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 Aeneas (Technique Registration)

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Kouri Ten'nou

Isais
Isais
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Ryo : 109976

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Aeneas (Technique Registration) Left_bar_bleue810/810Aeneas (Technique Registration) Empty_bar_bleue  (810/810)

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PostSubject: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptySat Dec 25, 2010 3:00 am

Fury of Wind: Done
Spoiler:

Will of The Sky: done
Spoiler:

Earth Man Seether: Done
Spoiler:

Earth Man Grondin: Done

Spoiler:

Earth Man Mercules: Done
Spoiler:

Earth Man Arena: Done
Spoiler:

Earth Man Mekatsu
Spoiler:

Foto de Viento Ardiente: done
Spoiler:

Sinister Seal
Spoiler:

Flame Serpent Mesuka: Done
Spoiler:

Wind Surf: Done
Spoiler:

Liquid Flow: Done and ready to check
Spoiler:

Llama Estampida Semental: Done and ready to check
Spoiler:

Spike Launcher Jutsu
Spoiler:

Earth Man Browler:
Spoiler:

Secrets of Aeneas:
Spoiler:

Aeneas Chakra Infusion Technique:
Spoiler:


Siniestro Viento:
Spoiler:


Stone Soldier:
Spoiler:

Earth Binding:
Spoiler:

Cuchillas de pelo no jutsu:
Spoiler:

Fire torpedo Jutsu:
Spoiler:

Viento Granadas:
Spoiler:

Cielo Batallon
Spoiler:

Paranormal Inception:

Spoiler:

Paranormal Complex
Spoiler:


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Kouri Ten'nou

Isais
Isais
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Aeneas (Technique Registration) Left_bar_bleue810/810Aeneas (Technique Registration) Empty_bar_bleue  (810/810)

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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptyMon Dec 27, 2010 11:57 pm

techs need approving
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Genin

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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptyTue Dec 28, 2010 2:52 am

Before any of these can be approved, use the correct technique template.


Okay, let's see. There's a lot here so I'll see how far I can get.

Fury of Wind
Spoiler:

Will of the sky
Spoiler:

Earth Man Seether
Spoiler:

Earth Man Grondin
Spoiler:

Earth Man Mercules
Spoiler:

Earth Man Arena
Spoiler:

Earth Man Mekatsu
Spoiler:

Foto de Viento Ardiente
Spoiler:

Sinister Seal
Spoiler:

Flame Serpent Mesuka
Spoiler:

Wind Surf
Spoiler:

Liquid Flow
Spoiler:

Llama
Spoiler:

Spike Launcher
Spoiler:

Earth Man Browler
Spoiler:

Secrets of Aeneas
Spoiler:

Chakra Infusion
Spoiler:

Siniestro Viento
Spoiler:

Stone Soldier
Spoiler:

Earth Binding
Spoiler:

Cuchillas de pelo no jutsu
Spoiler:

Fire torpedo
Spoiler:

Viento Granadas
Spoiler:
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Kouri Ten'nou

Isais
Isais
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Aeneas (Technique Registration) Left_bar_bleue810/810Aeneas (Technique Registration) Empty_bar_bleue  (810/810)

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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptyWed Dec 29, 2010 7:41 am

I finished editing everything in.

Also, when doing work as an official Ibumoto try not to get personal with your comments. I want to read what i need to work on to get my techs approved. Not how you feel about it. If you are filled with emotion and cant control it go take a cold shower or something.
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Yuhara Rin
Yuhara Rin
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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptyWed Dec 29, 2010 6:56 pm

I'll look into it later, as I don't have time for it now.

And I haven't been personal or emotional at all when looking through this. You'll have to understand that just because I think something isn't OP doesn't mean others think so, as well as the other way around. I've given my input and I've tried to look at it from as many perspectives as possible.

Please don't blurt out things like that. When I am working, I don't care who I'm working on. I would've judged the same way on these jutsus whoever put them on.
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Kouri Ten'nou

Isais
Isais
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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptyWed Dec 29, 2010 8:24 pm

well thanks for checking and by personalize i didnt mean like you saying things becuase it was me, i meant itis more along the lines of journalism. im not saying your a journalist, im just saying that i still feel "you" in what your saying, which can get annoying. I f you dont get what im saying then forget it.
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Yuhara Rin
Yuhara Rin
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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptySat Jan 01, 2011 11:31 pm

I'm swamped with RL work at the moment, so I won't be able to work on this. If some other staff could take over that'd be great.

Sorry, but life calls. <.<
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Kouri Ten'nou

Isais
Isais
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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptySat Jan 01, 2011 11:54 pm

I get you man, good luck with life
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Seinin

Virtue
Virtue
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Ryo : 68700

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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptyWed Jan 05, 2011 7:17 pm

All approved. Pricing will be done by someone else.

Note for the next admin/mod:

Apparently Ibumoto had already checked this Jutsu list except for the last two. I checked the last two but if you find any flaws in those techniques, just correct them.
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Genin

Dominic
Dominic
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Ryo : 12100

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Aeneas (Technique Registration) Left_bar_bleue330/330Aeneas (Technique Registration) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptyTue Jan 11, 2011 6:35 pm

Sorry, since you want me to price, Im retracting the approval on this. There are a lot of factors that need to be added into a ton of these jutsu. Plenty of them are still OP the way they are. Ive only read three and am not satisfied with the way they are.

Im starting with the first three before we move one...

Fury of Wind - If it lasts for 5 posts, it needs a major cooldown on the effects. 4 wont cut it. mre like 8. Damage to the user wont cut it either. WHAT kind of damage are you taking?...with that description, u could say you hurt your foot. More please..

Will of Sky - When Noro says it should consume a lot of chakra, 20% is NOT alot for a jutsu like that. More like 35%. Once per topic use is the limit unless you want the price tag to soar heavily into 5 figure sums...

Earth Man Seether - No. If you create it, its going to be visible and it will remain stationary. That is not a C rank jutsu either. Its more B with what you have. The range isnt how much room the jutsu takes, its how far the attacks can go. That needs changing. However, it will only last a certain post amount. Not stay with you until its destroyed. So Post limit and cooldown are needed.

I see way too much play with just these three jutsu so far. They will need to be edited accordingly again before I will price them. After I price these three, its on to the next three..
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Kouri Ten'nou

Isais
Isais
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Ryo : 109976

Character sheet
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Aeneas (Technique Registration) Left_bar_bleue810/810Aeneas (Technique Registration) Empty_bar_bleue  (810/810)

Aeneas (Technique Registration) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptyWed Jan 12, 2011 1:57 am

Fury of Wind: Fine 8, and damage to the user, when a jutsu says that it just means stress placed on the users body for using such a weapon. Its not targeted to a specific body part, like most jutsus that require sacrifice.

Will of The Sky: Sure 35% once per turn.


Earth Man Seether: You haven't proven to me that it is a B rank tech rather than C rank, provide me with more details as to how you determine ranks. Also I want this technique, its made of rock so for it to be stationary is too integrated. Also ill but a post count of 5 posts and a cool down of 3
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Dominic
Dominic
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Ryo : 12100

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Aeneas (Technique Registration) Left_bar_bleue330/330Aeneas (Technique Registration) Empty_bar_bleue  (330/330)

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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptyWed Jan 12, 2011 2:35 am

Earth Man Seether - I just said, the way you describe it, to be able to move it, and do multiple things with it and with the jacked up range, it is B Rank. It has three different abilities, a massive size and even the attacks it demonstrates are massive. Mind Control is also involved. You don't state when you move it what happens either. Does it quake upon surfacing? And there is no description on how far the thing can travel while underground. Bc if it doesn't make a sound while moving, it could even be bumped to A, even S rank.

The range in the range section, needs to be changed to how long the furthest attack can go, not how much space the jutsu takes up.

Also, I don't use the metric system. I use the standard system. Convert your meters to ft and yards.
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Kouri Ten'nou

Isais
Isais
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Aeneas (Technique Registration) Left_bar_bleue810/810Aeneas (Technique Registration) Empty_bar_bleue  (810/810)

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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 5:20 am

Done with those three
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Dominic
Dominic
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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 6:50 pm

Earth Man Seether - When you move it while underground what happens? Does it quake the area upon surfacing?

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Kouri Ten'nou

Isais
Isais
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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 7:36 pm

it shakes the ground which it will appear on before it comes up, it basically breaks through the ground to appear.
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Takeshi
Takeshi
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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptySun Jan 16, 2011 8:51 pm

Come one come all to the show as I, Takeshi Kinzoku, take the center ring to fight off this white lion with a series of seemingly unfair comments and dubbing down of these masterful techniques assembled here today. Come see as I use my grace and play on words to do magical feats that dazzle the mind and rattle the brain as I pit myself against an opponent like none other in a battle of words and playful banter. Who shall emerge victorious you ask? No one knows but all in due time comrades, all in due time.


Translation: Dom has grown tired of you so I shall be taking over the approval and pricing of these techniques, and btw Im a much bigger hard ass than my good ol' friend is. Have fun Aeneas :D


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Isais
Isais
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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptyMon Jan 17, 2011 6:25 pm

??? Dom has grown tired of me, well alright i could careless who checks them. Go for it takeshi
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Seinin

Shojiro
Shojiro
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Ryo : 75000

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Aeneas (Technique Registration) Left_bar_bleue100/100Aeneas (Technique Registration) Empty_bar_bleue  (100/100)

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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptyWed Jan 26, 2011 1:06 am

I'll start pricing a few.

Sinister Seal and Mesuka

I'll give you a package deal on these two, as you told me they were meant for eachother.

11K (11,000 Ryo) for both.

EMB (Earth Man Bowler)

5,500 Ryo

Secrets of Aeneas

2,500 Ryo :::: It is a simple tracking jutsu...

Sky Battleon

As long as this has no effect on handseal speed or anything...

7,500 Ryo
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Isais
Isais
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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptyWed Jan 26, 2011 1:12 am

OK I Understand
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Isais
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Aeneas (Technique Registration) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptySun Feb 06, 2011 4:05 pm

I wish to purchase sky battalion or cielo battalion
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Tenzou
Tenzou
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Aeneas (Technique Registration) Left_bar_bleue360/360Aeneas (Technique Registration) Empty_bar_bleue  (360/360)

Aeneas (Technique Registration) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptySun Feb 06, 2011 7:25 pm

Ryo deducted for Cielo Battelion (7500 ryo)
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Kouri Ten'nou

Isais
Isais
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Aeneas (Technique Registration) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptySat Feb 19, 2011 9:52 pm

I wish to purchase both Sinister Seal and Mesuka for 11000 ryo
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Seinin

Virtue
Virtue
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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptySat Feb 19, 2011 9:54 pm

Ryo deducted.
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Isais
Isais
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Aeneas (Technique Registration) Empty
PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptySun Feb 27, 2011 8:48 pm

Spoiler:

E rank techs


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Kashaku Kagone
Kashaku Kagone
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PostSubject: Re: Aeneas (Technique Registration)   Aeneas (Technique Registration) EmptySun Feb 27, 2011 8:59 pm

Lawl Ventriloquist: 1000 ryo.

Lawl What?: I have no idea what Reverse Seal is saying... Are you sealing away your powers, and reverse seal unseals those powers?

Lawl Breaking Wind: This is at least C-rank, if it can move people around that much when they're within five meters of the user...

Lawl It's Getting Hot in Here, So Take Off All Yo Clothes: 1000 ryo.
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