Name: Living Weapons
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 20 feet
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: 1
Cooldown: 2
Description: Requires no handseals. Using the Shikotsumyaku ability, the user can produce four weapons via the bones in their body. Using this jutsu, the user can create kunai from their forearm. This is especially useful in the event that one has run out of standard weapons. This technique may create up to four kunai at any given time before cooldown takes place. If used repetitively, the previously made kunai will turn into calcium goo.

Name: Bone Claw
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: Close Range
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: 4 (or until other Kaguya tech is initiated)
Cooldown: 2
Description: Requires no handseals. Using the Kaguya clan's Shikotsumyaku, The user can create something of Bonemail gauntlets, where the tips of the fingers a extremely sharp. Spira developed this during training, and finds it quite useful for both close range combat, and catching fish with sharp fins! The tips of the fingers are approximately 1 inch in added length, giving the user a slight boost in arm reach, however the very same thing prevents them from making a fist. The density of the bone is high enough to protect against most metal objects, but low enough to not weight down the user.


Name: Dead Blade
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: Close to Mid Range
Specialty: Taijutsu
Duration: 3 (or until other Kaguya tech is initiated)
Cooldown: 2
Description: Requires no handseals. Using the Shikotsumyaku ability of the Kaguya clan, the user can turn their own right arm (from the  elbow down) into an extremely sharp sword that extends the reach of the users right arm by .75 feet (9 inches). The blade of the arm-sword (I guess it would be called) is as sharp as a freshly sharpened kunai, and is single edged like a katana. This technique was developed by Spira in an attempt to create bone-based weaponry, however he found this particular ability to be both useful and practical. Not only is it good for cutting down enemies, it's also great for filleting fish, and chopping vegetables!

Please change these two to the following

• Type: Offensive
  
• Specialty: Taijutsu

I know Im not a mod, but I feel like Bone Claw needs to still be polished a little before approval. You say that the fingertips are extremely sharp, this is rather vague, maybe give an example. Also, how much punishment can these claws receive before breaking? Up to what kind of physical attacks could it block, or if you can actually block any, you state it can protect you from sharp fins, but thats not it is it?

Dead Blade: This is a C rank jutsu, due to its length being on par with the Camellia Dance.

Living Weapon: I need a max cap on how many weapons you make, also limit yourself to only producing kunai. Also state where from your body you are producing these from.

Saizo: Disregarded

Ready for more reviews.

Skeletal Fortification

• You don't need this, your bones are already the density of steel so you are just being redundant in this factor.
  

Living Weapons

Quote :

Requires no handseals. Using the Shikotsumyaku ability, the user can produce three weapons via the bones in their body. Using this jutsu, the user can create kunai from their forearm. This is especially useful in the event that one has run out of standard weapons. This tech can only be used once per fight, so the user must be sure that they need the weapons at the immediate moment. This technique may create up to four kunai at any given time before cooldown takes place. If used repetitively, the previously made kunai will turn into calcium goo.

• Take out all that I highlighted in red for that jutsu and copy and paste what I put in green
  

Dead Blade

• Change the range to close
  
• State how sharp the blade is
  
• Is it single or dual edged?
  

Right... Updated for the EIGHTEENTH time...

Tis approved, enjoy your jutsu.