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 Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE]

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Genin

Hosi
Hosi
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Ryo : 44755

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PostSubject: Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE]   Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE] EmptyMon Jul 28, 2014 4:53 am

Fire style

D Rank:

Wind Style

D Rank:

C Rank:


Ninjutsu

E Rank:

Taijutsu

E Rank:

D Rank:

C Rank:


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PostSubject: Re: Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE]   Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE] EmptyWed Jul 30, 2014 4:55 pm

Hi Hi!
Fire style: Smoke mist Jutsu
  • So what's the max area that this jutsu can cover?
  • Can natural winds blow the smoke away?
  • Is the user susceptible to suffocation?


Fire style: Micro Fire Jutsu
  • It's a D rank so I do not believe it'll cause any burns of the second degree.
  • How long would this temporary blindness last?
  • How fast does this mini fire travel?


Wind style: Air Floor
  • Give it a definite duration. If you'd like to extend the duration that is fine but it will require chakra to do so.
  • Can the Wind floor be destroyed by any means?
  • Decrease the max size a bit
  • Alright you kind of countered yourself. It says that neither the user (You) or the opponent can tell the floor is there but in the next sentence you say the jutsu caster (You) can know the floor is there, which is it?


Wind style: Wind Shuriken Jutsu
  • How big is the large shuriken? or how many of the small shurikens?
  • How long does it take for the shurikens to materialize?
  • What is their speed?
  • How strong are they?


Wind Style: Devils Speed
  • O_O Holy mother... 200 Mph? For a C Rank? No no no decrease that speed increase by alot


Edit these and we'll continue
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Genin

Hosi
Hosi
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PostSubject: Re: Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE]   Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE] EmptyWed Jul 30, 2014 7:08 pm

Bimp Bimp.... I believe is how everyone says it/
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Vex
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PostSubject: Re: Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE]   Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE] EmptyTue Aug 05, 2014 6:45 am

Fire style: Smoke mist Jutsu- If this has a 4 post duration, the cooldown needs to be six posts; that way you still have a 2 post intermission between use.

Fire style: Micro Fire Jutsu- Blinding someone for 3 posts is OP, especially for a D Rank skill. This jutsu pretty much gives you an auto-hit if you don't miss. So I say 1 post of blinding.

Wind style: Air Floor-Make it 20x20 maximum for D Rank. A jutsu one rank above this jutsu would be able to destroy it, not 3(That's ridiculous) A jutsu of the same rank would take 2 to destroy it.
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(Here comes the hard part) This jutsu is invisible to none sensory types, none byakugan users or shinobi that have eyes similar to the byakugan, and none users of the jutsu. Users of this jutsu are blind to the air floor by sight, but they can sense where the air wall is, how big it is, and how many there are since he is using his own chakra to compress the air particles.
This counteracts itself. If the user knows where the floor is because of their chakra and can sense it, then the sharringan & the byakugan would also be able to see this floor.

Wind Style: Devils Speed- Using this jutsu on yourself constitutes as Nintaijutsu, which youdo not possess. So you will not be able to bolster your own physical speed with this jutsu. Also, S Rank speed is 50kmph which is 31mph. At C Rank, at most this should make it 15mph for projectiles. Lastly, since the Duration is 3 posts, the Cooldown should be 7 posts.

Transformation Jutsu- This justu is already on the site & is an Academy jutsu(Henge no Jutsu) You can't add it to your list here with different effects.

Swift Wind
- As a Taijutsu skill, the effectiveness of this technique will be dependent on your SPD stat VS their own SPD stat, you wouldn't be able to close in well against someone with higher SPD than you.

Rising wind falling storm- This is somewhat similar to the Revesral Lotus- which required the Gates to use since it takes a LOT of strength to kick someone into the air. You would need A Rank or higher STR to accomplish this without the Gates.
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Hosi
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PostSubject: Re: Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE]   Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE] EmptyTue Aug 05, 2014 10:19 pm

Bimp Bimp Bimp Bimp Bimp ^_^
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Vex
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PostSubject: Re: Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE]   Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE] EmptyWed Aug 06, 2014 3:23 am

You only have 8 starter jutsu at the moment, if I approve these, you will have to pay for any other jutsu. You are allowed 10 free starter jutsu.
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Hosi
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Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE] Empty
PostSubject: Re: Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE]   Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE] EmptyWed Aug 06, 2014 3:36 am

I will create two more jutsu's then bimp you later if that is the case.
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Hosi
Hosi
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PostSubject: Re: Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE]   Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE] EmptyThu Aug 07, 2014 1:39 am

I have added two Taijutsu's E and D rank and I am ready to be checked.
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Vex
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PostSubject: Re: Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE]   Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE] EmptyThu Aug 07, 2014 10:44 pm

Force Palm- The effect should be STR vs END, not END vs END.
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Hosi
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PostSubject: Re: Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE]   Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE] EmptyThu Aug 07, 2014 10:49 pm

Signed, sealed, delivered, its done.
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Vex
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PostSubject: Re: Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE]   Senpū Hosi's Jutsu registration [COMPLETE] EmptyThu Aug 07, 2014 11:31 pm

Approved
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