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 Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN]

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Seracen
Seracen
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PostSubject: Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN]   Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN] EmptySun Aug 03, 2014 5:31 am

Name: Quick Sheathing
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary
Element: N/A
Range: Self
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: Immediate
Cooldown: 0 posts
Description: A technique that allows the sword to be resheathed quickly. As the sword is swung (though always after the attack hits or misses), the sword is turned in the wielder's hands mid-swing so that it can be returned to a scabbard on the opposite hip. A base technique of the Phantom Blade style.

Name: Secondary Draw
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: E
Type: Supplementary, Defensive
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: Immediate
Cooldown: 0 posts
Description: A technique that makes an attempt to stop the sword from being drawn out of the sheath dangerous for an opponent. Instead of the classic method of drawing the blade, the sword and scabbard are shifted so that the blade is facing upwards. This means that an attempt to grip the wielder's wrist will result in the opponent's hand being cut by the blade. Can only be performed correctly if the wielder's SPE statistic is higher than the opponent's.

Name: Sword Ejection
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Supplementary, Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 5 feet
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: Immediate
Cooldown: 5 post cooldown
Description: An extremely simple technique which requires a single post in order to gather chakra before activation. The user gathers raw chakra into the scabbard until the pressure reaches it's desired strength. During this time, the user's hands must be holding the scabbard and the sword. The sword is then allowed to release,  either as part of the drawing of the blade, or as a projectile attack that causes minor bruises to the opponent. While the projectile method is used primarily as a diversion, the actual drawing method can be fairly destructive, as it increases the cutting ability of the sword by one rank for this strike only. This does not stack with any other increases to cutting ability and does not raise the cutting ability by more than C-rank.

Name: Genbu Parry
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Type: Defensive
Element: -
Range: Touch
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: Immediate
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: Typically the first technique learned in the Five Beast Step style. The parry is fairly simple, but also difficult to master. Rather than a typical fencing parry, which is only a quick flick of the handguard to knock an attack away, the Genbu Parry is a full blade movement that can guard against thrusts, chops, and swings. The user turns their body away from the blow, or in either direction when a thrust is used, and uses the flat of the blade to stop or redirect the attack, with the wielder's blade facing the opponent. This causes an opening in most defenses for other techniques.

Name: Byakku Strike
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: Immediate
Cooldown: 0 posts
Description: This technique is only used after a successful Genbu Parry and the second technique of the Five Beast Step style. After the parry succeeds, the user thrusts the metal handguard of the weapon into the opponent's face, the flat of the blade maintaining contact with the opponent's weapon in order to keep it blocked. This punch is capable of knocking an opponent back as far as two meters (no effect if the opponent's Endurance is higher than or matching the user's Strength) and dealing damage to the opponent's face, if applicable.

Name: Seiryu Thrust
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: 2 meters
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: Immediate
Cooldown: 5 posts
Description: This technique is only used after a successful Byakku Strike and is the third technique of the Five Beast Step style. After the opponent is knocked backwards by the strike, the user focuses chakra along the entirety of the blade before thrusting it forwards, causing a surge of chakra to be launched at the opponent. Following this chakra thrust is the user of the technique,  blade pointed at the target, who is pulled forwards by the vacuum left in the wake of the chakra blast. Due to the quickness of the chakra charge-up, the chakra thrust is little more than a blunt push when it reaches the opponent, capable of causing bruises and surprise, but little else.

Name: Sunburst
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Element: Katon
Range: Touch
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Immediate
Cooldown: 10 posts
Description: After performing one full post of handseals, the user blows fire chakra into their palm, collecting it together. This condensed fire chakra gives off an inordinate amount of light, earning the jutsu it's name. Upon contact with the target, the chakra causes an intense burning sensation, leaving behind second degree burns on the skin and burning through clothing as it comes in contact with the chakra.

Name: Sunburst Blast
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: Katon
Range: 5 meters from center
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 6 posts
Cooldown: 12 posts
Description: After two full posts of handseals, the user blows fire chakra into their palm, collecting it together and condensing it to add so much more fire chakra than the original technique. The chakra then is thrust into the ground, causing the earth to heat up around the user and raising the general temperature of the area to the point that those with an Endurance statistic lower than the user can suffer from heat exhaustion after 6 full posts within the area of effect. Note: cooldown times listed for Sunburst techniques are the number of posts between one use of a Sunburst technique and the use of any other techniques of the Sunburst family.

Name: Shujaku Flurry
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: Touch
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: 2 posts
Cooldown: 6 posts if used outside of the order of the Five Beast Step style.
Description: Typically used as the fourth technique of the Five Beast Step style. This attack can follow a failed Seiryu Thrust if the opponent parries the thrust into a different direction, or if the thrust lands after the blade is pulled away from the opponent. Following the motion of the opponent's parry (or immediately following the sword being brought back to a ready fighting position), the wielder charges the sword with chakra during a swing so that the chakra bursts forth from the blade upon contact. This action can be repeated for as long as two posts in a flurry of attacks aimed at an opponent's sides. The blasts of chakra are rather weak due to the short amount of time between blasts of chakra, but each attack is powerful enough to cause painful bruises, causing the same damage a punch from the user would cause. The chakra blasts can hit even if the blade itself is blocked, unless the opponent can block more than half of the blade this attack is used with. This technique allows the user to make fives strikes per post against the opponent.


Last edited by Seracen on Tue Aug 05, 2014 6:30 pm; edited 4 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN]   Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN] EmptyMon Aug 04, 2014 3:40 pm

Sword Ejection- Only Nintaijutsu increases statistics, not Kenjutsu.

Sunburst- This is a Nintaijutsu move.

Sunburst Blast- This is Nintaijutsu as well.

Shujaku Flurry- Only Nintaijutsu increases statistics.

One other thing to mention is that the universal cooldown for your jutsu have set cooldowns. You need to specify both the duration & cooldown of these jutsu. I understand that your jutsu are in sword-tech form, but their still jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN]   Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN] EmptyMon Aug 04, 2014 7:17 pm

Got rid of statistic bonuses, added durations and cooldowns.

But I feel I must disagree with the idea that any jutsu which requires physical interaction is nintaijutsu, as that would make many purely ninjutsu techniques considered nintaijutsu. My understanding is that nintaijutsu is ninjutsu being utilized in order to enhance taijutsu techniques.
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PostSubject: Re: Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN]   Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN] EmptyTue Aug 05, 2014 6:21 am

Nintaijutsu is the skill of enhancing oneself with chakra/elements- not just taijutsu. Though I do see your point.

Shujaku Flurry- If this jutsu can be used in a flurry of strikes for two posts, specify an amount of strikes per post it can do.
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PostSubject: Re: Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN]   Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN] EmptyTue Aug 05, 2014 1:09 pm

Included number of strikes per post.
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PostSubject: Re: Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN]   Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN] EmptyTue Aug 05, 2014 2:12 pm

Duration on your last jutsu needs to have a 6post cooldown, not including the duration
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PostSubject: Re: Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN]   Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN] EmptyTue Aug 05, 2014 6:55 pm

Changed it in order to match what is required.
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PostSubject: Re: Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN]   Seracen's Jutsu Registration [FIN] EmptyWed Aug 06, 2014 3:18 am

Approved
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