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 Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha

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Mona Uchiha
Mona Uchiha
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Ryo : 3150

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PostSubject: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptyFri Jul 15, 2011 11:39 pm


Spoiler:

Mona,Uchiha
Many things become forever forgotten.
Ninja Application

Personal

First Name: Mona
Last Name: Uchiha
Alias: Amaterasu
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Height: 5,6 Ft.
Weight: 110 lbs.
Birthday: December, 22nd
Sexuality: Bi
Relationships: N/A
Affiliation: Kusamuragakure
Rank: D-Rank Missing Nin
Element: Fire, Lighting, Wind
Specialization: Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Kenjutsu


Personal v2

Personality: Despite her bloody path she’s an easy going Kunoichi that loves to chat with friends and hang out. A thing she likes to do is train very hard to get stronger, Read a lot of books, Draw Pictures. so she pretty munch has a creative personality most of the time. But other times are like a complete opposite of the other personality, At times she is complete darkness. She loves to trap villagers in her genjustsu and totured them for hours and hours. Then other times shes just cruel and vicouse.

She doesn’t do well in tight spots or crowed places so shes usually freaks out and pants a lot, So she needs space and fresh air so she can think and focus.She likes to plan thing out before taking action since that happen before and almost got killed. She can be a diplomat at times and likes to bring up hard facts to support her ideas. In huge battles like invasions, wars or a group of ninja, shes pretty much be ruthless and merciless. As for humor she has some but doesn’t have any for really cheesy ones like "why did the chicken cross the road" kind of jokes.

She is scare for a few things like being alone in darkness, losing another love one, and become blind. Mona has a big sweet tooth so she loves sweet things like cake, brownie, cookies, cupcake and her most favorite; sugar Raman noodles with white sauce. The last thing she likes is to read. People call her the great book worm because she can read 700 pages and day and can finished 5 thick books a week. Also she evens bring a book with her on missions,traveling from one place to another or during combat like kakashi.


Likes:
Reading books
Drawing
To learn more about her clan
Train jutsus
Suger noodles with white sauce ramen


Dislikes:
People who disrepect the Uchiha Clan, Because over the years she seen people talking badly about how weak they are and should be destroyed. She doesn’t do well in tight spots or crowed places so shes usually freaks out and pants a lot, If she in a crowed place for too long she would get out by brute force, Even if it means buring the place down. The thing she hates the most is knowing shes weak and useless because she takes pride in her power of the Uchiha bloodline.

Motivation: Keeps on fighting to help save the Uchiha Clan by any means. She want to bring the Clan to its former glory and power and show the world on how powerdull the uchiha is really is. Also since she knows that there are groups planning to take down Uchiha she would use all her strength to take them down. When something gets in her way from her goal she would destroy it.

Fears:
Being alone in darkness because she feels she in a vast empty space forever, Losing another love one, and afraid of becomeing blind. Shes afraid that she might failed her goal and the uchiha clan would crumble. But She is also afraid that a uchiha member might die in her hands since shes trying to protect them.

Clan Information

Clan name Uchiha Clan

Bloodline Name: Sharingan, Mangekyou Sharingan

Bloodline Ability:
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Location: Kusamugakure


Clan History:
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History

History:
Born in Blood, Birth Arc
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Lies within lies, Pre Academy Arc
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Days of sadness,Academy Arc
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Bloody Dawn,Genin Arc
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Ash to Ash,Dust to Dust,Missing nin Arc
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RP Sample: A beginning post from naruto domain.
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Source: A link from naruto domain



Last edited by Mona amaterasu on Sun Jul 17, 2011 5:27 pm; edited 9 times in total
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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySat Jul 16, 2011 1:44 am

I know this is still a WIP, but you need a space between the column and the information...

Ex...

Name:Mona needs to be...
Name: Mona
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Mona Uchiha
Mona Uchiha
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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySat Jul 16, 2011 3:22 pm

[Completion bump]
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Takeshi
Takeshi
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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySat Jul 16, 2011 4:26 pm

RP Sample is missing
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Mona Uchiha
Mona Uchiha
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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySat Jul 16, 2011 4:34 pm

Added the RP sample
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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySat Jul 16, 2011 4:35 pm

I find this an acceptable D rank application, please reply stating if you are willing to take that.
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Mona Uchiha
Mona Uchiha
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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySat Jul 16, 2011 4:38 pm

ill take it
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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySat Jul 16, 2011 4:38 pm

Approved as genin then, for technicality please change the rank in the application
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Mona Uchiha
Mona Uchiha
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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySat Jul 16, 2011 4:43 pm

changed to genin
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Takeshi
Takeshi
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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySat Jul 16, 2011 4:50 pm

Then this is good to go, please note that to start you dont have any form of sharingan so you might want to edit your history a bit. For more information on the bloodline please visit the clan section.
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Mona Uchiha
Mona Uchiha
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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySat Jul 16, 2011 5:10 pm

edited
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Shy
Shy
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Ryo : 142304

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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySat Jul 16, 2011 7:14 pm

Denied.

Guys, really?

Alright Mona,

1. Use capitals when needed.

Alias: amaterasu > Alias: Amaterasu

Rank: genin > Rank: Genin

seven years pass > Seven years ...

etc.

2. Use spaces when needed.

Element: Fire,Lighting,Wind > Element: Fire, Lighting, Wind

Bloodline Name:Sharingan, Mangekyou Sharingan > Bloodline Name: Sharingan, Mangekyou Sharingan

...her parents.She was a excellent > ...her parents. She was an excellent

3. Increase dislikes, motivations and fears to one paragraph each.

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Mona Uchiha
Mona Uchiha
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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySun Jul 17, 2011 2:17 am

1.Edited
2.Edited
3.Edited
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Takeshi
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Ryo : 20350

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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySun Jul 17, 2011 3:23 am

question, why did you change it back to C rank?
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Mona Uchiha
Mona Uchiha
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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySun Jul 17, 2011 4:37 pm

because ive been told by Komakai Shokora, she said if that i was gana rp to be in the
Akatsuki i need to be a missing nin.
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Shy
Shy
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Ryo : 142304

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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySun Jul 17, 2011 5:10 pm

Mona, this looks much better!

Just run through your history one more time to fix the capitals and spaces, then you're ready to be approved as a Genin or a D-ranked Missing Nin, whatever you wish.
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Mona Uchiha
Mona Uchiha
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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySun Jul 17, 2011 5:28 pm

thanks ^^ i ran threw the history and fixed a few typos and im ready to be approve as a D-ranked Missing Nin
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Shy
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Ryo : 142304

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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySun Jul 17, 2011 5:32 pm

You have been approved as a D-ranked Missing Nin.

Though your account name should be either Mona or Mona Uchiha, what would you like it to be?

Welcome to the forum!
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Mona Uchiha
Mona Uchiha
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PostSubject: Re: Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha    Mona "amaterasu" Uchiha  EmptySun Jul 17, 2011 5:39 pm

Mona Uchiha sounds good ^^
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