alyss[/b]

3. Also, run through this with a spell checker. Don't worry, when I first started, my character application was worse than this.

If you've got any other problem, or if you need some ideas to expand, just pm me! I'm very free, so I can help you anytime. Or, just ask the questions in the chatbox and someone might help you;)

Cheers,
Kizuya

Thank-you, I find this really helpful since I haven't been on an RP site in a long while. I will try and fix the problems, again, thank-you!

Konichiwa,

You need to increase your history with 310 words. We have a wordcount widget so if you're not sure how many words you used, copy and paste in there and click on Count Words.

The Ysaru isn't finished yet but I think it will be soon. It's a clan that resides in Hyouga so you'd have to change your affiliation to Hyouga.

Gah, I keep messing up! Well, thanks and I shall try to have it finished in the next few minutes or so.

Bump once you're done. I'll check it once you bump.

Also, please put in 3 specialization. Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Medical Jutsu, Genjutsu and Kenjutsu are some examples. You can even put archery.

Kizuya wrote:

Also, please put in 3 specialization. Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Medical Jutsu, Genjutsu and Kenjutsu are some examples. You can even put archery.

Done, thanks~!

I'm sorry for the need of being very fussy n strict; you need exactly 400 hundred words in your history. You seem to be missing about 40 words. Please expand a bit. We have a word count widget on the left sidebar. Other than that, please go through your application in a spell checker:) other than that, it seems fine.

Kizuya wrote:

I'm sorry for the need of being very fussy n strict; you need exactly 400 hundred words in your history. You seem to be missing about 40 words. Please expand a bit. We have a word count widget on the left sidebar. Other than that, please go through your application in a spell checker:) other than that, it seems fine.

Okay, haha, I think that I have it! I sent it through spell-checker and edited the history! And no, I don't find you 'fussy'. You're just much more informed and helping me out. :)

Congratz! Since I'm just a Junior Mod, I won't be able to approve you. I'll let Isildur know, or other staffs. Other than that, Congratz! You've been approve:D(although you need to wait for a Moderator to approve you).

P.S. You can only be approved after your clan, Ysaru, is done. I guess it'll be complete real soon.:)

So now, I guess I'll be moving to Hyougagakure to meet you;)

Kizuya wrote:

Congratz! Since I'm just a Junior Mod, I won't be able to approve you. I'll let Isildur know, or other staffs. Other than that, Congratz! You've been approve:D(although you need to wait for a Moderator to approve you).

P.S. You can only be approved after your clan, Ysaru, is done. I guess it'll be complete real soon.:)

So now, I guess I'll be moving to Hyougagakure to meet you;)

Thank you so much for helping me through this 'hard time'. (Ha ha!) I'm glad, and I'll be waiting for the approval! Thankk youuuu~~