The islands in Ocean Country have been celebrating the arrival of the next Umikage, Saizo. The long bridge leading to SHIPPUUGAKURE NO SATO has been closed for outsiders because they wish to celebrate this moment with Ocean Country natives only.
As usual, the Storm Country has been hosting the Asgard Games to welcome their Kanetsukage, Cornelia. It's a double special occasion because Cornelia is also the first female Kanetsukage. She has been picked for her courage, loyalty and outstanding power by the BOUFUUGAKURE NO SATO elders.
Not only that, but the Cherry Blossom Country has become relieved as well. It seems that everyone is slowly picking up after the war now. KUSAMURAGAKURE NO SATO proudly presented their new Sakurakage, Altair.
TSUKIGAKURE NO SATO is still thriving on the merchants coming in and out. They have not experienced anything special lately. Their wealth has remained the same as they were not forced to invest into shinobi unlike the others.
On the cold isles of the Blizzard Country, HYOUGAGAKURE NO SATO has still refused to create a free traveling policy. Some habits never change. To protect their traditions, they have even warned outsiders to not interfere with their matters.
Now that everyone is picking up again, who will come out on top?
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Fenrir's Themis Blade - Even though it destroys evil thoughts, what does it do while they are in battle? Does the enmy simply stop fighting and become a simple pasicifist? That needs to be stated, along with whether their evil intentions come back over time. Add the range into the Range section.
They may still act out of self defense, but would not continue to fight, as they are slowly turned into a perfectly pure and good being, with a complete absence of evil. And no, they will never return.
Subject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) Sat Jun 04, 2011 1:03 am
Going off of your answers, I would feel better if this only lasted the rest of your fight, and one more topic. These would be the rules of this seconds topic The topic must be open It can be a battle or a normal one The topic must be at least two pages long
Do you agree to this, or a minimum of posts until the character can go back to what he was before?
Personally I would be a bit more comfortable with a kenjutsu/genjutsu, as the person hit would only think that they are good. This could change the effects as they think they are a a pure being, above fighting, and would be complete pacifist.
Subject: Re: Andeddo Tokko (Technique Registration) Sun Jun 19, 2011 9:46 pm
If you are talking about the Fenrir's Themis Blade,having that much control over another character's will is not going to happen, unless its the temporary effects in which I told Raleth to give you. You will not be able to affect another persons account that much. the circumstances being that if it were to happen permanently, the user doesnt have full control over their own account. Denied as you want it.
Name: Fenrir, God of Wolves Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: A Element: Raiton Type: Ninjutsu Range: Self-Medium Description: No handseals, no charge time. This jutsu is automatically activated after Orufu Uzu ends. Andeddo must speak the words “I call upon thee, God of Wolves!” Then four bolts of lightning strike around him, directly in front, behind and to either side of him. He is than coated in lightning, and it forms into a ten foot high, fifteen foot long wolf, Fenrir. This wolf is made entirely of lightning, and follows mental commands from Andeddo. It's a form, that shrouds over him, it will never move off of him, and is always centered above him. It is conected to Andeddo by small bolts of lightning, which is what allows him to make it move or attack, sending electronic signals through these bolts. It can fire off bolts of lightning from itself at opponents, moving at around 200mph, that will pierce to, but not through, bone. It can also attack with it's lightning claws, which can cut through a foot of solid rock. It can 'eat' people, causing them to be covered in second degree burns, and their muscles will be cramped to the point of them being unable to move, for a post, should they not have been knocked unconscious from the pain. The wolf lasts for eight posts, and can only be used once for an entire topic.
Ok, on to this jutsu once more. I think that even though a jutsu ends and this automatically activates, there should still be some kind of lag time before it is made. Atleast one post. Im ok with the speed of the lightning bolts but the 'eating' We need to discuss further. It needs to have a more distinct range, just in case, someone is only partially hit by the 'bite'
Alright so, jutsu ends, one post of wait time, next post this activates. If someone is only partially bitten they receive the burns to that part of their body, but have no fear of passing out. where as if they are completely "swallowed" they receive burns over their entire body, and can possibly pass out.
Ok, please make the edits, and repost the entire jutsu in your post so I don't have to look for it.
Since the wolf has multiple abilities, if you attempt each ability, they should have a small cooldown within themselves.
For instance, the lightning bolts it cam fire, needs a one post cooldown, and I also need a max number that can be fired.
The claws are constant so that's fine.
Since the attempt on the swallowing nite does so much, the wolf has a two post cooldown before it can go for another crushing attempt.
The reason for this, is bc of how your body has to create this force on its own. These cooldowns ensure that your body has to recover from using a ton of force in which the bolts and the poweful bite require.
You agree with this? The cooldowns are very small, so you can still use them multiple times within the eight post duration.
Name: Fenrir, God of Wolves Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: A Element: Raiton Type: Ninjutsu Range: Self-Medium Description: No handseals, no charge time. This jutsu is automatically activated the post after Orufu Uzu ends. Andeddo must speak the words “I call upon thee, God of Wolves!” Then four bolts of lightning strike around him, directly in front, behind and to either side of him. He is than coated in lightning, and it forms into a ten foot high, fifteen foot long wolf, Fenrir. This wolf is made entirely of lightning, and follows mental commands from Andeddo. It's a form, that shrouds over him, it will never move off of him, and is always centered above him. It is conected to Andeddo by small bolts of lightning, which is what allows him to make it move or attack, sending electronic signals through these bolts. It can fire off bolts of lightning from itself at opponents, moving at around 200mph, that will pierce to, but not through, bone. It can also attack with it's lightning claws, which can cut through a foot of solid rock. It can 'eat' people, causing them to be covered in second degree burns, and their muscles will be cramped to the point of them being unable to move, for a post, should they not have been knocked unconscious from the pain. If someone is only partially bitten they receive the burns to that part of their body, but have no fear of passing out, where as if they are completely "swallowed" they receive burns over their entire body, and can possibly pass out. The lightening bolt needs one post cooldown between use, the eating has a two post cooldown. The wolf lasts for eight posts, and can only be used once for an entire topic.
Sorry it took so long to get this approved. I hope the edits don't take too much away, but I feel they were necessary. On that note, if this was your free A rank jutsu, your approved to have it. If not, ill attempt a price at it.
Name: Chō Denji Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Element: Raiton Type: Ninjutsu Range: Varies depending on object launched, but anywhere between 1-45 yards Description: Charge time equal to handsseal requirement. During the charge up the user of this technique must be holding a metallic object in their hand, the large the better. This object is magnetically charged, and fired from the hand, going at around 75 mph. It can be devastating to be hit by, dealing mass amounts of damage, based on the size of the object. If the object is no large than a dime it won't do to much, maybe pierce into the body, or object it struck, about a centimeter. Something say the size of a brick would have enough force to crack ribs, break bones, and possibly to break down weak walls, or rotting trees, or other such weak structures. This technique has a four post cooldown.
Name: Mizuiro Teashi Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C Element: Suiton Type: Ninjutsu Range: Self. Description: Charge time equal to handseals. After the completion of charge up the users limbs, both arms and legs, become coated in water and chakra. This diminishes any attack in those areas, reducing their damage by 25%, but increasing all Doton based attacks by 25%. This coating lasts for three posts, with a five post cooldown.
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