The islands in Ocean Country have been celebrating the arrival of the next Umikage, Saizo. The long bridge leading to SHIPPUUGAKURE NO SATO has been closed for outsiders because they wish to celebrate this moment with Ocean Country natives only.
As usual, the Storm Country has been hosting the Asgard Games to welcome their Kanetsukage, Cornelia. It's a double special occasion because Cornelia is also the first female Kanetsukage. She has been picked for her courage, loyalty and outstanding power by the BOUFUUGAKURE NO SATO elders.
Not only that, but the Cherry Blossom Country has become relieved as well. It seems that everyone is slowly picking up after the war now. KUSAMURAGAKURE NO SATO proudly presented their new Sakurakage, Altair.
TSUKIGAKURE NO SATO is still thriving on the merchants coming in and out. They have not experienced anything special lately. Their wealth has remained the same as they were not forced to invest into shinobi unlike the others.
On the cold isles of the Blizzard Country, HYOUGAGAKURE NO SATO has still refused to create a free traveling policy. Some habits never change. To protect their traditions, they have even warned outsiders to not interfere with their matters.
Now that everyone is picking up again, who will come out on top?
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I'm thinking since it's an unorthodox element for sake of argument any B rank jutsu shatters it
As far as damage, between the speed and design it can do damage like a bear trap, this means while it won't slice off someone's wrist like a sword it could indeed puncture through someone's arm tooth by tooth.
If it is like a bear trap, is it powerful enough to break bone? And what is the impact if it cannot lock its teeth and just plows into the opponent?
We need to say, one D Rank element can break it, 3 elements at C rank, and a weak element to it at B. We must figure out what elements are strong vs. Neutral vs. and Weak vs.
Cracks bone rather than a shatter, meaning it goes about half through the bone so that why it can't lock teeth together unless it somehow manages to get a flesh only area like a fat guys stomach I guess.
Let's see, thinking about metal nature fire would be strong since it has melting properties and lightning is weak since it is absorbed with the remaining elements in the middle.
Subject: Re: Kinzoku, Takeshi {Technique Registration} Sun Sep 11, 2011 5:39 am
Name: Kokujō Tengen Myō'ō Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: S Element: Metal Type: Ninjutsu / Kenjutsu Range: Refer to Description Description: Rather than hand seals the user must charge chakra into a sword for the same amount of rounds they have to for an S rank jutsu When the user completes their charge time they release all the chakra in the sword in a massive explosion that fires into the air behind them, this silver metallic chakra quickly forms into a samurai warrior that stands one hundred meters tall with a katana nearly 50 meters in overall length. This samurai after it has formed stands about thirty feet behind the user and mimics his every movement down to the finest detail. This technique will only remain in effect so long as the user keeps his hand or hands on his sword otherwise it ends early. As the giant is much larger than the user it will have a greater strength proportionate to the difference in size. Due to the spacing the giant is unable to attack the area within ten feet of the user in every direction. This technique lasts for up to six rounds with a fifteen round cool down. Twice per Topic.
The Giant:
Name: Hihiō Zabimaru Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: S Element: Metal Type: Ninjutsu / Kenjutsu Range: Refer to Description Description: Hand Seals; The user holds their hand in a clenched fist position and then slowly lets off the pressure so that a fang-like bone forms in their palm. This bone lights up with red chakra and quickly starts forming spinal cord discs with a spike on each that grow larger and larger until one hundred links have been created. After all the links are created a snake skull with a fierce red mane forms at the end, this skull has two glowing yellow eyes in it and is the size of a small car. The snake is under the complete control of the user and is able to move with perfect flexibility with a max speed of sixty miles per hour. The spinal pieces are made of indestructible metal but it is unable to be bent even by the Kinzoku clan techniques. Each piece is connected by red chakra so it cant be snagged and if somehow the pieces are taken apart they can be reconnected by the flow of chakra within a round. The secret power of this technique is that more spinal pieces can be added at the cost of additional chakra, each five additional pieces cost ten chakra and takes one round of charging to be made. This jutsu can last for a maximum of ten rounds but can only be used once a topic.
Name: Suiton: Suikōdan no Jutsu (Water Shark Bullet) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: B Element: Suiton Type: Ninjutsu Range: 200 feet Description: This technique shapes a large amount of water into a powerful shark, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. If damage is dealt directly, the shark has the same force as a spear thrown with enough force to pierce through iron. In addition the user can enter the head of the shark to move along just as quickly as the jutsu does.
The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the ninja's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is any water. The amount of water used depends on the skill of the ninja using it. The basic, standard size is 30 ft. It can maximize 100 ft if the user is around enough water. This shark is able to move around within a 200 foot range from where it was created. The shark can move at 100 feet per second. The larger the shark, the harder it is to dodge. Handseals. Cooldown of 4 posts.
Special Jounin if their primary element is water, can create the dragon without any water around only ONCE. Jounin and up for everyone else still, only ONCE.
If a ninja were to maximize the size of the shark, here is what is required per rank. An ocean for chuunin. A lake for Special Jounin w/o water as primary. A River for jounin and s. Jounin with primary element being water. Can create at maximum size only ONCE without any water around. The next attempt needs a river.
Name: Fenriru no kobushi (Fenrir Fist - フェンリルの拳) Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: C Element: Metal Type: Ninjutsu Range: Self Description: Hand Seals; requires the user's wrist(s) to have blood dripping out of them from at least a moderate level wound or at least to have blood on their arms. Taking the blood on their arm's the user rips out all of the iron molecules in it and forms them into the shape of a wolf head around their fist. This can open and shut the jaw without using chakra at a rate of 30 mph and can also be shot from the wrist at a rate of 50 mph. Once detached from the arm it can snap open and shut once before dissolving into blood again. If not shot from the wrist the wolf head had three rounds of action before it dissolves naturally. This is broken by D rank fire C rank wind/water/earth and B rank lightning. 4 round cool down.
Dominic Edrick wrote:
Alright, make those edits, then bump and I will price.
Name: Jagei Jubaku (Snake Authority Spell) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: C Element: n/a Type: Ninjutsu Range: 20 Feet (max) These snakes are actually about 7 feet long but can extend their bodies to reach an opponent up to 20 feet away, they can not use this extra length for additional bindings. Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra throughout their body for the same time they normally would in order to perform a C rank jutsu. The user summons two large snakes which crawl out from one's sleeves, and coil around the enemy capturing them. This is a great technique for capturing someone alive, or for inflicting damage by constriction, and if the situation calls for it, the snakes can bite the victim with their fangs. These serpents can only do things one at a time in term of rounds as such, on the first round they bind the target and immobolize them (nothing else can be done the first round meaning for Jounin/Special Jounin this is all that happens). On the second round however they have the option of either constricting around the opponent hard enough that pressure on the blood vessels slows and causes a round of extreme numbness throughout the target's body the round after they are released or to bite down with their fangs which can shred skin and muscle to a maximum of three inches while not being able to fracture the bones beneath. With the summons specified beforehand, the procedure can be shortened by using blood on their palms, so long as they are a summoner of some form of serpent on an official contract and have the kanji for serpent tattooed onto each of their palms, making it possible to use the technique immediately (This can only be done once per topic). Snakes summoned by this technique are on a whole other level in terms of intelligence and strength, compared to normal summons. They are able to hold shinobi for a number of rounds based on their rank. SS/S rank, zero. A rank, 1. B rank, 1. C rank, 2. D rank, 2. After the snakes have held their victim as long as possible they disappear back into the user's sleeves and can not be summoned again for five rounds.
Name: Sen'eijashu (Hidden Shadow Snake Hands) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: C Element: n/a Type: Ninjutsu Range: 35 Yards Description:Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra throughout their body for the same time they normally would in order to perform a C rank jutsu. This technique allows the user to eject a maximum of three brown snakes from their wrist or sleeve at a speed of 45 mph, usually after a punching motion. The snakes are used primarily to attack from a distance and, being snakes, can inflict multiple wounds on the victim's body or hold them in place to be dragged back to the user the next round when they themselves retract back into his sleeves. The snakes can also open their mouths to extend Kusanagi-like blades. These blades are razor sharp, able to slice through flesh and fracture bones. These blades are about six inches in length. The target is not pulled back to the user if the blades are used to strike. This technique can also produce snakes from different parts of the user's body such as the mouth. Snakes retract back to where they came from and are un-summoned after a full round and cant be summoned again for a total of three rounds.
Subject: Re: Kinzoku, Takeshi {Technique Registration} Mon Oct 03, 2011 4:23 am
Name: Body Shedding Technique Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: S Element: n/a Type: Ninjutsu Range: self Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra throughout their body for the same time they normally would in order to perform a S rank jutsu plus one additional round (B ranks 4 rounds rather than 3, so on and so forth). The user is allowed to move while they charge the chakra except for the final round, this last round of charging requires them to be still since it is when the new body is starting to pull out from the old. This is normally used after sustaining massive injury, or simply to escape from a seemingly inescapable attack, this technique allows the user to regurgitate a new body from their mouth, new clothes, complete with any lost limb being regenerated and all wounds healed, much like a snake sheds its skin. The only thing unable to be recovered through this technique is the heart. This technique requires twice the amount of chakra than other S rank jutsu (100). Two week cool down.
Name: Sen'ei Tajashu (Many Hidden Shadow Snake Hands) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: B Element: n/a Type: Ninjutsu Range: 70 yards Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra throughout their body for the same time they normally would in order to perform a B rank jutsu. This technique allows the user to eject a maximum of ten brown snakes from their wrist or sleeve at a speed of 70 mph, usually after a punching motion. The snakes are used primarily to attack from a distance and, being snakes, can inflict multiple wounds on the victim's body or hold them in place to be dragged back to the user the next round when they themselves retract back into his sleeves. The snakes can also open their mouths to extend Kusanagi-like blades. These blades are razor sharp, able to slice through flesh and bones. These blades are about twelve inches in length. The target is not pulled back to the user if the blades are used to strike. These serpents are able to be destroyed by B rank raiton, A rank of any other element and tempered steel weapons. This technique can also produce snakes from different parts of the user's body such as the mouth. Snakes retract back to where they came from and are un-summoned after a full round and cant be summoned again for a total of three rounds.
Name: Slithering Snake Mode Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: C Element: n/a Type: Ninjutsu Range: Self Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra throughout their body for the same time they normally would in order to perform a C rank jutsu. The user turns the lower half of their body into a snake's tail, which greatly increases his speed and agility by 2x. Any clothing or weapons on the lower half of the body is absorbed into the tail and reappears after the technique ends. This form can be used to coil around the opponent and squeeze them to the point that bones can be broken. The tail will be as long as the user's full body, this makes it so in this form their body length is 150% normal. For example someone 6 foot even would have a 6 foot long tail in addition to three feet of upper body for an overall length of 9 feet. To crush someone you would need to spend a full round constricting around your opponent. Lasts three rounds with a four round cool down.
Name: Nan no Kaizō (Soft Physique Modification) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: C Element: n/a Type: Ninjutsu Range: Self Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra throughout their body for the same time they normally would in order to perform a C rank jutsu. The user dislocates their joints then controls their softened body with chakra, allowing them to stretch and twist any part of their body at any angle, elongating and even coiling around their opponent. This can also be used to make the user's body more malleable and snakelike. The maximum extension a part of the body can receive is three times its normal length except for the neck which can be made to be a maximum of ten feet long. Lasts three rounds with a five round cool down.
Name: Hebi no kuchi (serpent's mouth) Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D Element: n/a Type: Ninjutsu Range: Self Description: The user charges chakra into their jaw for the same amount of time they would normally perform seals for a D rank jutsu. After the charging is complete the chakra morphs the mouth in shape, enlarging the teeth to twice their normal size as well as sharpening them into razor like blades that can shred flesh and crack bone. In addition the chakra affects the jaw by allowing the user to detach the jaw at will as well as the ability to lock it into place. This lasts for five round with a six round cool down.
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Body Shredding Technique - Two week Cooldown. Does the user have to stand still for charge of posts to do this? The heart is the only part that you can't restore from this jutsu. Go ahead and do this technique, then bump and we will continue.
Subject: Re: Kinzoku, Takeshi {Technique Registration} Tue Oct 04, 2011 2:31 am
One would think that the snakes would be weak vs. a particular element. In RPG games, its well documented that reptiles are weak against lightning. Would this apply to the snakes?
Slithering Snake Mode - Up to how long does the lower half extend out into the tail? Example would be like a six foot tail. Let me know that and how long one would have to be wrapped around the user in order to crush them. Breaking bones is a bit vague in this case, so give me worse possible scenario.
Subject: Re: Kinzoku, Takeshi {Technique Registration} Tue Oct 04, 2011 2:50 am
Sounds fine, B rank lightning destroys the snakes as well
The tail will be as long as the user's full body, this makes it so in this form their body length is 150% normal. For example someone 6 foot even would have a 6 foot long tail in addition to three feet of upper body for an overall length of 9 feet. To crush someone you would need to spend a full round constricting around your opponent.
Subject: Re: Kinzoku, Takeshi {Technique Registration} Wed Oct 05, 2011 4:57 am
While the serpent jutsu are being discussed Ill make some other stuff
Name: Ninja Art: Takeshi's 3 Hit Combo Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D Element: n/a Type: Ninjutsu / Kenjutsu Range: range changes for the length of each blade Description: Note; in order to perform this technique the user is required to have the following items on their person. Gundan Scroll and three weapons; in addition two out of the three weapons must be sealed into the Gundan Scroll. Rather than seals the user charges chakra for a number of rounds equivalent to a D rank jutsu into the sword they are currently holding and then they can begin the technique at will. Takeshi will swing the blade in his hand to make a normal everyday attack, he will then on the way back after the strike use a form of substitution so that the blade trades places with the one inside the scroll. He then makes another strike with the blade he just pulled out and then does the same thing but instead of switching it with the other blade again switches places with the final one. Takeshi does one final strike with his final weapon before the technique ends. 4 round cool down.
Name: Rairyū no Tatsumaki (Lightning Dragon Tornado) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: B Element: Raiton Type: Ninjutsu Range: 100 Feet Description: This technique requires the Kiba swords in order to be used. No Seals; To use this technique Takeshi must spend two rounds of charging, one to bring chakra into the blades and the second to call down the natural lightning needed to fuel this technique. Drawing his two swords together, When this is used through the Kiba swords it is treated as a jounin level form of raiton in power (A rank). Takeshi will raise them into the air and draw lightning down upon his body. The current will be contained within and around Takeshi's form. He will then begin to spin in place forming a whirling vortex of wind and electricity. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon's head and will cover the area in front of him. It will then strike out against his opponent and painfully trap them in the vortex, if trapped within this vortex your entire body is covered in deep lacerations (about three inches) and second degree burns. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a target within ten feet of the dragon itself to cause first degree burns. The fully extended dragon is one hundred feet long. The dragon lasts for a total of three rounds and is only usable once per topic.
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Rather than seals the user charges chakra equivalent to a D rank jutsu into the sword they are currently holding and then they can begin the technique at will.
That's what I meant but Ill edit it to be more clear
Name: Body Shedding Technique Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: S Element: n/a Type: Ninjutsu Range: self Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra throughout their body for the same time they normally would in order to perform a S rank jutsu plus one additional round (B ranks 4 rounds rather than 3, so on and so forth). The user is allowed to move while they charge the chakra except for the final round, this last round of charging requires them to be still since it is when the new body is starting to pull out from the old. This is normally used after sustaining massive injury, or simply to escape from a seemingly inescapable attack, this technique allows the user to regurgitate a new body from their mouth, new clothes, complete with any lost limb being regenerated and all wounds healed, much like a snake sheds its skin. The only thing unable to be recovered through this technique is the heart. This technique requires twice the amount of chakra than other S rank jutsu (100). Two week cool down.
Name: Sen'ei Tajashu (Many Hidden Shadow Snake Hands) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: B Element: n/a Type: Ninjutsu Range: 70 yards Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra throughout their body for the same time they normally would in order to perform a B rank jutsu. This technique allows the user to eject a maximum of ten brown snakes from their wrist or sleeve at a speed of 70 mph, usually after a punching motion. The snakes are used primarily to attack from a distance and, being snakes, can inflict multiple wounds on the victim's body or hold them in place to be dragged back to the user the next round when they themselves retract back into his sleeves. The snakes can also open their mouths to extend Kusanagi-like blades. These blades are razor sharp, able to slice through flesh and bones. These blades are about twelve inches in length. The target is not pulled back to the user if the blades are used to strike. These serpents are able to be destroyed by B rank raiton, A rank of any other element and tempered steel weapons. This technique can also produce snakes from different parts of the user's body such as the mouth. Snakes retract back to where they came from and are un-summoned after a full round and cant be summoned again for a total of three rounds.
Name: Slithering Snake Mode Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: C Element: n/a Type: Ninjutsu Range: Self Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra throughout their body for the same time they normally would in order to perform a C rank jutsu. The user turns the lower half of their body into a snake's tail, which greatly increases his speed and agility by 2x. Any clothing or weapons on the lower half of the body is absorbed into the tail and reappears after the technique ends. This form can be used to coil around the opponent and squeeze them to the point that bones can be broken. The tail will be as long as the user's full body, this makes it so in this form their body length is 150% normal. For example someone 6 foot even would have a 6 foot long tail in addition to three feet of upper body for an overall length of 9 feet. To crush someone you would need to spend a full round constricting around your opponent. Lasts three rounds with a four round cool down.
Name: Nan no Kaizō (Soft Physique Modification) Canon/Custom: Canon Rank: C Element: n/a Type: Ninjutsu Range: Self Description: Rather than hand seals the user charges chakra throughout their body for the same time they normally would in order to perform a C rank jutsu. The user dislocates their joints then controls their softened body with chakra, allowing them to stretch and twist any part of their body at any angle, elongating and even coiling around their opponent. This can also be used to make the user's body more malleable and snakelike. The maximum extension a part of the body can receive is three times its normal length except for the neck which can be made to be a maximum of ten feet long. Lasts three rounds with a five round cool down.
Name: Hebi no kuchi (serpent's mouth) Canon/Custom: Custom Rank: D Element: n/a Type: Ninjutsu Range: Self Description: The user charges chakra into their jaw for the same amount of time they would normally perform seals for a D rank jutsu. After the charging is complete the chakra morphs the mouth in shape, enlarging the teeth to twice their normal size as well as sharpening them into razor like blades that can shred flesh and crack bone. In addition the chakra affects the jaw by allowing the user to detach the jaw at will as well as the ability to lock it into place. This lasts for five round with a six round cool down.
Body Shedding Technique - 15,000 Ryo.
Please make any edits from the previous page on the jutsu that I spoke of and bump. I had asked you to remove the word 'snake' from all of your jutsu and replace them with Serpent. Do that as well.