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PostSubject: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptySun Jan 09, 2011 6:38 pm

Name: Water Style: Water Dragon Jutsu (Suiton: Suiryūdan no Jutsu)
Rank: B
Element: Water
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Short to Long
Description: This technique shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. If damage is dealt directly, the dragon has the same force as a spear thrown with enough force to pierce through iron. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the ninja's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is any water. The amount of water used depends on the skill of the ninja using it. The basic, standard size is 30 ft. It can maximize 100 ft if the user is around enough water. The larger the dragon, the harder it is to dodge. Handseals. Cooldown of 4 posts.

Special Jounin if their primary element is water, can create the dragon without any water around only ONCE. Jounin and up for everyone else still, only ONCE.

If a ninja were to maximize the size of the dragon, here is what is required per rank. An ocean for chuunin. A lake for Special Jounin w/o water as primary. A River for jounin and s. Jounin with primary element being water. Can create at maximum size only ONCE without any water around. The next attempt needs a river.


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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyMon Jan 17, 2011 1:57 am

Alright I trust you enough with this but for the sake of future arguments others may pose I need some of the vagueness filled in.

-what is the maximum size of the dragon with plenty of water around?
-what rank will the skills of a ninja be high enough to not require water?
-If a ninja needs to use a physical body of water then what is the size of that body for maximum size to be obtained? eg. lake, ocean, bath tub
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyMon Jan 17, 2011 2:08 am

The Dragon can maximize into the size of the one on the anime. However, I'm not sure what that size would be. Don't want to oversize it. Help with your own opinion of the size.

-Special Jounin if their primary element is water. Jounin for everyone else.

-An ocean for chuunin. A lake for Special Jounin w/o water as primary. A River for jounin and s. Jounin with primary element being water. Can create at maximum size only ONCE without any water around. The next attempt needs a river.

-I will go ahead and add a Cooldown of 4 posts.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyMon Jan 17, 2011 2:12 am

Lets see, in my opinion I would say the dragon would be rank based for size as well ranging from 30-100 feet give or take a few dozen feet. You can set up a system as you like.

Add in the rest
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyMon Jan 17, 2011 2:28 am

Edited completely.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyMon Jan 17, 2011 2:34 am

Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) Approveda

I price this technique at: 6000 ryo

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5000 - Base B-rank Jutsu
1000 - Single Element
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptySun Jan 23, 2011 5:15 pm

I accept and deducted my ryo.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyMon Jan 24, 2011 3:26 pm

Name: Final Dragon Strike
Rank: B-S
Element: Lightning
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close to Long
Description: After charging lightning into ones sword, the user slashes and releases an electrically charged dragon head made of lightning towards the opponent. The lightning Dragon flashes towards the opponent only a split second after, making this attack extremely hard to dodge and point blank range,, nearly impossible. The contact leaves the skin as black as ink from the effects. The dragon can be charged in three sizes with three different results. No Handseals.

B Rank: Half Human Size - Dragon can slam into opponent, able to knock an opponent back with the force of three football hits combined. Leaves electrically charged first degree burns across the enemy if they arent able to dodge. This stage only, can be released by charging into the arm and slashing arm like a sword. 1 post charge. 2 post cooldown.

A Rank: Human Size - Dragon slams into opponent, able to knock an opponent b ack with the force of a car at 45 mph, and tears through the enemy. Leaves electrically charged second degree burns and paralysis over the lower body. 2 post charge. 5 post cooldown.

S Rank: Double Human Size - Dragon slams into opponent, able to knock them back with the force of a freight train at 60 mph, and tears through the enemy. Leaves electrically charged third degree burns and the opponent paralyzed for one post, if it doesnt kill them all together from the massive shock. 3 post charge. Twice per battle at this level.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyThu Jan 27, 2011 3:16 pm

I don't see anything wrong with it...

11,000 ryo
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptySun Jan 30, 2011 3:33 pm

Name: Genjutsu Release (幻術解, Genjutsu Kai)
Rank: S
Element: -
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: -
Description: The ability to break from a genjutsu. The user must stop the flow of chakra in their body, and then apply an even stronger power to disrupt the flow of the caster's chakra. This can also be done by an unaffected ninja by applying a sudden surge of chakra into the affected person. 2 Post Cooldown

When the user breaks out of a genjutsu, the amount of chakra used will match the rank of which the genjutsu is. The chakra cost for breaking out of a genjutsu looks like this....

E Rank Genjutsu - 5 Chakra
D Rank Genjutsu - 10 Chakra
C Rank Genjutsu - 20 Chakra
B Rank Genjutsu - 30 Chakra
A Rank Genjutsu - 40 Chakra
S Rank Genjutsu - 50 Chakra


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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyMon Jan 31, 2011 2:22 pm

The new Genjutsu Kai rules are up. Because Genjutsu isn't one of your specialties, but you have a genjutsu-detecting ability in your clan, you can buy up to S-rank Kai, though it will cost you more.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyMon Jan 31, 2011 3:30 pm

Is everything else as far as the description fit for approval? Does it need a cooldown and a limit?
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyMon Jan 31, 2011 4:14 pm

Well, I would normally make you buy E-A first, before you can buy S, but I suppose that would make it nearly impossible to buy them all.

A cooldown of two posts, but no real need for a limit to the number of times you can use Kai, except for your own amount of chakra. Kai is pretty much only defensive, and an S-rank genjutsu would have the limits for the number of times one could use it.

You should add, however, that Genjutsu Kai uses the same amount of chakra to get rid of the genjutsu as it took to create the genjutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyMon Jan 31, 2011 7:25 pm

Ok. When I get home I will edit all this in. However, I will now post up quickly the chakra pool, then move it later.

When the user breaks out of a genjutsu, the amount of chakra used will match the rank of which the genjutsu is. The chakra cost for breaking out of a genjutsu looks like this....

E Rank Genjutsu - 5 Chakra
D Rank Genjutsu - 10 Chakra
C Rank Genjutsu - 20 Chakra
B Rank Genjutsu - 30 Chakra
A Rank Genjutsu - 40 Chakra
S Rank Genjutsu - 50 Chakra
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyMon Jan 31, 2011 10:11 pm

Sorry for the double post, but as mentioned in above topic, Im home and I edited in the details.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyMon Jan 31, 2011 10:21 pm

Very well. This will cost 11,000 ryo.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyTue Feb 01, 2011 1:43 am

Purchased both Final Dragon Strike and Genjutsu Kai. Ryo deducted.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyThu Feb 03, 2011 2:12 am

Name: Water Release: Snake's Mouth
Canon/Custom: Canon
Rank: S
Element: Water
Type: Ninjutsu
Range: Close to Medium
Description: Handseals Required. This technique allows the user to generate a spinning column of water which will take the form of a snake with a gaping maw. This snake can twist and follow its targets and swallow them. After it has swallowed them, it turns into a rapid flowing river that carries the enemy away. Virtually Inescapable. The only way one could escape is to use the same ranked tech of waters weakness. Which is an Earth Release of A rank or higher. 6 Post Cooldown.

The size of the snake itself is 60 ft. long and 5 ft. wide. It can maw/ crush down on the enemy with the same force as 200 lbs. dropped from a three story building. It wraps and squeezes with twice the force of a real anaconda snake.The river flows as fast as the highest level of water rapids.


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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyThu Feb 03, 2011 2:21 am

Snake's Mouth sounds A-rank, simply because it can follow, crush, eat, and wash away an opponent. Can the opponent walk on top of the snake with the water walking jutsu? Can it be led back to the user, or is it too smart/controlled by the user, and therefore does not need to follow the opponent? Can it be out-run by an opponent that's fast enough (say, up to such-and-such gate speed)? And exactly how fast can it go?
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyThu Feb 03, 2011 2:37 am

If its gonna be A rank, then it is released and is smart enough to act on its own. If it is out run for the duration, it simply explodes into a watery mess that is simply splashing water. The rapids would be too fast to run on and because it basically puts too much pressure in the first place bc the Target would be under the water after swallowed. The snake itself can travel as fast as an acaconda in water, even if its on land. I don't know the max speed in mph.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyFri Feb 04, 2011 3:09 am

If the snake is smart enough to act on its own, it would be more like a summon than a jutsu, and it would have some kind of personality. That's enough information, I suppose.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyFri Feb 04, 2011 3:17 am

Well then I already have dragon summons. So that would be a no for this. Let's dumb it back down....

It spirals around its opponent after activated and begins to close in and crush the opponent with the force as mentioned above...maybe the only way one could escape is to use the same ranked tech of waters weakness. Which is...lightning?
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyFri Feb 04, 2011 3:27 am

No, Earth is strong against water. Fire melts metal (or wind, in Naruto), wind cuts down trees (lightning, in Naruto), lightning strikes earth, earth soaks up water, water quenches fire. So, shall it be B-ranked, and a B-ranked Earth jutsu is the best defense against the jutsu?
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyFri Feb 04, 2011 3:32 am

Really its the only defense. If one doesn't use earth jutsu to block, the jutsu is almost impossible to get out of.
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PostSubject: Re: Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration)   Dominic Edrick (Technique Registration) EmptyFri Feb 04, 2011 3:40 am

Then it would be A-rank in terms of low chances of escape and low chance of survival. I'd say it's on the verge of S-rank because it can create such a large snake, that it could take out an entire group of ninja...
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