Academy Jutsu:

E-Rank:

D-Rank:

Those were my free 5 and I'd like to purchase:

Name: Doton: Doryuu Taiga (Earth Release: Earth Flow River)
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D
Element: Doton
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: N/A
Description: After the required handseals, the user turns the ground beneath the target into a river of mud. The river will start under the opponent's feet and will expand for a few meters. The river is three meters wide. If the opponent gets caught in the river, he or she will be stuck, bound by the sticky mud. After the jutsu stops advancing, all that is left is a motionless pool of mud. It cannot uproot trees or affect terrain at a large scale. The cooldown is one post after the technique is used.

You don't need to place the academy jutsu here, they will be added automatically.

Ichiji Tekina Mahi [Temporary Paralysis]: It's range as eye sight is a bit vague, please give it defined range. Also, E-ranks don't usually have too much of an affect within combat, though this one is rather interesting and iffy. I'll come back to it on further speculation or second opinion from another staff member.

The others look good.

Doton: Doryuu Taiga (Earth Release: Earth Flow River): Also approved for training.

Cost: 10,000 Ryo

5 feet, but I put eyesight for the simple fact that if the user used a visual-enhancing ninjutsu or Doujutsu, then their eyesight would be heightened and would be able to see farther more clearly, however if that is too much or something I'll keep it at 5 feet?

Standard eye sight is 20/20 vision, the metric equivalent of which is 6/6 vision. In other words, 20 feet/6 meters for normal visual performance.

So take that value and then add the additional distance value based on visual rankings from your clan and place it within the range.

Example:

Range: 20 feet/6 meters

Additional range per rank of user:

Genin ~ 50 ft.
Chuunin ~ 100 ft.
Special Jounin ~ 150 ft.
Jounin ~ 200 ft.
Kage ~ 250 ft.

Now obvious it is not really going to be overly successful at further ranges or really all to helpful until it is for support value, so it'll be allowed. However, being the huge amount of distance increases, maybe define exactly, in fine detail, of how it works. That way there is no confusion while being used at extremely long ranges. After all, it isn't an doujutsu but a ninjutsu, so eye contact alone will not mean it just works, like a sharingan genjutsu would.

Hmm, I should've made it a Doujutsu.. Eh too late hmm I'll have it only work within 6 meters and outside of that is useless. Going into fine detail is just too much work lol Is that acceptable?

As long as it has a max range, it should be fine. If any of the other staff have an issue with that, they will tell you with their evaluation. As far as I can see though, it seems fine.

Approved 1/2

Bump.

Bump.

Approved. 2/2. :)

Name: Erementaru Bendo [Elemental Bend]
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: C
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Element: N/A
Range: 20 ft
Specialty: Ninjutsu
Duration: As long as jutsu it is used on lasts..
Cooldown: N/A
Description: When this jutsu is used it grants Syn the ability to move his plasma jutsu (fire and katon as they are categorized as low level plasma) in any way as if he were a bender of sorts. He cannot dismantle/enlarge/miniaturize/ or add on to any jutsu he uses this effect on. He can only use it on jutsu of his own making therefor he cannot push or pull anyone else' jutsu in any way. This has no cooldown, however requires 25 chakra for every post used.

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Give it a name and bump.

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Approved at 22,000 ryo. It will also require a 1,000 word training topic.

Post whether you want to purchase it now or later.

I want to purchase it now. Can I by chance just train it in the training I already have out now?

Sure. Just make sure you label it.

Ryo deducted.

I would like to purchase the following:



Name: Lightning Burial: Banquet of lightning.
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: D Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 9 meters from the blade that is in the ground.
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 4 posts
Description: The user pours lightning chakra into their blade then sticks the blade in the ground. Optical electricity flows from the blade and into the earth, making a course towards the enemy. The electricity will continue to follow the target until it connects with its target or until the target reaches the techniques range limit. The electricity will only be able to move on ground surface, meaning that the opponent is safe in the air or on trees. It moves in a straight line, meaning that it cannot serpentine itself around a course. The electricity flows at a speed of 15km/h but can move faster given more chakra. If the user places 20 chakra into this technique, the electricity speed will be at 20km/h; if the user places 30 chakra into this technique, the electricity speed will be at 30km/h; if the user places 40 chakra into this technique, the electricity speed will be at 40km/h; and if the user places 50 chakra into this technique, the electricity speed will be at 50km/h. This lightning can only paralyze the enemy by one post, leaving the opponent as an immobile target.

Name: Dance of the Camelia
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: B Rank
Type: Offensive
Element: N/A
Range: The length of the blade
Specialty: Kenjutsu
Duration: 1 post
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: The user will stab the opponent chaotically at different places on the opponents body. Each stab is strong enough to puncture the enemy deeply. This technique will cause the opponents eyes to lag behind, forcing the opponent to see after images of each slash. The speed of the stab depends on the speed of the user, meaning that an A rank speed user will be able to stab at 40km/h. The number of stabs are 60 in total; this jutsu does not take away chakra.

That will be 65,000 Ryo.

That's more than what I have so how much would the B-Rank be alone? If still too much for me then I would just like to purchase the D-Rank first

D rank costs 15,000 Ryo and the B rank costs 50,000 Ryo.

D-Rank it is then please

You may add this to your jutsu list. An admin will remove your Ryo shortly.

Name: 1st Seal - Thousand Year Curse: The Wrath of Ra
Canon/Custom: Custom
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Element: Raiton
Range: 6 meters
Specialty: Genjutsu
Duration: 3 Posts
Cooldown: 6 posts
Description: No handseals. Two post charge. When charged for two posts a bright purple colored Eye of Horus appears on the forehead of the caster, marking the activation of the jutsu. When the opponent(s) see(s) the bright eye on the caster's forehead it immediately stops their motion as well as the caster's, putting them both to "sleep". However, if the opponent shuts their eyes within 1 second of the light's arrival and keeps them shut for the remainder of the post, nothing will happen and the jutsu will immediately enter its cool down phase. The eye shines brightly for 1 post. The brightness of the eye that the opponent sees is actually Raiton chakra transferring to their brain's receptors and causing them to undergo a two-part hallucination. 


The first part of the hallucination lasts for two posts. When put under the effects of the jutsu, the opponent sees themselves battling it out with the caster in a large 50 by 50 foot square supported only by one large pillar. Atop this squared off expanse, neither can use jutsu, but instead only the equipment they arrived with. Whatever abilities their weapons respectively hold, however, are kept. If the caster is knocked out, killed, or hit off the square into the depths below, then both the caster and the victim(s) are immediately pushed out of their sleep. If the victim(s) is/are knocked out, killed, or hit off the square into the depths below then they will immediately pass on to the second phase of the hallucination. In addition, if the two posts pass and the caster has not been defeated, the opponent will pass off into the second phase regardless. If an ally has been accidentally caught in the jutsu, there exists a fails safe. The caster, through direct hand contact, may plant a seal (within the hallucination) returning their consciousness.

The second phase of the seal lasts for 1 post. The caster's consciousness will return, but they will be completely paralyzed and is allowed to charge a jutsu to prepare for another attack, however any jutsu that requires handseals, for obvious reason will not be able to be used. Within the victim(s) mind, they are attached to a cross with their hands behind the back of the cross nailed down atop each other and their feet in front, also nailed down. The setting is placed within a very large and sandy desert where a small village of reapers live about 500 ft from the cross. Within this post, they will live out 1000 years where a reaper clad in an all black cloak and a large scythe will come down to the cross once a day and slowly cut them from ear to ear in a Joker-like fashion, cut them from the left side of their abdomen to the right side until their intestines slightly poke out and then behead them. This will happen every day for "1000 years" and on the last day the silent reaper will finally speak saying,"Live, for one day I shall return."  The opponent(s) will regain full consciousness while the caster regains use of their body.

After the jutsu had been gone, the eye stays on the caster's forehead like a tattoo for the remainder of the topic.

Chakra induced hallucinations and illusions fall under Genjutsu

Damn I wanted to get around that