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 Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)

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Andeddo
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PostSubject: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyWed Apr 27, 2011 1:49 am

Name: 5-Ten kaminari kēji
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Element: Raiton
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Medium
Description: Requires handseals. After the completion of handseals the users fingertips on one hand glow with electrical current. Each finger fires off a small bolt of lightning, each striking a different object. That object is than coated in electricity, even if it is not a conductive material, which does nothing more than jolt an opponent on contact. When five objects have been chosen, they become linked by electricity, which creates a cage around a person, or persons, trapping them within. The shock is about as strong as a tazer, and the cage itself about a cattle prod in strength. The objects making the cage can be a minimum of a meter apart, and a maximum of ten meters. The cage only lasts for five posts, with a four post cooldown.

Name: Urufu Uzu
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Element: Fuuton
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Medium
Description: Handseals. After the completion of handseals, Andeddo coats his body in chakra, using it to gather and build up winds, which extend to approximately 5 feet off of his body. These winds move at around 40 mph. They become visible, tinted gray, and take the form of wolves. There are five wolves of wind, which will attack any opponent, one per post, for five posts, slashing with their claws, or biting, multiple times. They don't do much damage with their claws, about an centimeter deep cut, but their biting can rend deep holes in the flesh, or tear out chunks of it. The wind wolves are howling the entire time. Not only do these wolves attack, but they can deflect attacks from Andeddo, so long as one of them vanishes after wards. They can block a D rank by themselves, a C rank with two, B rank with three, A rank with all four. They can only block ninjutsu of the Raiton element, and Katon passes through them completely unhindered, B rank or higher actually destroys the wolves. They can not fully stop any S rank Jutsu, but they can weaken it. Lasts for five posts, eight post cooldown.



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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyThu Apr 28, 2011 12:50 am

5-Ten - Up to how big and how small can the dimensions get when making this? How many posts does it take to set up? It'd be pretty difficult due to limited movement within a post....how strong is the lightning if you shock one with it (Level of the jolt)? How bad is one shocked by the cage itself?
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyThu Apr 28, 2011 1:43 am

Minimum, one meter between objects, maximum, ten meters between objects. It can take up to five posts, depending on whether the lighting is all released at once, or slowly to trap the opponent more effeciently. The shock is about as strong as a tazer, and the cage itself about a cattle prod in strength.
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyThu Apr 28, 2011 2:19 am

Ok, edit that in. Also, here's what I'll do for you with this jutsu. State that it takes 5 posts to prepare, then that it lasts 5 posts, that way the description is set with no questions asked.

Urufu Uzu - To keep this at D rank alone, you may have to limit this, due to the overall nature of its power. I suggest that limiting these wolves to block the element in which they are powerful against, which is lightning. Of course, fire will not be able to be stopped by these wolves...add this in for now, I would like to read it once more before I continue the process.
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyThu Apr 28, 2011 11:45 am

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyThu Apr 28, 2011 8:58 pm

Urufu Uzu - I am reading that you can only make one wolf per post......up to five posts....does that mean the duration of the post goes like so??

1st wolf - Lasts Five posts

2nd wolf - 4 posts

3rd- 3 posts

4th - 2 posts

5th - 1 post

Or is there something Im missing???
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyThu Apr 28, 2011 9:00 pm

Sorry, I worded that badly. I meant that they all form instantly, but that once per post one of them must attack for five posts, each disappearing after they attack.
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyThu Apr 28, 2011 9:17 pm

So they are automatically destroyed once they attack, meaning if they fail to land their hit they disappear? I need to make all of this clear, so I understand it completely
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyThu Apr 28, 2011 9:18 pm

Yes, should they fail to hit they still vanish.
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyThu Apr 28, 2011 9:25 pm

Ok, if you can, try to reword it slightly, to make sure it doesn't confuse anyone. Also, you may want to add the damage of when a wolf claws or bites, especially if its in a vital area of the body. Reading it also, I believe that the fire element of B rank and higher would nullify these wolves. Make those edits and bump..
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyThu Apr 28, 2011 9:39 pm

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyFri Apr 29, 2011 12:31 am

5-Ten - Approved

Urufu - Approved

You still have 2d, 2c, 2b, 1a, 1s to register....
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyFri Apr 29, 2011 12:35 am

Name: Inazuma okami
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Element: Raiton
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Medium
Description: No Handseals. The user's blade becomes coated in electricity, and they dash at the opponent, with their blade in any position. While utilizing this jutsu their speed is multiplied by two, meaning their slashes become significantly faster. The lightning is powerful enough to shock the entire body, even causing Eschar-like burns. 5 Post Cooldown. Eschar like burns is when the skin blackens from the shock. It would limit the movement of the area that was hit, by 1/4. The area that is covered is the size of the average male's forearm.


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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyFri Apr 29, 2011 7:10 pm

Inazuma Okami - To be multiplioed by 10 at D rank is a bit much, maybe x2. This is also a kenjutsu, so are you only referring to the speed of the blade or yourself? The way it is now, this is around an A Rank jutsu..
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyFri Apr 29, 2011 8:17 pm

Referring to both blade and movement speed. And I toned it down.
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyTue May 03, 2011 8:59 pm

When it shocks, what is Eschar like burns? Does it limit the movement of the enemy?
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyTue May 03, 2011 9:03 pm

Eschar like burns is when the skin blackens from the shock. It would limit the movement of the area that was hit, by 1/4
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyTue May 03, 2011 9:32 pm

Ok, well also give an example of how much area it covers. Since your only reducing the effectiveness by a percentage, I will allow you to cover an entire limb worth to the effect, like the leg, arm etc.
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyTue May 03, 2011 9:38 pm

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyTue May 03, 2011 10:02 pm

Inazuma Okami - Approved.

1D, 2C, 2B, 1A, 1S still to register.
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyFri May 06, 2011 9:07 pm

Name: Fenrir, God of Wolves
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Element: Raiton
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self-Medium
Description: No handseals, no charge time. This jutsu is automatically activated after Orufu Uzu ends. Andeddo must speak the words “I call upon thee, God of Wolves!” Then four bolts of lightning strike around him, directly in front, behind and to either side of him. He is than coated in lightning, and it forms into a ten foot high, fifteen foot long wolf, Fenrir. This wolf is made entirely of lightning, and follows mental commands from Andeddo. It's a form, that shrouds over him, it will never move off of him, and is always centered above him. It is conected to Andeddo by small bolts of lightning, which is what allows him to make it move or attack, sending electronic signals through these bolts. It can fire off bolts of lightning from itself at opponents, moving at around 200mph, that will pierce to, but not through, bone. It can also attack with it's lightning claws, which can cut through a foot of solid rock. It can 'eat' people, causing them to be covered in second degree burns, and their muscles will be cramped to the point of them being unable to move, for a post, should they not have been knocked unconscious from the pain. The wolf lasts for eight posts, and can only be used once for an entire topic.

Name: U~indou~oka
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Element: Fuuton
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Self
Description: Handseals. After the completion of handseals the user's feet become coated in wind chakra, allowing them to walk on air. They still move as quickly as they woul normally walk, or run, while on the ground, and speed enhancing jutsu work the same as normal. They can go up to fifteen meters in the air, and are able to stop completely. Once activated this jutsu lasts for fifteen posts, with a five post cooldown.


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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyFri May 06, 2011 9:16 pm

God of Wolves - More like a summon with that kind of power......and is definetely an S Rank if it can kill...lasts too long, unless you plan on continuously feed it your chakra..

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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyFri May 06, 2011 9:26 pm

Toned down, hopefully enough.
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyFri May 06, 2011 10:46 pm

Well, the fact that it can do so many things, still makes it feel like a summon. I want another opinion on this to make sure its ok. Allow me time to seek that...

Oka - So you are basically able to go airborne for the entire topic?
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PostSubject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration)   Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) EmptyFri May 06, 2011 10:48 pm

Alright, do let me know once you have gotten another's opinion.

Yes, that's right.
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