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 Renga Zakii Technique Registration

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Renga Zakii
Renga Zakii
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PostSubject: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptySun Oct 23, 2011 9:15 pm

1C, 1A, 1S- This will remain here until the free jutsu for being clanless is used up.

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close to medium range
Description: This jutsu requires one handseal. This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination. (Once per topic)

Name: Raiton: Raikyuu ( Lightning Ball )
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Long
Description: Requires Handseals. The user will create a large, several feet in diameter, ball of lightning in their hands. This ball can then be launched at a target and will travel at average speed, as fast as an average running person. When it comes in contact with something, it will burst, damaging and shocking anyone it touches and also slightly shocking anyone within three feet of its edge at the moment of impact. Direct hit may cause the opponent hefty burning damage as if hit by a lightning bolt. Outer damage from being close, can cause a very uncomfortable sensation as well as light numbness.

Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Element: None
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Any
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin

Name: Front Lotus
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Element: n/a
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close-Medium
Description: Front Lotus requires the opening of the first of the Eight Chakra Gates, giving the user two times their normal strength. The user launches the opponent into the air and then uses Shadow of the Dancing Leaf. Once behind the opponent, the user restrains them and piledrives them into the ground headfirst while rotating at a ferocious speed. Because it uses one of the chakra gates, the user is left extremely fatigued, making this jutsu a "double-edged sword." The use of this technique more than once in a topic will cause a 2 post fatigue and can only be used three times max per fight.


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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyMon Oct 24, 2011 5:05 am

Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Element: N/A
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close to medium range
Description: This jutsu requires one handseal. This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination. (Once per topic)
Code:
Free due to clanless add to jutsu list
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Name: Kage Bunshin no Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Element: None
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Any
Description: Kage Bunshin is a Jounin level Ninjutsu technique. When Naruto stole the scroll of seals, he learned this technique as well. The normal Bunshin technique creates a copy of the ninja that lacks any substance. The Kage Bunshin distributes the ninja's chakra evenly among the clones and creates a real copy with form and substance. The clone itself can also utilize any jutsu the original ninja knows. When the clone finally disperses, any new knowledge it has gained is passed back to the original ninja and any additional clones. This makes Kage Bunshin an excellent training method if the ninja has the chakra capacity and stamina to maintain the Kage Bunshins for an extended period of time. This allows the ninja to essentially reduce the time it takes to train and learn with each clone added. This is especially true when used with Tajuu Kage Bunshin
Code:
Free due to clanless add to jutsu list
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Name: Front Lotus
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B
Element: n/a
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close-Medium
Description: Front Lotus requires the opening of the first of the Eight Chakra Gates, giving the user two times their normal strength. The user launches the opponent into the air and then uses Shadow of the Dancing Leaf. Once behind the opponent, the user restrains them and piledrives them into the ground headfirst while rotating at a ferocious speed. Because it uses one of the chakra gates, the user is left extremely fatigued, making this jutsu a "double-edged sword." The use of this technique more than once in a topic will cause a 2 post fatigue and can only be used three times max per fight.
Code:
Clearly states the first gate must be used to use this jutsu so denied until gates are bought.
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Name: Raiton: Raikyuu ( Lightning Ball )
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Element: Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Long
Description: Requires Handseals. The user will create a large, several feet in diameter, ball of lightning in their hands. This ball can then be launched at a target and will travel at average speed, as fast as an average running person. When it comes in contact with something, it will burst, damaging and shocking anyone it touches and also slightly shocking anyone within three feet of its edge at the moment of impact. Direct hit may cause the opponent hefty burning damage as if hit by a lightning bolt. Outer damage from being close, can cause a very uncomfortable sensation as well as light numbness.
Code:
Free, due to clanless, add to jutsu list

Edit: Changed all replies to free due to you having no clan, except front lotus.


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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyMon Oct 24, 2011 5:09 am

You are right about front lotus but I think the others are free jutsu for clanless
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyWed Oct 26, 2011 10:28 pm

Canon:
Spoiler:

Custom:
Spoiler:



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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyThu Oct 27, 2011 8:40 pm

Spoiler:
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Xavier
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyFri Oct 28, 2011 12:34 am

Name: Cloud-Style Flame Beheading
Canon/Custom: Canon {Manga}
Rank: B
Element: Katon
Type: Ninjutsu, Kenjutsu
Range: 25 ft from user
Description: 3 post charge time, The user first imbues their blade with fire, before slashing in the direction of the desired enemy, resulting in the creation of large arcs of intense flame that follow the trajectory of the previous swing. A skilled user of this technique, such as Atsui, is capable of surrounding their immediate area with a circular wall of flames, incinerating multiple targets even if they approach from numerous angles simultaneously. {on contact 1st degree burns and temporary numbness in that area for 2 posts}.

Code:
Already approved, Final B rank technique, add it to your jutsu list.
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Name: Iaidō
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Element: n/a
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Length of arm + weapon
Description: Iaidō (居合道) is a skill where the user quickly draws the blade to strike, then re-sheaths it after every attack. The speed of the user is so fast that it can allow the user to draw his blade and strike twice and then return it to its sheath in half a second. Passive, 3 round cool.

Code:
Already approved, add it to your jutsu list
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Name: Elemental Infusion
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Element: Raiton, Doton, Katon
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Self
Description: Charge equal to handseals. Elemental infused chakra is infused with the weapon that is being held by the user at that time. Only one element can be used at a time and the technique can be used a maximum of three times per topic. After use there is a two post cool down.

Code:
Doton: Does it slow the weapon down?
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Name: Elemental Fist
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: D
Element: Raiton, Doton, Katon
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Self
Description: Charge equal to handseals. Elemental infused chakra is infused into the hands of the user. Only one element can be used at a time and the technique can be used a maximum of three times per topic. After use there is a two post cool down.
Code:
It's alright add it to your jutsu list

(D ranks max out, B ranks max out just aheads up)
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptySun Oct 30, 2011 12:35 am

Yeah, It slows the weapon down when swung.
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Xavier
Xavier
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptySun Oct 30, 2011 3:54 am

Alright edit that in once done

Code:
Approved, Price: 5,000 ryo
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Renga Zakii
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyWed Nov 02, 2011 2:03 am

Name: Berserker Style: Charge
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Self
Description: The user builds momentum and begins to charge. Once charging, they can only charge in a straight path and cannot veer from it. When they charge, anything in the path of them is easily tackled or broken through. Wall up to 7 feet thick can be plowed through if momentum of at least 20 mph is achieved. If contact is made when charging, the victim can suffer from broken bones and severe bruising. On the other hand, if the user strikes anything large than 7 feet, they become disoriented for 1-2 posts and the area impacted is dented and cracked. Cool down of 4 posts.




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Xavier
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyFri Nov 04, 2011 12:10 am

Code:
What happens if you hit something thicker then 7 feet, what are the affects?
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Renga Zakii
Renga Zakii
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyFri Nov 04, 2011 12:55 am

  • The wall is damaged through cracks and a large dent where it was impacted.
  • The user becomes disoriented for 1-2 posts
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyFri Nov 04, 2011 12:58 am

Code:
That's acceptable add that in once done

Approved~7k/7,000 ryo
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptySat Nov 05, 2011 4:18 pm

Purchasing now, Final free C rank
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyMon Nov 28, 2011 11:23 pm

Name: Berserker Style: Bulk-Up
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Description: Charge equal to handseals. After the charge the users muscles enlarge themselves to increase strength and speed by x1.5. Lasts 4 posts, 3 post cool down. Can be used four times per topic.

Name: Berserker Style: Enrage
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Element: N/A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Description: Passive. The user sends chakra through his body to enrage themselves and heighten their senses of smell and hearing (1.5x), but give them tunnel vision and reduces the normal viewing field by half. Lasts 4 posts, 3 post cool down. Can be used four times per topic.


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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyTue Nov 29, 2011 1:32 am

Timeout.

Elemental Infusion, Elemental Fist - Both of these are EXTREMELY vague. You need to describe what damage the weapon can do with each element. That description doesnt tell us anything. For all we know, you can make an S Rank effect with each. Go back and do it right, telling what EACH AND EVERY ELEMENT DOES when it is activated.

Cloud Style Flame Beheading - It cant incirnerate on contact if all it does is cause first degree burns. B Rank can cause second degree burns, so your not even giving your jutsu justice when your registering them. Dude, TAKE YOUR TIME when registering this stuff, or your entire technique list will end up going under review.
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyTue Nov 29, 2011 1:34 am

Cloud style was actually taken from the database
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyTue Nov 29, 2011 1:39 am

Wow, that one slipped through the cracks whoever first registered it. That one can be redone then, and the effects can match the rank, as for any that are vague in nature. I only posted them as Etai PMed them to me.
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyTue Nov 29, 2011 1:47 am

that was me/nami, we will work on it soon
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyTue Nov 29, 2011 1:58 am

As not to spam until Renga replies, I guess the fact that we are asking for so much more in descriptions now, these smaller descriptions that are popping back up are just looking 'ugly' so to speak and not to mention getting a better idea of the power of each rank as well. If Nami has it in his jutsu list, make sure he is allowed to edit the new description into his list also.
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyTue Nov 29, 2011 1:59 am

I can just forget about those two jutsu and replace them as m free with the two I just registered
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyWed Nov 30, 2011 3:09 am

Berserker Style Bulk up - Make it C Rank.

Enrage - Make it C Rank, the senses increase only 1.5x
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptySat Dec 03, 2011 4:03 pm

edit bump
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyWed Dec 07, 2011 12:20 am

Name: Berserker Style: Gatling Fists
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Element: N/A
Type: Taijutsu
Range: Close
Description: One post charge. After a charge, the user sends chakra into their arms to increase punching speed x4, making them able to fire off over three punches in a second for ten seconds total. The force of the punches are light in comparison to other taijutsu techniques, having only the power to bruise skin, muscle, and bone but makes up for it in sheer amount of hits that can be laid. If hit multiple times in the same spots, bone can fracture or break. Internal organs can rupture. Disorientation is also common if a hit is laid to the head. The more hits laid, the further back the target is pushed. If a wall or other obstacle is in the way, a large dent, up to three feet deep can be formed from the slamming into it. Cool down of 6 posts.



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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyWed Dec 07, 2011 9:02 pm

Bulk up - 4000 ryo

Enrage - 3500 ryo

Your new A Rank - Just over 100 punches in just under 120 seconds?? The math says, that is just over 1 punch per second, which is about a normal punch anyway. You need to rework your wording a bit due bc this is a weak A rank, that would be a waste of money and effort. Three punces per second for 10 seconds total would make a better argument. Do you even have an extra A rank spot for a jutsu at this time??
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PostSubject: Re: Renga Zakii Technique Registration   Renga Zakii Technique Registration EmptyWed Dec 07, 2011 10:32 pm

I dont have an A rank jutsu yet. I want to speed the rate of punches up so that its abnormally fast. Can I also up the damage with it?
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