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 Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration)

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Sakurakage

Kouketsu
Kouketsu
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PostSubject: Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration)   Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) EmptyTue Mar 04, 2014 3:56 am

Name:
Canon/Custom:
Rank:
Type:
Element:
Range:
Specialty:
Duration:
Cooldown:
Description:

Academy Jutsu:

E-Rank Jutsu:

D-Rank Jutsu:

C-Rank Jutsu:

B-Rank Jutsu:


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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration)   Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) EmptyTue Mar 04, 2014 4:01 am

If this is a WIP(Work in progress) Please state such in title name. Otherwise we'll think this is all you want! :D
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration)   Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) EmptyTue Mar 04, 2014 4:02 am

Very sorry. Will do.
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Kouketsu
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration)   Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) EmptyTue Mar 04, 2014 4:53 am

Done
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration)   Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) EmptyWed Mar 05, 2014 1:34 am

Please reconsider your jutsu list. A number of each jutsu rank limitation can be found Here
  • Special Jounin: 2 E-ranks, 3 D-ranks, 3 C-ranks, 2 B-ranks
  1. As It stands now, you completely ignored the two E Rank Jutsu and added an extra D Rank & C Rank justu to your list.

  • You may have all of the academy jutsu; however, Ikimuno Benkuo requires you to buy this jutsu for 5,000 ryo. Click here for details
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration)   Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) EmptyWed Mar 05, 2014 1:57 am

Fixed.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration)   Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) EmptyWed Mar 05, 2014 2:04 am

Your E Rank jutsu are academy jutsu. These come free; the 10 jutsu registry at start is for your own character's personal development. Use two custom E Rank jutsu or 2 canon E Rank jutsu that are not listed in the Academy jutsu
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration)   Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) EmptyWed Mar 05, 2014 2:21 am

Fixed....hopefully.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration)   Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) EmptyWed Mar 05, 2014 2:58 am

Name: Domed Wall
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: C
Type: Defensive
Element: Mokuton
Range: Mid-range
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: An extremely versatile move, this technique uses chakra to activate the roots in the ground and, using the user of the technique as a reference point, makes wooden pillars appear from left and right. The wooden pillars join together in a dome-shape with the user at the centre. This process can be used to catch the enemy in a double sided attack. Also, in case one confronts the enemy at a short distance, the enemy can be locked up inside the dome, setting the situation for a one-on-one fight. This dome can also be collapsed or burnt with the enemy inside to inflict damage. Furthermore, it functions as an easy shelter against the enemy's long-distance attacks, like shuriken and kunai.
  • Describe the size of this dome and its durability. 1 C Rank Raiton or Katon can render this dome ineffective.


Name: Tree Wall Barrier
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Defensive
Element: Mokuton
Range: In front of user
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Until destroyed
Cooldown: 4 Posts
Description: Jukai Heki is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wood Element. After performing the required handseals, the user places their hand against the ground. Countless wooden branches shoot up in front of them, entwining together so as to close any gaps, forming a net-like wall with decent defensive power.

Note: The height and length of the wall cannot exceed 5 meters each. The barrier can defend against any attacks of equal or lower rank, but will be damaged by attacks of higher ranks.
  • Elaborate on the durability of this wall: 1 C Katon or 2 D Raiton Rank jutsu can render this wall ineffective.


Name: Wooden Skewer
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: Mokuton
Range: 15 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: 1 Post
Cooldown: 6 Posts
Description: Sashiki no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wood Element. After performing the single handseal, the user will them expel a barrage of wooden spikes from their body, which the user is able to create a makeshift sword from, or use them as long ranged projectiles. The cutting and piercing ability of the wooden spikes are upon the level of techniques such as Chidori, not much being able to stop these wooden spikes. When the spikes are impaled into something or someone, they can be remotely triggered to sprout into branches within the victim, skerewing them.
  • Explain the effectiveness of this jutsu against physical objects- this wont be able to pierce anything above B Rank.
  • The "remote detonation" should be limited to 10 meters and be detonated within 2 posts.


Name: Tree Bind Burial
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: Mokuton
Range: 20 meters
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: Until destroyed or released.
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: Jubaku Eisou is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Wood Element. After performing a set of handseals, the user puts their hands against the ground. Roots burst up from beneath the opponent, growing around them and trapping them in place. This has much less of a strain on the user because the roots tug the opponent partially beneath the ground, up to their torso. This prevents the opponent from all forms of movement, including handseals.

Note: The restraints can only be broken by a strike or technique of a higher rank. The user may sacrifice half the amount of chakra used for this technique in order to sprout more branches and impale anything caught in the branches.
  • Someone of a STR of A or higher can break out of this or A Rank SPD can dodge on their post: also- remember that anyone must be given ample opportunity to react against such an attack- otherwise it is considered a godmod.
  • Remove the "The user may sacrifice half the amount of chakra used for this technique in order to sprout more branches and impale anything caught in the branches" This would be considered a separate jutsu and too powerful for a B Rank when added together with its original ability.
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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration)   Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) EmptyWed Mar 05, 2014 3:28 am

Approved
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Eden
Eden
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Ryo : 1597319

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Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) Left_bar_bleue500/500Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) Empty_bar_bleue  (500/500)

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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration)   Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) EmptyThu Mar 06, 2014 6:09 am

Earthen Push - Approved

Water Slide - Approved

Blunt Pole - Approved

Hiding in Wood - Approved

Explosive Seed - Give it a 3 post cooldown.

Domed Wall - Approved

Great Forest Technique - How far can the wood extend from the user's arms? How far can the spikes extend from the already extended wood? Keep in mind the spikes need to be obviously shorter than the originally extended wood.

Tree Wall Barrier - Approved

Wooden Skewer - Chidori and its variations are S-rank and are banned. No B-rank can be that powerful. Please nerf this jutsu and make it more proper for a normal B-rank jutsu.

Tree Bind Burial - Your jutsu need to have one primary use. If the branches come up from the ground to restrain the opponent, that's all it should to. Also, this is a B-rank so it can't render shinobi absolutely immobile. Any jutsu can be broken out of, so you can't put stuff in your description that identifies your jutsu as a certain type of extreme, such as being rendered immobile or being impossible to dodge. Even though you placed a note under it stating that it can't, you need to edit out everything in your descriptions that states the opposite of the note. :)
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Eden
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Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) Left_bar_bleue500/500Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) Empty_bar_bleue  (500/500)

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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration)   Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) EmptyThu Mar 06, 2014 9:48 pm

Explosive Seed - Approved

Great Forest Technique - For the straight beams, lower the length to 6 feet.

Wooden Skewer - I need an exact amount of spikes that protrude from the user's body. 10 is suitable for a B-rank. Also, I need you to add that it will cost an extra 15 chakra to activate the extra branches that sprout from the opponent's body.

Tree Bind Burial - Approved

NOTE: I need you to go back and reread all of your jutsu. How you apply a jutsu may have killing potential, but the jutsu itself cannot. Please go through and edit the jutsu that have killing potential on their own.
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Eden
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Ryo : 1597319

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Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) Left_bar_bleue500/500Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) Empty_bar_bleue  (500/500)

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PostSubject: Re: Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration)   Senju, Kouketsu (Jutsu Registration) EmptyTue Mar 11, 2014 9:19 pm

Okay, now you're all good to go. You may now add the jutsu to your Jutsu List.
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