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 Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)

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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) - Page 6 EmptyFri Nov 11, 2011 2:47 am

In the anime, Darui uses it vs. Sasuke in the land of iron. They all fire simultaniously but can be lagged somewhat. However, this is an instant fire jutsu, it doesnt last longer than one post. So that ring will dissipate after the jutsu. However, the ring is made in the actual anime
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) - Page 6 EmptyFri Nov 11, 2011 2:54 am

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ah alright then, One more thing to be firing a beam that can split up to 7 times is a bit much either raise the rank or lower amount of times it can be fired per topic (2 maybe) other then that Approved unless someone else states other wise.

Price (When edited)~ 18k/18,000 ryo
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) - Page 6 EmptyFri Nov 11, 2011 3:00 am

Well, its Canon, and I halfed the number already shown in the anime. IF its gonna cost 18,000 Ill keep all seven.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) - Page 6 EmptySat Nov 12, 2011 7:01 pm

Due to this being an advanced element (making it stronger than normal naturally) as well as it being less powerful than it actually is in Canon Ill approve it at the following price;

12,000 Ryo
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) - Page 6 EmptyMon Nov 14, 2011 3:55 pm

Name: Ranton: Rēzāranchā (Storm Release: Laser Launcher)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Element: Storm
Type: Ninjutsu/Kenjutsu
Range: 50 feet
Description: No Seals, the users charges chakra into the weapon in place of seals. The user releases a coating of storm nature chakra over the weapon they are holding in their hand(s) similar to what occurs in Ranton: Bīmu heiki, except this time the coating does not stay attached to the weapon. The user swings their blade and the coating of storm chakra is released and sent flying. It grows to 10 ft. long and 1 ft. wide, and moves at 25 ft/s. This strom natured chakra projectile is powerful enough to cut cleanly through iron and below without slowing down but if it hits steel it will stop and cut through up to an inch and a half before dissolving. Flesh will be torn to the bone, but excess bleeding does not occur, only intense pain. Any harder material simply stops the beam when it hits it. 3 post cool down.



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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) - Page 6 EmptyWed Nov 16, 2011 6:48 pm

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7000 Ryo
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) - Page 6 EmptyMon Dec 12, 2011 2:33 am

Name: Storm Release: Laser Edge (Rēzāejji)
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: A
Element: Storm
Type: Ninjutsu/ Kenjutsu
Range: Length of the Blade
Description: Upon a one post charge of chakra into the blade, the user releases the storm element upon the weapon, creating a blade of pure laser. The laser only extends an inch from the blade, but has the cutting power of ultimate proportion. With one swing of this storm release enhanced blade, it can cut through the most powerful of material known to man. Diamond doesnt even hold up against this. Can cut into an indestructible weapon up to one inch before stopping. The enemy can be cut through cleanly, detaching entire limbs with a single stroke and can go cleanly through half the torso, whether vertical, diagonal or horizontal in one swing as well, cauterizing any flesh and organs that it comes in contact with.

A drawback of this technique, is that the blade loses all of its cutting edge in the 10 post cool so that it becomes blunt like a club and will gain back 10% cutting power each round. and when the blade finally cools, the full cutting power is restored. The justu itself lasts for 5 posts, 10 post cooldown, twice per topic use.


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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) - Page 6 EmptyMon Dec 12, 2011 5:53 am

It sounds something similar to the ability Storm Swim that Raijin has, base it more on that in terms of power and how long it lasts. Otherwise the power level you have now is S rank level and you don't have any more open slots there.

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Storm Swim: The blade of this weapon is able to be coated in raiton style chakra which increases its cutting ability by more than three fold and allowing it to easily slice or "swim" through materials as hard as titanium with ease. For things deemed "unbreakable" Raijin could crack but not fully destroy them. Titanium and tempered steel take two posts to slice through. This ability takes one round to activate and lasts for three rounds before running out. After it runs out the user must wait for an eight turn cool down to recharge it.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) - Page 6 EmptyMon Dec 12, 2011 2:49 pm

Advanced Elements would normally be stronger at their rank than normal elements. This attack at S Rank would be able to 'erase' an entire opponent completely in one swoop. To make it not like Raiton blades, I stated that the storm laser only extended an inch from the blade, like an outline on the blade, plus this has a major drawback on the cutting power after its done. I didn't want this to be like a light saber bc I effing hate Star Wars, and don't want it like that. So, what editing needs to be made?

I also stated that it cuts through, not cracks. Obviously it wouldnt go all the way through due to the blade only being coated on the outer edge. Plus more than one person has registered the lightning blade, and this is an advanced element variation, and many can make the same custom technique with just about every element.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) - Page 6 EmptyMon Dec 12, 2011 10:00 pm

Ok, after discussion over the phone, I have edited it to standards good sir.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) - Page 6 EmptyMon Dec 12, 2011 10:04 pm

hmm, I can accept this but if you want to keep the price down make it so the blade loses all of its cutting edge in the 10 post cool so that it becomes blunt like a club and will gain back 10% cutting power each round. That'll shave off a few thousand
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) - Page 6 EmptyMon Dec 12, 2011 10:18 pm

I like that as well, I made the changes. Bump
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) - Page 6 EmptyMon Dec 12, 2011 10:22 pm

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10,500 Ryo
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) - Page 6 EmptyMon Dec 26, 2011 12:53 am

Ill be buying all of my Laser Techs now, for a total of 29,500 ryo. Ryo Deducted

Laser Circus - 12,000 Ryo

Laser Launcher - 7,000 Ryo

Laser Edge - 10,500 Ryo
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