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Subject: Aeneas (Technique Registration) Sat Dec 25, 2010 3:00 am
Fury of Wind: Done
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Name: Fury of Wind Rank: A Range: 0 - 100 meters Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Description: This technique requires hand signs and has a 8 post cool down. After hand signs are completed, the user places his/her hands in the air the user causes 2 immense cyclones to rain down from the sky, which destroys nearby scenery. This technique doesn't physically harm the opponent. This technique blocks all B ranked or lower lightening based jutsus, techniques that consist of lighting as a mixed are also canceled (because wind beats lightning). If the lightening jutsu surpasses that of B rank it will penetrate right through it. This technique last 5 posts and by using this move, the user causes damage his/her body, therefore taking 10% damage to put the move in play.
Will of The Sky: done
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Name: Will of The Sky Rank: A Range: 0 - 100 meters Element: Suiton/Fuuton/Raiton/Doton Type: Ninjutsu Description: This technique allows the user to create an unforgiving storm based on the other attributes that they may possess. This move is originally a water element technique therefore it cannot be used unless the user possesses the attribute of water. The user does hand signs and suddenly the flood gates open in the sky, causing hard unforgiving rain that can flood a village in a week. Besides making it difficult to fight in such conditions this technique does nothing to the opponent physically, but decreases the damage of their water jutsus by 15%and increases the power and size of the water jutsus of the user by 15%. If the user possesses another attribute that is listed above the user can add the attribute into the rain storm by doing the same hand signs again which requires another post. If earth is added into the mix, it will cause earthquakes to happen, knocking down trees in the 50 meter radius and also making it difficult to fight, also decreasing the opponents earth attribute jutsus by 10%and increasing earth attribute moves of the user by 10%. If wind is added into the mix it will require another post of hand signs and will cause powerful winds to occur, also decreasing the users wind attribute jutsus by 10% and increasing the users wind attribute moves by 10%. It lighting is added into the mix, it will result in another post of hand sign. Lightening will start raining from the sky destroying nearby trees and decreasing the opponents lightening jutsus by 10% and increasing the users by 10%. This technique requires 35% chakra to use and can be used once a match. This technique may only last 6 posts .
Earth Man Seether: Done
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Name: Earth Man Seether Rank: C Range: 0 - 9.8 feet Element: Doton Type: Ninjutsu Description: This technique requires hand signs. This technique allows the user to make a giant stone head( 13.1 feet tall, 9.8 feet wide) pop out from underground. This technique is mostly controlled with the user’s mind and remains underground when the user doesn’t make it do anything. The head can shoot out stone spikes(22 ft long and 12 feet wide) at the opponent these spikes can be shot out at the speed of 30 mph. This technique can also be used to strike/capture an opponent with its sharp stone tongue which stretches out to 50 meters and is 20 meters wide and speeds up to 20mph. This technique can shoot up to 5 spikes every post, and if it is destroyed it will take 7 posts before handseals can be done so this jutsu can be used again.Last 5 posts and has a cool down of 3.
Earth Man Grondin: Done
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Name: Earth Man Grondin Rank: B Range: 0 - 10 meters Element: Doton Type: Ninjutsu Description: This form of Earth Man is a giant torso amount 10 meters tall and 5 meters wide. This technique allows the user to summon a giant stone torso from the ground. This torso can only move in a " t" formation. It can pop up from underground this formation that is about 10 meters straight down and 10 meters across.This torso can block any jutsu C rank and lower, for as long as the jutsu is not made of lightening. Techniques made of lightening causes major damage to this technique. After getting hit twice with a lightening jutsu, this technique is automatically shattered. This torso moves at 30 mph, and can also be used as a capture technique by opening up and binding opponents into the torso. If an opponent is capture, they can be held up to 3 posts. After the third post this torso can explode causing major damage. During the 3 posts the torso serves as a shield to the opponent, preventing the user from hitting the opponent with any jutsu B rank and lower. If this technique is destroyed, the user will have to wait 4 posts before he/she can start hand signs for this technique again.
Earth Man Mercules: Done
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Name: Earth Man Mercules Rank: B Range: ~~ Element: Doton/Katon Type: Ninjutsu Description: This technique allows the user to make 6 flaming stone skeletons that run about attacking the opponent at 60mph and destroying scenery. These creatures are controlled by the user, but if they are not given a command, they just destroy more scenery and rolling around on the floor. This technique is extremely weak against water, and is immune to fire,and can causes burning damage to their opponents if contact is made.
Earth Man Arena: Done
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Name: Earth Man Arena Rank: A Range: --- Element: Doton Type: Ninjutsu Description: This technique allows the user to create a giant combat ring, the extends up to 10 meters long, and 12 meters wide. This ring is serves as a barrier, everything that’s inside the ring cannot escape the ring and everything outside the ring cannot enter the ring without the casters permission. The ring does not have a roof, and it can only be escaped or enters by digging through the ring. The design of this ring varies on the caster.
Earth Man Mekatsu
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Name: Earth Man Mekatsu Rank: S Range: --- Element: Doton/ Katon Type: Ninjutsu Description: This technique allows the user to summon a giant golem made of steel and fire. This golemn stands 50 meters tall and 20 meters wide. This Golem is the combination of the Earth Man: Torso, Limbs, Head, and Skeleton. With the exception of the psychotic behavior of earth man mercules, and the ability to go underground, this giant earth man possess all capabilities of the earth men.
Foto de Viento Ardiente: done
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Name: Foto de Viento Ardiente( Blazing Wind Shot) Rank: S Range: Close Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Description: This move does not require hand signs, rather 2 posts of loading. When hand signs are complete the user grabs his/her shoulder and instantly immense winds circles around the user’s body blowing away everything within a 5 ft radius of the user. The user then channels the winds into his/her arm, that the shoulder is being held and compresses it until the winds resemble the winds that surrounds a meteor when its falling from space. The user then opens the hand of the arm which the wind is being channeled in and forms a knife hand (Martial arts hand positioning, it’s basically the hands open but fingers pressed together) so that the attack may have a pointy tip. Once this is complete the user will channel fire chakra into the tips of that middle finger then the move is complete. The arm will keep the attack for 3 posts afterwards the attack will vanish. The second this technique is complete it lets out a small magnetic charge that can grab normal loose weapons within 10 ft and make them circle the arm. When the user is ready, he or she will attack the object or person with their hand in knife hand form so that the longest finger (the middle finger) will hit first, and therefore causing the attack to ignite for 3 seconds and completely shoot the chakra and/or weapons from the users arm through the opponent or object. This attack can pierce a clean whole through anyone of the same rank of this user; this whole is approximately 12 inches in diameter, not accounting the weapons added, if they’re added. Anyone above this users rank will only feel a bone crushing pain. The user’s attack hand is slowed down by 50%, and last 6 posts.
Sinister Seal
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Name: Sinister Seal Rank: B Element: --- Type: Ninjutsu Description: This seal was created by Aeneas and is classified as one of Aeneas’s biggest secrets. He is able to use his chakra to summon black inked seals, that can travel anywhere on the user's body. With these seals he is able to link jutsus and body parts with his chakra systems. This technique makes it so that jutsus done by the user can come from places where they normally wouldn’t for as long as the place is linked with a sinister seal. Example: He is able to make the seal appear on his back therefore linking his chakra systems, and if he does a fire ball jutsus, the attack can come from the seal on his back at will. This seal can be multiplied and sent up to 10 different places on the body . This technique can also be used to store attacks that has been presented,for up to 2 posts. When it is storing an attack it glows light red.
Flame Serpent Mesuka: Done
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Name: Flame Serpent Mesuka Rank: B Range: 0- 17 meters Element: Fire Type: Ninjutsu Description: This technique requires hand signs and the sinister seal. The user completes his/her hands signs and shoots out a three horned giant fire serpent made of Katon chakra, which ranges 17 meters long and 12 meters wide. This serpent can be controlled, distributed and/or combined (with serpents of the same kind) by the user. These serpents can travel from place to place by means of the sinister seals. More than one serpent can be created, but for each serpent, it will require another hand seal and sinister seal besides the one in use. These serpents can slam itself against opponents or bite opponents, the main damage of these serpents, is fire damage. The flames can range from first degree to third degree burns. Combining makes the attack larger in size, distributing makes it smaller. This attack is extremely weak against water element techniques of the same rank. This lasts 5 posts and has a cool down of 3 posts.
Wind Surf: Done
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Name: Wind Surf Rank: C Range:-- Element Ninjutsu Description: This technique allows the user to mold chakra into his or her feet so that his or her running speed may increase by 3.5x the user’s original speed. The user will also be able to hover giving it the appearance that the user is flying in air for 3posts, up takes 10 seconds for the user to start descending. it has a cool down of 8 posts. This technique does not increase the overall speed of the user, this technique is mostly used to run and escape, not for taijutsu. This jutsu requires one to do hand signs and possess the attribute of wind.
Liquid Flow: Done and ready to check
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Name: Liquid Flow Rank: C Range: --- Element: Suiton Type: Ninjutsu Description: This technique allows the user to become as fluid as mist in a breeze.This technique makes this user move so fluently that it increases their initial speed and technique. Becomes of how fluid the users motions become there attack speed is increased by 1.5 times their current speed, and impact on taijutsu moves are increased by 2x it initial impact. This technique does require hand signs, and requires for one to possess the attribute of water in this form one is takes only 50% of all fire attacks of the same rank and lower, since water beats fire and takes 15% more lightening damage.
Llama Estampida Semental: Done and ready to check
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Name: Llama Estampida Semental (Flame Stallion Stampede) Rank: B Range: 0 - 60ft Element: Doton/Katon Type: Ninjutsu Description: This jutsu requires hand signs. When the hand signs are complete the user clamps his/her hands together and the earth around the user in a 60 ft radius begins to quake and instantly after putting his/her a stampede of 25 flaming stone horses charge the opponents in a straight line. This technique causes physical and burning damage. This jutsu does 1.5% damage per horse that hits the opponent, and the horses speed is usually slower than the opponent’s full sprint.
Spike Launcher Jutsu
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Name: Spike Launcher Jutsu Rank:C Range: 0- 6 ft Element:Doton/ Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Description: Hand Signs needed. By slamming his/her hands onto the ground 15 spikes are formed and sent 6 feet into the air, with wind chakra infused in it. All spikes start spinning like drills as they are fired at the opponent. These spikes travel 20mph and if knocked off course they travel as far as 4 feet.
Earth Man Browler:
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Name: Earth Man Browler Rank:C Range: 0 - 50 meters Element:Doton Type: Ninjutsu Description: Hand Signs Needed. This jutsu allows the user to make giant stone-like limbs(Arms and Legs) pop out of the ground, by using there own limbs as the controls. These limbs cant be used to do hand signs, but can only be used as attacks. They can go up to ten feet in the air, but must always stay in the ground for control to remain. These limbs travel as fast as the user. The arms are about 40 meters higher and 20 meters wide, while the legs are 55 meters long and 23 meters wide. This technique can appear from any part of the ground within a 50 meter perimeter. If this technique is technique destroyed stone parts are left behind, and it will take 4 posts before the user can reuse this technique.
Secrets of Aeneas:
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Name: Secrets of Aeneas Rank: D Range: 0 - 50 meters Element: Fuuton/ Doton Description: This technique was discovered by Aeneas Soriano as a little kid. While growing up Aeneas, due to the reputation of his clan always had a great understanding of chakra and spiritual elements. He also believed that the human race's natural habit of judging things by what they see is what keeps them from unlocking true potential. With that he assumed that he can better master his elements if he was blind that way he could learn to accept things as they come rather than judging everything. So Aeneas developed this technique that works by sending very thin, and nearly invisible chakra signals out in a 50 meter raidus. This technique does not require hand signs and is both air signals and ground and is best described as a sensor technique. Since Aeneas barely uses his eyes unless in battle he had learned that by sending these signals out they pick up tiny chakra signals from other living things, and that they die off when it hits a non living object.But regardless of living or nonliving the thin charka ways always sends pictures back to the brain. With further practice of this technique Aeneas has been able to see grey outlines of everything in his surroundings within a 70 meter in perimeter, with his eyes completely closed. This technique can only work if one keeps his/her eyes closed, but the advantages of this technique besides being able to see with your eyes closed is that it can be used as a sensor technique to find people.
Aeneas Chakra Infusion Technique:
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Name: Aeneas Chakra Infusion Technique Rank:B Range: --- Element:Fuuton/ Doton/ Katon Type: Ninjutsu Description:Hand Signs Needed. Aeneas loves to use chakra to enhance a few of his preformances. This jutsu is a simple statement of what happens if he infuses certain chakras with himself, or weapons. Each element can remain on the user for the maximum of 6 posts and has a cool down of 3. The hand signs only needs to be done once, after that the user can infuse as often as they like so long as they abide by the rules that each object including thereself can only be infused with one type of chakra at a time. but the user can be infused with different chakra type than the object.
Aeneas Fuuton Infusion: If Aeneas combines his element of fuuton in a thin coat around his body, it forces him to move 2x as fast as his current speed. If he combines Fuuton element with a weapon, all kenetic movements with the weapon doubles in speed as well. This also implies that when one uses this technique to infuse his/herself with fuuton chakra, the chakra allows the user to be immune to raiton moves of the same rank as the user and lower, but the user will accumulate more damage if hit with katon moves. If a weapon is infused with fuuton chakra, its durability will be greatly effected by katon damage and immune to raiton damage even if it is an earth based weapon. This rule on weapons only applies if the weapon isnt deemed unbreakable. This form also increases fuuton jutsu effects times 2
Aeneas Doton Infusion: If Aeneas combines the element of Doton in a thin coat around his body, it causes him to become 2x heavier and stronger then his original weight and strength. If Aeneas combines the Doton element with his weapon, the blow of the weapon becomes 2x heavier and the impact 3x stronger. The weapon also becomes as heavy as Aeneas with Doton Coat. This implies that if the user is infused with Doton chakra, they become immune to suiton(water) damage of the same level or lower, and accumulates more damage when it comes to raiton attacks. Same rule applies for weapons unless deemed unbreakable. This form also increases Doton jutsu effects times 2
Aeneas Katon Infusion: When Aeneas combines his body with the element of Katon in a thin coat around his body, It allows his body to reach high temperature, causeing minor burns to those who touch him, if he combines a weapon with the element of katon the weapon is set on fire. This implies that the user becomes immune to fuuton attacks and accumulates more damage against suiton attacks. Same rule applies for weapons infused with this technique unless deemed unbreakable. This form also increases katon jutsu effects times 2
Siniestro Viento:
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Name: Siniestro Viento Rank: C Range: 0 - 10 feet Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Description: Aeneas Soriano was born with a few special talents, and among those special talents are his uncanny understanding and manipulation of spirituality and the elements. With his knowledge of the wind element, he created this technique, known to those who’ve seen it as “Sinister Winds”. In order to use this move he blows out chakra from his mouth around an object(up to 7 ft tall) in a thin layer. Once the chakra is molded and compressed into the shape of the object(up to 7 ft tall) and is let go by Aeneas . When letting go of the object it begins unattached to Aeneas’s chakra therefore it begins to spin rapidly in the air and attacking any target in which Aeneas pleases. This technique makes the objects travel at high speed(30 mph) towards the enemy, and when Aeneas’s wind chakra is exposed to air it becomes extremely hot, enough burn wood. The objects range can only go up to 10 feet
Stone Soldier:
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Name: Stone Soldier Rank:B Range: -- Element:Doton Type: Ninjutsu Description: Hand Signs Needed. This technique allows the user create 3 stone soldiers from the earth below. These soldiers are swift and very heavy hitters. These soldiers dont have a mind of their own so they do whatever the user asks. These Soldiers can also be used to store bodies and chakra( like dead bodies or free flowing chakra, assuming that ever happens). If these soldiers are destroyed then one must wait six posts before they can be revived. In order to destroy these clones one must use taijutsu attacks of the same rank or else, use lightening style jutsu. Lightening attacks can destroy the soldier in two posts. If this technique is destroyed by a lighting jutsu, it can not be revived.
Earth Binding:
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Name: Earth Binding Rank:B Range: --- Element:Doton Type: Ninjutsu/ Bloodline Description: Hand signs needed. The user slams on of his or her palms onto the ground and suddenly root-like ropes come from the ground and penetrates the opponents skin. The opponent is then held for 6 posts, the only way to break out of this technique is through physical force, preferably a non-external chakra using taejutsu technique( So taejutsu techniques that require for one to be on fire, or be covered with an elemental chakra wont work). Reason being is that chakra strengthens these ropes,if the opponent uses a taejutsu move that doesn't require external chakra it must be at least C rank for these roots to break. Other force that doesn't require chakra can also be used( such as explosive tags or A ranks brute strength)
Cuchillas de pelo no jutsu:
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Name: Cuchillas de pelo no jutsu ( Blades of Hair Jutsu) Rank:B Range: Close Element:Doton Type:Ninjutsu Description: Uses the element of earth to harden and extend his hair to great lengths which he can use as blades. Can only make up to 5 hair blades that are as hard as metal. These hair blades are shaped like katana blades and can be detached from the users head. during this technique the user will have long hair up to 4 ft long.
Fire torpedo Jutsu:
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Name: Fire torpedo Jutsu Rank: B Range: 0- 20 meters Element: Katon Type: Ninjutsu Description: Send chakra into his mouth and molds it into a chakra ball which is spit out, and once it touches the air it bursts into flames and travels at high speed(40 mph). This one attack can also burst into ten smaller torpedoes, hitting the opponent with great burning force. Torpedoes travel 20 meters.
Viento Granadas:
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Name: Viento Granadas Rank: S Range: 0 -20 meters Element: Fuuton/Katon Type: Ninjutsu Description: This is by far Aeneas’s most deadly move. By using the element of wind he begins to absorb large amounts of winds into his finger tips, and makes them form a ball, in which he shoots out at high velocity and allowed to explode on command. These miniature balls can be shot out one by one up to 20 meters, and when it explodes the explosion ranges about ten meters, resembling an atomic bomb, which as an aftermath leaves extremely hot air in the area filled with his spiritual energy that burn wood. What also makes this move powerful is that if techniques using the wind element is used at the time that this technique is in play it will expel the chakra from the wind technique and become locked onto the user of a different wind technique.
Cielo Batallon
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Name: Cielo Batallón(Sky Battalion) Rank: B Range: Close Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu/ Taijutsu Description: This is a technique created by Aeneas in the honor of his former village. This technique causes the user’s body to serve as a wind conductor for one whole post. This causes everything in a 5 meter radius to be blown back, and when this move is complete, the immense winds begin to manifest itself around the user’s body in the form of a white chakra coat which will cover the user from head to toe. This coating gives the user a Ninjutsu and Taijutsu advantage by increasing the force of impact and speed of the user by 4x his/her normal capabilities. This gives the user a Ninjutsu advantage by absorbing 5% damage done by Ninjutsu and also allows the user to compress chakra from the coating into a palm sized ball that can be shot out up to 5 meters, to hit an opponent with great force,blowing them back and causing damage. This coating lasts 8 posts and requires one post charge up.This technique requires a 3 post cool down after every use.The user must possess the attribute of wind.
Paranormal Inception:
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Name: Paranormal Inception Rank: A Range: 0 - 5 meters Element: - Type: Bloodline Description:This technique was created by Blood Moon Dynasty's prince, Aeneas Soriano. This technique can only be used if the opponent(s) have cuts, in which a sword stalker has contaminated with his/her chakra. This technique focuses in the use of neural cells, the cells that send messages to the brain. The user will use hand signs when the opponent(s) get within a 5 meter range, when hand signs are completed everything within the range will be go into a temporary comma. Aeneas had learned that certain messages can be used on the enemies brain and some cant. Messages such as kill yourself would not work on the enemies brain, due to its natural instinct to protect itself. Messages such as sleep will work on any ones brain, the message sent to the brain with the use of this technique, is sleep. The opponent will be put into a deep sleep for up to 4 posts. During those posts the opponent is immune to all damage done, whether it be physical or spiritual, and their body becomes impenetrable. If the opponent(s) are harmed in this state all damage goes to the user of this technique and the opponent(s) will be unharmed and unmarked. So it becomes the top priority of the user of this technique to keep the opponent(s) safe from harm. After the 4th post the opponent(s) will be awake, but all damage (except self inflected damage) done to the opponent(s) is now shared with the user for one more post. After the fifth post the user and the opponent will share no damage. This technique was created by Aeneas Soriano mainly, to bring them to different locations, preventing enemies from destroying his village. This technique can be canceled anytime within the 4 posts, and can only be used twice per post.
Paranormal Complex
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Name: Paranormal Complex Rank: S Range: 0-10 meters Element: -- Type: Ninjutsu Description: This move is the third of Aeneas's secrets. This move does not require hand signs and is created for means of a quick escape. Aeneas has created a technique based on the rumor of demons possessing humans and giving them incredible spiritual power or as we know it ,chakra. From rumor it was said that certain demons roam the world, inside of young shinobi, giving them amazing power, that can rip the body and force the user to turn into a spiritual demon without a physical form. Aeneas jutsu derives from that idea, the jutsu basically causes the users chakra to act up and for a moment transform the user's body into pure chakra that can phase through anything. In this form Aeneas can not attack anyone and he must sacrifice both chakra and health. To use this move effectively he must sacrifice 25% of his chakra and 25% of his health. This technique can also be used by anyone by making contact with Aeneas in this form, and accepting the risks of this technique. When using this technique Aeneas can only get as far as 10 meters. This technique only lasts one post and can only be use three times in a battle.
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Subject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration) Tue Dec 28, 2010 2:52 am
Before any of these can be approved, use the correct technique template.
Okay, let's see. There's a lot here so I'll see how far I can get.
Fury of Wind
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Even if you'd take 10% damage(I'm assuming this means 10% of your overall endurance? Or of the jutsu blocked?) to block all lightning jutsu A rank and below without handseals seems a tad too much. That means only S-rank lightning jutsu will be able to hit you. I'd say add handseals and at the very least lower the jutsus blocked to B. Completely blocking is very powerful.
Will of the sky
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I'd say A-rank with all these effects. It would also consume a lot of chakra.
Earth Man Seether
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How large is the head? How fast can the tounge travel? Can the head move from it's location, and if so, how fast can it move? How large are the stone spikes? How many can it shoot? How fast do they travel? So far, this doesn't look like a D-rank.
Earth Man Grondin
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First of all, a C-rank that can combletely block all B-rank jutsus is just no. I'd probably say no to all C-rank jutsu, but that depends on the other things about it. Can it move? How large is it? How fast is it? Can you do anything to the opponent if you hold them?
Earth Man Mercules
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I'm going to need more info on this one. What can the skeletons do exactly? Do you control them or are they just running around randomly?
Earth Man Arena
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Does it have a roof?
Earth Man Mekatsu
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S-rank, though it can vary depending on the other abilities.
Foto de Viento Ardiente
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Needs two posts of handseals as other S-rank. I'm not sure about the magnetism either, I think it has to be an advanced element, but I'm going to check this up.
Sinister Seal
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The only thing I don't think is approvable about this is that you can shoot out 10 jutsus at the same time(I don't care that it's hard to pull off, just 3 jutsus at the same time is a lot). Either remove that part, or reduce the amount of seals avaible drastically.
Flame Serpent Mesuka
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Approvable, I guess
Wind Surf
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5 times seems a bit much, even for just running speed. I think 3 times'll be just plenty.
Liquid Flow
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You're not going to nullify any fire jutsu with this. You can reduce their damage by 50% for C and D.
Llama
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B-rank
Spike Launcher
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C-rank
Earth Man Browler
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How large are they? Can they move from their spot? What limbs are we talking about?
Secrets of Aeneas
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2 miles? For D-rank? Really?
Chakra Infusion
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Approvable
Siniestro Viento
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How fast does it spin and move? What is the object size limit? It won't be able to melt armor. Reduce the range, a mile is too much.
Stone Soldier
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They will be able to be destroyed by other things than B-rank taijutsu. This would make the clones stronger than the user himself, which removes the whole concept for clones. Also they need a duration. How do you revive them? What exactly does it mean to store chakra or bodies in them?
Earth Binding
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At B-rank you'll be able to hold an enemy for a maximum of 2 posts. Something other than taijutsu that makes an impact will also be able to destroy the ropes, but C-rank req is fine.
Cuchillas de pelo no jutsu
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I'm going to need more description. How long? Are they still attached to your head, or does it just make weapons of your hair? What kind of weapons?
Fire torpedo
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How fast? What do you mean by a mile radius?
Viento Granadas
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No. To large of an explosion, even if it had been S-rank. Also, what do you mean by no negative effects? Is it some kind of clan ability? Cause it sounds kind of bull.
Subject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration) Wed Dec 29, 2010 7:41 am
I finished editing everything in.
Also, when doing work as an official Ibumoto try not to get personal with your comments. I want to read what i need to work on to get my techs approved. Not how you feel about it. If you are filled with emotion and cant control it go take a cold shower or something.
I'll look into it later, as I don't have time for it now.
And I haven't been personal or emotional at all when looking through this. You'll have to understand that just because I think something isn't OP doesn't mean others think so, as well as the other way around. I've given my input and I've tried to look at it from as many perspectives as possible.
Please don't blurt out things like that. When I am working, I don't care who I'm working on. I would've judged the same way on these jutsus whoever put them on.
well thanks for checking and by personalize i didnt mean like you saying things becuase it was me, i meant itis more along the lines of journalism. im not saying your a journalist, im just saying that i still feel "you" in what your saying, which can get annoying. I f you dont get what im saying then forget it.
All approved. Pricing will be done by someone else.
Note for the next admin/mod:
Apparently Ibumoto had already checked this Jutsu list except for the last two. I checked the last two but if you find any flaws in those techniques, just correct them.
Sorry, since you want me to price, Im retracting the approval on this. There are a lot of factors that need to be added into a ton of these jutsu. Plenty of them are still OP the way they are. Ive only read three and am not satisfied with the way they are.
Im starting with the first three before we move one...
Fury of Wind - If it lasts for 5 posts, it needs a major cooldown on the effects. 4 wont cut it. mre like 8. Damage to the user wont cut it either. WHAT kind of damage are you taking?...with that description, u could say you hurt your foot. More please..
Will of Sky - When Noro says it should consume a lot of chakra, 20% is NOT alot for a jutsu like that. More like 35%. Once per topic use is the limit unless you want the price tag to soar heavily into 5 figure sums...
Earth Man Seether - No. If you create it, its going to be visible and it will remain stationary. That is not a C rank jutsu either. Its more B with what you have. The range isnt how much room the jutsu takes, its how far the attacks can go. That needs changing. However, it will only last a certain post amount. Not stay with you until its destroyed. So Post limit and cooldown are needed.
I see way too much play with just these three jutsu so far. They will need to be edited accordingly again before I will price them. After I price these three, its on to the next three..
Subject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration) Wed Jan 12, 2011 1:57 am
Fury of Wind: Fine 8, and damage to the user, when a jutsu says that it just means stress placed on the users body for using such a weapon. Its not targeted to a specific body part, like most jutsus that require sacrifice.
Will of The Sky: Sure 35% once per turn.
Earth Man Seether: You haven't proven to me that it is a B rank tech rather than C rank, provide me with more details as to how you determine ranks. Also I want this technique, its made of rock so for it to be stationary is too integrated. Also ill but a post count of 5 posts and a cool down of 3
Subject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration) Wed Jan 12, 2011 2:35 am
Earth Man Seether - I just said, the way you describe it, to be able to move it, and do multiple things with it and with the jacked up range, it is B Rank. It has three different abilities, a massive size and even the attacks it demonstrates are massive. Mind Control is also involved. You don't state when you move it what happens either. Does it quake upon surfacing? And there is no description on how far the thing can travel while underground. Bc if it doesn't make a sound while moving, it could even be bumped to A, even S rank.
The range in the range section, needs to be changed to how long the furthest attack can go, not how much space the jutsu takes up.
Also, I don't use the metric system. I use the standard system. Convert your meters to ft and yards.
Subject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration) Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:51 pm
Come one come all to the show as I, Takeshi Kinzoku, take the center ring to fight off this white lion with a series of seemingly unfair comments and dubbing down of these masterful techniques assembled here today. Come see as I use my grace and play on words to do magical feats that dazzle the mind and rattle the brain as I pit myself against an opponent like none other in a battle of words and playful banter. Who shall emerge victorious you ask? No one knows but all in due time comrades, all in due time.
Translation: Dom has grown tired of you so I shall be taking over the approval and pricing of these techniques, and btw Im a much bigger hard ass than my good ol' friend is. Have fun Aeneas :D
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Subject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration) Sun Feb 27, 2011 8:48 pm
Spoiler:
Name: Divine Voice Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: E Element: --- Type: Ninjutsu Range: 0- 100 meters Description: This technique requires no hand signs, nor a post of load up. This technique is simply a passive technique which can be activated by the user simply projecting his/her voice. This technique allows the user to be heard up to 100 meters away, as if they were close by speaking in one’s ears, regardless of how much noise is going on. This technique can be used at will and does not have any negative effects on one’s voice.
Name: Reverse Seal Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: S Element: --- Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close Description: This is a passive technique, which does not require hand seals and cannot be used at will, but can be cancelled at will. When the user of this seal, is placed under a certain seal, which locks away the abilities, chakra, memories, or soul of the user, this seal reverses the restraints placed on the user, to the opponent who casted it. This technique will take effect every time, for as long as the opponent is conscious.
Name: Winding Attraction Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D Element: Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close Description: This technique requires on post of loading. This technique forms up to 5 meters of wind around The user’s hand which the user can use to push back opponents two feet away or carry objects. The user can control this wind as they please as long as it does not leave its range. The user can also use the wind to carry weapons and make the weapon move about their hand.
Name: Undefined Heat Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: E Element: Katon / Fuuton Type: Ninjutsu Range: Close Description: This technique is a passive , and only works to those who have the attributes of Fuuton and Katon. This technique is a body mechanism, which uses the users chakra to keep the user’s body temperature at normal, unless the body temperature of the user is altered by their own jutsu(s). The body of the user will use chakra of katon or futon to keep the body temperature normal by cooling or heating up the body.
E rank techs
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