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 Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)

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Dominic
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun May 08, 2011 2:32 am

Just list how deep it can penetrate skin and take ou the c rank wind tech part..
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Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun May 08, 2011 2:54 am

bump
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun May 08, 2011 3:12 am

Avionetion - 7500 Ryo
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Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun May 08, 2011 3:13 am

purchasing
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun May 08, 2011 3:17 am

Ryo Deducted.
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Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun May 08, 2011 3:20 pm

purchasing fire ball jutsu for 3,500
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun May 08, 2011 4:59 pm

Ryo deducted.
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Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 8:59 pm

Name: Pheonix Funeral
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Element: Fire
Type: Nijutsu
Range: 45 feet in diameter(as an orb) 55 feet once dispersed
Description: Once Avionetion(the Wing component of this jutsu) is activated by Zetzray, he will then fly up into the air and once he is at least 80 feet above the ground he will clap his hands together and focus chakra into his chest.

Then he will expel a jet of fire from his mouth but by flapping his Avionetion wings and manipulation of wind chakra he will create a current of wind that the fire will follow. The fire will begin to circulate around his body and solidify into the form of a phoenix that upon forming will let out a great screech accompanied by a fire ball that it will spit out. The fire ball is 10 feet in diameter it can also be directed. The fireball moves at 20 feet per second and the flames of it can cause 3rd degree burns if made contact with.

Then once all of this is completed Zetzray who is now in the form of a phoenix that is 18 feet tall and 10 feet wide, will dive through the air at the speed of 25 feet per second until the phoenix reaches the destination that it wants to crash into. Upon crashing the phoenix explodes into a dome of flames that is 45 feet in diameter and then like a soufflé it flattens causing the flames to disperse in every direction. The flames reach out to 55 feet from the sot that the phoenix crashed into. The flames cause third degree burns if they are made contact with. The flames are also capable of lighting flammable surfaces on fire such as (trees or buildings).After the use of the technique Zetzray receives 2nd degree burns on his arms and legs and 1st degree burns on his torso, which decreases his movement speed by 35% for the rest of the topic. This technique takes one post to execute and may only be used once per topic.

The Jutsu is weak against water. And if a water jutsu of B rank comes in contact with the flames, they will be put out. This applies for all higher water techniques as well.


Last edited by Zetzray Edrick on Sun Feb 12, 2012 11:17 pm; edited 5 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 9:19 pm

Ok, if it takes three steps, could you make three separate paragraphs for each so I can better break this down?
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Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 9:42 pm

bump
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 9:53 pm

Ok, the first thing I see is this. The fireball doesn't have to be B Rank, it is just a part of the jutsu. Therefore that fire is just as powerful as the overall fire, and can do damage that A Rank fire can do. So remove that it is a b rank fire and word it to flow in with the rest of the technique.

Secondly, you dont have to wait a post to do the second part, the technique can all be done in the same post. You wont get the effect your looking for if you wait. Obviously the fireball is the distraction to allow one to dive at the point the enemy will be. So word it to where all of this is one attack and bump.
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Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 10:07 pm

edited


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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 10:32 pm

All I need now is what this jutsu is weak against. Obviously, B Rank water. So state what water can do vs. this technique.
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Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 10:36 pm

bump
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 10:57 pm

Ok, to make sure you commit to the technique, I just need the clarification that this all happens within one post and isn't a multiple post jutsu. After that, I can price.
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Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 11:03 pm

it does, and I edited that in.
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 11:11 pm

I see it now. Just fix a few spelling errors before purchasing it. 9,500 Ryo.
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Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 11:13 pm

How much will it be if trained for?
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptySun Feb 12, 2012 11:16 pm

The rules for that are in the training area.
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Zetzray Edrick
Zetzray Edrick
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptyMon Feb 13, 2012 11:59 pm

I would like to purchase this.
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptyWed Feb 15, 2012 3:29 pm

Your purchasing Phoenix Funeral? I had to ask because I prefer not to assume what your going to buy to avoid deducting the wrong amount of ryo.
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptyWed Feb 15, 2012 8:03 pm

Yes please :)
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptyWed Feb 15, 2012 9:06 pm

Ryo Deducted
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PostSubject: Re: Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration)   Edrick, Zetzray (Technique Registration) - Page 2 EmptyMon Feb 20, 2012 9:40 pm

Name: Elemental Amplification
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Element: Wind, Fire and lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Range:Close
Description: This is a technique that was created by Zetzray while he was on his 0ne year journey. This allows him to infuse chakra into his blade and surround it in either wind or fire chakra. While this technique is in use jutsus can be used, this technique lasts 7 posts.
The wind element sharpens the blade and allows Zetzray to cut through things easier,the sword can penetrate 5 inches deeper into materials that the blade can normally cut into. The fire is not capable of making an opponent bleed because the flame is hot enough to instantly cauterize wounds, if a person is cut by the fire around the blade it causes 3rd degree burns and if they are stabbed it causes 3rd as well. However the fire can light flammable things on fire if it makes contact with it.The Lightning factor of the jutsu can cause 3rd degree electrical burns upon contact and can numb limbs for a post. The limb that is hit will be 20 % less effective for 2 posts. The lightning can conduct other metals.
Cooldown is 10 posts
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11,000 Ryo
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