The islands in Ocean Country have been celebrating the arrival of the next Umikage, Saizo. The long bridge leading to SHIPPUUGAKURE NO SATO has been closed for outsiders because they wish to celebrate this moment with Ocean Country natives only.
As usual, the Storm Country has been hosting the Asgard Games to welcome their Kanetsukage, Cornelia. It's a double special occasion because Cornelia is also the first female Kanetsukage. She has been picked for her courage, loyalty and outstanding power by the BOUFUUGAKURE NO SATO elders.
Not only that, but the Cherry Blossom Country has become relieved as well. It seems that everyone is slowly picking up after the war now. KUSAMURAGAKURE NO SATO proudly presented their new Sakurakage, Altair.
TSUKIGAKURE NO SATO is still thriving on the merchants coming in and out. They have not experienced anything special lately. Their wealth has remained the same as they were not forced to invest into shinobi unlike the others.
On the cold isles of the Blizzard Country, HYOUGAGAKURE NO SATO has still refused to create a free traveling policy. Some habits never change. To protect their traditions, they have even warned outsiders to not interfere with their matters.
Now that everyone is picking up again, who will come out on top?
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Occupation The Island of the Ocean country, Shippugakure no Sato
The islands in Ocean Country have been celebrating the arrival of the next Umikage, Saizo. The long bridge leading to SHIPPUUGAKURE NO SATO has been closed for outsiders because they wish to celebrate this moment with Ocean Country natives only.
Appearance Itazuki has a normal figure. In other words, I'd say its similar to that of the boys of his age, especially of boys of 12 or perhaps even 13. He looks a bit older than his real age is. Itazuki has gained splendid amount of confidence, through many things. One of them happen to be his good nature. his hair sem to be white in color and he seems to really dislike this feature of the senju, its because people of his age call him 'Old' because of the hair. His face, is quite beautiful, a perfect shaped nose alongside a perfect smile which really reveals a bright and shiny mood of this young boy. More over, his shoulders are broad revealing a some-what people could call a a body with an average training sessions.
The color of his eyes is pale blue, which suits him. The color of his skin is white, and this is the feature which really makes Ita quite amazing and dashing.
Personality
Itazuki is a kind of person who likes to watch beautiful scenes. Well nothing can't be done, since he is a senju and as a natural love for the beauty and for the nature. He more over is quite clam in even the most tensed situations. His calm personality took him high above in the skies. His fear only stands for his comrades, when they are in danger. Only this is the situation where the senju is tempted to rage and eventually get out his anger in a wrathful manner. Even in the heat of battle, he tries to remain as calm as he could and use his brain to create and build a plan before striking head-on.
Itazuki is a loving, caring and a straight forward person, he likes his comrades more then anything, he believes in them and has a loving affection towards his comrades and his fellows. A good and a loving heart and has a power which is gifted to him as not many people have it in our world of shinobi, a gift of forgiving.
But this literally does not mean that he would not try to have a spar with his friends for the purpose of training. He likes to train and tries his best to be a fine shinobi the way his mother and his father were, he really admires both of them and even at-times ask his grandmother to tell him stories of his father and mother.
Characteristics:
He is humble to even his own enemies. He is ready to forgive, even the worst of his enemies at the spot if his enemy realizes their mistake and promise to avoid them in the future at the best they can. A confident man capable of being keen and dutiful to his duties. He is fearless. He has try to adopt many ways, through which he could finally find something known as 'True peace', however he has failed countless times and so he has made his own way. A way which he calls as "My way of justice". He is obedient, trustful and reliable.
Conscientiousness is also one of the virtues Itazuki holds. He thinks about future plans and on what basis would they be based upon. He spontaneously acts accordingly to the given situation, and plan ahead of the circumstance, before it gets out of hand and worried-able. Its probably due to his feature that Itazuki is able to hold such strong will-power as his ahead plans prevent him from acting stupidly and doing some nonsense stuff.
Moreover Itazuki is openness as well. People might think of him as the one who does things regarding his own way, but no he is willing to accept every good habit he can have. He appreciates different forms of experiences. And is not only appreciating them but also adopting the most reasonable and one of the most beneficial one's as well. He sometimes might even become Extraversion having a good time with his friends and his relatives, however he avoids this characteristic once he has been given his duty and it needs to be performed as early as possible.
Bloodline (History, ability and its location)
Its clan history is given below,
The Senju clan descended from the younger of the two sons of the Sage of the Six Paths who was born with the "body" of the Sage, inheriting his father's strength of will and physical energy and believed that love was the key to bringing peace to the world. The Sage grew to favor the ideals of his younger son over those of his older son, who believed that power alone was the true key to finding peace. Therefore, on his deathbed it was the younger of the two brothers that the Sage chose to name as his successor. The elder brother, bitter and hateful at having being denied what he felt was rightfully his to inherit, attacked his younger sibling. The Uchiha clan would descend from the elder brother, resulting in the bitter centuries-long rivalry between the Senju and the Uchiha.
The Senju clan gained their fame in the era before the founding of the hidden villages. Where other clans focused on mastering one particular skill, the Senju were prodigious in all skills, from ninjutsu, to taijutsu, to genjutsu. Because of this, they were "the clan with a thousand skills" which gave them their name "Senju" (a thousand skills", or "a thousand hands").
The Senju's place at the top of the shinobi world was undisputed, but there was one clan that was able to stand up to them: the Uchiha clan. Whenever one country hired the Senju, their enemies would hire the Uchiha, and vice versa. This led to a rivalry between the two clans.
The Senju clan, grew tired of the fighting, and a peace treaty was formed with the Uchiha clan. The two clans came together to stop fighting. The Senju settled in the Cherry Blossom Country, and the Uchiha moved to the Ocean Country. Due to their lack of a basic kekkai genkai at the time the Senju clan all but disappeared the lines between them and other clans becoming dimmer and dimmer until eventually the clan disappeared. An occasional person can be found with these abilities but overall it's extremely rare for people to have any ability contained by the Senju clan, but it does happen and not just in their original country several villages have claimed to have a ninja that holds these abilities.
The name of this bloodline is 'Senju' and its ability is that it gives the user to utilize 'Mokuton/Wood' release. The location of this Bloodline is Kusamuragakure no Sato.
History:
"Whether I shall turn out to be the hero of my own life, or whether that station will be held by anybody else, these pages must show." Charles Dickens
Act I: Intro
Spoiler:
Chapter 1: Virtues
Greatness, power, wealth, wisdom, experience, hardships and many other things, some of them are achieved by being the best of the best where as some of them are done without being the best of the best. Greatness, is one of those things which is desired by many but is not achievable by everyone. Either people leave that they would do what ever their fate has decided or they give up. Greatness is not something which can easily be attained, it requires many of the amazing virtues and will-power is one of them. Power, is something which people want at their utmost desire. Its something by which we are at a point that we do not care for our friends, family and even relatives. People are brought to their edges for this 'power'. Refusing it, is one of the most hard things in this world.
People will do what ever they can in order to gain wealth. It too, is there utmost desire. However, power and wealth are the two things which make people bad, they would do anything even harm other's to get these two things. Wisdom, experience and hardships are the virtues gained through age and challenges. Every mission you do, every path you choose and every way you forge, will allow you to gain all these three virtues.
I, Itazuki, am the writer of my story. My destiny is forged by myself. I am the maker of my ways and I am the future of my present. I have gained things I never dreamed about. I kind of gained all of the above virtues. But my virtue which guided me to all those virtues was above all of the them. It was goodness. If I am able to be kind, good and helpful to people I automatically gain all of the best virtues I would ever need. This is my story, a story you are likely never going to see. A story you might have never read, and a story you have never heard.
My parents were the shinobi's of the cherry blossom country. It was that time, when both my mother and father had gone out for a trip, for a few days when their enemy struck them with a death blow. Both of them died in a single blow. They were brave, they never gave up. Brave in a sense, that even in the most difficult situations, they tried their best to save their village and finally help it. They never showed their back to their comrades.
The location we were in, wasn't a lot hidden. Besides, my mum and my dad were here on a trip rather than on a secret mission. The people who killed my dad and my mom, were surely enemies of their's who wanted bad of my parents. The house we lived in was just like a place, a bit far from the cherry blossom village.
I was there, too small to understand even a word. I couldn't understand nor relay all of that has been happening in front of me to my brain. And because, I was in a baby-case, they were not able to see me, hence I was lucky enough to be saved. After a day, a few people came in the house and saw me as they took me and sent me to the orphanage. They picked up this small kid, with almost going through a death experience.
Spoiler:
Chapter 2: The beginnings
Well, before I begin my story. I'd like you to sit down and relax. Relax in a sense, that you need to free your mind and focus on the part I'm about to elaborate you. It might be boring at some point, so please bare with me.
Well, it all begins, actually it doesn't begin...it always has been like this for people like. All I can remember about myself is a young boy roaming in an orphanage, loving his times and being quite happy with his friends. Showing love to each other, and being always with each other. A cute moment, perhaps. I do miss all of it. So yeah, there I was in an orphanage, living my life. Never thought of becoming a shinobi, my dreams were actually smaller than any of people around me. All I wanted was someone to adopt me and well, love me and well keep me with them so that we could be a happy family.
If you're thinking it happened, well sorry to say it didn't. I wasn't adopted. I was lost....yeah lost. Lost in a sense, that I didn't have a road, or a path to go. I was lost in a way I couldn't even perceive the real me. However, something happened which completely changed my ideas, ideals and goals. I was really shocked, at such a news. Didn't know whether I should be happy or should I be sad or even cry. The orphanage, I lived in, had a dead-line. Because the orphanage, didn't have enough funds, it was given a dead-line of 20 days. The days passed and passed, and there we were. The elders and sister's were really upset during all those days.
Act II: Itazuki Senju
Spoiler:
Chapter 1: Why?What?How?
The elders of the orphanage, always had something hidden. They told me that I am a part of clan, known throughout the world. The Senju, clan. The young boy, was now alone. I'd call a 10 year old boy, rather than a young one. And well there I was, being sad for the part that Orphanage, closed down. Where as being happy that I'm a member of a clan, one of the most known clan out there, the senju clan.
A few of my friends, came along with me as many of them gave suggestions of what should we do and what we shouldn't. But on the other hand, we all were kids, kids who were just now roaming and were trying to think like an adult. All of us went on and on, until we found this place, a village surrounded by ocean. It was a beautiful, sight. It was just like, we had seen the ultimate place of this earth of our's. We tried to step in, but it was closed. Closed for any outsider.
Spoiler:
Chapter 2: Itazuki!
Being sad at that, and barely knowing anything about the outer world, we tried to stay at the outskirts of the village thinking someone would show humanity and at least allow us to stay there. We were starving, all of us had no food with us, the only thing we had was water. It was that point that I went unconscious, because of the amount of hunger we had. Before, I went unconscious, all I could remember is all of us were at-times cheering ourselves by singing various types of songs. We asked the guards and the shinobi's of Shippugakure to let us enter, but they continued to refuse it. We even tried to cheer ourselves by various types of games, we ha dplayed in the past during our experiences in the orphanage. Since, we didn't know about the villages and their nations, we just thought that Shippuugakure is a post or perhaps the only village which will finally help us. I knoew one thing for sure, that we'll try our best to enter this village Shippuugakure, no matter what goes. I had this feeling that no mater what is the outcome, they surely let us, the kids, in. Besides, we weren't any danger to this village as well. Soon, after all the songs and the games, I fell unconscious with the amount of hunger. Upon, opening my eyes, I was in a village. Worried, upon this I inquired the people as they said "You're in the amazing village, of Shippuugakure." I without, anything else coming in my mind, just rushed to find my friends. I was glad to know that they were safe as well, and they had called a few guards from the village.
I guess....even though my dream wasn't fulfilled, I achieved something greater than I had ever imagined, that's it ladies and gentlemen. That was my story. And I will continue to forge my path, until I know I am capable of being the best person in my life. No one knows the surname of Itazuki, except for himself. I guess, I should tell that to my friends at least. I was asked a couple of questions, regarding my ways and paths and the experiences I've been through. I honestly answered all of them, hence I was able to stay.
Role-play Sample(s):
Spoiler:
Itazuki blinked as he heard the elders of the orphanage, closing the orphanage because the funds were the problem. They were unable to give the required amount of funds they should to the land lord, hence it had to be closed. Itazuki was quite shocked at such a news, however he regained his conscious as he just thought about all this straight up. It was surely tough for the small boy, to go alone by himself. However, Itazuki was now accompanied by his friends, friends from the orphanage as they took a few steps and were now on their way to live in a place they'd be happy. Itazuki was clearly unhappy, but there was nothing he could do at this point.
Spoiler:
Itazuki would keep running alongside his friends, as he watches this ocean type area. This eye-catching moment was amazing not for just, Itazuki but definitely for his friends as well. Itazuki would then let out a long relived sigh, hopeing he and his friends will be allowed to stay in the village after stating that they are orphans and have no home to live. Itazuki kept on thinking a few reasons which be helpful for him and for his friends.
OOC
Source: I found Naruto Legacy, by searching Google.
Since, I have posted no picture or anything of that sort, I don't have to use the section of 'Face claim'.
I guess, I'm done with this Biography of Ita's. Take a look and please point out any mistakes. I'll be more than just happy to hear it from you people!
Last edited by Itazuki on Wed Aug 20, 2014 10:58 pm; edited 4 times in total
Subject: Re: Itazuki Senju - The Unknown. Tue Aug 19, 2014 4:47 pm
This application is well done. However, I need you to add some details to your history. I need you to elaborate on how you ended up in Shippuugakure. There needs to be a good reason for not being in a clan's "home village."
Also, you seem to have left out a couple of the things that are in our forum's application. The only reason I will not ask you to redo your application is due to the time you have put into creating this one already. So instead, I would like you to look at the site character application template and identify what you have left out and then correct it, please.
After you do these things, post a bump in this topic and we will continue.
Subject: Re: Itazuki Senju - The Unknown. Wed Aug 20, 2014 8:33 pm
Okay, so with what you added, I see a general idea. But there is some missing information. It states that his parents were killed while you all were on some sort of trip, yes? How did you return? What house are you talking about? There are also some technical issues. If your parents were killed in one strike, how could they have never given up? They couldn't have put up a fight if they were killed in one swoop. Clear these things up.
Keep in mind, this may seem a bit harsh, but I am not trying to be mean or anything of the sort. I am giving some criticism to improve your writing. :)
Please bump when you're done and if you have any questions during this grading process, please don't hesitate to ask.
Subject: Re: Itazuki Senju - The Unknown. Wed Aug 20, 2014 11:01 pm
Lol, I know what you're trying to do, and no I'm not taking this harsh or even in a meany sense for a bit. As for the application, I updated it. I hope its up to your liking now.
As for how did I return, I actually never returned. The elders of the orphanage picked Ita, when they came to know that there's a child in a house.
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