My opinion on the oka is that it should at least be B rank if it is the whole topic. Beable to be in air for that long is rediculous for such a low price so at least B rank with how many handseal posts, and how many cooldown?

The lightning wolf thing does indeed sound like a summon and it even calls out like a summon without handseals and yet being Ninjutsu. Of course my opinion on this jutsu doesn't override Dominics but to me it does indeed sound like a summon due to the mental control, the call out phrase, and them being near like puppets themselves.

Just pointing out that handseals is already defined by rank, so I don't need to specify how many, and as for cooldown there won't be one, simply because it ends when the topic ends. I can handle bumping it to B rank, though I would rather not.

mental control because it is his jutsu, the 'wolf' has no mind of it's own, so it does whatever it is told to do. this jutsu is instant because it requires a D rank jutsu to already have been activated, giving it a technical five post charge up while Urufu Uzu is active. It is not a puppet, it is a form, as it covers him, and extends off of his body. Plus, summons don't have call outs.... just saying.

Forgive the double post

Name: Fenrir's Themis Blade
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Element: N/A
Type: Kenjutsu
Range:
Description: No handseals, no charge time. The jutsu is activated by pointing the sword to the sky, causing the blade to glow a deep midnight blue. Then, an aura of said color surrounds the sword (extending its width to 5 feet, and it's length to 12 feet). The energy only increases range, but with each swing the more force put in the energy stretches like a whip (but perfectly straight not whip-like) outwards, to a max of 30 meters. If someone is cut by the energy they are not physically cut, but it feels like they were, and a piece of their mind is weighed against Divine Law and if deemed unworthy is removed. This essentially removes all evil within a person, slowly purifying any evil thoughts, or memories from a person's mind, it does not physically destroy their mind. IT moves as fast as the regular blade an, at 10m/s. Duration five posts, cooldown fifteen posts.

Bump.

Bump... again.

Fenrir's Themis Blade - Ok? Im not sure what the affects of this are, but it seems your just taking chunks of peoples brains??

U~indou~oka - This will probably need a duration, and cooldown. Due to the simple fact, when Haeichi was trying to register breathing underwater, he was asked to make it limited on here. So edit that in.

Fenrirs Themis blade: It weighs their memories, and experiences, and if they are deemed evil, they are destroyed, essentially slowly destroying everything that makes them who they are.

U~indou~oka: edited.

BUMP. And also:

Name: Arekuruu-go
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: S
Element: Raiton, Fuuton, Suiton
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: 0-0.5 miles
Description: Requires handseals. After the completion of handseals the user releases the built up chakra into the air, either making clouds, or using preexisting ones. These clouds then form into a massive typhoon, covering half a mile in every direction from the center. From this typhoon winds emit, blowing at maximum 200mph, these winds are strong enough to blow buildings apart, and send people flying. Also rain pours down, combined with the speed and force of the wind, the rain is powerful enough to lacerate flesh. Bolts of lightning are also common place, striking down randomly throughout the entire distance of the technique. The entirety of this is under complete control by the user, meaning that they can increase/decrease the wind speed by 20mph per post, until the max is hit, or until the winds hit 0mph, the user is also completely immune to the wind, make more or less rain increasing the amount of cuts both the user and any one else receives, though the rains will not completely stop, and will always have at least a trickle, except for the lightning. This lasts for ten posts, and can only be used once a topic.

Alright let us begin,

Ill need some decreases on the size and speed of this typhoon and the wind that it is made of. A mile and a half is just to much and 150 mph is actually more like a maximum speed, though I may allow up to 200.

Control of the wind and rain will need to be a little more flushed out and I dont think I am allowed to let you have control over natural lightning.

These are pretty much what I see so this shouldnt take long once we crunch some numbers

Range of half a mile? If I can I will put the Maximum at 200mph. Hmm, what exactly do you mean by flushed out, do you want me to describe it more? And alright, No natural lightning.

Range is good since it is indeed an S rank technique so we're god there: Check

Speed is good: Check

Indeed it means described more, sorry for using my local lingo on the net xD

And thanks for understanding man

Edited, hopefully helpful.

Alright all good, just one final question that I for some reason forgot to ask earlier, Are you affected by this storm as well or are you immune to it all?

Immune to the wind, but not the rain, nor the lightning, should it ever hit me or anyone else.

Alright add that in and we can price ^^

Added, edited, taking this as my free S-rank.

Alright then, guess you can skip out on the 20k price tag xD

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close to medium range
Description: This jutsu requires one handseal. This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination. (Once per topic)

Shunshin is already approved, 3,500 ryo

I still do not know if Fenrir, God of Wolves has been looked at so I will leave that alone for now

U~indou~oka
Both the range and duration are good for a B rank. Now how fast can you move? At your normal running speed?

Fenrir's Themis Blade
It is weighed by Divine law? Who would be judging them and how would they be deemed unworthy? When you say that piece of brain is removed is it physically removed?

I will be taking Shunshin as my last free D-rank tech.

Ya, moves at normal speed, though speed enhancing jutsu can still be used.

Divine law, they have evil thoughts/memories, then they are erased. Only the mental portions, the brain itself is not destroyed.

You can add that in

I see nothing else wrong with U~indou~oka, and I approve it unless another someone else finds a fault with it. This is ready to be priced

So after a fight their brain returns to normal?

Taking U~indou~oka as one of my free B-rank tech's.

And no, it's a permanent thing, once it's gone, it's gone for good.

Hmm, that seems way powerful. I would feel more comfortable if it were more of a genjutsu, since physically taking a piece of someone's mind for eternity would be OP.

Edits spoken bout on the Cb made.

Alright. Now when the blade extends to it's full 30 meters, how fast does it go? Give it in m/s (meters a second)