The islands in Ocean Country have been celebrating the arrival of the next Umikage, Saizo. The long bridge leading to SHIPPUUGAKURE NO SATO has been closed for outsiders because they wish to celebrate this moment with Ocean Country natives only.
As usual, the Storm Country has been hosting the Asgard Games to welcome their Kanetsukage, Cornelia. It's a double special occasion because Cornelia is also the first female Kanetsukage. She has been picked for her courage, loyalty and outstanding power by the BOUFUUGAKURE NO SATO elders.
Not only that, but the Cherry Blossom Country has become relieved as well. It seems that everyone is slowly picking up after the war now. KUSAMURAGAKURE NO SATO proudly presented their new Sakurakage, Altair.
TSUKIGAKURE NO SATO is still thriving on the merchants coming in and out. They have not experienced anything special lately. Their wealth has remained the same as they were not forced to invest into shinobi unlike the others.
On the cold isles of the Blizzard Country, HYOUGAGAKURE NO SATO has still refused to create a free traveling policy. Some habits never change. To protect their traditions, they have even warned outsiders to not interfere with their matters.
Now that everyone is picking up again, who will come out on top?
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Subject: Uchiha, Kazu (Jutsu Registration) Mon Jan 31, 2011 11:38 am
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu (Body Flicker Technique) Rank: D Element: None Type: Off. Def. Range: All Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily vitalise the body and move at extreme speeds. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance and elevation between the user and the intended destination
Name: Manipulated Shuriken Technique Rank: D Element: None Type: Supplementary Range: All Range Description: With this technique a translucent string, both elastic and highly durable, is attached to a shuriken, making it possible to alter its path after having thrown it. An expert will have the ability to freely glide the shuriken in any direction with just a single movement of their fingertip. The first attack, challenging the enemy, is avoided and after a timelag of several seconds, it will come from behind. Depending on the performance, the possible tactics can be infinite.
Name: Shishi Rendan (Lion Combo) Rank: C Element: None Type: Offensive Range: Close Description: He gets to the point where to get behind an airborne opponent. He then delivers a series of blows that differ between use. All variations end with the opponent being thrown to the ground and kicked in the chest
Name: Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu (Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique) Rank: C Element: Fire Type: Offensive Range: Mid Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and expelled from the mouth in a massive orb of roaring flame. The scope of the attack is altered by controlling the volume of chakra that is mustered. The released flames will engulf their target, and leave a crater on the ground's surface. The fireball is normally blown through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user.
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Subject: Re: Uchiha, Kazu (Jutsu Registration) Thu Feb 03, 2011 3:36 am
E-rank are free.
Firstly, however, the "type" refers to ninjutsu, taijutsu, genjutsu, etc. Not supplementary/offensive/defensive.
Shunshin is C-ranked, and can be used five times with a five-post cooldown each time. If it is used a sixth time, the user becomes immobilized. 4500 ryo after that is added.
Manipulated Shuriken is 2500 ryo.
Shishi Rendan is 4000 ryo.
What is the maximum size of the fireball? What is the maximum distance it can travel? Maximum amount of damage?
the Maximum size is massive orb, thats enough to the distantce is 0-5m, it takes a large amount of damage in close range
Name: Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique ) Rank: C Element: Fire Type: Offensive Range: Mid Range Description: This technique creates a volley of small fireballs, which are spat out of the user's mouth, flying wildly in every direction and assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult. Shuriken can be hidden within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the shuriken can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is used as a distraction.
I'm gonna need numbers on how large the fireball can get, I take it 5 meters is the maximum distance, and what is the exact damage done if it hits directly?
What is the maximum numerical size of the small fireballs made by Phoenix Sage Fire Technique? How many fireballs can be made, exactly? How long can they be controlled, and can they be evaded (I'm assuming they can't just stop in mid-air and turn around when you control them). How quickly can the fireballs move?
Fireball: About 3 foot in diameter for the regular fireball, but it really depends of how much the user chakra puts into it, the more it has, the bigger the size. If hit by it it will incinerate the human body or limb, and anything in its path
Phoenix Flower: the equal size of each fireball is a 1 foot in diameter each, and if it by it will cause a severe burn, and a volley of Fireballs could be made the more chakra the more there would be (usually 3-6), they could be evaded if not blast with a large amount which would be diffcult, and their is no control to the fire
Fireball: Let's say you put 20 chakra into it, since it's a C-rank technique and doesn't cost more or less than 20 chakra. And being able to roast anything and everything in its path increases its rank. There has to be some extent to the amount of power it produces, and I've actually got a bit of a mental list of what each rank should be able to do... Complete annihilation on a direct hit is not within the C-rank range.
Phoenix Flower: If each hit causes severe burns, it would be offensive, not a distraction. And what exactly do you mean by "severe"? And let's say it makes 6 fireballs, since 20 chakra is all you can use for a C-rank tech. Also "...In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult..." means they can be controlled. How long can they be controlled, and how maneuverable are they?
Kash, allow me to help... Kazu, if you want the type of damage your looking for, this jutsu should be considered C - S rank. As you want to increase the power, the jutsu will require an extra post of charge. You may reference my Final Dragon Strike as a way to guide your next edit, but basically you'll need to describe each rank as the jutsu builds in power and destructive force. The price of the jutsu will not be as cheap as you like, but the result will be what your looking for based on your description.
Subject: Re: Uchiha, Kazu (Jutsu Registration) Sat Mar 05, 2011 11:24 pm
(Here goes nothing)
Name: Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu (Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique) Rank: C-S rank Element: Fire Type: Offensive Range: 0-5 Meters (Depending on the power) Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and expelled from the mouth in a massive orb of roaring flame. The scope of the attack is altered by controlling the volume of chakra that is mustered. The released flames will engulf their target, and leave a crater on the ground's surface. The fireball is normally blown through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user. The travel of the fireball is correct but depending on how much the user will use chakra the futher it go, the fireball normal size is usually 3 foot in diameter for a regular person, as for a Uchiha is very different and much bigger to 6-9 feet in diameter. With in the exact amount of chakra for it, it could very burn anything that it touches but with more chakra it could incinerate anything it touch to ash, possibly kill a single person or severely burn a human being.
Name: Katon: Hōsenka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Fire Technique ) Rank: C-B Rank Element: Fire Type: Offensive Range: 0-6 Meters Description: This technique creates a volley of small fireballs such as 3 to 6, which are spat out of the user's mouth, flying wildly in every direction and assaulting the enemy. In addition, the flames are controlled one by one with chakra, so avoiding them all is extremely difficult if the person was bombarded by the technique. Weapons can be hidden within the flames, creating an unexpected secondary surprise attack. Like the flames, the weapons can be controlled with chakra. For the most part, however, this technique is often used as a distraction to escape or to flank a strong opponent. The size of each fireball is at least 1 Foot in diameter, the user may not put too much chakra into it seeing how it is used to distract or escape but the more the chakra the user puts into it the more fireballs will be made. If it directly by one, it could severely burn the skin and clothes of a person or kill if it directly by it in close range.
Subject: Re: Uchiha, Kazu (Jutsu Registration) Sun Mar 06, 2011 11:34 pm
Great Fireball Technique: I'll need exact gradients in terms of size and strength. C-rank does such and such damage and is such and such size, B-rank does such and such damage and is such and such size, etc.
Same with Phoenix Sage Fire Technique. How close is the killing range for Phoenix Sage Fire? An instant kill from getting hit by one out of six fireballs sounds a little too powerful, especially for a fireball only one foot in diameter.
Subject: Re: Uchiha, Kazu (Jutsu Registration) Mon Mar 07, 2011 12:27 am
Great Fireball: C-Rank: The technique is the regular in size 1 foot in diameter of a sphere, it burns anything it touches, setting clothes, bodies or anything flammable on fire B-Rank: The Technique is not really a sphere of fire, its more of a breathing a very hot roaring flame wave, that can burn like any other fire technique A-Rank: The Flaming Sphere grows up to 3 foot in Diameter, the level of this technique could incinerate anything in its path turning anything to ash, and can engulf a human being or severly burn a oppenent greatly S-Rank: The Flaming sphere grows up to 4 foot in diameter, it not more of a flame, but as a concentrated napalm bomb which will explode in 30 yard radius
Subject: Re: Uchiha, Kazu (Jutsu Registration) Mon Mar 07, 2011 3:19 am
Great Fireball: Now you've added an explosion... What kind of explosion is it (fire, pressure-wave, etc.), does the amount of damage done by the explosion stay consistent within 30 yards, and what kind of damage does a direct hit do?
Phoenix Sage Fire: Does the above gradient go for Phoenix Sage Fire as well?
Subject: Re: Uchiha, Kazu (Jutsu Registration) Mon Mar 07, 2011 4:29 am
Great Fireball: (in order) It just a heated pressure wave, not consistent, well if hit by it directly it could blast a limb off or possibly kill a opponent
C-Rank: The technique is the regular in size 12 in diameter of each 4 flaming spheres from the user's mouth, it burns anything it touches, setting clothes, bodies or anything flammable on fire
B-Rank: The Technique makes the user shoot 2x the fire amout of fire sphere, but shot twice as fast, same effects
Name: Rai Mari no Jutsu (Lightning Spear Skill) Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Element: Lightning Type: Ninjutsu Range: 7 Meters Description: A Jutsu which creates a large spear of crackling lightning about 2 to 4 inches in diameter and approximately 7 meters in length, which can easily pierce through hard rock or even impale a individual/target. The effects can caused Paralyzment to the body or limb if made contact to the body.
Name: Raikou Hykurai (Lightning Hundred Bolts ) Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: B Element: Lightning Type: Ninjutsu Range: 8 meters Description: The user charges lighting into his fists, then slams one or two palms onto the ground, sending a stream of chakra-lightning into it. The lightning will zig-zag forward (or whichever way the hands were pointing) until it hits a target (tree, rock, person, etc). One palm sends the electricity forward to the target 8 meters ahead, if it was both his hands the lightning is doubled.
One Hand: Lightning will shock the body of a opponent or , if contacted to a limb it will cause paralyasis. Two Hands: Conserves more chakra and will shock the body 2 times as much paralysis is causable, and will leave a static field on the ground which magnify the feet to a oppenent to the ground for a short limited time.
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Rai Mari is denied. That is simply Chidori Spear without the word "Chidori".
Lightning Hundred Bolts is approvable, however. I need to know the extent of the paralysis, and how long it lasts. Also, the word "magnify" in the Two Hand form of the jutsu needs to be "magnetized". An opponent would only have their feet magnetized to the ground if 1. the earth were made of metal and 2. the opponent's feet were made of metal. Assuming the first is true with small amounts of metal minerals in the earth, the second is almost never true.