The islands in Ocean Country have been celebrating the arrival of the next Umikage, Saizo. The long bridge leading to SHIPPUUGAKURE NO SATO has been closed for outsiders because they wish to celebrate this moment with Ocean Country natives only.
As usual, the Storm Country has been hosting the Asgard Games to welcome their Kanetsukage, Cornelia. It's a double special occasion because Cornelia is also the first female Kanetsukage. She has been picked for her courage, loyalty and outstanding power by the BOUFUUGAKURE NO SATO elders.
Not only that, but the Cherry Blossom Country has become relieved as well. It seems that everyone is slowly picking up after the war now. KUSAMURAGAKURE NO SATO proudly presented their new Sakurakage, Altair.
TSUKIGAKURE NO SATO is still thriving on the merchants coming in and out. They have not experienced anything special lately. Their wealth has remained the same as they were not forced to invest into shinobi unlike the others.
On the cold isles of the Blizzard Country, HYOUGAGAKURE NO SATO has still refused to create a free traveling policy. Some habits never change. To protect their traditions, they have even warned outsiders to not interfere with their matters.
Now that everyone is picking up again, who will come out on top?
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Name: Bubble Clone Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: E-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Range: two meters Specialty: Supplementary Duration: Instant; Four posts. Cooldown: Post per bubble clone. Description: The user is able to user nearby water sources, or one's created by the user to form bubble creations. Using the standard rat seal as the median for this technique. These take the exact form of the original, but hold a more plump appearance. It is translucent, easily broken, but provides only a sticky residue when popped in a two meter range. They also create a blurred image of things projected through them, giving off a warped appearance of what may truly lie behind. They are actual bubbles, but act as a human.
Name: Method of Wire Control Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: E-rank Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu/Weaponry Element: None Range: Self; conductible. Specialty: Supplementary Duration: Two posts. Cooldown: Three posts. Description: The user can manifest chakra at will, and use it to conduct into wires. This allows the user to hold extra control when using wires, and other objects to create obstacles for their opponents to face. The extra control isn't strong, but enough for the user to give themselves additional ability in changing direction of wired projectiles.
Name: Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D-rank Type: Genjutsu Element: None Range: 10m Specialty: Supplementary Cooldown: Two posts. Description:(Handseals: Snake > Rat)This illusion best works in surprise attacks. The target will first see something swirling around them common to the area, leaves, loose snow, sand. On their next post, they will begin to see and hear something that they would never want to see, the death of a loved one, old people making love, it ranges. It shows them their worst fears. Can be broken by kai, pain, etc. Pain in the genjutsu does not break it (given their worst fear is something like fire).
Name: Delusional Method Technique Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D-rank Type: Genjutsu Element: None Range: 10m Specialty: Supplementary Duration: Three Posts Cooldown: Three posts Description: A technique that when setting onto an opponent by looking in their eyes, making contact, or through noise it will start to manipulate their chakra slow. Thus will make the appearance that wolves are surrounding them, or at least aiming to sneak with the intent on attacking the victim. Thus giving them the idea that they are in harms way, and will collectively form a paranoia and give the user the upper hand in a battle. A supplementary method to use for openings, and to weaken the opponent mentally. Breaking such can only be done through normal means of genjutsu, such as Genjutsu Kaii, or even physical pain.
Name: Hiding in Mist Technique Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Range: 15m Specialty: Supplementary Duration: Five posts Cooldown: Four posts. Description: After completing the required hand signs this technique will allow, the water to be drawn out of the air. This is done by merging the hydrogen particles and the oxygen particles for the user to create a large mist around the area that will limit visibility for up to five feet in front of anyone caught within the mist. The mist is rather large in size, but can be blown away by a strong enough Fuuton technique(B or Higher), and can be partially blown away by smaller ones.
Name: Water Slide Method Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Range: 1m Specialty: Supplementary Duration: One Post Cooldown: Three Posts Description: The user will make the handseal(s) required: Rat, Bird, Dragon before they can shift their body in a mild temporary water like state. It will force them into a puddle on the ground, but they can move roughly one meter in any direction momentarily until they are forced back into their original state. This is used for good dodging methods.
Name: Water Spear Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Range: 5m Specialty: Offensive Duration: Instant Cooldown: Four posts. Description: The user will make four hand seals: Boat, Ram, Ox, Tiger. Thus allowing the full sustainability of the jutsu, and able to commence it now. Once the seals are finished they will be able to stomp the ground forcing nearby water upwards, extending a palm which would allow the water to form in a spherical shape before it takes a spear like appearance. It is then shot forward with quick speeds(35 MPH) to try piercing objects. Once striking though, it will vanish.
Name: Flying Edge Technique Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Range: 10m Specialty: Offensive Duration: One Post. Cooldown: 5 Shuriken = 2 Post 10 Shuriken = 3 Posts 15 Shuriken = 4 Posts 20 Shuriken = 5 Posts 25 Shuriken = 6 Posts Description: The user will clasp their hands, focusing on the surrounding water, and forming shuriken out of the source. Each five shuriken costs an additional C-rank amount of chakra for a maximum of 25 total. This can be used to ambush an opponent. They are not nearly as strong as the metal variants, but they can still puncture, and cause flesh wounds. Once puncturing, they will dissipate.
Name: Spitting Fountain Technique Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Range: 20meters Specialty: Supplementary Duration: Instant. Cooldown: Six posts. Description: This technique consists of the user holding the rat seal, concentrating chakra into their stomach, and molding it properly until it starts to actually utilize into a substance. That's when it will force the user to literally puke out a huge amount of water, letting it fall down, and building a smaller sized pond at any location the user wants. It spreads roughly twenty-meters wide, and is fairly deep around four feet deep. It's greatly useful in many situations.
Name: Stratospheric Punch Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B-rank Type: Taijutsu Element: None Range: 1m Specialty: Offensive Duration: One Post. Cooldown: Three Posts. Description: The user doesn't need to use seals for this technique but rather manifest a chakra onto the outer layer of their fist. This includes chakra flowing through their fingers, and even condensing in their palm to allow a stronger mass to accumulate. When using this technique, the user will put a large force into their blow forming a first layer of heat that represents troposphere. It will form around the fist, taking an orange color, and followed with a white layer that takes the visual of the stratosphere. It's due to the velocity of the punch that represents the actual power behind the blow.
When connecting, it will throw the object/target easily. It will cause bruising, bruising of bone, and even fractures when connecting to a normal person. It will even leave minor burns too due to the speed of the punch picking up heat along the transition to strike the opponent.
Last edited by Tadashi on Fri Aug 22, 2014 6:04 am; edited 1 time in total
Subject: Re: Fujimoto, Tadashi's Jutsu Registration Tue Aug 19, 2014 6:02 am
Starting Jutsu:
Name: Bubble Clone Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: E-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Range: two meters Specialty: Supplementary Duration: Instant; Four posts. Cooldown: Post per bubble clone. Description: The user is able to user nearby water sources, or one's created by the user to form bubble creations. Using the standard rat seal as the median for this technique. These take the exact form of the original, but hold a more plump appearance. It is translucent, easily broken, but provides only a sticky residue when popped in a two meter range. They also create a blurred image of things projected through them, giving off a warped appearance of what may truly lie behind. They are actual bubbles, but act as a human.
Name: Method of Wire Control Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: E-rank Type: Ninjutsu/Taijutsu/Weaponry Element: None Range: Self; conductible. Specialty: Supplementary Duration: Two posts. Cooldown: Three posts. Description: The user can manifest chakra at will, and use it to conduct into wires. This allows the user to hold extra control when using wires, and other objects to create obstacles for their opponents to face. The extra control isn't strong, but enough for the user to give themselves additional ability in changing direction of wired projectiles.
Name: Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D-rank Type: Genjutsu Element: None Range: 10m Specialty: Supplementary Cooldown: Two posts. Description:(Handseals: Snake > Rat)This illusion best works in surprise attacks. The target will first see something swirling around them common to the area, leaves, loose snow, sand. On their next post, they will begin to see and hear something that they would never want to see, the death of a loved one, old people making love, it ranges. It shows them their worst fears. Can be broken by kai, pain, etc. Pain in the genjutsu does not break it (given their worst fear is something like fire).
Name: Delusional Method Technique Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D-rank Type: Genjutsu Element: None Range: 10m Specialty: Supplementary Duration: Three Posts Cooldown: Three posts Description: A technique that when setting onto an opponent by looking in their eyes, making contact, or through noise it will start to manipulate their chakra slow. Thus will make the appearance that wolves are surrounding them, or at least aiming to sneak with the intent on attacking the victim. Thus giving them the idea that they are in harms way, and will collectively form a paranoia and give the user the upper hand in a battle. A supplementary method to use for openings, and to weaken the opponent mentally. Breaking such can only be done through normal means of genjutsu, such as Genjutsu Kaii, or even physical pain.
Name: Hiding in Mist Technique Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: D-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Range: 15m Specialty: Supplementary Duration: Five posts Cooldown: Four posts. Description: After completing the required hand signs this technique will allow, the water to be drawn out of the air. This is done by merging the hydrogen particles and the oxygen particles for the user to create a large mist around the area that will limit visibility for up to five feet in front of anyone caught within the mist. The mist is rather large in size, but can be blown away by a strong enough Fuuton technique(B or Higher), and can be partially blown away by smaller ones.
Name: Water Slide Method Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Range: 1m Specialty: Supplementary Duration: One Post Cooldown: Three Posts Description: The user will make the handseal(s) required: Rat, Bird, Dragon before they can shift their body in a mild temporary water like state. It will force them into a puddle on the ground, but they can move roughly one meter in any direction momentarily until they are forced back into their original state. This is used for good dodging methods.
Name: Water Spear Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Range: 5m Specialty: Offensive Duration: Instant Cooldown: Four posts. Description: The user will make four hand seals: Boat, Ram, Ox, Tiger. Thus allowing the full sustainability of the jutsu, and able to commence it now. Once the seals are finished they will be able to stomp the ground forcing nearby water upwards, extending a palm which would allow the water to form in a spherical shape before it takes a spear like appearance. It is then shot forward with quick speeds(35 MPH) to try piercing objects. Once striking though, it will vanish.
Name: Flying Edge Technique Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Range: 10m Specialty: Offensive Duration: One Post. Cooldown: 5 Shuriken = 2 Post 10 Shuriken = 3 Posts 15 Shuriken = 4 Posts 20 Shuriken = 5 Posts 25 Shuriken = 6 Posts Description: The user will clasp their hands, focusing on the surrounding water, and forming shuriken out of the source. Each five shuriken costs an additional C-rank amount of chakra for a maximum of 25 total. This can be used to ambush an opponent. They are not nearly as strong as the metal variants, but they can still puncture, and cause flesh wounds. Once puncturing, they will dissipate.
Name: Spitting Fountain Technique Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B-rank Type: Ninjutsu Element: Suiton Range: 20meters Specialty: Supplementary Duration: Instant. Cooldown: Six posts. Description: This technique consists of the user holding the rat seal, concentrating chakra into their stomach, and molding it properly until it starts to actually utilize into a substance. That's when it will force the user to literally puke out a huge amount of water, letting it fall down, and building a smaller sized pond at any location the user wants. It spreads roughly twenty-meters wide, and is fairly deep around four feet deep. It's greatly useful in many situations.
Name: Stratospheric Punch Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B-rank Type: Taijutsu Element: None Range: 1m Specialty: Offensive Duration: One Post. Cooldown: Three Posts. Description: The user doesn't need to use seals for this technique but rather manifest a chakra onto the outer layer of their fist. This includes chakra flowing through their fingers, and even condensing in their palm to allow a stronger mass to accumulate. When using this technique, the user will put a large force into their blow forming a first layer of heat that represents troposphere. It will form around the fist, taking an orange color, and followed with a white layer that takes the visual of the stratosphere. It's due to the velocity of the punch that represents the actual power behind the blow.
When connecting, it will throw the object/target easily. It will cause bruising, bruising of bone, and even fractures when connecting to a normal person. It will even leave minor burns too due to the speed of the punch picking up heat along the transition to strike the opponent.
Last edited by Tadashi on Fri Aug 22, 2014 2:55 am; edited 5 times in total
I need you to go through your jutsu and change out all the descriptions with the jutsu that are in the database. Hiding in Mist and Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing are already in our jutsu database.
Also, the temporary paralysis technique is a huge no-no. You will have to come up with a different D-rank jutsu.
Bump when you are done making changes and the grading will continue.
Subject: Re: Fujimoto, Tadashi's Jutsu Registration Thu Aug 21, 2014 5:01 am
Bubble Clone - This requires an actual duration since it is a clone. Also state in its description that this will have the chakra cost and upkeep of a D-rank. It has no influence over combat, but it is an advanced version of Bunshin due to the addition of an element, hence the cost and upkeep of D-rank.
Method of Wire Control - Just to be sure, this is just a small increase in the handling of wires, yes? Like how an electrician knows more about plugs 'n such. If so, then it's okay. It shouldn't be a rank advantage or something like that. Basically, this is more of a simple utility technique, yes?
Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing - Approved; from database.
Delusional Method - At the end of the description, please add details regarding how to dispel the genjutsu, such as Kai and via pain.
Hiding in Mist - Approved; from database.
Water Slide - Approved.
Water Spear - The duration should say "instant." The cooldown needs to be a minimum of 4 posts, as the rules state for C-rank jutsu. Also, you need to state exactly how fast the spear is thrown. "shot forward with quick speeds" is too vague.
Flying Edge -
Tadashi wrote:
place them in a critical condition
This needs to be removed. The reason for this is due to the fact that the damage inflicted depends on your opponent's END stat. Another reason is that some people could take this as a sort of "always-happen must-happen" effect. It would be like the concept of auto-hitting. For the sake of any complaints that could happen, please remove it, along with the first reason I gave.
Also, the 25 total is fine with the chakra cost for every 5. However the cooldown needs to be 6, since the amount you could create is higher than normal for a C-rank jutsu.
Spitting Fountain - B-rank jutsu require a minimum of 6 posts for cooldown. Tell me exactly how deep the pond is, and please use yards instead of meters.
Stratospheric Punch - This technique requires the specialization, Nintaijutsu, which means you would be unable to use it until you have Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, and Nintaijutsu. Do you still want to keep this jutsu? In the Shinobi Guidelines, at the very top you will see a list of cooldown minimums for each rank. Please refer to this when making your jutsu. The D-ranks were fine, but C-B were off a bit.
Please bump when you have made all of the above corrections. Thank you, Tadashi.
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