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 Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration

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Sakigake
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PostSubject: Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration   Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration EmptyFri Jun 27, 2014 4:49 pm

Name: Dark Glue
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range:  Close
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration: 1 post to place
Cooldown: 2 posts
Description: Places a small seal onto two objects, and seals them together, acting as an adhesive. This binding is incredibly weak and is not meant for combat use, merely as a temporary solution.

Name: Dark levitatoon
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Close
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Passive
Cooldown: Passive
Description: Merely allows the users Grimoire to float next to them while in combat.

Name: Dark Weaponry
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 3 posts
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: Requires a post charge equivalent to the handseals required for a D-rank. The users Grimoire flips through it's pages, stopping randomly at a drawing. This drawing is of a weapon, whatever kind the user wishes, which is then created from chakra and tinged a redish black colour. These weapons can take any aesthetic appearance the user wishes, and all act as a regular version of that weapon would. Roughly as strong as iron, and can not be destroyed by anything less than a C-rank jutsu, or gear equal or greater in power. Once a form has been chosen the weapon can not change from that shape for the rest of the duration, meaning that if this technique creates a small dagger it remains that size and shape for the entire duration.


Name: Dark Lance
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 15 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Explained in description
Cooldown: 3 posts minimum, 1 post added for every post of charge
Description: No handseals. This jutsu requires a charge up, for every post of charge up the user does they gain two posts of this jutsu being active. The users grimoire floats at head height, and fires off sharp lances of chakra. These lances are about 2 feet long, and an inch thick at the base, narrowing to a millimetre in thickness at the tip. They move at 25Km/H. They have the power to pierce into the human body, about two inches into muscle. Five can be made per post. This jutsu's cooldown is as long as it's duration.

Name: Dark Needles
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 20 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Explained in description
Cooldown: 3 posts minimum, 1 post added for every post of charge
Description: Requires charge up. The users Grimoire floats about ten feet in the air above the enemy, at any possible angle, and fires off thirty needles, each of which being an inch long, and a millimetre thick, they move at 30 Km/H. Capable of inflicting massive amounts of damage should they actually connect, capable of piercing deep into the human body, possibly puncturing organs, should they hit the proper area. This jutsu's cooldown is as long as it's duration.


Name: Dark Hands
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 4 posts
Cooldown: 7 posts
Description: This jutsu requires a charge up equal to the handseal requirement of a B-rank jutsu. The user's Grimoire floats behind their back, creating two large fists out of the chakra poured into it. These hands and arms are a blackish red, and cover the user's current arms, increasing the size of the limbs by triple in all proportions, before disconnecting themselves and floating independent of the user. These hands have the same stats as the user however they gain an increase to the strength stat by one, and are capable of preforming any motion or action a regular arm can. If these arms were to be broken somehow they take a post to reform these arms can be broken by B rank techniques(such as a technique meant for slicing or piercing, 2 slicing jutsu though, such as a B Rank Kenjutsu technique. But only 1 piercing Raiton jutsu). Can be broken by weapon, techniques A rank or higher.

Name: Dark Seal
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Specialty: Fuuinjutsu
Duration:  1 post
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: Requires charge up equal handseals. Afterwards the user places a hand on their Grimoire, and it floats next to them. The next technique used against the user will be redirected towards the Grimoire as it vacuums the technique towards itself, and sealed within it's pages. After a post of being sealed and if the user is capable of using the sealed technique, they can make use of it, once in that topic only. Works on any ranged jutsu of the same rank or lower.


Last edited by Sakigake on Mon Jul 07, 2014 9:33 pm; edited 6 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration   Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration EmptySat Jun 28, 2014 6:30 am

Dark Weaponry
  • You need to clarify a maximum shape and form. Using this jutsu, I won't expect you to pullout a sword and then change it into a chain. Or pull out a mace and turn it into a giant hammer.


Dark
  • I think you forgot to finish the name for this jutsu?


Dark Needles
  • On a fundamental basis, this jutsu is OP. You charge up and gain 1 charge/use per post of charge, have your grimoire float above the opponent's hed and fire off 50 senbon directly on top of them. As a C Rank, 30 senbon would be more realistic and given the aspects of this jutsu, I can't allow it to be maintained. It's just unfair that way.


Dark Hands
  • As B Rank, you are allowed to have such a jutsu to increase 1 soul stat by one rank for the duration of the jutsu; however you cannot have triple. Specify how big these arms are & their reaching-range. Personally I must say, this is a Nintaijutsu technique: it is a jutsu that increases your physical soul stats(such as SPD, STR & END) You will either need to hange this jutsu or get the Nintaijutsu subspecialization(&you currently lack the specializations for it)


Dark Seal
  • Reword this jutsu; the way you say it is just too absolute. My suggestion is to have the book intercept the attack and suck it inside the pages of the book like a vacuum. Also- This jutsu could only work on a ranged attack, like Ninjutsu with a fireball or lightning bolt. Genjutsu, Taijutsu & Nintaijutsu would not be affected. Granted Nintaijutsu MIGHT lose the desired elemental effect based on the ability(Such as a fiery punch, but not a lightning speed infused punch)
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PostSubject: Re: Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration   Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration EmptyThu Jul 03, 2014 12:55 am

Dark weaponry:

Once a form has been chosen the weapon can not change from that shape for the rest of the duration, meaning that if this technique creates a small dagger it remains that size and shape for the entire duration.

Forgot to mention that to begin with.

Dark Lance:

Name fixed

Dark needles:

Edits made

Dark hands:

When I said triple in all proportions I meant proportions IE: Width, length and thickness, not stats, my apologies. As the next sentence says it increases only the STR stat by one.

Dark Seal:

Edited. And I knew it would have no effect on nin, ken, etc, Though hadn't thought of the Nintai elemental portion.
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PostSubject: Re: Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration   Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration EmptySat Jul 05, 2014 4:58 pm

Dark Lance
  • The cooldown minimum will be 3 posts, any after that, you can decide on how much longer the cooldown is.


Dark Needles
  • The cooldown minimum will be 3 posts, any after that, you can decide on how much longer the cooldown is.


Dark Hands
  • This still requires a Nintaijutsu specialization to utilize. techniques that increase your own stats as well as bolster your body or are connected to your body in this way is labeled as nintaijutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration   Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration EmptySat Jul 05, 2014 8:42 pm

Dark Lance/Needles: Edited

Dark Hands:

If I made it so that they are not attached to the body, and act independently of it, would that be classified as no long nintai?
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PostSubject: Re: Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration   Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration EmptyMon Jul 07, 2014 9:31 pm

Dark Hands
  • With a 7 post cooldown, I can find this acceptable- however, you need to specify that these arms can be broken by B rank techniques(such as a technique meant for slicing or piercing, 2 slicing jutsu though, such as a B Rank Kenjutsu technique. But only 1 piercing Raiton jutsu)
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PostSubject: Re: Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration   Endoresu, Sakigake Technique registration EmptyMon Jul 07, 2014 9:34 pm

Added in details as needed.
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