I accept the price, and wish to purchase it now. Can the other jutsu get looked at too now?

Bump for a ryo deduction and the other techniques please.

I shall get an admin to deduct ASAP, will begin other reviews

Sly mind effect, will this effect last on the opponent even after a Genjutsu Kai releases them from an alternate Genjutsu, and does it alter their direction for as long as they remain an RP user on the site, cause I couldn't allow that. It would be too overpowering to say that they were hit with this, and for the rest of their life, they could never reach a far off destination without help. It could be stated that the Genjutsu lasts for one topic, and then one more following topic before it wears off. Please make this edit.

For the Illusion tech. What kind of Genjutsu does this activate anyways, other than it being a genjutsu ability within itself. I know it states that another Gen can be used on an opponent while they are in a Gen already, but I'm going to have to put a limit on this that only two Gen can be allowed on one user at a time, this way you don't comatose somebody in an endless barrage of Genjutsu.

Tree Binding Death - Before I deduct the ryo for this, if one cannot escape this due to being bound, basically it is inescapable. However, it states they feel the pain in reality. So, the question is, is this capable of being an auto kill jutsu?

Tree Binding Death: If they are doing handseals before they are bound by the genjutsu, they can still use kai to dispel the jutsu. The tree that binds them in no way moves their body, only wraps around them so they can't move. If not the only escape from the genjutsu is REAL pain, just like any other jutsu stated otherwise. If a genjutsu causes pain, that doesn't necessarily mean that real pain doesn't affect them. It only means that the person thinks they are in pain. Hence, it's a realistic illusion.

Sly Mind: It doesn't say that it's a stackable illusion, so a single Kai would release them from the illusion, provided that they detect the illusion without metagaming, which considering the description isn't exactly possible. Also, no genjutsu lasts longer than a topic unless it states so... I don't think any jutsu lasts longer than a topic unless it says so; that should be a site-wide rule. Even if it did, my own chakra pool could only last until a certain point before it was released, meaning that it wouldn't go onto other topics. And in case you ask, making a new topic will not abuse the indefinite duration, as I said before it can only last until the topic is over or, as stated in the jutsu, until she runs out of chakra. That being said, she can also stop the illusion before she loses too much chakra.

Infinity Illusion: Again, this is not a stackable illusion, nor an illusion at all. This is only a workaround the activation of a genjutsu. Most other genjutsu require eye contact or sound interaction to affect the enemy. What this jutsu does is use the chakra that is already in the opponent to activate any genjutsu Ukiyo wants. Handseals and chakra are still required, but the eye contact or sound is no longer required, as the chakra is already in their system.

Tree Binding Death - The part that concerns me, is if you go to stab someone through the heart while caught up in this jutsu. Tell me what happens there. I'm making sure that there is no loop hole in this jutsu.

Dominic Edrick wrote:

Tree Binding Death - The part that concerns me, is if you go to stab someone through the heart while caught up in this jutsu. Tell me what happens there. I'm making sure that there is no loop hole in this jutsu.

Well I shall clarify. Within the genjutsu, there is only the tree. Outside of the genjutsu Ukiyo is free to do whatever. If she does what you said, then it would happen. I believe there is an episode of Naruto where Kurenai uses this jutsu on Itachi to kill him, but was genjutsu reversal'd. She also used it on Naruto, though she simply left him. I will say again though, If Ukiyo were to stab someone through the heart, the initial piercing of the skin would free them from the illusion, but not stop whatever is going into them, and continue on through the heart, as you say, killing them.

Tree Binding Death - Then in my professional opinion on this, this needs to be turned into a site friendly jutsu. I want there to be one way that the jutsu can be escaped for everyone. At B Rank, everyone should rightfully have that chance. Help me make that escape, and then if no one attempts to use that escape, then you will be granted your auto kill. Here are some options....

When bound, the arms are free to use kai to escape in the first post but if they fail to do so, you get your chance of the kill.

When bound, the arms are free to create the pain necessary to escape. However, the pain must be a deep gash of atleast 5" wide and go all the way through a forearm in depth. They don't want to severely injure themselves to escape, you are once again, granted your kill.

Please let me know if your ok with this. This is the only way I really see this working...

Dominic Edrick wrote:

Tree Binding Death - Then in my professional opinion on this, this needs to be turned into a site friendly jutsu. I want there to be one way that the jutsu can be escaped for everyone. At B Rank, everyone should rightfully have that chance. Help me make that escape, and then if no one attempts to use that escape, then you will be granted your auto kill. Here are some options....

When bound, the arms are free to use kai to escape in the first post but if they fail to do so, you get your chance of the kill.

When bound, the arms are free to create the pain necessary to escape. However, the pain must be a deep gash of atleast 5" wide and go all the way through a forearm in depth. They don't want to severely injure themselves to escape, you are once again, granted your kill.

Please let me know if your ok with this. This is the only way I really see this working...

When bound, the arms are free to use kai to escape in the first post but if they fail to do so, you get your chance of the kill.

So no first post chance of a severe wound? Ok, however, the price and rank for the site doesn't seem to keep this at b rank. If it is this powerful, bump it to A, and I'm going to have to limit it to once per topic use. New price, 10,500 ryo.

What would happen if I included both options in the jutsu? Price/Rank reduction?

If you included both, the price would remain the same as would the rank, however, a twice per topic limit with a 5 post cooldown would need to be added due to the incredible nature of it. I want you to be able to keep the overall power, but this is the only way I see it happening...

Edited and ready for purchase. Go ahead and deduct if you would.

Infinity Illusion: this troubles me, cause it seems like you're saying that all you have to do is handsigns, and then the person is instantly within any genjutsu that you please, plus the fact that you put no rank on this technique inquires me to ask, what's the max rank genjutsu it can perform. If this was ever used cannon wise, please give a description, or I may have to really pad this jutsu.

Nahaji Sankuro wrote:

Infinity Illusion: this troubles me, cause it seems like you're saying that all you have to do is handsigns, and then the person is instantly within any genjutsu that you please, plus the fact that you put no rank on this technique inquires me to ask, what's the max rank genjutsu it can perform. If this was ever used cannon wise, please give a description, or I may have to really pad this jutsu.

That is true, for the most part. However, I cannot do this unless my chakra is already in them. That is, my parasitic chakra sphere comes in contact with them, or I have affected them with a different genjutsu. This isn't much a jutsu than it is an ability, so it can be any genjutsu that Ukiyo can already do. This is a completely custom jutsu, made clan specific.

So it's not a double genjutsu ability, but you're stating that after having already set someone in a genjutsu, if they RELEASE or are RELEASED by any matter, you can do this tech and then instantly trap them in another? This wouldn't be able to work with Genjutsu Kai through the ability of flushing out the user's chakra, for that would flush out your own as well.

Correct. Really, unless they metagame or have a way to deafen and blind themselves they'll get stuck in another genjutsu regardless; this really just speeds up the process by like a couple seconds.

Though I don't know of any kind of "flushing" going on. I do know that Kai causes a surge of chakra, not a flush. It's like a swift slap to the face. You're not taking their head off with the slap, just creating a shock to get some sense knocked into you. [Incorrect use of you, I know.]

Im talking about the kai form where the user releases all of their chakra, then stores it back in to over power the genjutsu chakra, like when Naruto learned how to do it in the anime, i could be preceiving it wrong, anyways, since it can accquire any rank of technique genjutsu, it's going to be priced in the S-rank range

I don't know that form of Kai, I don't think it counts as one. I suggest asking Shy or something. It doesn't really make sense to release their chakra then take it back in... It still seems like it's just the surge thing all over again. If it's going to cost an S rank amount of money, just drop it. As I said before it only shaves off seconds of time anyway.

Well the only reason it would cost S-rank is cause you state it can generate any rank genjutsu, now if yoou changed to from say, d-b, it would be priced as accordingly.

Yeah, because it's more of an ability than a pure jutsu. As it says, it's Kekkai Genkai. I'm not changing it and will remove it later. If you will, look at the other jutsu please.

Will do

Ryo Deducted for Tree Binding Death.

Here is the finished version of Mizu Bunshin

Name: Water Clone Jutsu
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Element: Water
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m)
Description: The Water Clone Technique is similar to the Shadow Clone Technique except it creates clones out of water. Like other solid clone techniques, the clones can be used to perform tasks the user is unable or unwilling to do for themselves. The range of the clone is limited however, as it can not travel very far from the original body. Additionally, water clones only have one-tenth of the original person's power. Like other clone techniques, if the water clones are injured enough they will revert back to normal water. The maximum amount of clones is 6. This clone is destroyed in a single blow, and has a 3 post cooldown.

5000 Ryo

Alright, you may deduct the ryo for that as well, I have already added it to my list. Now I just need Sly Mind looked at.